I loved it. I want Sonny & Maggie 2 stay 2gether, they are good 4 each other & Sonny needs happiness. I hope Maggie don't left her folks run her life & have her give up Sonny. After 2night, I am finally liking Katie a little more, I hope she doesn't go back 2 her bitchy ways. Anyway, awesome chapter.

I like Maggie and Sonny, I'm on their side. 

Kylie and Edward together are a hoot!  They remind me of my husband and daughter except not as crude since my daughter is only 12 but she's a daddy's girl for sure!  Love this story and I am even digging the OC arcs...anticipating more!

Wow, what a great chapter.  I loved the Kylie and Edward cutting up with each other. Very fun.  And I'm so happy that Sonny & Katie are communicating in a positive way.  I just am nervous that Bella was right from the beginning and Maggie is going to break Sonny's heart.  I hope not, I know it's gonna be really tough for them but I can sorta see it happening. I can her imagine going to bat for him for anything.

Ok, anyone else a bit worried about Edward going & talking to Maggie's Dad?  I think it would probably be better for anyone to go talk to him but him.  He's the most volatile and vicious of them all. Aghh I'm hoping he doesn't kill her Dad.

cant wait to read more of Santino's tale.

I fell in love with this story just a short while ago.  I have read many stories from various authors but never have they captured my attention with all the characters like you have with different POVS you beathe life in them and give them personalities and i want to live vicariously through theirs lives because that is how in-touch you make them. I Love your storm-series you should make a television series out of these people because that is what they have become to me, people.

P.S. Sorry for the babbling but I wanted to get so much out since my computer is working again so i can review. My phone won't let me.

P.P.S. I have read the story of us as well how brilliant you are at having giving life to your characters. I am going to shut up now. Love, you.

I love seeing Sonny in love! He is so different! The situation is fucked up big time. Edward was right on the money with his advice at the end there....Katie was surprisingly level headed in all that. She reacted differently, better, that I thought she would! Maybe she and Sonny can be friends and co-parents after all....Can this really work out between Sonny and Maggie. I really think their pairing is quite interesting. You don't choose who you fall in love with....maybe she is too young, maybe not and it could work.  You put it all out there, all the possibilities.  I hope it works for Sonny. Love is a marvelous thing when it's like that....Another stunning chapter, dear!!

Hey Lexi first off I want to say I am loving this story so far and am so happy you decided to make the Storm series a trilogy.  Last chapter you threw us for a loop pairing Sonny with Maggie.  I was like wow I didn't see that coming.  He is hot and she is sweet but together they could melt ice standing next to it.  This chapter just solidified it.  Why all the hate on Sonny trying to be happy.  Hasn't he been through enough!!  He was shot at as a child and had to grow up real fast in this lifestyle.  You can say it was put on him much like Edward had it put on him when he was young as well.  Him and Katie are done...stick a fork in it.  Her comments in this chapter just showed her true colors.  She was just using him for sex plain and simple.  If she truly loved him she would cut a bitch for even looking at her man and not invite her into the apartment.  Aro needs to get his nose out of their business.  Where was he when he caught his married daughter effin' his friend's son in the office at Eclipse.  She is not a goody two shoes and is a chip off the old maternal block.  Like mother like daughter...it is sad really she could of had it all with Sonny.  Maggie may be young and innocent but she is passionate and would be loyal to Sonny.  Why would you want someone who consistently cheated on their spouse even if it was with you.  They forced her hand leaving her husband....she would have still continued going back and forth like a ping pong ball.  That is straight up nasty.  I feel it is Sonny's due time for some happiness and if Maggie makes him happy then Bella and Edward need to step up and support them and be happy for them.  They need to remember how they got together and Bella's friends and family thought she was nuts for taking off and being with Edward.  It is universal the need to love and be loved.  With that being said I can't wait to see Dame's reaction to finding out that Sonny and Maggie are together.  I wish Amelia was being genuine with her feelings.  I was really disappointed by her shadyness the last chapter.  Until the last chapter they were my favorite couple...but she just killed it.  His actions weren't any better.  If he was paying any attention to his girl he would have noticied her checking Sonny out when he wasn't looking.  I really hope she is not a mole being placed to start shit in the Cullen family.  It is starting to look that way to me.  So sad I really liked her even though she hoe'd it up on the first night.  OOPS......but then again so did Maggie and Bella as well.  I swear the Cullen men must be blessed with magical peen it made these three women put out the first night real easy.  They were dickmatized I guess.  Can't wait for the next chapter to see how things progress ****crosses fingers*** with Sonny and Maggie.  This story is the highlight of my week it makes my day when it updates.

