Date: 13 Oct 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 77
I know you said lets get real, but it really sucks. He better not do anything that will hurt Bella. He is skating very thin ice. I'm sure Irena will tell some one what happened and it will get back to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 77
Sorry I did't review the last chapter, I decided to hold off reading the last one, so that I could read them together, but 1 month without this story was too hard and I can't do that again. I so look forward to the updates and I fall in love with this story again each time you post. Thank you for giving all of us fans your wonderful characters, I feel like I know each and everyone of them through your writing. I love your Bella, your Edward, your Alice, Emmett, Carlisle and Esme. You bring them to life and...just thank you. You are what this TWCS site is all about and you are the best of the best!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your really flattering words! I'm glad that I make them come alive for you!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 77
Now just because he is a man does not mean that he will cheat. Getting real doesn't mean bad things have to happen. If he cheats, that will go against everything he stands for. He is a dominant that is always in complete control. So now he is going to lose that control? I do not think so. The only one who has made him lose control is the one person that can change his world. You can only be affected by those you let in and love. So some stranger is goning to bring him to his knees? I think not. I just do not see it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 77
He expects complete honesty from Bella but holds back at every corner when it comes to this movie?!? I DON'T THINK SO! OMG! He is in deep shit! I have had quite enough of his double standards. I expect Edward naked, kneeling outside my room with his paddle of choice in his teeth.
{Wait...let me just savor that image for a moment}
Mmmmmm, that is just too delicious for words. Ok, focus...focus. I loved the scene with Mr Cullen and Miss Swan. That was exceptionally hot! And yes, I very much appreciated the phone sex. ;)
I love that we have more babies on the way and that Bella is only having one this time. I appreciated her little breakdown when she realized the twins weren't nursing anymore. I remember that feeling with my first, but I was more upset over the fact that he was growing out of the baby phase.
Now, back to the evil little cliffy here with Edward and the whore of the month. You know I love you, but so help me, if you make Edward cheat on Bella...you and I are gonna have words!
Love ya!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 12 Oct 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 77
WOW.... You are throwing them back into reality. Lets just hope they TALK to each other. But in real life~ that doesn't happen all the time.
Lord knows they have been through a lot. I wonder if Garrett will travel on the dark side? Hmmm/
On the edge of my seat waiting for the next update!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 77
Great update and I have to agree wit you on your Autho's note as yes my husband claims Megan Fox is his " free pass" and I said okRobert Pattinsin is mine and then he proceeds to tell that is fine because Robert is gay anyway. Can't wait for the next chapter....MWAH!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 77
Edward will be fine, but you are right no man can have a naked woman rub on them and not react. Bella has to understand this. Edward was acting. At the end of the scene he left her alone and went by himself to shower and handle the built up tension. This is what he needed to do. He needs to open and honest with Bella as he would expect her to be with him. She will probably see the movie it will be better for her to know now. Let her know that while he was in the shower he was thinking of her not the skank. Explain that Garrett told him that he has to be friendly with her for the sake of the movie. Edward has to communicate. He would expect nothing less from Bella.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are such a beloved writer/Author!! Yep can totally see how Egos can be manipulated as well as mind sets when you are taking on a persona or role... thanks for the conforting words in your response... Faith in our Author :-)
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 77
"Garrett cocked an eyebrow at him, "You wanted your wife to see you dry humping another woman? You're really wanted her to see how you bit her breasts and pinched her nipples?""
What the hell is he making porn???? LOL
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 77
I've been in a relationship for the last 10 years and something I've come to realize is that just because you are in a relationship, it does not mean every other woman in the world dies because your man chose you. We are all still human and therefore sexual creatures by nature. The body is going to have certain natural reactions whether our MIND is engaged or not.
I would not be mad at Edward for getting hard during a love scene or for physically being attracted to her but if his MIND starts to wonder of if he actually DID anything with her I'd castrate him. :)
Bella has been through enough, if he puts her through more I hope every male Cullen, along with Brian and Andy, beat the crap out of him. I also hope he feels guilty as shit for a long, long time.
Author's Response:
Aaagh - the voice of reason! Thank you FS that is exactly what I was trying to say!! And don't worry, he is not going to 'go there' - I will personally cut his dick off if he does!!!! I think that we are our own worst enemies sometimes and we act stupid by pretending that 'nothing's wrong' but we feel guitly in any case!
Silly, silly humans..
Thanks for the review and your great comments xoxo
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 77
loved this chapter looking forward o the next one
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 77
Michele~
Great chpater as always my sweet. Loved this a lot. I hoep that he behaves, because it woudl suck royally if he fucked up. I look forward to reading hte next chapter and seeing what they are all up too. I think you are doing wonderfully, your writing amazes me.
