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Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 99

Im throughy enjoying your Full Circle!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 103

Just picturing first his sunburned condition,  and his pouty form, then add in him in Ana's robe,  well that's just priceless! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 102

I'm not understanding why I missed this chapters posting!   I love this story! 

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonder what Christian would do about school events, teacher conferences and school open houses.

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 93

Family reunions.....How lovely!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 87

I can't catch my breath! Three hard breathing chapters in a row!!!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 86

Oooohhhh!!!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 84

Sticky gooey parts next!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 80

Thank you for sharing your FULL CIRCLE!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 79

Giving and getting Birthday sex is magical. ;p

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 78

So many intriguing twists!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 77

"Three children in backseat!" line is HILARIOUS! Christian has humor, wit, and a pretty face!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 103

Thanks for the update and the yummy lemon :)

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 103

Loved Emotional Christian at the end...it shows how far he has come.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 103

Love it!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 103

Silly, not wairing sunscreen, he usually so precise.  I'm sure he learned a lesson.  But I guess tying her up was a pleasant consequence.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 103

Got to love it!!! 

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 103

Whew, that was muy caliente!!! 

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 103

Awesome chapter...loving this story...it's what I look forward to every week!  Please keep it going, I just can't imagine your Greys not being in my life!  Thanks for updating.  I just love your Christian and Ana!!!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 67

It is shocking to have Ana use abusive words towards Christian. She getting a dirty mouth and should be punished.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Did you rewrite it's book in the last day? I have read it several times on TWCS and don't recall the word clitoris in the story.



Author's Response:

No I haven't done any rewrites. The story is different on TWCS than on FanFiction, if you have read it there. I could never use that word on the FF site.  But aI have not done any rewrites on Full Circle.

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 54

No more TV for Gracie!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 49

Gotta love that Ana and her well intended heart.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 102

Yes I think Ana will need to be brought in line as well. Thank you or the lovely update :)

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 44

YES!!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 102

Loved the banter at the end. Funny & sweet. 

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

Happy New Year to you also! Its now Labor Day weekend 2013. Throughly enjoying your Christian and Ana.
Did anyone really believe Ana was going to be undetected from Christians radar? ;)

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 102

Wonderful as usual!!!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 102

Oh boy!  I am sure Mr Grey will find it very difficult to let Ana's meeting be.  Can't wait or the next chapter!

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 102

I love this story and look forward to Saturdays each week.

I can't wait to see how this meeting with Mr. Parker goes ... will Christian be able to keep himself or his hired hands out of the situation???

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 102

I wondered why he was being such a petulant ass.  If the tides were turned I wonder how he would react to Ana being bitchy to him for not getting answers?

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 102

LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!  I re-read the your entire 3 books a few weeks ago...amazing!  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 102

Lord this woman is so stubborn. She wouldn't want Christian meeting some woman at a hotel but expects him to be okay with it. She better not do something stupid and give Sawyer the slip. Looks like she'll have to deal with the consequences good and hopefully not bad but, bad would make for some excitement!!!!!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 101

No, you would think that after all that they have been through and how many years they've been together that she would no better and realize when something isn't right. She isn't that naive young girl anymore where she can't believe that bad things happen. She needs grow the fuck up. It just get's on my nerves that she hasn't learned anything from all the bad shit that has happened to them. Lord, will she ever learn to stop looking at things with rose colored glasses!!!!!!!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 101

I'm sure she will, but hopefully not before she has his promise not to interfere unless she asks him to.

I'm sure Sawyer will stay close.

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 101

Loved Christian's speech about Ana's wedding rings!  Another sweet chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Just occured to me how pleasent it must be not to have a uterus. Sex anywhere and whenever!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 101

If she doesn't tell him he will make it a point to find out on his own. Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 100

:) 

Reviewer: Luvdisney2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 100

Congratulation on 100chapters on another book of the series.  Poor little Teddy.  Christian was killing me with just a little more time before going to take care of Teddy.  I can understand when you are almost there nothing will stop you until you finish.  Lol

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 100

Thank you for the excellent chapter :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 100

Loved having more of Christian being .. well, Christian.

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 100

Cute chapter. Shouty Christian is back!!!!

Reviewer: Mbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

I have laughed so much and so hard with this chapter. It is so real. Well done.

Reviewer: skinsavant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 99

snoring christian was funny...poor ana! i have a client who divorced her husband because he snored like a freight train and wouldn't do anything about it! lol
clearly, the husband was not the christian grey!!!
i certainly hope that virginia would live with them. she's lost so much precious time with christian and i think with what little time she may have left, this would be a perfect opportunity for her to continue creating beautiful moments with her dear family. i love ana, her heart is just so  pure and beautiful and she definitely transferred some of that energy to her dear husband.
poor sweet teddy! it was bad enough that he was in a lot of pain from his injury but to be afraid that his dad would be mad at him from breaking his arm...i hope christian doesn't go thermonuclear on teddy and/or gale! ;)
brilliant as usual!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 99

I love the idea of Virginia staying with there permanently with the Grey's. Thank you for the update :)

 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 99

Awwwwww. Poor teddy.  I hope Christian doesn't have a go at Gail.  I also hope Virginia moves in with them.  It will be good for all of them to have her close. I so love this story.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 99

It's so hard Stephen a child gets hurt.. They don't understand and are terribly afraid.  Poor Teddy!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 99

Do you think you will start book 4 soon? Still seems like so much yet to come.

