[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 75
Firstly how sad its coming to an end but you have done us proud. Poor Bella never learns does she? Come to that neither does Alice. lol It will be interesting to see how this slave/master thing works out. Excellet as always.
PS
I wish that were my house. lol
Date: 11 Sep 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 75
Bella clearly has issues, and possibly will for the remainder of her days. If she recognizes what she needs to manage her issues and Edward is able to provide the structure she needs, nobody else has any place to argue that it is not 'right'.
The idea of five children would be incredibly scary. They have a plan and that seems to soothe Bella's anxieties so she can take one day at a time. Who knows, one more pregnancy and Edward may change his mind.
Glad Emmett and Rose have their new bundle safely in arms. Interesting that Jasper corrected Alice in the parked car but immediate correction is always best. Crazy girl still forgets that while Edward is her brother, he is Bella's Dom first and she must respect that.
It will be sad to come to the end of this epic journey. Someday I shall most definitely need to revisit this from the very beginning!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your insightful comments and review xoxo
Date: 11 Sep 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 75
You are such a wonderful writer, love your thoughts love, this touching story :)
Author's Response: thank you so much xoxo
Author's Response: thank you so much xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am sooo in love with this story!! And I will be sad to see it end.. but all good things come to an end sometime :) I absolutely love the way things are going!!
I wonder how Bella will cope with the new 24hr submission contract they have going on. Also, Alice's reaction to why Bella is collared at the hospital... I think that this will be a great and interesting Outtake to read about what Jasper did to her to have her call her own brother Sir :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 75
I know I'm never satisfied and always begging for more, but I can't help it!! More! More! Please...
Author's Response:
Ah, KOW, you beg so sweetly, who can refuse you? Out take coming up this weekend - keep a look out in your mail box! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 75
Still excellent...
Author's Response: thank you *blushes*
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 75
Love the chapter - the interaction with the babies, the pics of Bella & Edwards new home + Alice & Jaspers. Feeling a little sorry for Rosalie - 2 C-sections (my sister in law had to wait unti her third and last child to have a natural delievery, which she said was the icing on the cake). May be a girl next time. The development and slight changes in Bella & Edwards relationship the BDSM aspect that also change with life little curve balls. It will be a sad weekend when PLU finishes, would like the "teen years" should be fun.
Also looking forward to you new story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review and comments - we won't say good bye until we need to, promise.
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 75
Jeez eddie. Trying to scare her to death. LOL oooh the collar comment was not smart little girl. The man owns you regardless (as you do him). Yummy. lol for jack hogging space. hmm her hiding behind the sheet should be an indication of something up with her. After two babies she is prob self conscious of her body again.
Sigh Bella is spiralling out of control. He needs to force her to see Paul....soon. Oh Eddie is far from perfect dear but he loves you. Glad he called Riley. Glad he told her off a little too. Kinda agree with Bella. She needs him to take control for a little bit because she is not coping well. Awww poor B sad for Alice going. Silly girl, you'll be there soon. Terri and Shelley seem really great.
Garrett is smart. old rules first. Interesting plan eddie. The safeword thing worries me but if he is a proper master she wont need them anyway. Glad she is thinking about it first and not just blurting an answer. Movie sounds great. Glad she is supportive of that. Maggie is such a blessing. Ponytail? thought he wanted a high braid? ah well he can change his mind.
Wow playtime away for so long she doesnt remeber. well she remembered quick enough. Are her non verbals written somewhere to study cause she is gonna need it I think. lol they need a milk signal. Glad he taking time to talk after dinner. Well at least she decided to talk to paul on her own and not him making her. hmmm his thoughts on the new playroom are interesting.
hmmm making him tremble and explode. good girl. Oh bella so you could ask the Dr.... couldnt you have asked someone else? off kilter indeed. naughty girl needs to learn to school her reactions again. hmmm all sorts of play toys huh. oops her big mouth did it again. She's remorsefully then gets angry again so quickly? Are her hormones that out of whack? hmm this new "mini" contract should be interesting. awww he changed his mind about her sleeping in the subs room huh?
Hard to leave that house huh B. Can understand her being upset. Jackson is a demanding little thing isnt he. OMG House is gorgeous. I WANT that bathroom. GAWD to have money. sigh. lol. 11,000 sq ft and only 5 bdrm? hmmm maybe one more sert of twins and thats it. lol.
