[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 64
This was such a good chapter. I cried both happy and sad tears. Thankyou for not leaving us hanging.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 64
Thank goodness. I love your E/B.
Great chapter......the drama right after the wedding....horrid. Thank goodness they had "cleared" the air before the shooting.
V better be dead or if not, she has to suffer!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 64
That was a very powerful chapter - so much to take in. You out did yourself. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 64
wow...haven't cried like this in month's... just wow
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 64
Holy Crap PLU, you totally out did yourself. This was a beautiful chapter from the wedding to the honeymoon to the self loathing, self strength, to the stalker, to the trauma, the wait, and the awakening. Amazing. I know you probably have a real life, but I would love for you to continue with this story for awhile yet.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 64
What an exciting loving roller coaster of a chapter . The emotions in this was too much I cried through most of it !!!!!!!! You did great!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 64
Tears, Tears, and more Tears. I loved the chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 64
Another fantastic chapter. Everything seemingly effortlessly described and so real. Great tension after the wonderfully romantic wedding and wedding night. Superb. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 64
I love that your chapters are so long. With other stories it seems like you just get back into the story and then you have to wait another week or 2 for an update. You covered a lot of ground in this chapter. I can't believe they both got shot! Especially when E & B had been not talking. I'm sure they are glad that Jasper talked E into making that phone call. I love that B got tell those nurses that she was Mrs. Edward Cullen. That must have felt great! Can't wait for the next update. You are doing a fabulous job with this story. Keep up the great work. I have a lot of respect for you authors. I can't imagine the dedication it takes for you to do this for us and I for one want to say thank you.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 64
wow, what a ride. great chapter, loved it, even with all the drama
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 64
fantastic chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 64
victoria was a cow!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 64
When you write a story, boty do you write one. Most people leave the wedding as their ending to the happy ever after ending, but not you. THIS WAS GREAT. The wedding beautiful and then the fight and then this very unexpected event. You know how to really SPICE up your stories that the reader cannot for one minute stop reading. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER and I hope some day that you will put this story to print so that everyone can read your OUTSTANDING work. Simply AMAZING.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 64
fuck..... that was one awesome chapter,
and one brilliant interpretation of twilight.
you are hell of a writer. i can't praise you enough..........
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 64
Michele,
{Taking a deep breath to calm myself}
Just because I love you does not mean I have to like you and right now you are NOT my favorite person!!!
UGH! Here I was all set for a fabulous wedding and fuck hot honeymoon and you give me THIS?!? Now, don't get me wrong. I loved the wedding (perfect 1st dance song, by the way) and the first what, 24 hours of the honeymoon and then you let Edward get all fucked in the head?!? Talk about the honeymoon being over. I can't believe you did that! I was crying through what was supposed to be the best time! The tears were literally pouring down my face as I could practically see him pulling away from her. It broke my heart!!!
Then you let them get past this little blip and then icky Vicky shoots him and Jasper?!? Damn girl, you need to stop listening to the evil voices in your head! And again I started crying when Bella was on the roof with Emmett. FTI, I freakin loved Emmett in that moment. He was everything Bella needed short of being Edward.
I loved how Bella made it clear to the nursing staff exactly who she was and that visiting hours didn't mean shit to her. I loved how she was so strong and stayed by his side 24/7. I love Bella when she is strong like that.
But don't think that gets you off the hook. I am still angry with you. And don't think I didn't catch that little slip about 2 fatalities. We know the bitch bit the big one, but who else? Hmmm?!? And you know I haven't forgotten about the contents of a letter that we are still waiting on.
You had better fix this girlfriend or I am sending Garrett to put you in your place. Edward is going to be laid up for a while (not in a good way), so Garrett will have to step in with a good firm ridding crop and a single tail to teach you it is not nice to hurt our Edward like that. ;)
Love ya babe,
Nickey
PS. It truely was an excellent chapter. I don't enjoy the tears, but you have a gift for pulling them out of me like no one else. ;)
Author's Response:
you are so good for my soul! truly and absolutely, that's what you get for making me think all sorts of evil things about Carlisle and BELLA!! Talk about a mindfuck, young lady, here I am writing an epic chapter and all the while I'm wonding if C & B are going to get down and dirty soon!!! YOUR FAULT ENTIRELY. And after Edward's bullshit during his honeymoon, I WANTED TO SHOOTER THE LITTLE FUCKER MYSELF!!!