Thanks for another great chapter 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 99

oh gosh brace yourself people Christian is in the ER and his cub is hurt! great chapter

Reviewer: Carol711 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 99

Oh no! Poor Teddy. I am glad that Virginia is expressing her feelings to Ana like that.  I am also glad the she takes some responsibility too.

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 99

Whoa, Christian is fucking sexy! I love how he just tells her how it's going to go and not in a dangerous way but a dangerously sexy way! Hott for Christian!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 99

Poor Teddy.  

Reviewer: Carol711 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 98

Oh my. I think Christian may need an antibiotic at this point!  Listen, E, you take care of yourself and let your wrist heal.  I've had wrist injuries before as well and the only thing that heals it is rest.  I hope that the keyboard you ordered is one that reduces hand stress.  I had one of those and it was very helpful.  I am enjoying your story immensely.  You are such a good writer and your story flows so easily and beautifully.  I don't know how you are able to sprinkle in such details.  I could never do that!  I am so happy that  Christian and Ana and the children are doing so well. Wait till Tommy finds out he has yet another grandma.  The story is in a good place now and adore being a fly on the wall in their home.   Take it easy and be well.  :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 98

Yeah ... more Christian.  :)  And Tommy calling them mama and daddy was perfect.

 

hope your wrists start to mend.  Thanks for continuing this story for us ... it's so good I look forward to every chapter.

Reviewer: skinsavant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 98

Tommy gives her a big nod  and I hear Christian chuckle. "Want part of the paper, bud?"

"Peese."

Christian pulls the cartoon section out and folds it handing it to Tommy who gives the pictures serious consideration. Christian goes back to his paper and coffee.

this adorable scene was just so natural between the christian and tommy...like a normal thing between father and son.

 

Christian leans in and gives Tommy a kiss on his cheek. "Bye Bud. You and Jimmy have a good day."

"Ukay. We well. Bye daddy."

My heart skips a beat and Christian stops in his tracks. Christian turns around walking back over to Tommy. Pulling him up into his arms he gives him a hug and another kiss. "I love you son."

and this one hit me hard. i got so emotional and couldn't fight my tears.

the care package was so ana. she's always been so thoughtful and caring. the time, the energy and the love she put into that was the same as when she was putting together christian's 28th birthday presents: the playroom keyholder with the digital "YES" blinking (i think or was it the seattle space needle or both?), the music, the toys, the jeans. and let's not forger the glider she left after they broke up.

the lemon was fantastic...the chapter was beautiful as always. the writing was stunning!

i hope your hands gets better. the writing can wait. it's best you take care of those golden hands of yours!

 

 

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 98

Great as usual!  I'll miss you're frequent posts :(. But you make sure and take care of yourself, we're glad to get our story whenever you give it:). Feel Better!!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 98

I'm sorry to hear about what you have been going through. I love this story and appreciate the updates, first and foremost please take care of yourself. Your health and well being comes first. 

Every part of this chapter was fantastic, Christian and Tommy at breakfast was beyond precious with the coffee and newspaper, but most of all Tommy calling him daddy and their hug was so touching and heart warming.

Thank you again for the update, get well soon.

Fefe :)

 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 98

I hate colds!  I hope all goes well with Tommy... He appears tot be adjusting well.

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 98

I love that Christian still gets surprised with Ana's love for him.  I loved the kds, especially Teddy, talking with Ms. Collins.  Great chapter!  Hope the wrist feels better!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 98

I love reading your work to much to want you to push yourself. Please take the time to heal. 

This was another great chapt. We got to hear from Myra, the kids, Mrs. Collins, and hit sex. Poor Christian, I'm thinking he needs a chest x-ray to rule out pneumonia. 

I keep thinking more drama us coming. The subs, Tommy's mother & boyfriend. Or, some tragedy firm Virginia. Will have to wait and see.

 

take care 

 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 98

Great chapter.  I hope they get the adoption finalised and little Tommy legally becomes Tommy Grey, BEFORE Lorna resurfaces.  And OMG!, when he called Christian Daddy and Christian's response was beautiful.  Watery eyes, guilty as charged, LOL.  Fabulous story and I hope you are healing well so you can get back to typing with no pain. I know exactly how you feel.  I have carpel tunnel in both wrists from an old job and its not nice to have.  Can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: jannor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 97

Hi I must admit I'm not very good at reviewing.  I must admit your writing is brill, you give the characters so much more depth than the original writer.  Have read your other works too, please carry on writing.

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 97

LOL, Jason and his drum solo.  That was cute.  Poor Christian, he's really crook isn't he.  I think he should be off work for a couple of more days at least.  He needs some antibiotics, maybe a visit from his mother ( I can't remember if she has been to see him or not ). Anyway, can't wait for little tommy to call Christian Daddy to his face.  