Thanks for sharing,
Kasi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hey there Darling Kasi, You know that i would just set you on his ass if he misbehaves! Love you lots, honey, Michele
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 77
Woa. Great chapter and I love the way you show the family working together and then this Irena issue cropping up. I think there will be some real time problems up ahead and love the way you are making us climb this hill with you. Can't wait for more. Please hurry.
Author's Response:
Loved the review - I'm typing as fast as I can- promise. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 77
Amazing job...I love this story so much and am so thrilled that the plot continues...I dont want to see it end yet
Author's Response:
thanks so much for your great review
Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 77
I got a stomach ache reading this chapter. I have a feeling it's only going to get worse. I have faith in you because with everything they have been through you won't break them up... The same goes for Kate and garrett.... Right?!?!?
Author's Response:
Relax cina24, I promise that everything will be alright. You know that I would never let anything happen to any of our family. We love them too much. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 77
Edward doesn't have to worry about Emmett breaking his balls, Bella will!!! Edward won't have to tell Bella anything, Bella will "sense" it. Then all her insecurities will surface, and Garrett should not be so selfish. I bet if Bella had a job like Edwards he would not like it if she were keeping things from him and acting in scenes like that and getting aroused by another man. The shit will hit the fan soon!!!!
Author's Response:
oh my word nancy, I loved your review! You are such a badass! xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 77
Oh dear trouble on the horizon! I don't like it at all, I hope it isn't too angsty they certainly don't need that with 2 kids and 1 on the way. I don't think Bella can take that kind of stress... she has be doing so well. I hope Edward didn't do something really stupid. Let that skank get between them.
I hope when he's home he can relax and reconnect with Bella very well... it will help. What happened to the family traveling with him? This does not bode well.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
They are going to get through this and you know that Bella is much stronger than she seems to be.
thanks so much for the review xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 77
I am glad that Edward had his little talk with Alice. She was getting unbearable. I have to agree with Edward in that I don't know how Jasper puts up with her either!
Actually Bella was lucky that the twins decided to stop breast-feeding. I think that my son would have breast-fed through to college if I would have let him. (kidding) But, gosh, if I did not have a heck of a time getting him off his night time feeding! LOL!
Mmmhmmmm....Edward saying that he wanted Bella and the kids with him on the shoot then finding out that is just not feasible. Then him having to play this dark character. Something tells me this is not going to go well.
Playing teacher/student with Edward? *swoon*
What a strange thing to say:
"Don't let me go, okay?" His voice was thick with sleep.
Something is just not right here...dun, dun, DUN!
Esme and Carlisle crack me up!
Maybe Alice and Bella going through pregnancy together this time will make them close like they once were.
I found Garrett and Edward's conversation about Irena interesting.
And then this:
Kate gaped at her, "You don't know Irena? Oh come on, Bella! What rock have you been living under? She is the hottest tart to hit Hollywood! She has ‘dated' or ‘screwed' all of her leading men and most of the directors that she had worked with! She has a rotten reputation for punctuality and she drinks like a fish and looks stoned or high half the time!"
All kinds of warnings are going off about this Megan chick.
And so Edward is aroused by Irena? Men....pfft!
For Edward being a "Dom" and so "in control", why is he letting this slut get to him?:
Edward had not felt this out of control before. He needed something, anything.
I don't think that Garrett's advice was worth is breath. Is is really wise for Edward, who states Irena is a "siren" and is doing everything she can to arouse him, do you really think he needs to befriend here? I mean, she is going to take that "friendship" as encouragement that he "wants" here in my opinion.
Edward having lunch and dinner with her? *rolls eyes*
Uh huh:
If she isn't a threat to you or Bella, then why have you decided not to tell Bella about Irena? Edward suppressed the irksome thought before it could take hold in his conscious.
Megan Fox is an excellent choice for Irena btw.
Men are pigs....J/s. LOL
Oh I think that you should have Bella break Edward's balls if need be.... I think that she is MORE than capable of doing that! LOL!!
Okay, so this is the second time I have written this review. This stupid site pisses me off when it decideds that you "are not authorized to do that function" when I have forgotten to check that damn box so that I can stay logged in. Glad that I noticed that otherwise you would have never know that I put a review down. :-(
Keye
Author's Response:
Oh my Sweet Keye,
I could feel your frustration in every word! You are priceless - and your comments are brilliant. Now, have a little faith in me, okay? and he wasn't turned on by her per se, it's just that she spent the better half of a day, prancing around with her tits sticking into his chest, or rubbing against his back, so little Eddie would have a bit of a time with it.