She better be careful about rolling her eyes at him. lol. gotta be wierd calling your brother sir. Wow big baby rose. Jazz' place is mega beautiful too
a/n TY Hopefully no one will ever forget as this is when we become doomed to repeat mistakes.
Author's Response:
Oh kt, I love your running commentary! I get such a kick out of it, but you have good insight too.
Thanks again,
Michele
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 75
Lovin this story, all of it. I think the new arrangement is just what Bella needs. She has got to know she is not renee!!! Love the new house. And to know you may write till the kids are in the teens!!Yes Please!!! All of us are dying to follow this story till Edward and Bella are old and gray.
Author's Response:
thank you so much, Nancy!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 75
wow this was wonderful.. I really LOVED the pics.. Yes lots going on in this chapter. I was not surprised by the fact he wanted to do the 3month arrangement like he did, Bella has to get control and the only way she seems to be able to do that is by letting Edward take full control of her in everyway... Wow large family ... yes I can see this for them...I know this story has been so special and close to your heart, but I just wanted you to know your fans, this one in particular is very attached to this story and the characters too!!! Sometimes I find yself crying right along with Bella or hurting with Edward.. You certainly have a special gift and talent, not just for writing but for pulling your readers in, and making them feel so attached and invested in the story... I am sooo... looking forward to the new Story too!!! I know it will be incredible!!! Have a rockin week and weeks ahead.. until the next chapter all the best ... Kathy xoxox
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your very kind comments and your review, I really feel quite humble! Thanks Kathy,
Michele xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 75
wow, great update, sonot sure about thenew arrangement, i can see it going either way, really really well, where they become so muchmore closer and devoted and passinate, that is the wayi hope it goes, but can also see it being a bomb. With only 4-5 chapters left that is not alot to put in Edwards new project with garrett and a couple more babies, unless she does twins again.???? Love your thinking and ideas and story !!! Thanks again for sharing !!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there Sunshine,
Thanks for the great review and comments - it will all come together, I promise!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 75
Ah... to dream of homes like these!
Thanks for this chapter, you never disappoint. I hope this new arrangement brings them closer (and I'm sure it will as you say the end is near). I would love to see at least one more (successful) trip into the playroom before you hit the complete button if you so see fit.
I will certainly miss this story as I've followed it from the first chapter. You are a wonderful writer and weave such a addicting story.
Author's Response:
You are right, I had such fun looking for homes on the Net. It was a lot of hard work but I enjoyed it. Thank you for being there from the start and I will make sure that B & E take a trip into their new playroom for sure!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 75
Nice way to start a chapter!!! *evil grin*
Yes, I can only imagine that Edward was ticked off that Bella was not only burning the candles at both ends but in the middle too!
And I can only imagine that Bella was completely ticked off about Edward involving Riley and his fiance in their mess....regardless of the fact that Edward thought he was doing what was best for Bella. Edward always says that Bella needs to talk to Edward about what is going on. Well Edward didn't talk to her about involving Riley now did he? You cannot expect something out of another person that you are not willing to give, right? *ponders that for a moment*
Love how Edward and Bella are with the possums!!!
Loved all the descriptions and photos of the houses!
Bella is right....Edward needs to do Garrett's movie if it moves him so much. Opportunities do not come along like that very often.
Play time sounded awesome right up until Bella completely pissed Edward off. I understand where she was coming from but she might have wanted to bring up her concern a different manner.
Submitting completely for 2 24 hour periods? Wow....is Bella going to be able to handle that? I just don't know. LOL!!!
Again....loved all the descriptions and photos of the house!
The conversation about them having more children was facinating....how they both reacted to it. Bella's shock and wondering how they would accomplish what Edward wanted and at what cost it would be to her in so many ways. Though I do think it is sweet that Edward wants a large family.
I cannot believe Alice's reaction to Bella and Edward's choice of Bella being collared when they visited Rose in the hospital. And I wonder why she reacted that way. Jasper's reaction to Alice was swift, wasn't? I mean he must have torn Alice's butt up out in the parking lot!!! LOL! That would be an interesting out-take to read!! LOL!
Nooooooooooooo..........not the end!!!! I love this story!!! But I do realize that all good things have to come to an end. These are just really great characters that you have come up with. I have just enjoyed reading this so much.