You don't miss a thing do you? Yes there was another fatality and you will find out next chapter (next weekend - so no reading for me) And the police will fill in the gaps for Bella and Edward as well - JUST WARNING YOU NOW - Edward is not a good patient and it's so funny that you mentioned Garrett - he comes to visit... with ramifications... poor Bella has her hands full with Asshole - sexy asshole, but still he is an asshole.... hmmm.
Okay, going now. love you lots and more,
Mitchie xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 64
O thank god I thought you were going to have him wake up and not know who she was or something horrible like that. I love this story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
No way - he has to know who he is so that when he is being an asshole patient, he will know who is going to smack him! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 64
Jeez...what a tear jerker. Cried my eyes out. Wonderful story!
Author's Response:
thank you so much sweetie xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 64
Love the rings and the necklace. the cufflinks were cute. SOOOO Love that song. Yummy Angel lingeree (SP?). Yummy mini honey moon. That lodge and all are gorgeous.
Ugh you silly self hating man. idiot. butterfly...... arsehole he is being. Who is being the emotional child now eddie? ugh men sometimes. Glad she suggested he talk to Paul. Well at least he held her before he left. Stupid man not even kissing her goodbye. At least Anderson is there for her.
Gawd Heidi is a bitch and Felix is an arsehole. Glad B got home ok. Well Jazz isnt Paul but at least he is talking to someone. Ugh Victoria showing her head. Glad Jazz is there to knock him upside the head. Glad he called her.
Well at least Brian is paying attention to stuff. Felix is such a jerk. Too bad vicky didnt shoot him. crap both J and E were hit. Poor B and A. Glad the family is there for them. lol like those nurses were going to keep her out regardless....HA. Woo Hoo for sparky waking up!!!!!
As you can guess, I was writing the review as I read this time so you get an extra long one. :-)
Author's Response:
I loved your review! Thank you so much - lots more fun to come! Update next week xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 64
And oh dear here I thought I was going to be upset that you were going to hold out on us and not have Edward wake up. Glad you didn't. ;)
On a funnier note, when Bella stood up to the nurse telling her "I am family. I am Mrs. Edward Cullen...." The only thing that was going through my mind was 'Stuff it bitch'. Please excuse my language, but I just had to. lol.
ANYWAY, can't wait for Domward to get back on his feet and behind the paddle. Happy typing!!
CrimsonR
Author's Response:
You are so right - that's exactly what I was thinking!!! thanks so much for the review and he will get back on his feet soon, but not without some fun and games!!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 64
You know, Edward is that hunk and all that but he has this ego that is going to kill him. On their honeymoon and he acts like that. Then Victoria shoots him and Jasper.
I wonder if Bella will recover from this? Will she think that she is at fault? Paul is needed big time.
Wonder went to sadness. Shot or not Edward needs a spanking.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review - you are absolutely right - and don't worry, he is not getting away with anything!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 64
Thanks for the update!! Loved it and will be waiting for more!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the review - more is on it's way!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 64
All I can say is your damn lucky you didnt leave this hanging!!! I cried...so it was definately good!!
Author's Response:
tears are goog? okay - got it! No cliffy for us - not such fun xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh i forgot, beautiful wedding details, and the honeymoon is hawt !!!!!! Loved it
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 64
well thank god, he woke up before you ended this chapter, because I woudl have come to your house to say wtf???? Kisses for having him wake before the end of the chapter !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh Sunny, THIS RIGHT HERE?? This is why I don't do angst (too much) - we don't do angst well around here do we? And I was too pissed off with his stupid sense of protectiveness that i had to shoot the little shit!!! But the fun and games are not over - he is a horrible patient! See you next week - this was just a bonus xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 64
It was awesome. Thank you for not waiting the two weeks. I love this story.
Author's Response:
It was my pleasure - update next week! xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 64
well that was a super chapter! i cant believe that he did that to her on their honeymoon no less! im glad taht hes ok though ! cant wiat till the next chapter !
Author's Response:
thanks so much for your review! xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 64
Wow, that was AMAZING! I am so happy he is ok! Please let him continue to be ok :) I cannot wait to see when they eventually have children ;) Hope they catch Victoria/Tory SOON!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review - of course he's okay - He's Edward! xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review - of course he's okay - He's Edward! xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 64
Wow! What a roller coaster this has been. Fabulous chapter! Thank you for not leaving us at the shooting b/c I don't know that I could have functioned until the next update.
The pictures really added to the chapter.
Thank you and I can't wait for the next chapter.....