Love and hugs (no more coffee for you!)
Michele
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 77
actually I'am not happy.. This is been one of my favor it stories.. But can honestly say, I will wait a few chapter before I read it.. I trying really hard not to read upseting stories.. Because they effect my mood..
I had tears and really mad at Edward.. I know in fanfic you can make it all right.. but in the realworld it don't.
I 'm sorry. I was cheated by ex husband. then my ex bestfriend/boyfriend. left me for another women. came back but now I 've been single over 7yrs..
It gets too me when I read.. But has always.. fantastic chapter..
You are the best.. and I hope you never stop writing this story. heheh
Author's Response:
Oh Nona, I'm so sorry that my story upset you, Love. It wasn't meant to at all. I too know what it feels like to be cheated on. All that I was trying to show in this chapter was that no matter how much money you have, or no matter how strong your bond is, temptation will come at you. It's up to you on how you handle it. Edward is no attracted to Irena. He misses Bella like crazy and he is a horn-dog. Don't worry, NC, you are going to love the next chapter.
Take care and have a little faith in me,
Michele
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 77
fantastic chapter.poor edward and bella hope irina doesn't come between them they have been through so much.aslong he doesn't cheat i'll still love him lol.update soon
Author's Response:
thanks for the review xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 77
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! YAY for baby number 3! Hopefully Irena won't be too much of a trouble. I found this tiny error here, that desperately needs to be changed "She noticed that her virgina was level with his mouth. She trembled." Bella doesn't have a virgina, I don't think ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - I will make the change - hand /eye coordination!!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 77
oooohhhh the foreshadowing on this one is scaring me to death. The professor and student scene meanwhile made me wish hubs was home from work lol. So I am now conflicted in my emotions and my tummy is rolling in fear and then in general lust lmao. You are killing me woman or at least giving me an ulcer.
Author's Response:
Relax, Darling and take some pepto Bismal or something. And take a deep breath. You know me - NOTHING WILL HURT OUR COUPLE - and you know by now that anyone who tries to stand in their way will get TAKEN OUT!!! But of course there will be drama xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 77
Some addicts need alcohol or drugs, I just need words. Please keep them coming!!
Author's Response:
You are food for my soul xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 77
Michele,
I love this story! The updates are lengthy which is a major plus as some updates you feel like you just started reading and you are already at the bottom so Thank you for the nice long updates that also, one doesn't have to wait an incredibly long time to get -- another BIG plus in my book as you usually update before I can completely forget what has happened in the story prior ... and I just LOVE this Bella and Edward also, the Twisters!!! Although, it has been awhile since they have got into mischief and Bella's bum got a good spanking lol ... Keep up the wonderful job!!!
Alicia
Author's Response:
Oooh you kinky girl you! (just like the rest of us!) Thanks so much for your great review and comments. Don't worry there will be kink! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 77
Oh...that boy ahd better clue Bella in about Irena or she will have his balls, his kids, his money, his house and he will have nothing.
Author's Response:
And this is why I love my readers!!!! Loved your comment xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm with one of your other reviews. I love this story but i won't read it if Edward is going to cheat. There has been plenty of angst in this story without doing this.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 76
'bout time someone took Alice to task. I love her, but she IS so spoiled!!
I have enjoyed this story so much for so long. I know at some point it has to end, but I have to admit that I don't want it to!!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 77
Loved it.
Author's Response:
thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 77
As always a stunning chapter but you could just smell trouble brewing. I am surprised at Garrick & Kate but then maybe not. Hmmm its not going to be pretty when Bella finds out about Irina but then again whose going to tell her? lol I loved the addition of new babies.
Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Hey Roon, Thanks as always for a wonderful review and I'm sure that you will love the next chapter! xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 77
oh shit if you are menaing what i think you are meaning, i don't know if i can read it. Please pm me if Edward is going to be infaithful so i can skip that chapter.
Author's Response:
oh FIS - have you not learned by now? Have a little faith in me, Darlin'! Do you honestly think that after EVERYTHING we have all been through with this family that I would allow one of them to stray??? Not bloody likely sweetheart, so relax and I know that you will love the next chapter.
Michele xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 77
okay reality is that I am sure things like this do happen im the movie Industry, but this Edward and Bella this entire story we have known how deeply in love and devoted Edward is to Bella... the boy needs to pull his head out and remember that Skank -vs- devoted Submissive wife and mother of his children, who puts everyones needs first... I think when we look at it from that POV we have a clear winner... And definitely total Faith in the author **You Ms Michele**
Kate and Garrett too will overcome these trials and come through stronger... It's just trying for couples trying to do so much sometimes... what shocks me is how with all the money all these people have get some Nanny help folks...LOL!!!! This was a great chapter and I love this story Please don't think I was bashing.. I wasn't I was just surprised that Edward kept things from Bella...