Can't wait to check out your new story and I would love, love, LOVE to come back and check in on this couple from time to time. Or even with Alice and Jasper et al. LOL!
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Hey KC, Thanks for the wonderful review and comments. Edward and Bella are going through a lot of changes in their lives. Alice reacted like that because they were all there for the baby and she was just saying that it was inconvenient that Bella was collared at that time. Jazz is a stricter Dom than Edward, but then again he and Alice have been together for about 5 years so she should know how to behave and what he will and won't tolerate - and thanks for the idea, I think that I will do that outtake - it will be a fun break from the story - look in your in box at the end of the week...
;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 75
thanks as aalways awesome chapter
Author's Response: thanks so much seeker! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 75
this story was absolutely awesome,
just can't stop reading! You are a REALLY good writer! Have you ever considered writing a book?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review and kind words - and I'm not sure if I have the courage to write a book!
Michele
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 75
I love these character and am very excited about "Hope Springs". Thank you so much for sharing your gift with all of us!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review and comments - I won't start working seriously on Hope Springs until PLU has been put to bed. And maybe we will drop in on them from time to time to see how they are getting along...
:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 75
Beautiful! I think the arrangement will give them what they both need!
Author's Response: Hey Jay,
Thanks for the review and I think so too. :)
Date: 11 Sep 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 75
I loved this chapter and I am so sorry to see this story end soon.
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks honey, but it'll be okay - I promise
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 74
They have settled into parenting well and Bella is doing surprisingly well with her self doubt. You have done a really good job of portraying new parents who still need their sexy connection.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 73
Hooray! It's baby time! I am glad Edward is done with his crazy leaving for work! Things should really get nuts for them now. Twins - I cannot imagine!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 72
Oh, Michele, this chapter was just so great; but then all of yours are. I have never read a sweeter story that had so much "heat". I loved that Bella finally stood up for herself; and also realized how beautiful she is to Edward. The scene in the bathroom was wonderful, especially when Edward came in. The love between these two is so palbable, thanks to your amazing writing. I just hope you don't have any more trouble ahead for E and B while he is out of town. You aren't going to make me cry again, are you? Thanks for the wonderful update.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 74
Aww yay the babies are here. Edward freaking out was funny, but it was sweet when he got it together to help Bella. And Domward's back too :D
Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 74
Ooh DAMN! daddyward is Hella hot but mixed with domward? Ooh yeah! Game on! I hope you continue this next chapter right from this point! :) can't wait for more. The twins: beautiful names and even more awesome how they love their daddy. Too freaking cute when he's away and they miss him. Thanks again bye for now
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 74
Wonderful as always.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 74
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!! I am soooooo in love with your story. You do an amazing job writing it!!!!!! I usually pick out my favorite parts to comment on but the WHOLE chapter is my favorite. I love that the twins knew Edward was not there, Love what Bella did for Edward's birthday, Love the Domward is sitting waiting for her in the chair at the end. Can't wait for more Domward. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 74
I love it. I am glad that Domward is back and incharge. Bella should know that it is always better when she lets Edward lead. She gave him the all clear and that was all he needed. Now she can stop pouting.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 74
I can't believe that you hung us out on that cliff!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 74
So wonderful. Best chapter yet.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
GREAT STORY!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 74
Michele~ I just loved this chapter, very well written and I loved the names! I am so glad that things are good. Hugs! Kasi~
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 74
Her moods are like a yo yo right now poor girl. It sounds like she's in for one hell of an evening maybe Domward can convince her once and for all that he does want her and finds her attractive even if she doesn't think she is. I think it's time for Bella to have some more confidence in herself. I hoping it's just her hormones running amuck on her that she seems to have lost that confident woman that she was during their Valentine's get away when she seemed to realize that she is a beatufil woman and Edward loves her more than life itself. Can't wait for your next update to see what our couple gets into next!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 74
Love the chapter!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 74
Yeah babies! thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 74
I don't want, I NEED more of your story!! Please update again soon!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 74
Holy hell!!!! What a way to leave a girl wanting, you evil lemon blocker!!!!