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review and update will be next week as usual
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 64
Great chapter! It made me laugh it made me cry! Can't wait for the next update and know that our boy pulls through this and that bitch Victoria burns in hell! Oh and loved the pictures!
Author's Response:
thank you so much, I'm glad that you liked the pics! Yes they do and yes she does!! xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 64
grrr just grrr...Edward lives in a BDSM lifestyle and gets upset over bruises and ruins honeymoon grrrrrrrr. You know I never wondered about Victoria after the Jacob/James damage. How stupid of me to forget that bitch. lol
Author's Response:
hey Vickic, thanks so much for your review and comments - yeah he'd better make it up to her! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 64
omg, talk about riveting!!!! the wedding was beautiful! the honeymoon night....HOT and then Edward became stupid *sigh* but Bella put her big girl panties on and once he recovers he should be SO PROUD the way she handled herself. i can't believe Victoria came out of the wood work like that. i;m so glad he woke up before the end of the chapter....i don't think i could have survived that kind of cliffy.....lol!
Author's Response:
thank you for your generous review! She did put her big girl panties on and he is proud of her, even though he isn't a good patient and needs reminding which way is up! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
this just made my week - RL a bitch w/surgery, etc. and this was a much needed and pleasant surprise. you continue to amaze me; i just love this story and these characters. pissed off a little by emo edward, but great chapter. TY for not leaving us hanging!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 64
It was an exciting chapter and well worth the wait. The last thing I expected was for Victoria to shoot him. In truth I had forgotten all about her. I have that for most of this chapter I thought Edward was being an monumental ass. I really was not getting Edward's self loathing for marking Bella. This is the same man, who had whipped her, beat her with impliments, tied her up and punished her (65 beats or did he forget that) and will do the same again at some point. It just doesn't ring true, unless he decended into mental illness. Bella was very good, his arse should of been paddled and good. I suppose now that he's been shoot he will have to be let off. :-D
Author's Response:
Hey roon - THANK YOU FOR SAYING WHAT WE WERE ALL THINKING - WHAT THE HELL IS HE ON ABOUT??????!!! Our boy got a stupid sense of protectivness - I was so pissed off with him that I wanted to shoot him myself!! I couldn't stop writing until it was over. Now, just a head's up - he is NOT a good patient and no, Bella is NOT going to let him get away with it. Thanks for the review, babe - update next week xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 64
wowza! I loved it! I truly do appreciate you not letting us hang like others would..on the edge of a cliff....struggling to find some sort of grip and foot hold!
Loved the turn of events! Thanks for writing such an awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
There is no way I could do the cliffy thing - we don't do cliffies well around here, right? I'm so glad that you liked it. Update will be next week like normal - this was just a bonus xoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 64
Great...intense and so so exciting...
Author's Response:
thanks honey! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 64
OMG - Thank you so much for NOT leaving us hanging with the ending... You rock!!!! I have to come up with a better term... Needless to say your on the top of my FAVORITE list today!!! **snickers and giggles**
Okay the wedding sweet and lovely everything E & B are! Just perfection! Simplistic and Elegant! Thanks for the photo's loved the gifts they gave one another. I really liked what she did for him with the gold cuff links. His gift to her was total perfection! The fight they had on their honeymoon was in keeping with BD that's for sure, just made it applicable to our story here ~PLU~ so, kuddos, good job! Thank you for showing our Bella continuing to use all the wonderful lessons that she has learned over the past months since being in therapy with Jared, she had NO meltdowns that was perfect, she truly is a strong woman.
Jazz what would we do without your wonderful Texas horse sense?! You make Edward our hard headed; sexy as hell; obessively over protective Dom finally come to his senses and call his wife to apologize... thank you Jazz!!!!
Hello ~~~ thank you Brian for sensing something was up with "Tory"
Man alive Felix, damn I hope he thinks with his NEXT celebrity client before ATTEMPTING to block the instincts of a security person, who I might add is entrusted to Protect said Celebrity Client.... Thank goodness for Brian's instincts!!!! Hope he gets a wonderful reward in this story for his heorics.. :-)
Okay I won't rail on the Nurse, she didn't know Edward was married after all he is a celebrity and it wasn't really out there yet. Way to stand up for yourself Bella! Thank heaven's for a great team of Dr's and Nurses!!!!
Yay! He's awake ~ will be oh, so.... ready for the next chapter...... Way to go!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your awesome review Kathy, you are making me blush!Yeah our boy sure knows how to throw a spanner into the works! and he isn't a good patient so he is going to try Bella's to the hilt. Update soon (next week - this was a bonus) xoxo
Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 64
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you...
