Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:32 PM Title: On the Road
Excellent chapter. 'Bout time Kylie got some real life lessons.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2013 7:28 PM Title: On the Road
just one thing, why the hell did he shave his head. Edward without hair is not good!
Date: 10 Jan 2013 1:11 PM Title: On the Road
Love how you capture these characters essence every time, right on the money. It just makes me giggle to think how quick Edward gets hot under the collar at the thought of Bella & Carlisle together..guess they don't change or as they say nor a leopard his spots.
I can't wait to read more of their adventure.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 4:42 AM Title: On the Road
Too funny... Some punk kids taking a road trip with their shaved heads and acting like fools. Poor Edwards hair tho... How's Bella gonna handle that? Nuttin to grab on to... Grrrrrrr lol. Looking forward to next update. This one seemed a little too tame for this family. The quiet before the storm ;) hmmm play on both titles haha
Date: 10 Jan 2013 2:44 AM Title: On the Road
This was a funny chapter.....I am glad that Bella and Kylie get to spend some time together. I used to love my Mom and me time. We went to Vegas together. We hung out a lot. I miss her. I lost her too young, 68. It was surely funny to listen to Edward and Aro talking. Edward says that Ara and C are like girls, buth they are the same way too. I enjoyed this light chapter.....I miss their interaction with one another. THANKS FO RTHE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Date: 10 Jan 2013 1:47 AM Title: On the Road
I appreciated the look back...
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:46 AM Title: On the Road
This was so great Skip and Aro just perfect !!!!!!!!! This line cracked me up
"Used to shoot kneecaps off, and now I need a new one . . . that's karma."
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:23 AM Title: On the Road
This feels like an almost wind up chapter. Like the story is winding up, coming closer to an end....Kylie is 19 and nervous to go to a Burger King alone...princess, indeed! Bella wasn't like that back then and I can see she wishes Kylie had more freedom to stand on her own. At the same time Bella knows life is different for Kylie..Love their interaction. Aro and Skip reminiscing about the good old days cracks me up! Shaving their heads?? For a disguise? Their white domes will give them away! LOL! When you are done with this I'm going back to read QS again...my way of reminiscing...you know i love these stories...
Date: 09 Jan 2013 11:51 PM Title: On the Road
Thank you do much for the update. so looking forward to more.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chicken
I'm so glad they made up. I think they make a great couple. Excellent chapter.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chicken
yay dame and jordan are back together! so happy right now.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 38
well bella is now in the know. i agree with sonny and ed it was needed andsonny will watch things from now on....
Date: 06 Jan 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chicken
Gosh, you so know how to make me smile.
Thanks so much for your hard work you put into writing, although they read effortlessly. I just can't praise it enough and wish it was in my power to give you the awards for all the competitions you are entered in. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chicken
I really wanted Jordan to know the truth. What she did with said truth...well I was hoping she would look past the one lie. So I not only loved the way this chapter ended, but I loved how it got there. Damian is just odd enough to be very endearing. And Jordan I think is a good match for him, and when she took his Pepsi because he did not deserve it? That was when I realized I love that character. Another great chapter. Low key yes, but still great. I love your writing!
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chicken
i like how damion doesnt seem so lost anymore. now he is a normal screwed up med student. cant wait for the parental views.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chicken
I love them together. Great chapter!! Glad its still on here.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chicken
Thank you for the great chapter. A little fun is so good sometime.
I wish you and your family all the best through 2013 and more.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chicken
I hope this is the one for Damion. They really are perfect for each other and he wants his forever girl. He wants what his Dad and his brother have so bad. Jordan seems so genuine and perfect for him. She isn't a trophy wife. She will work right beside him at a medical practice. They will be true partners.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chicken
Oh I like this chapter a lot! I know you said it was light, or whatever, but still you know Dame is my favorite so I am eager to read anything to do with him. I'm so glad he and Jordan got back together! She was so funny, wearing makeup and tighter clothes, trying to make him jealous....I'm glad he pushed he to get past the shit! Also funny was his reaction to calling dad, Skip, when he's fucking mom....LOL! No kid likes to think about their parents fucking!! I hope your holidays were good, very happy to see a new chapter here, and hopefully, soon, you may feel like picking back up some of your other stories, like Offbeat? No pressure.....