wow that was an insane chapter. WEll lets see what happens now and if edward will beat the crap out of mr sulivan 

lol 

and no boring days for you mr.fuckhot

I still am sooooo in love with this soap opera.  I didn't think I'd be interested in any other character chapters except Bella and Edward.  When other writers try it i just end up hating it and skipping over them...but you have lead us to falllig in love with all the characters (well Bella and Edward's kids anyway) and I ma just as enthralled by these character's lives now as I have been by Bella and Edward's.  Thank you for such an awesoe story.  It's turely like an escape to another world each time I sit down and read.  I'm so so satisfied with what is going on with Sonny's personal life after this chapter.  I like where it is going.  I wanted all of them to find the love as strong as their parents.....and both the boys had experiences that felt so devestating when the "loves of their lives" turned out not to be....but I like these new girls and love that the boys are so in love.  I am kept on edge by the Damion/Edward and now Sonny/Damion rift....but I keep thinkinng their famiial love is so deep seated that somehow now that the boys have "true" love it will start improving their other relationships.

Awesome chapter! I wasn't sure about the Sonny-Maggie hook-up at first.  She seemed a bit fickle for my taste, but this chapter really sealed the deal for me.  They make a wierd kind of sense.  They had their first crush/loves (Katie / Dame respectively) - and now they have found a new true love.  I'm dying for Dame's reaction though.  I really like Amelia and see alot of fun possibilities in their pairing - can't wait to see what you do with them.  

So sorry about your friend - I'll send in my donation..

awesome chapter... but I really want to know damion's thoughts on sonny and maggie... if he really loves amelia or not.

:)

Wow! What a great hapter so many emotions. Glad sonny and katie have n understanding and poor maggie. Cant wait for more!!

Absolutely love your Maggie. Poor girl is going to get her heart broke. :(

Wow, Maggie and Sonny on the roof actually through this whole chapter.... there are no words.... At first I didn't really like Maggie, I thought she was some phyco stalker, but since she has become friends with Kylie I'm starting to like her. I like her honesty. I'm hoping that when Bella told Sonny to "go for it" she meant it because whatever they might have together they'll have a better chance with Bella's support. All this relationship drama is making me nervous. One thing I've always loved about the family you created is that they all love each other no matter what. Guess I'm afraid something's going to mess with that.Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :0) 

i hope sonny takes maggie to vegas marrys her, gets her pregnant on purpose so she has to choose him over dame, and katie's baby turns out not to be his she never actually said the baby was sonny's just that it wasnt her husbands and no one has seen a paternity test its just what she said to sonny.

Way to go Maggie!!! Woohoo!! Lol I think Sonny is going to fall for Maggie.

i loved it!!!!

Wow, the chapter was a marathon and so well done.  so many players.  Maggie is the new bebella I think and it's brother after brother once again.  Basically generations repeating themselves.  I like it.  you did a great job with this Lexi.  I can't wait to hear from Edward. 

And I don't think Sonny did Katie dirty.  Am I in the minority here? 

Hmmm....I sure as hell did NOT expect Sonny to even THINK about a "do-over". It would be completely & totally awesome for him to attach himself to Maggie, a good girl that makes him a better man. Sheesh & Dame...WTF man? I get how he was staying away & why, but still to go all caveman like that...like Sonny was stealing his toy. Brothers...Whatcha gonna do.
I enjoyed this long ass chapter & totally looking forward to the next one. Great Job.

Loved it! Can't wait for Edward.

WOW....this was just so unbelievable.   I THINK THAT LITTLE OLE MAGGIE IS GOING TO BE THE ONE WHO TAMES SANTINO CULLEN.  He wants to settle down, but he did try with Katie and she really doesn't want him.  He did everything possible to try to make their relationship work, but she turned his down several times.  Yes....they will be having a child together together, but you can still raise a child with separate parents and it work out, probably better for the child then having two parents that fight ALL the time.   I think that Sonny is feeling so much with Maggie because she is so honest and innocent.  He had butterflies, which, as he said, he DOES NOT get.  Why with her.  He really likes her and like he says.....he wants a do-over.  GOOD LUCK TO HIM AND I HOPE THAT HE WILL NOT HURT HER.  I understand if he tells her up front again that he is not a "relationship" type guy, but he asked her for a date and wants to pursue it.  Maybe if he lets himself be totally honest and actually fees for her, then they will be able to have a romantic relationship.  He is only 9 years older than her and that is not really not that much.  THANKS, AS ALWAYS, FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING.  Sher

I loved it. So awesome!!