But I just want to broach this **don't throw rotten tomatoes** How would either Edward or Garrett feel if it was them with the shoe on the other foot?!?! I'm just saying to be true to this story we need to keep in mind the honesty and trust each of these couples have built and strengthened through the years.
Author's Response:
I loved your review! Geez, I didn't realise what i was getting into when I began writing Irina into the story. I gues I was just thinking about Brad and Angelina and how things happen, you know and then I thought "how would our hero handle it?"
They will all get through this and there is no way on God's green earth that I will allow Edward to cheat on Bella! I'm sure that ego's do get in the way when there are so many beautiful women around that want you and it's hard to focus are away from home, BUT I'M JUST SAYING - there is no way that he or Garrett will stray!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 77
great chapter. Irena needs to get a life. Damn skank. Garrett needs to have a talk with Ms Skanky before Eddie really blows up at her. I have a feeling she is going to try something for the papparazzi effect.
Author's Response:
Too true! She is a skank and damn Edward is just too goodlooking for his own good! Thanks for the review
Date: 03 Oct 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 76
I love this story so much and I almost hate to read it because I know the end is coming soon. This will be so sad. Alice is such a brat. Bella let her off way to easy, which is why she is such a brat.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, Awesome, Loving this story, well written and I am soooo Looking forward to reading more :0) I Especially like Edwards Darker side, looks like lots of fun ahead... off to read the next Chapter and go to my happy place lol
Date: 03 Oct 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
this story is so great and i love the character development you have created. would you consider doing a flashback to the early parts of carlisle and esmes relationship as a partt of a chapter?
Date: 02 Oct 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 76
I love this story! I'm so glad that Bella called Alice out on her bullshit, it was pretty selfish of her to treat Bella like that when Bella was already putting enough pressure on herself to be there and do everything for everyone without taking in to account she was damaging herself. I am curious as to why Jasper hadn't stepped in when she had originally started acting out besides the spanking at the hospital. Can't wait to see what comes next, will they be working on more babies?
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 76
Wow I love the way Bella stood up to Alice.. But never refused her when she said sorry..
I wonder what Edward will try and have put in their d/s life to help Bella. I think she has have some rules to help her.. I know she like the 24/7 but Edward does not.. But he still needs to be strong and have rules with punishment.. Because Bella needs this. to compromize. I like that..
beautiful chapter has always.. see you next week..
Date: 30 Sep 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 76
I'm so glad B and Alice cleared the air. I enjoy this story and this crew so much! Thank you so much for sharing them with us!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 76
Hey Michele~
I loved this chapter and where it is smaller than normal it was chuck full of good times and great storylines. I love the palces you ahve taken this story and I love the way that you have made Bella stronger each time, even though she is always submitting she is so strong. Thanks for always sharing your wonderful talent for writing and I look forward to the next chapter into the lives of Domward, and subella. <3 you big time chicka~!
Kasi~
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Kasi, Thanks so much for your words of wisdom and encouragement. Love you too, honey - hey - what's next for you?? PM me and let me know what you are up to!
Michele
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 76
WOW!!!! Lots of stuff!!!!! I am glad that Bella and Edward's time with him controling her has gone so well. I was shocked with Alice and Bella having it out. But I am glad that Bella stood up to ALice. I am sooooo loving this story.
Author's Response: thank you so much for your review xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 76
I love it!
Author's Response:
thank you love xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 76
Another AMAZING chapter...At least Bella & Alice were able to make up again. I loved the 'Slave' times that B&E spent together...it really bought them closer together & got Bella into a better state of mind. Thanks so much for sharing - I look forward to the next update...until then, Take Care,
~Helen xxx
Author's Response:
Hey Helen, Thanks so much for your review and words of encouragement xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 76
Micele - I was actually very concerned about the arrangement but you made it work so much that I really have no complaints. I hate to say it but to me you only have one thing to address and that is Edwards leaving after the wedding that was never really dealt with. He is so used to Bella screwing up but it was him that time and they never really had that out, ya know? Please write these characters forever! mwah!
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki,
Thanks so much for your wonderfully kind words of encouragement. They mean a lot to me xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 76
Thanks for another great chapter, trust me, you don't always have to write 30K chapters to keep us readers happy, I thought this length was fine. Alice is being a bit of spoiled brat. It is inevitable when you get married and have kids they take priority and you have to find time for friendships to continue to evolve. If I was Bella I don't know if I would be so quick to accept her apology.