Date: 04 Jan 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chicken
So happy that Jordan is giving Dame another chance. Poor guy, deserves some happiness.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chicken
I HOPE YOUR HOLIDAYS WERE GOOD AND YOUR NEW YEAR EVEN BETTER THAN LAST YEAR. AS ALWAYS YOU ARE AMAZING AT WHAT YOU DO. IT WAS GOOD TO SEE DAMION GET A LITTLE HAPPINESS FOR A CHANGE. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chicken
Hey! I love hearing from Dame! Someone says somethin bout him? Send 'em to me.
Nobody disrespects Skips kids, or Lexi's writing. I love it, thats what matters, yeah?
Thought so *glares daring someone to say somethin*
Great chapter, Lexi, loved it! I love hearin from the kids just as much as I love hearin from Skip and Bebella. :)
Happy New Year! *hugs*
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chicken
Damn... This was a nice chapter but now you got me curious about the next. In sure ill love it but I think umma be biting my nails in anticipation of what's to come, even while I'm reading it. They're going to fix the Heidi situation, please don't let someone important n get killed or hurt badly. Gah.... I can't wait!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chicken
Happy new year!
I was counting the days for the new chapter, now I'm scared about the next one, why the warning? :S
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chicken
I was so excited to see that you had updated. And I wasn't disappointed! This was a great chapter. I hope nothing bad happens.. He's had enough, woman! Let him be happy!! :P
Great chapter. Thanks for sharing!! :)
Please update soon. You don't know how often I kept checking this. I'm sure you had a couple dozen more hits.. just from me. Sometimes this site doesn't send out alerts, so I had to check myself.. :P
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chicken
Happy New Year Lex! This was great. ...
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chicken
:) Happy New Year!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chicken
I'm so glad they r back together. I really like them as a couple. Hopefully it sticks. Great to see you back.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chicken
Awwww-Yeah for Dame!!! Also, glad Sonny recognized his mistakes & is remorseful. All this happy feels like the calm before the *Storm*!
I've missed ur updates so much-but I'm glad ur back!!! Even though this chapter was short & sweet, it was awesome-as always!!! Can't wait for more! :)
This is by far, the best Mobward in the fanfiction world, & quite possibly the best story/Series as well!
Off to read the QS outtake now! Thx!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chicken
All I can say is that it is about fucking time that my poor Daimon has some happiness. I just hope, for his sake that it lasts. I really enjoyed. Happy New Year to to you too. THANKS FOR THE AWESOE READING. Sher
Date: 03 Jan 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chicken
Thank you so much for this update! Love it, lmao give that chicken and that Pepsi you don't deserve Pepsi. It was great see you next week
Date: 03 Jan 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chicken
Love to hear from Damion!!
Date: 02 Jan 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wonderfully story! I am so hooked! Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:08 PM Title: Actions Speak Louder
Wow...what a chapter! Awesome
Date: 28 Dec 2012 1:30 PM Title: Damion Part Two
Loved this chapter! Damion is complex and very intriguing.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 38
It seems things are looking up for both generations of Cullens. I am happy about that information. Edward loves his kids so much and I think Bella forgets that sometimes. She thinks she holds all the cards on loving their kids. Edward's love runs very deep, but he wants them to be strong people as well.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
So for the last two weeks, the storm triology is all I ve read. I have the addiction, and I love it! Can't wait for more! Merry merry and happy 2013!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:55 AM Title: Bella
I'm jonesing for a new chapter.... I miss you!
Date: 23 Dec 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 38
That was a very good chapter, I love it, as I love this story, and what you have done with the characters. Thank you so much for sharing.