For not leaving us with a cliffy.. I would have DIED... That was the most amazing chapter ever. It was so wonderful.. I was so freaking mad at Eddie, then so scared, then so emotional, and then ahhhh.. You did great..
Thanks one more time.
Author's Response:
Thanks from the CLIFFY QUEEN HERSELF??? Compliment indeed! Yeah the cliffy thing came up and I was like OH HELL NO!! We don't do well with cliffies - we have too much stress in our own lives - why torture people further?? Thank you for reviewing and commenting, update like normal next week and just a heads up, Edward isn't a good patient....
xoxo
Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 64
oh my this chapter made me cry .. I was thinking how could he be so mean on his honeymoon . I was happy he said made up with Bella and cried when he got shot . You are a wonderful story teller if you can make me cry ....
Author's Response:
so tears are good? Okay, good to know! Thanks so much for the review and comments. They will keep me going till next week's update! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 64
Michele~
Yet another dramtic and wonderful chapter from you. I never saw this coming but at least you did nto cliffy us through the shooting...thank you for that.....it would have been pure evil. I LOVE this story so much and I am so proud to call you a friend. You have so much talent for telling a story that makes you laugh, cry, smile, embarrassed, and at times EXTREEMLY hot and bothered. Thank you so much for sharing this talented writign with us all, wrapped into this phenominal story. You truely amaze me!
XOXOXOXO
Hug's~
Kasi
Author's Response:
Aww Kasi, Thank you so much for your wonderful words, you make me feel so honored to call you my friend! I've been a reading failure lately, but these two are keeping me busy and there was no way that I was going to do a cliffy - we don't do angst well around here. I will update again next week like normal - yeah Edward isn't a great patient... :)
xoxo
Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 64
I'm guessing Victoria didn't make it? I almost wish she did so she could know she FAILED in her mission. I also think Brian should punch Felix as hard as he possibly can. If he hadn't stopped Brian, Brian might have been able to get to Victoria in time. Was the publicity fucking worth it, Felix?
I could kiss you for how long your updates are. They sate me until you update again. Thank you for all the time you put into these chapters and the story as a whole. I never want it to end.
Author's Response:
Oh no babe, she got a bullet through the brain from our wonderful Brian, but Felix has NOT heard the last from him or Bella or Anderson! I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks so much for the review and comments.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 64
Wow that was some chapter! Thank you for not leaving us hanging...I do hate cliff hangers especially when it involves Edward. I have said it before but I love this story and the way you characterize Bella and Edward....great job and good writing. Also thanks for the pictures they are beautiful.
Author's Response:
thank you so much, the photos took hours to upload tonight! And hours to research and find! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 64
OMG you should have given a tissue warning! I'm crying my eyes out... The beautiful wedding and beautiful wedding night then Edward was just being a idiot (I still don't understand what he was thinking... he flogs her for goodness sake and thinks nothing of it... and he's worried about a couple bruises and a bite mark... I'm confused.
As for the rest, I can't even talk about it. I thank you so much for not leaving us handing too much... when is the next update? Next week or 2 weeks?
Author's Response:
aaaw honey, I brought you to tears? sorry. and EXACTLY MY POINT about Edward - I mean seriously he is so freaking emo sometimes!! he is such a flipping drama queen, and he is not a good patient (just warning you)! And yes my greedy sweet reader update next week - this was a bonus!
thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 64
what a beautiful wedding and what up with ed being all emo and crap?!?! just when i think they are in the clear you pull out good old vicki!!! thank you though for not keeping him in a coma for 3 chapters and thanks for not giving him amnesia so he would have to remember everyone... that is way cool!! thanks for not taking it there!!! thanks for the update i enjoyed it and can't wait for more!!! :P
Author's Response:
thanks for the review and comments - we do not to angst well, so that's why there was no cliffy - and no amnesia!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 64
thank god he woke up.... holy shit
Author's Response:
thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 64
aww that was so sad brought tears to my eyes.awesome chapter.update soon
Author's Response:
thank you!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 63
Great chapter! I love those twins, they are a freakin' riot. Hide the viagra.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 63
I don't know why, with all the dom/sub 'tasks" that they are involved, when she has to sleep in her own room it really bothers me! Great chapter : )
Date: 15 Apr 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
fraise...French for strawberry, you should've used the word phrase
you check a houses perimeter not it's parameter
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 54
i love this story by far one of my favorites! especially chapters 61 and 54!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 63
No, it wasn't too sweet, glad they got rid of the HOOr's.