First and foremost...love the names!!!! They are so perfect and the fact that the babies are mini E&B is too sweet for words. The labor and delivery were written so perfectly as was Edward's reaction to the babies. As much as I love Domward, Mushward has my heart as well. To see him so moved by them is awesome!!!! And 'Grumpy' I mean Grampa Charlie...LMAO!
The scene for his birthday was fuck-hot!!! I loved him drinking from her and how you gave Bella the right to enjoy it on a sexual level and not make it a dirty thing. I say again, fuck hot!!!
I felt Bella's desperation at her breakdown when Edward was away. Being a new mom is scary and to try and be everything for twins is virtually impossible. Hooray for Esme and Maggie!!!!
Besides the big bang coming up, I am excited to see what antics these two will get into at the new homstead. Is it terrible that I am drooling to 'see' the new playroom?!? I know, I am a dirty whore, but you make me this way!
Excellent chapter! When am I going to see this in hardcover??? ;)
XOXO
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 74
she better get those silly notions out of her head. i love the names and the pics of the babies....so cute!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 74
loved this chapter looking foward to the next one
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 74
There Babies are fucking adorable... The next chapter will be a huge orgasmic bang... I loved it..
Date: 28 Aug 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 74
Perhaps Bella would benefit from a few visits with Paul. Her self image seems to be in need of adjusting. Despite the weight loss, she is feeling unattractive to her mate. Then again, perhaps all she needs is a good session with her Master to make her see how he values and desires her.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 74
God I love this story... These characters are just so apart of me now.. Thanks so much for creating such a magical chapter.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 74
Wow I think I am going to go back and read this chapter. It was truely amazing. You are such a gifted writer from the labor to delivery and the shower in the hospital to bella's first night alone. This by far is one of my favorite stories. I love how there is angst but it is very short lived. I got frustrated when angst goes on chapter after chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 74
Loved it! I am so jealous of those birthing suites.....I wish they had something like that where I had my boys! June 26th huh? I had my second son, Korbin, on June 27th. My birthing 'suite' (LOL HAHAHA) was plain and sterile with that phony 'compfy' lookin' fold out chair/bed.....my husband despises those things....they are not comfortable at all and no snacks were provided! But the characters had money to buy all that stuff with....we're just hard working middle classers!
I loved the chapter but it makes me kinda sad to say that with every chapter we get closer to the end. I have been reading this story for soooo long, since the beginning and it makes me soooo sad.......shortly after my son was born and all throughout my second pregnancy and the birth of my second son. so it's a bit emotional for me to think about the end.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 74
wow lots and lots going on with this chapter!!! bambino's are here along with new little cousin yes the group is certainly becoming quite prolific with all the little ones... this is such a great story I would love to see what happens with all the children.... Bella will never cease to be Bella that's for sure as we see in this chapter she was like a hormonal tazmanina devil of sorts... But she got through it. when she was having issues with the exercising from less than a day following delivery I was thinking Holy Cow Domward is going to NEED to pay a visit.... Esme and Maggie are so wonderful wouldn't we all have been so fortunate to have someone like them in our lives!!!??? Well thanks for this Fan-freakin-tastic chapter!!! See you next update and take care in the interim!!!! LatersBB Kathy xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 74
Wow.. that was a End that you can't want to miss the next chapter.. What a Teassee..
Poor Bella has still lots of healing to go thou.. I hope she talks to Edward.. or OCHY>>> I don't want to be her when all hell breaks thou..
Can't wait for the next chapter...
That was beyond words one of your best chapters.. I love this story with all my heart...
<3 Leona :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 74
Beautiful birth. hate that she is already below her pre pregnancy eight.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 74
woo hoo for babies!!! sweet normal names. (yeah i hated reneesme). Poor first time moms always freak a little, and with twins, double hard. Hmm domward.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 74
Hot dang ! That was an action packed chapter. I am so happy that the babies are here and "activies' can resume.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 74
Spectacular as usual. You always put so much into each chapter, although I wish you would have included there "reconnection" in this chapter.
I love that Bella has grown but not completely, she still needs to adjust to being a parent, not always an easy adjustment.
Thanks so much for a wonderful story, I almost hate to ask, but do you know how many more chapters you have left? Don't hesitate to tell me "you know know yet" or your "not telling".