I wish you and your family a wonderful Christmas time. Take care of you.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 38
Another great chapter. Please update soon!! Hopefully with Damion. :) I'm liking this Jordan plotline! I think they're very good together.
Thanks for sharing. :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 8:18 AM Title: A Rock
Oh, my God! I never, ever thought of Maggie that way. And that would also explain why he could also never explain, or even understand himself, why he was so attracted himself. And Bella's right--it had nothing to do with love or physical attraction. He was hooked to her because she's basically a female version of him all those years ago. It also explains why he was so against Sonny (someone he knows that plays around with girls) dating her.. because he was worried Sonny would just use and abuse her (like Lauren did him). How sad.. :(
Ok, well I guess I don't hate anyone right now! And you ma'am are a wonderful writer! I did not really see this all the way through. Maybe because I liked Damion so much--I was clouded. I've liked him from the beginning--the second story in this series, when he was first introduced, he was such a wonderful character! And reminded me so much of Edward.
You're a great writer, and this is a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing!! :)
Date: 22 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 38
Great chapter. Sometimes the women in this story kind of piss me off. I guess I'm not one to get so emotional. Sometimes they all just seem so childish. All I can think of is...What the hell did you expect? This is what you married into...But then it wouldn't be as good a story, if they weren't as screwed up as they are.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Lies
I actually do kind of want to blame Maggie. :P And I don't hate Damion. He's just not in the right place. And with the Lauren thing... well she messed him up, too, at such a young age! I kind of feel like he's not in the right state if mind.
Also, I really don't like Sonny and Maggie--especially together. If they could stay out of the whole story altogether, I'd be all the more happier.
Thanks for sharing. :)
Date: 22 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 38
Hope Bella's spidey senses don't mean anything... That's got me a little worries but still point it and can't wait for next chapter. I'll be sure to vote... Woohoo!!!! Watch out fuckers, storm freak and proud of it!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 38
Sexy- As always, a fantastic chapter!
There are so many dynamics in each update that could each take the story in a different direction. Be it trouble for Edward/Aro out west, further addiction issues w/Sonny, marital problems for Sonny/Maggie, FBI problems/getting caught in the switch up of identities or alibis, etc. Not to mention the direction the lives of other characters take. It just goes to show how the actions of one can affect the lives of others!
Due 2 my obsession w/all things "Storm" and reading in ur reviews that other readers are doing it, I went back & re-read QS, WTS, & EyeOS. Once again, it was a fabulous experience! I'm not sure what I'm going 2 do when Riders is finished, which I hope isn't for quite some time (like 50+ chapters more 😜)!!
I have yet 2 understand HOW or WHY u have "Storm" haters. I know u have many more positive & glowing reviews than negative, but also understand how the negative can stick with u. I just hope u remember & know in ur heart how much people LOVE/FLOVE ur writing--ALL of it!!! (Of course I am partial 2 ur Storm series!! :)
I anxiously await the Riders update every Sunday & Wednesday!! I even try & hold out so I can read 2 chapters back 2 back, but sometimes that proves 2 b impossible!! I'm not sure if ur still updating twice a week, but just know that my Storm obsession is alive & well!!
Although I'm wishing & hoping 4 a Storm update/double update gift 4 Christmas, I'm not going anywhere if I don't get it!!
Hope u & urs have a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year!! Merry Christmas to all the "Storm" characters & 2 all a good update!!! :)
Flove ya,
Heather
P. S. I voted 4 ALL things "Storm"!!! I hope u win--u deserve it!
Date: 21 Dec 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 38
a little short but to the point! besides somtimes kids need a good kick in the ass to get them back on track no matter what age they are.(am i not right mom's)
Date: 21 Dec 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 38
This was a good chapter.....EASY.......AND HEALING hopefully Bermude will do good for Maggie and Sonny and Edward and Bella can have some fun when he returns from his trip.. see you next time. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 38
Everything seems good between them. Makes me laugh how freaked Sonny gets over his mom in the bedroom.