You've got me hungry for Welsh rarebit toast now.ha
Cute lingerie
Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 62
awesome chapter. As always I really enjoyed the family banter. But I have to say I loved Carlisle's reponse to giving Alice away, and Bella standing up to Alice about her behaviour and the Familys way of handeling the situation. As always the lemon was intense and so very hot. I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 63
WOW great chapter .. Can't wait for the wedding and honeymoon! Oh I really want to know what Renee's letter says.
Really can't wait for the update!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 63
YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!!! I AM SOOOOOO LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!!
GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 63
I think its wrong for them not to tell about the strippers because he is always upset when she doesn't say anything even if its a small issue FFn is a fail everytime I try it so I will review when I get a chance Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can have a good week.....
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 63
Wonderful chapter addition :) Loved reading it and cannot wait to read more.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 63
Another great chapter! YAY, THEY ARE FINALLY GETTING MARRIED!!! *squeal* Can't wait to read the wedding. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 63
I have run out of compliments to give to you and this story! It is just my very favorite story of all the many I have read. I get so excited when I see an update notice. I almost don't want to read it right away, just so I can extend the pleasure. The last few chapters with the birth and the weddings have been exceptional. I can't wait for the next one. Thank you so much for all the pleasure you bring me and all your readers.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 63
I loved the chapter. This chapter wasn't about the sex. It was about their relationship and it was perfect.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 63
okay you are such a tease!! this is the first time you really left people hanging first with the letter is she not charlie's child? that is all i can think of but i have a feeling that is not it. and the wedding you left us on the hook!!! i think i am in withdrawl i have taken almost 4 days to get to this point i am spent from your rollercoaster ride!!! can't wait for more. :P
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 62
okay i must be the biggest wimp.. i like the play without the pain... thanks for telling more than just the spankings! i feel better... you sure made bella a take charge girl! again you are making me like ed more and more!! l love that pic of ashley and jackson it is one of my favorites he is just a sexy man!!! HOT!!! my second pick after rob.. sometimes i like him better but don't tell anyone!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 61
wow a lot there... right when i really don't like your edward he comes out of his dom stuper and i love him soo much....i still think bells needed to tell of charile better! sorry that whole situation just pisses me off. i don't think i could forgive as well as her. unfortunately i would have to make him suffer A LOT!! well i guess that is why it's fiction....
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 60
that is really shitty what charlie did to her... i really want her to confront him about it and i hope she gets a chance because that just sucks!! the minute you said her dress didn't fit i knew she was pregers!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 63
Love it! Thanks for all the pics!
Author's Response:
Thank you , more, much more up next chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 58
yeah for bella i am glad he showed up i was getting alittle pissed about him saying he wouldn't make it... please don't be upset with my last review i didn't mean to be mean or anything please dont think that... i like the story but some of it gets on my nerves... then you always seem to pull me back in by almost being "normal" haha
Author's Response:
Hey there Maria,
I'm not upset with you at all! That's what reading and reviewing is all about - you get to have a say in what you think about what I wrote and I promise, it's okay! You weren't rude or nasty, you were just being honest and honestly? I let me say that some of this is hard for me to write - I'm not a person that really believes in corporal punishment and I find it really hard to even spank my kids!!!! Even when they were impossible and really deserved it!
So once again, thank you for your reviews and your comments, I promise that I value each one!
Michele
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 57
okay yeah you have pretty much scared me off and i skip over a lot of stuff... i am really tired of the spanking it's like all they ever do.. there are lots more different punishments he can use other than coporal punishment... i know it is consentual but you know i am really put off by it. sorry not trying to be condesending or mean or whatever some people will say i am saying. again my common sense and my i would never do this crap comes out and it just sucks that ed can break the rules and nothing happens bella just forgives but ed can't just forgive he has to 'punish" i guess that is so where i draw the line...and again it is always bella's fault. she was working did edward get punished when he didn't sleep while he was filming before or eat well or.... it just is really out of hand to me and i can't believe some one would choose to live that way. i don't care if you say bella holds all the power it just doesn't seem it. it makes me not like either one of them!!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 63
I loved this chapter. And there was sex, on the bathroom counter at the munch. But that scene was awesome. I liked the whole spider thing even though I am very afraid of them. I am really looking forward to the wedding. And I cannot wait till the suprise of the quiet wedding hits the press. This will be great for VF and Jamie and whats-his-name... I hope you include Bella's dress, if you have already, I cannot remember. i read so many stories that include dresses. I LOVE the Tahoe house!!!!! OME that thing is amazing!!! Great find. I love how Anderson and Bella are, I wouldn't mind more interaction and banter between the two. Her always trying to get him out of his shell and him being stoic, it is pure chemistry of the platonic kind!