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 97

Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 97

I hoped you were ok, you are always so prompt posting.

Great chapter, I like seeing personality in Taylor.

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 97

Jason is a man of many talents," he coughs.

"Hmm. So Gail tells me." I giggle. I was giggling along right with her. Nice update!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 86

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 87

wow!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 89

Superbe!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 90

Magnifique!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 91

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 92

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 93

wow!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 94

wow!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 95

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 96

wow!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 97

wow!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 97

Awesome, fun chapter. I love the Jason & Gail characters. Would love an out take of the two of them.

Hope all is back to normal for you.

Until next time...

Reviewer: Carol711 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 97

Hey, it seems Christian isn't the only one who is not feeling well.  I hope your wrist is healing okay. It takes a while, I know.  Thank you for posting another chapter, I cherish each one.  Since reading FF, today was the first time I invited my eldest son to read a chapter since it involved drumming.  Of course he turned me down, LOL! But I thought he would find it interesting since he is has been a drummer since the age of 7 too. Boy, Jason  rocks, who knew? It was awesome how Ana kissed all three of her children. It won't be long till Tommy becomes a Grey.  So lovely! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 97

OMG Jason on the drums

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 97

Glad Teddy got his drums today ... and Taylor playing them was a supercool touch (and surprise! ).  I hope Christian feels better soon ... I miss him. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 96

thanj you for the update.....Virgiinia is having a great visit............I don't know where Tommy mom is...how could she put some asshole before her child?  I know she has issue's but the child didn't ask to come here...I hope Tommy gets to stay with Christian and Bella he'd have a better life...well done

Reviewer: sasnakgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 96

This update had me in tears.  I hope Christian feels better soon and that the dialogue between him and Anna does not foreshadow something sad in their future.  I remain hopeful for more happy days ahead!  Thank you for sharing your talent. 

Reviewer: Carol711 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 96

You're the mamaist person I know. You take care of everybody. Here I thought I was marrying an insatiable sex kitten who could cook.  Who knew you had this side to you."E, you always write the most cleverist lines, that was sooo sweet of Christian to say.  But your'e killin' me here....
"If you live to be 100, I hope I live to be 100 minus 1 day, so I never have to live without you." I am in tears with what Ana said.  That just about sums up their love for eachother because Christian feels the same.  I think Tommy and Grace are too precious and sweet, but you can tell that Ana has a special relationship with Teddy.  Being her "first little baby", he is mature for his age and very insightful. I believe that Gamma Ginia stares at Teddy because he looks so much like his daddy.  Brava, as usual!  Looking forward to 97.  kiss kiss, hug hug

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 96

Cute update. see you again soon!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 95

He called her mama, that was a truly touching moment and definitely brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 94

I love Grandma Virginia, it's nice to see her interacting with the family.  I'm glad Teddy is okay with adopting Tommy. This is one of the best stories on TWC and FFN. I apologize for being behind on my reviews, I have enjoyed and greatly appreciate every chapter you've written. Thank you E for continuing on with this bueautiful story.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 95

AWWWE!  Tommy is the sweetest thing!  Please update soon!

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Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 95

Love that little Tommy! So heart warming.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 94

Everyone loves Christian!   

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 95

You're killin me here!!! I can't even type this correctly with the tears in my eyes!!  What a precious, beautiful ending.  You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Thank you so much for this chapter and for writing this endearing story. I need one of Christian's tissues!!! xxoo

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 95

Awwwww, that was the moment I've been waiting for for so long.  Little Tommy called her Mama.  I shed a few tears, well more than a few I have to admit.  He must be very close to calling Christian Daddy.  With things going smoothly, I have a gut feeling that silly girl Lorna is going to turn up out of the blue ( on the orders of her pimp of course ) to cause trouble.  I'm so happy tommy called Ana Mama.  Can't wait for more of your wonderful story. 

Reviewer: skinsavant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 95

the last part of the story where tommy called ana "mama" made me cry...tears of joy. i always enjoy reading these sweet, tender, loving and fun moments with the greys. your story is so life-like. it makes me feel like i was there with the greys and i don't care if was just  the chair, the table, or the spoon as long as i was a part of their special moments.

i wish you'd keep writing about them. i want to see how much grace will put christian through hell! LOL ;) ;) it'll be so much fun seeing christian being 100x more overprotective with the kids especially grey.

brilliant as always! love love love your story, your writing, and YOU!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 95

thank you for the update....Gramma's visit is going well.I hope Christian is up soon so he can enjoy the visit as well.

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 95

This was a wonderful chapter...  The best part is Tommy calling Ana mama!  That is so sweet.  I am so happy the his is happy and comfortable enough to feel wanted..  Looking forward for the next one... Keep up the GREAT work!

Reviewer: BabyBea Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 95

aaaaawww.... sniff, sniff... He called her Mama.... :)

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 95

Awwwww.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 95

Awaaaah. Sweet.  

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 95

OMG.....I can't beleive he said mama!  This is getting better and better and better!!!!

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