Bella going with to Vegas, is she gonna show her true mafia wife colors? If she has a bad feeling, something has to be up. Bella has a good sense.
Will we get an update before the holidays? Hope so.......if not have a great Christmas Lexi!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
I wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your series. I have been reading since the beginning and they are such a treat. They read like a novel and I hope they never never stop. You are a very talented writer and I hope that negative reviews don't get you down because I love love your stories and recommend them to all of my friends.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 38
Loved it as always :)
Date: 20 Dec 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 38
I love that Bella's the mother hen, now. She has been through similar things with Skip and can also give Maggie the mother-figure she never had...Her senses are up, though, and I wonder what can go wrong out west....All sorts of things, I imagine! Thank you for another sparkling chapter in this 3 part of your epic tale. I remember thinking a while back that as much as I loved EP, that this story, this epic and far reaching tale you are spinning, is more, more in scope, more in depth, more grand that that.....Have a wonderful Holiday and I'll see you next time!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 38
Aaaawww!!! Momma's there to put the pieces back together. Thanks for another great chapter. :)
Date: 20 Dec 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 38
Lexi -
I understand Bella's reactions to Edward, sonny, and Maggie. But I was extremely impressed by the love she was able to give to everyone. I am worried that she thinks something doesn't feel right though. Is there more trouble coming. Even though it was in the background, I was touched by Edwards reactions to what sonny was going through and the father-son interaction. Great chapter.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 38
I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 38
I loved how Bella mothered Maggie - it touched my heart...
Date: 20 Dec 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 38
Nice reconnect for all of them. Well, maybe not Edward & Maggie yet, but I'm hoping they get there. I'm always amazed how you capture the anger & anguish (? Redundant) when they fight, it's like it's palpable. I love reading your writing.
Thanks for the update:-)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
Absolutely fuckin brilliant. I knew Bella would flip her shit :)
Great chapter Lexi! Have a great holiday darlin',
Date: 20 Dec 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 38
Amazing love bella and her talk with Maggie
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thank you!!!!! Gotta love Mama Bella!!! I really enjoyed the post....please give a Maggie or Sonny POV!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
loved it, cant wait to read more if you dont update before christmas, have a great christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:53 AM Title: OOC
As always, so, so, so good. I am just transported to their world and completely under the spell until the last punctuation mark. I never thought I could be this interested in the other characters but I am enthralled.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 38
That was an emotional one... Made me choke up... Such wonderful work.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
Aww their talk made it sound like its almost coming to an end :(
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 38
I loved it, it was a great chapter & I like Edward's soft husbandly, fatherly soft side sometimes.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 38
this was good, but I'm so waiting for that road trip, lol.......and I really hate Skip is going, worried........
Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 38
Aww, very sweet chapter!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 38
No matter how rough they are so much love for their babies. I am glad Edward can say I was wrong. I love your story. I know you know that. I was thinking back to the first story and how Edward and Bella were in the beginning.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Mary Mary
Date: 20 Dec 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 38
Love the update thank you so much
Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:47 AM Title: OOC
I guess it was about time Sonny got straight. Maggie showed more balls than she has in the past. Her's and Kylie's whining is getting a bit old. Great chapter.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 7:13 AM Title: OOC
what a chapter. can't wait for b's reation
Date: 15 Dec 2012 10:09 AM Title: OOC
Oh. My. Part of me thinks Bella won't be too disappointed about Bermuda considering. After that chapter, I don't know what to say. Sonny's actions are leaving me speechless. Is he trying to give Dame a run for his money or what? Like, I get why he turned to his crutch but I didn't think he'd let it get this out of control. I really hope he patches this up because they're the couple I have my money on. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens in the next one!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:57 PM Title: OOC