Author's Response:
Hi Sweetie, Let me tell you, I DROOL over the photos of the Tahoe house!! I will post some more photos of it in the next chapter as well as her dress, which I haven't posted before. Also pics of her gift to Edward and his gift to her and some others. I was a real romantic for this wedding but come on - This is Edward Cullen!! *Sigh*
Okay, update soon!
xoxo
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 63
This was a fabulous chapter... I am glad that you stopped where you did. I was LMAO at the atics up in Tahoe- at the lake w/ B & E; the guys at the "what happens in Tahoe, stays in Tahoe" party; Charlie's behavior. The party scene was done nicely... I was glad that there was some fun to it- loved the vampire spider vs. bumble bee idea ;).
However, I can't help but wonder just what the hell was said in that letter from Phil... I am thinking that Renee is trying to say that Charlie isn't her real father, or that she isn't really her mother and that Charlie forced Renee to become Bella's mother or something. Renee is such a Crazy Bitch, so who knows!! Hopefully we'll know soon and that once Bella knows she can get past it...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting. Yes, Renee is a crazy bitch and more than that, she is just wicked! I promise that your questions will be answered soon.
xoxo
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 63
Hi Michele! That was truely a beautiful chapter. Everything that you had happen was so them. I am actually glad that you saved the wedding for next time. I love the build up and it will make it soooo much better when we finally get a chance to read it. I can't wait to see her dress, you have been really tight lipped about it.
I loved Edward and Bella's scene, it was so playfully and down right sinful.....
The Uncles are a piece of work and I had to laugh at the 50 year old strippers. I hope that someone slips to the girls because they will get a kick out of it....
The kissing in the lake and Charlie was great......
Sorry I coun't review the last few chapters. My netbook wouldn't hold a internet signel for more then a few minutes. It look me over an hour and 5 tires to get my last chapter up. Huggggs
Denise
Author's Response:
Hey there my friend, I wondered what happened to you! Thank you so much for your constant encouragment. we'll talk soon, okay?
Love,
Michele
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 63
I loved it! The crazy uncles are the best!!! I love that Carlisle took over with the letter. She absolutely did not need to have that woman be awarded with a thought on Bella's wedding day.
Author's Response:
Thanks Darling, I'm glad you liked it. Update will be sooner than usual!
Michele
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 63
Perfection!
Didn't realize how quickly they got together. Not even a year but if it's right, it's right!
Worried about the Phil letter but I'm sure it will be worth the wait!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - that is praise indeed! As for the letter, between you and me, Renee is a monster of epic preportions and I think I am a little crazy (okay a lot crazy) to even think of this one!!
Love,
Michele
Date: 10 Apr 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 63
Another wonderful chapter! You never fail to entertain! Their "party" seemed to go off without a hitch. *giggle* Still loving all the photos that you put in your chapter. Is the first photo one of the nipple cup things that held on Bella's flowers?
OMG! The uncles are hysterical bringing in the 50 year old strippers. "Youngsters" to them! LOL! Loved Edward's reaction to that as well.
Have an idea of what 'the letter' says but, wow, I cannot wait to know for sure. Carlisle made the right decision to not give Bella that info on her wedding day. Smart man. It was crazy for Bella to chose that time to want to know but I understand her reasoning behind it.
What was in the box from Edward that Charlie brought to Bella? What did the charm look like? Love Bella's grandmother's earrings! So thoughtful and pretty.
There was so much more that I enjoyed about this chapter but I have to go play "mommy" now!!!!
Looking forward to reading more!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Hi there Keye,Thanks so much for your review and comments! The letter will be revealed soon, promise, but there is something else that has to happen first - sorry!
Update sooner than normal!
Love,
Michele xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 63
Thw whole chapter was lovely, if a bit unrealistic (Alice as bridezilla was the other extreme) but it is never as angstless asthis coming up to a wedding... and now you have me all wondering what the hell was in that letter. Really enjoyed the moment at the lake side...hehe
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and comments and yes, i did let my imagination get ahead of me a little, but I figured that they had enough angst/excitment etc at the party and hey, I think that we can all do with a little blatant romance and fluff every now and again and especially as we still have to read THAT LETTER!