After everything that she has been thru growing up with an alcoholic father and terrible mother, having your closest friend pull this kind of stunt would be devistating. I guess I am happy they got it resolved, but I don't think I would have let her off the hook quite so easy.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your great review xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 76
Wonderful...I love all of them. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you Darling!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 76
As always, amazed at how you keep the characters & story developing and fresh. It all flowed so smoothly, if you hadn't 'fessed up, I'd never've believed you were struggling with the writing. Thanks to you & to "Fee" for making your posting date. You don't know how much this fan looks forward to your updates. thanks again! OP
Author's Response:
Thank you so much OP - you are too kind with your review but Fiorella is a Mistress (parden the pun) who knows how to crack the whip and pull my head out of my bottom! So thank you so much and we will talk again in two weeks!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 76
hmmmm the workout /spanking part: I agree she needed to be punished but he should have had the talk first. She was obviously confused.
Glad they are involving Paul. Not sure involving Carlisle is the best option. I'm not sure he can be objective. not to mention the embarrasment talking to your FIL about that stuff. Bad call. Felix or someone else, fine. Ah well. JMHO Glad she challenged Eddie about it though.
Glad she saw a specialist about her weight. Also Glad she is challenging Alice. She is really being awfully judgemental and bitchy.
Yummy Music room time. Wow Cant believe alice said that to Rose or to Bella. Glad bella stood up for herself. Alice is lucky Rose or Bella didnt slap the crap out of her. Ugh Now bella feels like she doesnt want to be in her home? Unacceptable. Jazz thinks Bella is stubborn? Bella doesnt even know what the hell the problem is? She's tried to ask Alice and kept getting blown off. Dont blame Bella for getting fed up.
hmmm now Alice is avoiding Edward too huh? pathetic. Glad bella has finally had enough. Jazz obviously knows what's up her arse. Princess Alice indeed. She is acting like a princess. Most of her conversation was me, me, me. Glad she got put into her place. Jazz should have done it before bella got hurt though.
Ugh getting up before 5 to cook. wow. Glad they are all there together.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your wonderful review! :)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 76
Love ya both, Fiorella remeber to keep her on her toes
need more, write faster. LOL
Author's Response:
thanks so much and I may just give up sleeping!
Date: 25 Sep 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 76
I thought it was a great chapter (they aaalll are). Alice was really pisiing me off. I wanted to spank her. Hee hee.
Author's Response:
now, now, let's leave the spanking to Jasper shall we? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 76
loved it....thats all....!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much - see you in two weeks for the next instalment
Date: 25 Sep 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 76
It may have been short, but it was filled with quality. You covered all the big topics and the little. Adjusting to a new lifestyle is difficult on all relationships, but you never glossed it over, you made it real.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 25 Sep 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 76
loved it its about time those 2 had it out
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the review
Date: 25 Sep 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 76
Superb, as ever. If you had writer's block (like I've had for months) then you really pulled it out of the bag! What a lovely ending to the chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you darling and I hope that you get better soon - I mean that, WB is horrible!
Date: 25 Sep 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 76
good chapter. i think the story has gotten so long that i have forgotten some of the beginning or am just confusing it with another story. I thought carlisle was a director or producer or something not a doctor.
Author's Response:
ahem! *clears throat* Different story, Angel! Is this your way of saying it's time to call it quits?? Thanks so much for the review :)
Date: 25 Sep 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 76
Awesome chapter... as always!! I love all the Edward and Bella go through, even the tough parts. They are in this together!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your kind review!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 76
Awesome. I loved this chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks so much CaraT
Date: 25 Sep 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 76
Loved it. I was shocked to her alice compare Bella to a stepford wife but to an outside it might have appeared that way. I can't believe that Edward sent Bella out shopping in a skirt with no panties... I'd be afraid to bend over. So glad to see the twisters back together. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Hmmm - Edward sure loves to push the boundries! Thanks for the review
Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 76
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it SO MUCH! Even if it was shorter, it was still something :D I cannot wait to see what else happens :D
Author's Response:
thanks for the review love
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 76
wow what another amazing chapter!!! phew! so happy the girls worked through that, I couldn't figure out what Alice's problem was honestly!!! Bella has grown in so many ways... Thanks so much for the wonderful chapter!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 76
Writer's block is a bitch, but you came through it like a rockstar!!! I can feel the end is near. All the issues and unanswered questions are being tied up in neat little bows. {sniffle, sniffle} Is there a 12-step program that helps you deal with the loss of your favorite fanfiction??? I think I need a Paul!