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 74
A GREAT GREAT CHAPTER. LOVED IT.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 74
asw always awesome chapter thanks
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 74
I haven't reviewed in a long time - I love the story - Look forward to each chapter. In a buzy life 2people like us" is a little oasis.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 74
Great chapter. Bella is doing a whole lot better at motherhood than I did with my first and she's got two... hee hee. Can't wait for the move. Is there going to be pics of the new house(es)?
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 74
I loved this chapter . I had a Grandpa Charlie... It made me remember him when you addressed Charlie as Grandpa Charlie . Cant wait for the next installment
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 74
Another fantastic chapter!!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 74
Seriously....are men ever ready for birth? LOL!!
His only concern was that Bella was about to give birth to his two children and he wasn't ready!
Where is Master Edward now? *smirk*:
Everyone turned to where Edward was sitting on the floor staring at his one converse sneaker that he held in his hand.
Wow! Maggie took charge of the command center, didn't she? *sigh* I need a Maggie! *pouts*
You know thats right:
You are going to be pushing a watermelon through a tea cup
OMG....Pitocin is the devil....that really brings on the pain!
nurse Ratchet:
*dies laughing*
You gotta love Emmett:
"Wow, Bella Baby, you are looking quite fuckable, too bad Eddie's not allowed to dip his wick yet!" He laughed gleefully as only a brother would.
Awwwww....man! You ended it there??? LOL!!!
Reading all this brought back memories of my son's birth! Seems like yesterday but he is turning 9! I cannot believe it!!!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 74
wow just keeps getting better @ better awsome chapter......
Date: 27 Aug 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 74
Wow, that was AMAZING! Yay for babies finally being here! Although, I don't think they are preemies (usually it is babies who are born before the 37 week mark). Jackson was a big boy at 7 pounds at 37 weeks; I was only 5 pounds 7 ounces at 37 weeks! How much did Alexis/Lexy weigh...maybe I missed it ;) I really loved their names, so perfect for them! I also loved their sexy times while waiting on Bella to recover :) Cannot wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 74
fantastic chapter.aww the twins are so cute.poor bella glad shes got the love and support of her family and friends to help her.yey domwards back hes hot!update soon
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 73
100 primates...loved it!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 73
Well what an awesome place to leave that. Lol I still love how childish Edward & Alice are over their parents live lives. Lol too funny. The babies are coming!!! I can't wait! Thanks again bye for now.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 73
Dear Michele,
I found this story three weeks ago and I havebecome completely enthralled with it. Your characters and the plot are complex, funny, real and sometimes heartbreaking. I do no know how to add it to my e-mail for updates so I will keep checkng for the next installment. I sincerely hope you do not end it soon as there is too much happenng. Your book ranks highest in the all the books I've read on fanfiction and the writers coffeeshop.
I have two other comments. First, you need an american beta to ensure your terminology is american. For instance, we don't use peen. We call it what it is a penis. We do not eat very much lamb. We do eat a lot of chicken, pork and beef. Secondly, you misuse words. For example cite which is to quote was used for sight to see something or site which is the location of a pice of land. In this chapter, you used wear such as clothes for where as in a location.
Again, it is a wonderful story. You are a prolific and awesome writer.
Thank you so much for writing it.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 73
As always you don't disappoint..the birth should be interesting especially if the whole family gets in on the action. Remember Alice's delivery sooooo funny. Thanks again for a great story.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 73
Great chapter like always... So sexcited the babies are coming...
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 73
I love love this chapter.... There is no words that I can discripe I feel.....
It was so emotionall.... Can't wait to see the babies..
<3 Leona :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 73
I can be patient. At least I can try to be... OK, you know me better than that. I'm not patient at all!!! So give me more!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 73
I feel like we rushed through so much time. I feel bad for Bella. Yes, she should have told Edward about her urges. I don't think he would have understood fully since he sounded surprized even after talking to Garrett and Felix. He wouldn't have gotten the strength of the urges just by a phone call. Bella should have known to use lube. She is a sub. I know they have to use tons of lube with their lifestyle.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 73
OMG the babies are coming i so hope she gets to have a natural birth to many babies are brought into the world by cesarean when they don't need to be. Though don't get me wrong it is a procedure that save many a baby that would ahve died otherwise.
ooo can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 73
Michele - great chapter. I was seriously chicking when B broke herself. I loved the emotions that the parents to be had when they found out the sex. The committement ceremony made me tear up a bit and I was completely surprised at the end that it was time already. I know we are on the edge of complete, but I want to let you know that I look forward to each and every chapter. I hope you continue writing.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 73
as always awesome chapter thanks
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 73
Yay, the babies are coming!!! I was crying when Edward felt them kick! So sweet! How awkward would that be if C & E were at the same munch as E & B....lol
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 73
OMG!!!!!! I am sooooo excited that the twins are coming!!!!!!!!!