Thanks again,
Michelexoxo
Date: 10 Apr 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 63
I tried to review last night but it failed. I'll try again.
Loved the chapter... can't wait for the wedding!!!!
I do have one question/concern (and it is again my usual concern). I am wondering why, if Bella did so well at the play party why Edward did not think it was a special enough occasion to invite her to their bed afterwards? I realize that Bella didn't think much about it ... but she had been hopeful he would... so my question is why didn't he? He had said he was "very proud" of her why wouldn't she be rewarded? I cried a little when he didn't.
I case you can't tell, I'm very invested in this story.
Author's Response:
Hi there aabc,
thanks for reading and reviewing and for your great comments. Edward didn't because quite frankly, he didn't go to bed straight away and when he did she was sleeping and he didn't want to desturb her! It was just that silly and thoughtless! And Bella does bring it up at some stage and he will tell he that he didn't think that she would even notice his absence, proving once again that somtimes, guys just don't think!!
Love,
Michele
Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 50
wow that is messed up bad!! we finally get ed and bell on track and now this happens!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 63
thjanks as always awsome chapter
Author's Response:
thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 63
awesome chapter.can't wait for wedding.update soon
Date: 10 Apr 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 49
thank you i loved it i loved that she did what she should do and she wanted to i love the ed defended her for once.. i think maybe they are starting to "get it" i am glad carlisle let ed have it and that people are actually on bella's side and not always with him... sorry i had to say that it always felt that bella was to blame for everything...
Date: 10 Apr 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 48
i feel better now. i am glad for once edward came out on the short stick.. he admitted he was wrong he is very hard to like sometimes and i am glad that bella is growing a pair and she told everyone how she felt. about time!!
Author's Response:
Hi Maria,
thanks so much for reviewing each chapter so faithfully. It's great to read your responses to the chapters as you read and to see how you relate to the characters. Thanks for reading. Michele xoxo
Date: 10 Apr 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 63
Great chapter, looking forward to the wedding.
Author's Response:
thanks you so much for the review
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 47
okay i know they did wrong but this is seriously out of hand and carlisle is right to want to protect bella. come on she has been through so much and everyone keeps pushing her and she lets them instead of stepping back and taking a break and looking at the choices she is making... not really liking where things are going... not really behind the choices everyone is making either.... not being critical just telling how i feel about what is going on. it's your story and i am reading it so i need to just shut up and read or not read.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 63
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! That was a great munch! I was very curious to see waht Edward was, because of the fangs ;) I really loved the "Bee" :) I also cannot wait to see their wedding, I cannot believe it is here! YAY!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review - my research skills are improving all the time - I had to find something that was real I'm glad you liked it. Update soon
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 63
Another great chapter! The letter has really GOT to be BAD if Carlisle wouldn't tell her right away what is in it!!!!
Author's Response:
All I can say that Bella was smart to not read it first! We will find out soon, promise
Date: 10 Apr 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 63
wonderful chapter. Loved the pictures. Tahoe can be so beautiful. Was wondering when the Renee letter would come back into play.
Author's Response:
Hi there, thanks for the review. I would love to go to Tahoe sometime, it looks really beautiful and the letter will come out soon xoxo
Date: 10 Apr 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 63
thank you for such a wonderful story, you are such fun to read. thanks again can't wait for the update!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review
Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 63
Great Chapter and I always love your pictures!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review and comments. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 63
I love this chapter.. You showed Bella has grown so much.. and how Edward still able to come her down even across the lawn.. that was so sweet.
I have admit it was about the strippers. nice detail. hahaha. and the guys were right if the girls would have found out. ALL HELL WOULD PAY!!
Can't wait to see them go down the isle. so beauitful. I really do hope you keep writing this into there marriage life.. I hate to see it end. :)Leona
have a great weekend
Author's Response:
Hey Leona, Thanks so much for your review and comments. Update soon. xoxo
Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 45
okay intersting to be so open with your parents.... NOT... anyway on with the show!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 63
holy crap!, you weren't kidding when you said her mouth would get her into trouble this chapter....damn! the scene at the munch was HOT! great job!. Imma bout to smack Charlie, but it seems Sue will beat me to it....lol and the Uncles.....let's just say EW! haha! the letter, that damn letter....i hope it will not hurt her and she can finally move on, but i know there will be some effed up crap in there. can't wait for the ceremony! Event of the year!!!