Alice's reaction to Bella and Edward's arrangement doesn't surprise me. As much as she loves Bella, she loves herself more and it would be impossible for her to see that Bella was literally running herself into the ground. I am so glad that Bella called her out on it. And I am glad that they made up. Life would suck for both couples if they couldn't make amends.
I loved when Edward explained why he didn't want to continue with the TPE after the 12 weeks. He may not be perfect, but he is pretty damned close.
And the lovin' in the music room was hot, hot, hot, hot, hot!!! I really hope we are treated to some very juicy lemons before you close this out. Go out with a bang!
As always...you totally blow me away!
Love ya!
XOXO
Nickey
Author's Response:
And you my love, are as always too generous with your wonderful words of encouragment! I mean last week was a nightmare and Fiorella was amazing! I emailed her on Monday morning and raised the 'red' flag - she came back at me a couple of hours later with a swift kick in the but for taking so long to ask for help (I am so like Bella in that way!) and with a couple of suggestions and then it just flowed.
I love this story so much that I think just the thought of ending it, gave me stage fright or something. I still can't seem to find the right place to say 'good-bye'. I want the kids to grow up (with all of their antics) and to go off to college and to get married and I want to see Edward and Bella growing closer and more mature.... fuck! this is driving me crazy - so I won't bore you any longer. I may just do some chapters in 5 year snap shots almost - does that make sense?
Love you,
Michele
Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 76
All this "forgetting" is totally cracking me up!!!
The one thing that I am curious about is their BDSM relationship in front of the children regardless how old they are.
Like these things here:
"Eat Isabella," Edward's smooth voice was quietly commanding.
"Eyes up!" Edward hissed. He could feel his blood pressure rising.
He cleared his throat and sat back as he gave Bella the signal to eat and to lower her eyes again.
Yes, I realize that these are all little things and this is just a story, it is just something that I was curious about. Perhaps these things should not be done in front of the kiddos? IDK....
Wow! Edward was p-i-s-s-e-d about the whole exercising thing, wasn't he? Whew!! In his defense, he is right...especially if she is still underweight. Plus, she did give her self over, completely, for the time period they both agreed upon and she did not hold up to her part of the bargin.
Oh but I think she had every right to be mad at Edward for making her talk to Carlisle about such an embarrassing situation. But she had to talk to somebody, right?
Hmmm...what is up with Alice:
Alice mumbled something that sounded like, "As if you would know!" But Bella wasn't sure.
Alice's conversation with Rose is really something! She should have ben speaking directly to Bella about it instead of talking behind her back.
That was some showdown between Alice and Bella! Whew! Glad that they got that all worked out!!!
Ewwwww.....Belllaaaaaa cussed!!!:
What the hell little brother?"
She's in trouble!!!
*bubble bursts* I guess Edward didn't catch that. I thought he was there.
I completely LMAO when I read this:
I know that you are almost falling off your chairs because it is so damn short and you are looking under the laptops and desks, thinking, "Where the fuck is the rest of it??????"
You seriously crack my ass up!!
Can't wait to read what happens next!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Oh Keye, I can always count on you to lift my spirits and ask the hard questions. Frankly, when it come to the kids, I'm not sure how they are going to proceed. I don't think that I would want my husband to 'order' me around in front of my kids, because maybe that goes to the respect thing. Perhaps in future, Edward would just give her instructions in private and then if she 'trangress' them, he would call her out about it when they are alone. I will do some research and see what I can find out, okay?
And yeah, to steal a line from SM "I'm glad that I amuse you!" :)
Hugs,
Michele
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 76
Well thank you to Fiorella for her help, but thank you to you too, for our PLU World !!!!!
Author's Response:
Well FIS, if it wasn't for all of the encouraging pm's and reviews, I don't think that we would be here - so my love, thank you for your faithful readership!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 76
as always awesome chapter thanks
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 76
Alice and Bella are hilarious. I am glad Bella has not gone done the slave route. shudders. lol As always a wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Roon, yeah I love the kink but slave??? I don't think that I could write it! Thanks so much for the review.
Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 76
Shorter or not it will was still a great chapter. Loved Bella giving Alice hell. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for your review
Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 76
I'm sorry you had such a difficult time with this chapter... I did enjoy it. I'm glad that Bella and Alice made up, although I am still angry at Alice for being so vinditive toward Bella. She said some pretty nasty things about Bella and to Bella that were uncalled for. Its one thing to be upset with a friend its another to be disloyal. I hope Jasper has something to say behind the scene (we could just hear about it). She was certainly acting like a spoiled teenager.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review honey and we will see jazz and Ali in an outtake - promise
Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 76
So Bella was forced to overcome her utter mortification and discuss her ass with her father in law. As a result, she sought the advice of her doctor who was able to reassure her that all was well now.