OH MY ROB ! That was a hard lesson to learn for Sonny. Very good chapter, thank you.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:42 PM Title: OOC
That was unexpected and i didn't get the reason until it was happening as to why it was happening. thank you for explaining it all and i totally get it cuz sometimes somebody just need to be reminded
Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:08 PM Title: OOC
This was a great chapter. Edward loves his kids so much and they often don't realize how much. They take advantage of him. Bella is starting to get on my nerves because she is allowing her kids to be weak. They need to learn to be strong adults. They are not children anymore. Bella needs a new child because she is bored and can't let her adult children grow up. Maggie needs to stop running to Bella. She wanted to be an adult, so be one. Maggie needs to realize that Sonny's parents are not like hers. They love their children and will do anything for them. Even if it is tough love. Edward saved his son from years of regret. He also saved her from pain, but of course she didn't see it that way.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:19 PM Title: OOC
Wow! Bella might be pissed about bermuda though! Shit skip shoukd rptake bella with him she always did hate heidi,....(rpattz luvor)
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:28 AM Title: OOC
Well shyt.... That's was drama filled but let's hope sonny got the sense knocked back into him. Plus, Bella can't complain a out the vacation anyways... She had him go over there, plus its benefitting sonny mind body soul and marriage. Can't wait for next chapter and see how this rolls out!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:28 AM Title: OOC
O M F G.... I'm crying, my Sonny.... please, please Sonny pov, soon... I'm so sad right now...
Great job BTW, I never thought I will like a mob story this much... hope you get all the awards!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:01 AM Title: OOC
Now this was a fucking HEAVY DUTY CHAPTER, but it was just so fucking awesome that I cannot tell you. First, his heavy duty chat with Kylie and him feeling bad about how upset and quiet she was.....He just loves her so very much and wants her to have a great life.......then the fighting with Bella....he is right about one thing.....she runs his life and he LIKES it that way or he would allow it to happen. He loves her so very much and I am glad that he understands that he could never disrespect her by cheating and I AM TRULY GREATEFUL for that. Most men are PIGS always thinking with their dick and don't give a shit about their wives. There is a fine line when you have that crazy love......PASSION......people who love hard, fight hard too, then have GREAT make up sex......Edward loves his children with all of his heart. He did the right thing for Sonny. No one had to tell him that Sonny was withdrawing because he's been there, done that.....he knows the signs.....and I agree with Edward that you DO NOT lifet a hand to your wife and I don't care whether or not you are withdrawing or not because once you do it, you CANNOT EVER TAKE IT BACK. Edward did not want Sonny to have to experience that....just the thought of him hitting Magge after he did could send him on another YAK bender and then back to square one. He needed to get the shit kicked out of him and I think that he knows it. I hope that Bella will go easy on Edward and I hope that you will give them a chance at another vacation to get their freak on and she can serve him dinner naked. I wish I could serve him dinner naked. Lexi....I know that you must have so many reviews as your story is just too fucking awesome, but I would really love to hear back from you......Just a few words.....PLEASE.......And again, please don't listen to those assholes who fuck with your head over YOUR story. They don't like it, they don't have to read it. I FUCKING LOVE IT. I hope soon that Bella and Edward have a very sexy vacation.......Daimon gets to make up with Jordan and have some happiness. I thought that Amelia was going to be the girl for him, but that is over.....Jordan and him have a connection......I hope that Kylie will wait for Gio to get home so she will be able to be with him and GET SOME!!!!!. Also, I kind of miss some Carlisle action.... He was such an asshole for so long and now that he has been faithful to his wife, I MISS HIM!!!!!. I think that when things calm down a little.....they need a guys night out.....him, Carlise and Aro......just some guy shit.....THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING AND HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU....JUST A WORD OR TWO......HAPPY HOLIDAYS.....Sher
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:02 PM Title: OOC
Lexi. What an amazing chapter. I loved that Edward knew about the withdrawal by looking Around the room. And I am glad he stopped sonny from hitting Maggie. It seems sonny got that message too. I am totally worried about the skip going to Vegas. It is a highly dangerous thing.