I loved this whole chapter. I was a little concerned at the beginning of the chapter. I was worried what Bella had been up to and what she was hiding from Edward. I was also concerned how Edward would react to it, but he did good. I had to laugh at Bella, loved how embrassed she was. It was funny that she thought she "broke her kitty". I justed busted out laughing at that. Very proud of how Edward, ALice, and Emmett handled their parents lifestyle. Loved the wedding. Loved everything about this chapter.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 73
Go Bella...way to take care of your man:
Bella glared back at him undaunted, "What the fuck? I will tell you ‘what the fuck', you are exhausted, your chest is hurting you, you have not eaten properly in days, and you need to rest. That is ‘what the fuck'. So finish eating, get upstairs, and get some sleep! Is that clear?" Her arms were folded over her chest as she silently dared him to defy her.
Bella "broke" her kitty? *dies laughing* That whole situation is just so darn funny!!
Love Jasper:
"Listen! You are both behaving like - well like children, and prudish children at that! Your parents have been nothing but supportive of your lifestyle choices! They have never interfered or intervened in either of your lives and I think that it is about time that you both show them the same fucking courtesy." He looked over to where his daughter laid nursing at her mother's covered breast, "Sorry Sweetheart, Daddy didn't mean to curse in front of you."
And Emmett knew all along...well, well, well! *giggle*
Loved this chapter. So much so that I couldn't fit it all in this review. Suffice it to say that I cannot wait to read more!!!
Keye
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 73
Oh Boy! I love it when Edward loses his shit! He's gonna freak the hell out. But boy oh boy is he gonna be a good Daddy!
Has it been 2 wks yet?
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 73
Oh my girlie, I love you so much Michele~
This story jsut keeps gettign better and better. I flove it! Seriously FLOVE it! So glad they one of each. Can't wait to read all abotu the birthing process. Love the talk Carlisle had with Edward. Love that Emmett knew about the playroom. Alice is always so sneaky, and I love it! I love that Bella is always so diplomatic.
YAY....Thanks for always sharing your wonderful writing with us all!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 73
Love your Edward. Love your Bella. Love the wonderful pictures you include. Love the way you write. JUST PLAIN LOVE THIS STORY!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 73
oh wow, baby time, sweet sexy edwar dbuying those baby outfits !!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 73
This chapter had it all. I laughed and I cried.
I have to say I love the fics you pimped. I
Look forward to the next update!! :)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 73
Oh I loved this chapter.. .Broken Kitty HAHAHAHAHAHA....I cant wait to read the birth of the twins.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 73
This is soooo wrong... You are gonna leave me hanging...ugh!!! I can't wait for the babies to get here!!! I have been pregnant...twice... and at the end....I was a little bitchy too...;)
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 73
Another awesome chapter... you alway's pack so much into each one. So Edward is done traveling for a while, Bella having massive mood swings (normal in pregnancy), Esma and Carlisle reaffirmed their devotion and outed themselves to the family. The new complex is almost done and the babies will arrive in the next chapter! WOW!
I can't wait.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 73
thanks for the update!! yeah babies!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 73
Good chapter..Cantwait for babies to arrive!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 73
AHHHHH! I know this story is coming to an end soon and it is killing me. I loved this chapter because it felt so real to life. Bella breaking her kitty had me dying!!! And I have to say if I had to choose a punishment...THAT would be one hell of a good one to me. ;)
The re-committment was beautiful. And I think it is good that Carlisle was open with Edward about him and Esme. Yeah, she sort of let the cat out of the bag with that little addition to her vows. LOL. And I REALLY hope we get a little sneaky peaky into the new playroom...
The babies are coming!!! I am so excited to see what names you choose for them.
Great job hon!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 13 Aug 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 73
Well, we knew the intense studio time was going to be difficult for Edward. Perhaps if he were not seperated from his pregnant wife, he just maybe could have taken some of the crazy shit with a little more finesse!