Author's Response:
soon, I promise, soon. That damn letter - yeah, not so much good news, but that depends on how you look at it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 63
Loving this story! Can I have more? Please?!
Author's Response:
thank you, and yes Ma'am, coming up soon xoxo
Date: 10 Apr 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 45
wow that was rough! so much pain. glad that is kina out of the way.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 63
I really liked this chapter. I am so glad that the scene they did at the party was not too detailed. I was really worrying about the intercourse infront of people. That is just a hard limit for me. Anyway yes I am dying to know what was in the letter but I am sure it was nothing good. I think that maybe Edward will be hurt that she didn't let him read it instead of his father.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you liked the scene - yeah I'm glad that E & B don't do sex in public either. The letter will be revieled soon and Bella didn't want Edward to read it first and for good reason! In Bella's mind, Carlisle was the right choice because he is so level headed. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 63
Great chapter. I hope Edward left the plug out for the wedding ;) poor girl. When does she get to poop? Heehee. I can't wait for the wedding and what's up with Renee?
Author's Response:
I loved your review! You made me chuckle! Yes, Bella was but free for the ceremony! (I hope!) Renee, well all I can say is she is some work, seriously.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 63
This was a great chapter. Loved the scene they did together and absolutely love the wedding coming up. I really don't think that Edward should keep the strippers a secret from Bella (because everything always seems to sneak out). Am really wondering what is in the letter, but I know we will find out in time. Thanks for writing and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hey Teri, Thanks so much for your review and comments. Yeah, it's never good to keep secrets - I'm sure he will tell her. The contents of the letter will come out soon, too. xoxo
Date: 09 Apr 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 63
LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEE IT!!!!!! I can't wait for the wedding and wedding NIGHT!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! Update soon xoxo
Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 43
charile you are going to make every mad.. you didn't treat her well and now you are going to be all possessive... trouble!!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 42
intersting session have to say not my up of tea but hell we can live vicarously through ed and bell!! haha
Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 63
well im excitd to see whats in that letter! cant wiat to see the wedding and im loving the pictures! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
thank you so much - update soon xoxo
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 63
Well that was HOT! (the munch) loved the jogging suit and the fact that he made her scream his name so everyone could over hear! yep that is our Caveman DomWard and personally I love this trait in him. It's so reassuring to Bella once more showing how they TOTALLY are Soulmates in everyway, they each need this sense of ownership of each other, they truly are that final piece of the puzzle if you will. He was not and can not be happy without her and likewise Bella is totally lost without him.
I do see that still with all the growth she has managed to achieve, she does not see herself clearly and I am not sure that it will come easily or soon, I think that is only to be expected though.
The location of the wedding is totally incredible...unbelievably fabulous! The Great Uncles are too much!!!! Honestly every story needs Great Unc's like them, they are such a riot! The overprotectiveness of Charlie was really cute... I had to snicker too when Edward said, "For Fuck's sake we live together, what does he think goes on? We play TWISTER or something?" So sorry but that was so true and comical...
Sad sweet Bella, one can only imagine what the ramifications of that Letter are. I wonder what on earth Phil could have said in that letter!
I am sorry that i have to ask this, but can a get a clearer understanding of what Bella's gift of Edward was. sorry I just didnt get it, unless it was something from her Submissive collar.
Okay ready for some wonderful Wedding yummies as well as honeymoon and then to find out about the terrible travesty of that Crazy letter...
Oh, I hope it goes without saying.... Another Rocking Chapter!!!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hey Kathy, thanks so much for your great review and comments. There will be pics of their wedding gifts to each other, her dress, as well as wedding reception, cake etc.
The letter will be up soon. I love Charlie - he is such a contradiction - all gruff and sweet at the same time! update soon xoxo
Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 63
I love the way you intersperse the writing with photos to enhance the images you paint with your words. It's great stuff and I always love receiving your update notifications and rush to read. Am looking forward to the next update very much. Btw nice choice on the earrings - I wear white and yellow diamonds too and love how they look in the Spring sunshine.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review. I loved those earings! I'm glad you liked the photographs - I'm a very visual person so I always look for pictures to help me write and I'm glad you enjoy them. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 63
A fantastic chapter. No matter how long your chapters are, they are always such a pleasure to read. What do you mean no sex, there were scenes, butt plugs and all sorts. lol . I loved the scene at the party. You have some imagination. lol.
I look forward to the wedding.
Take care and thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Well, I meant no sex for the week before the wedding - thanks so much for reading so faithfully.