Kylie has always seemed a little weird to me me this chapter made her seem weirder still. I have felt for awhile that she is going to get herself killed because she doesn't think.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:40 PM Title: OOC
Loved it. Sonny needed that reality check.
The haters are just jealous, because they can't write like you!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:35 PM Title: OOC
Oh WOW.....shakes head...... Sonny:-( What will Edward tell Bella? She's gonna be pissed about a lot of things. Naked dinner ain't happening now! Edward going to Vegas after Heidi? I just remembered who she is......she was a manager right? Used to be Edwards escort to places? He slept with her? That eas so long ago I can't remember her.....Bella ain't gonna be happy!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:23 PM Title: Eclipse at Midnight
I don't like it, I LOVE IT ! Keep going girl, you are doing amazing. Thank you.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:43 PM Title: OOC
OMG this was GREAT, Skip had the balls to show tough love! You brought it, Thank you. I love your writiting when it's not sugar coated....cause life is not sugar coated either....
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:16 PM Title: OOC
Omg this chapter was so good. I totally get the ooc name for it. I hope sonny does get his act together after this happen. Edward did the right thing in letting sonny and Maggie go on their vacation. So looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you so much for this update.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:10 PM Title: OOC
wow that was another helluva stunning chapter! how Skip, Edward, can separate being Sonny's father from being his boss is beyond me! I'm sure it plays havoc with him at times too! How difficult must it have been to teach Sonny that lesson? It's almost instinctive in Edward now, now that he's had half a lifetime's experience in being both boss and father...yet, still he has his internal struggles. I think he did Sonny a big favor in stopping him from hitting Maggie! The guilt from that would have eaten Sonny up once he was through withdrawals....or maybe pushed him into doing more coke and making that change in himself permanent. That choice would have changed the direction of his life.....and who knows? You haven't written yet if that will be permanent or not....I wonder what the repercussions will be from Skip taking Sonny's place in the hit on Heidi? I haven't even touched on many things that took place here but guess that's because I see this situation as the more significant one here.....You weave such an intricate story, intermingling all the characters in such a way as to make a brilliant, in-color, three-dimentional, realistic story. I love reading this. I hope your life is going well for you....I do miss updates on your other stories, but easily see how this one may take over you imagination, you life....thank you again for writing this, just for me!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:56 PM Title: OOC
THANK YOU FOR MY DOSE OF STORM TODAY I REALLY NEEDED IT. AS ALWAYS YOU MAKE ME HAPPY AND I APPRECIATE YOU BEING THE GREAT STORYTELLER YOU ARE. LOOKIG FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: OOC
Oh My Gosh!!!
This add was freaking AMAZING!!!! I'm too excited to type right now.
I didn't expect Skip to beat up Sonny like that, let alone let Sal and Tommy rough up Santino, but I'm happy it happened. That was the best partof the whole add! I can't believe Sonny was treating Maggie like that.
Smh. Coke is one hell of a drug.
I'm sure Bella's gonna be pissed that they can't go on vacation, but like Edward said, he can always take her another week. . .if something doesn't happen before then. I feel like they need their own vacation too. Just like Sonny and Maggie.
I hope Sonny & Maggie work out their issues and Sonny really stays off the coke!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: OOC
Wow that was alot to witness... Please let things work out for them... l love all the charaters so much..
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:13 PM Title: OOC
I really like that as the Skip or as Dad Edward seems to have a lot of insight. He reads people well, and he knows his own kids well. He is not perfect. But I hope in this instance he is, that his actions will bring the results that he anticipates. Another awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:28 PM Title: OOC
*runs off to vote*
Whoa! Grea chapter! Sonny definitely needed that wake up call!! :)
I loved it! Thanks Lexi! *runs to wait for Offbeat*
Date: 13 Dec 2012 2:43 PM Title: OOC
OMG
I feel like poor Sonny can't get a break....and Maggie....I can't even imagine what she's going through.....With the way things are going for them now its hard to remember that they were the same couple at the Halloween Party......Are we out of the woods yet? I REALLY need a happy update