Crazy fun to see Edward uncover Bella's 'secret'. After learning that Kate nearly broke Garrett's peen, she had to feel less nutty about her own needs! Again, being seperated from Edward for several days a week had to intensify the issue. Loved the line: stolen candy from a candy store. That was just PERFECT.
Edward's first experience feeling his possums kick was so beautiful! Must confess to weeping right along witht the family.
Alice's impersonating Jasper, 'Major' Whitlock's supervision at the ranch was a hoot. I half expected Jasper to witness that, had suspicions of his reaction and everything...
Alice, Bella and Edward's reactions to a SUSPECTED playroom of the parents was to be expected. Proud to see Jasper instructing his wife and siblings to behave like the adults they are.
Was impressed that Esme declared her submission to Carlisle during their recommitment. Then to learn Emmett has known this was rather funny, particularly Edward's reaction to Emmett knowing about the playroom.
Emmett is such a fun character. One minute he can be so blase about his father Dominating his mother, and yet he can pout over not being included in an Easter egg hunt. He is just a delight.
What a wonderful summer!Charlie and Sue celebrated their anniversary. Carlisle and Esme's recommitment. Joshua's birthday. Jasper and Alice's anniversary. Kate delivering her and Garrett's first child. Edward and Bella celebrating their own anniversary only to deliver the twins soon after.
Wow. An action packed chapter here. Sad to imagine this ending anytime soon...
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 73
WOW... HUGE chapter. dont know where to start with comments. Glad everyone seems to be doing well if not grumpy sometimes. LOL.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 73
great chapter ! im excited that the babies are comming! keep the updates comming
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 73
You always outdo yourself. WHAT A CHAPTER. I really expected some blowout from that little 18 years old grabbing onto Edward and that photo being taken with Edward & Bella, but you surprise me there. Loved the way they all found out about the new playroom. Funny. Can't wait for the deliveries. Just can't wait. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 73
Wow loved it all,................. wonderfull writting.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 73
fantastic chapter.wow the babies are here hope it all goes well.look forward to next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 73
These two are so hilarious. Wonderful as always.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 72
I absolutely loved this chapter. I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but it's not from lack of love and lust for the story, I truly love it, each and every chapter!!! I have no excuses, I'm lazy! I could actually visualize Reese Witherspoon speaking in this chapter...lol She is one of my favorites as well. Iam so proud of Bella and how she put those whores in their place! It's so nice to finally have some confidence and to see what Edward sees and actually believe in herself. I love Brian and Anderson's characters, they are just charming and sexy in their own quiet little ways. It's nice to see them become part of the family.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 71
Darn, I already reviewed Chapter 72, so I will back up here to tell you that YOU ARE MY FAVORITE WRITER on this whole site! I know this story will have to end, but I am not sure how I am going to be able to let it go. Please...sequel, another story, but DO NOT quit writing for me and for all of your fans out here that wish we had your imagination, talent and ability to understand your characters and make them so real, so humorous, so flawed, so darn beautiful. You have the knack to write pictures as well as words, I feel I can see what you are seeing. Wow, a little carried away I guess, please, not a stalker, just keep writing your stories for all of us out here that wish we could.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
this story is so great....i'm addicted. but when you're done writing this would you consider doing a story about carlisle & esme in this story, like the beginning of their relationship and having emmett and stuff?
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 72
This would have to be the biggest fan fiction story I have ever read but I have loved every single word written. I keep thinking the story is coming to an end and then you dive off into another area that keeps me on my toes, I really don't want it to end, I feel like I am part of the family as well. I think you are a fabulous writer and you have serious talent.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 72
What can I say other than I loved it. When she stood up to Lauren and the gang I just wanted to cheer..and don't even get me started on the car! Hilarious !!! Brian and Anderson make a great team and extra touch of whimsey. Please just keep the story going...I agree with another reviewer that this should be in print. It is one of my absolute favorite stories that I can't wait to see updated. Thanks for writing such a great story with amazing characters. Their growth has been a joy to watch (read) develop
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 72
Hi, Michelle. I'm crazy about this story. it is just amazing. I would like to translate it into Russian for Twilight fans. Can I do this? await your response. Alina.
My e-mail: we3011@mail.ru