This arrangement with Edward has given her time to grow, learn and to heal emotionally, mentally and physically. Edward was very correct in that not many months before she never would have approached him to discuss their relationship such as she did. I look forward to his ideas for a less intense arrangement for their future.
It was good to see Bella and Alice finally force their way through what was bothering Alice so. It must have been difficult for Edward and Jasper to watch their women in such pain. Alice will surely grow from this.
It has been spectacular watching the children all grow. Am curious as to the possibilities of Seth and Jessie maybe being more than friends...
Author's Response:
Okay, I love Seth and I want him to find true love, so who knows if Jessie is the girl for him - only time will tell. Thanks so much for your kind words and your awesome review.
Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 76
LOL short but awesome. Wouldn't know there was writer's block from reading it. Love love love Edward's and Bella's talks and growth. Both so very insightful! The fight between Alice and Bella was fantastic. I could "feel" it! Looking forward to next time.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review and encouraging words - it helps a lot!
Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 76
Ugh how dare Alice? i get that she was concerned about bella but she was also being VERY selfish! i really wanted edward to have a word or two with her! she totally disrepected them both!
Author's Response:
Okay Missie!! You go girl! I love how we get so riled up with these characters, but I promise you there will be some brother/sister time in the next chaper.
:)
Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 76
It was beautiful. I loved the way that Bella is standing up for herself and Edward. Way to go Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks T - Yeah our Bella is growing up xoxo
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 76
I am so hooked and needing more of this story! Don't leave me hanging too long, update as soon as possible please!
Author's Response:
Aww now KOW, you know that I won't keep you hanging too long - 2 weeks I promise!!
:)
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 76
Gotta love Alice and her theatrics.
Author's Response:
oh yes! I love Alice and i find her to be one of the more interesting characters in Twilight - there is so much more to her I think. But my alice is first and foremost quite selfish and jealous - she wants Bella and her relationship to stay the same and it's the same with us though - our relationships change as time goes on.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 75
I just had to let you know how much I have enjoyed this story since I found it. I havent reviewed much unless something really caught my interrest but believe me the love was always there! I really hate to see this end. It is like a serious MOTU type addiction this story and I know you are going to end it nicely. Between this and Diamond in the Rough I am a giddy mess when I get update notices and when I finish the update I'm tingly all over!!! I just realized today that I hadn't read this chp and I don't how I missed it but I had told a friend that it only had a few more chps and she needed to start it(she's a complete only reader) and she read this chp. just to get a feel and I was so excited that I had it to read!!! I also love how you add pics in between sections to describe what you are writing. That is so brilliant!! I am also extremly excited about your new story. That sounds awesome and I know it will be great no matter what cause you're just that good!!! I just don't know how you authors on here do it. My mind is boggled by your talent! BRAVO on another great chp. <3
Hugs, Stephanie
*for all newby fanfiction readers that read reviews first to see how people like the story before reading, first READ THIS STORY and also if you don't know what MOTU stands for...pm me and we will have a talk! HA!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 75
That is a wonderful chapter.. I know why their doing this.. she need help to control her antixetys. I can lots of punishment.. hehehe.
Will alice every learn.. NOT!..
Love this chapter..
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 75
I bow to your writing skills that you can churn out 25K+ chapters in such a short amount of time. And I love the detail you provide. So they are offically moved, and I can't wait to see what happens with this 3 month contract :)
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 75
The houses are amazing! I am not sure what to think about this arrangement. She rarely gives herself over to him without second guessing him or trying to top him. When she is not doing that she is busy keeping things from him. I think they both need it to work but it will not be easy.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 75
great pics! *sigh* i hope Bella is going to retain this lesson, cause that little devil on her shoulder is getting her into a lot of trouble.......
Date: 14 Sep 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 75
Great job, and i hate to see it end, but I do think its time for something more..... It would be nice to come back to every once in a while to check up on the cullen family...... As for a tidbit into your next story, it sounds promising. Cant wait to read that one.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 75
I will be so sad when this ends. I understand it can't go on forever. I would love it if you would do a story when the kids are older. I would love see how they handle all the kids as teenager.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 75
I like Bella/Edwards house better lol
I, too, am saddened to hear the ending is coming and would love love LOVE a sequel.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 75
I must say that I am a little concerned about the new arrangement. It would seem a little weird to me to see Bella not talking in public. She really had no choice because if she rejected the offer Edward would have taken it very bad. Oh I really hate to see my favorite story come to an end. Love your writing and appreciate all the work you do to bring us such great updates. Thank you
Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 75
I take it Emmette and Rose now have 3 boys? The homes are amazing. It is possible that Edward and Bella's "slave" time can work to their advantage. But Edward has to remember that he is the Dom...he tends to forget a bit too easily.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 75
God I love there new home... I read on FF because I can do it on my phone.. But I also love to look at the pictures on here..
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 75
fantastic chapter.i think bella needs the complete control just to get her back on track.the houses are gorgeous.n poor alice lol.hope rose is ok.update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 75
Hey Darling,
Remind me to pimp this story out next update. Leave it all on the Floor by katiecav.
Love you and I hope you are having a good week.
Fiorella
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 75
Can't wait on ur new story...
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 75
beautiful home! boy what has bella otherself in to??? i hate this ending!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 75
I've been reading over from the beginning, jeeze I love that body shot scene. Nice reference back to Tuscany with the new home decor. I wouldn't have guessed during the last few chapters that things were wrapping up, but halfway thru this one, you got that across in a really lovely way. All that & serious playroom time too... pretty impressive Ms M.
Looking forward to the new story. Tho I'll surely miss the fortnightly updates with these two.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 75
Bella was doing so well for a while, I can certainly understand feeling overwhelmed when you are a new mother but she knows communication is key I hope she doesn't fall into a self destuctive pattern again. No one believes she is anything like That she bitch who pretended she was Bella's mother it's all in her own head that she has to prove something which is probably all the more difficult when you are trying to convince yourself you are not lacking. I have loved this story from the start and I will be sorry to see it end, but I will be looking forward to reading any future stories that you give us. I can't wait to see how many kids Bella and Edward end up having!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 75
Just the thought of this story ending makes my heart hurt. I'm so invested, I may need a hug.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 75
As always, I loved it. I am glad that Edward is looking out for Bella and called Riley. I am excited to see how Edward and Bella are going to do their 2 days week deal. Love the idea. Glad that Jasper put Alice in her place. LOVE the pictures of the houses. I just can not believe that Bella did not know what ANYTHING in her house was going to look like. I couldl not have done that. I am excited about the upcoming chapters. LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 75
I like this new arrangement that they have. I'm sad that your story is coming to a close as well..its been an amazing journey.
Date: 12 Sep 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 75
I love the new arrangement!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn, this started out with a bang! Am so looking forward to reading more. Love the nickname she gave him,"Sparky". cracks me up
~LauraLeigh
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 75
Michele~
As always you freakign amaze me with your wonderfully written words. I love this story, and where it is sad to hear you talk of the end, I completely understand. I love the way that you are workign through the issues with them and having them stride to make themselves whole together. You do such a fine job of showing just how hard it could be to keep your thoughts focused into someone elses wants and demands. Thank you for sharign this wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter.
HUGS!
xoxo,
Kasi~
Date: 12 Sep 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 75
i love this story so much and have enjoyed every chapter. You also write the best sex scenes ever!! Bella definitely annoyed the shit out of me in this chapter when she fucked up their play time...I mean I was really annoyed!!
Anyway, I will read anything u write...cant wait for the next chapter and I LOVE the pictures. Can you imagine living in a home like that??? wow wow wow
Date: 12 Sep 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 75
AWK ... Only 4 or 5 chapters left! AWK ... What will I do? I love these characters and this story. You've brought them to life over the past year that I've been reading. Loved this chapter. The arrangement is going o be interesting. Bella is learning. Before it would have been her taken out into the car and spanked ... Would love to see a glimpse of what transpired with Jasper and Alice on that incident. I can only imagine Jasper's anger and embarrassment that made him make Alice apologize to her brother as Sir. Loved the pics of the house. So beautiful.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 75
As always...FUCKING LOVED EVERY AMAZING WORD!!!! I don't know how you do it, but you continue to blow me away with this story.
Their last scene in the house was hot and angsty and tense and just...everything! I felt a twitching hand when she taunted Edward like that. I have to wonder just like he did, will she ever learn?
I'll admit as much as I love the new house, the scene where they left the house brought me to tears. That was their first home. That is where we all fell in love right along with them. Things really are changing.
So, we are trying something new a couple days a week? Very interesting concept. I think that they can make it work, but I am sure they will both hit road blocks along the way. I do not see Bella coming through it without facing some serious punishments, but I think it will make her a better person and them a stronger entity. I can't wait to see it as you write it.
Loved it hon! You totally rock my world!!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 12 Sep 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 75
Wow, that was AMAZING! I LOVE the new house! So gorgeous :) I cannot wait to see what else happens next ;)
Date: 12 Sep 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 75
loved the chapter