OMG! The shit you make these characters do make me smile. Great chapter, thank you:)

Holy shit!!!!! Freaking loved it!! I actually want sonny and maggie to work out. Cant wait for more!

I really wished I knew what was on Damion's mind... what is he really thinking??

Great writing.  I really want Sonny and Maggie to work out.  I know she is young and his life is complicated, but she reminds me of a young Bella and I like her way more than Amelia.  Let Damion and Amelia do ther thing, let Sonny have some real happiness.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!  I dont want Edward to be next!  I want more Sonnie and Maggie!!  ;)  *chuckles and shakes head*

LOL, loved this entire freakin chapter!  I swear I want to print this shit out, along with the first 2 and then book bind them and put them on my freakin coffee table for EVERYONE to enjoy!  *snickers*

Omg Lexi you really out did yourself. This was such a great chapter. After wanting Maggie together with dame for so long. I'm actually loving her with sonny. Maggie seems to bring out the best in people. Hope they can make it as a couple with Katie around. Who knows. As I was reading this chapter something with Amelia doesn't sit right with me. You know you can never trust those jersey people. Looking forward to the next chapter. Oh btw I see you said people complain about the kids povs but really theirs pov's make this story so fantascily Awesome. Thanks so much for the update.

:)

Wow Lexi that was worth been late for church.

I'm glad that Sonny is with Maggie, but I hope he doesn't use her. That would suck.

I think Katie has a nerve not wanting him but he can't have anyone else. She is so much like her mother.

I just want Sonny to be happy he has always had to grow up to early he never had much of a childhood and now he just want's to love, I think this  is what he probably missed out on. I thought it was funny what he told her about her gun. I love this chapter, although I do miss Edward and Bella.

This was GREAT and this is even better Edward is up Next!

Thanks !!!!!!!!!

good. wonder if sonny and layla will hook up. wonder if amelia will kick maggie's ass if she tries anything with dame :)

I think they should just leave Damian alone. Kylie is such a brat. She caused her own problems. Maggie and Kylie are good for each other, but Maggie is not a good choice for Dame. Maggie took the whole night wrong. She if frustrated because her parents don't treat her like a teenager with hormones. She isn't a nun yet. You don't raise a child to be a nun. It is a calling from God and Maggie didn't get the call. Maybe Maggie's mom did and she ignored it, so she wants Maggie to pay her bill. Maggie just wants male attention and it could get her in trouble if Kylie has her way. I hope Dame is smart enough to stay away from it. Kylie needs to be taught another lesson and maybe Damian needs to teach her one. How many times has he saved her butt?

Ugh-I FLOVE ALL of ur characters so much, I can't decide which POV I like reading the best! :)

I think u write so well, u should quit everything else & just write! Lol :) Aside from the names, ur story is so original! I'd pay 2 read it!

Awesome chap as usual!! :)

Noooooo!!!!! don't leave me hanging there!! you made want Sonny with Maggie now, maybe she can be Katie wake up call... oh please I hope your fingers itches to post so very very soon :)

I hope Damian is truly through with Julie and will tell Amelia the truth. They are the perfect pair, just like Bella and Edward. Kylie is a baby and real stupid too. She needs to grow up and take responsiblity for herself. She needs to get on birth control and Edward needs to stop giving her money besides her paycheck. Bella needs to stop doing things for her. She can wash her clothes, make her appointments, clean the house, and other things to show she is mature enough to go away to school and maintain an apartment or dorm. She probably could not even feed herself if their wasn't a restraurant around. Bella and Edward have babied her too much. She lacks basic skills. She is handicaped.

Can't waqit to see the fireworks at the Halloween party!! :)

Omg can't wait for more. Lol these guys just wait till they see Maggie. Not gonna know what hit them. Looking forward to reading more.

Hummmmm..........Sonny and Layla or Sonny and Maggie?  I think either are better than Katie and would make him forget her possibly get him to commit now Katie is out of the picture.   Baby Isabella............LOL Lauren would flip her shit. She's already jealous of Bella and wants what she has.

I love Katie and Maggie, I think they'll be good friends. Like Alex and Bella.  Can't wait to see how the party plays out and if Edward has to pistol whip anyone over Bella.  Hopefully Dame doesn't do anything stupid.  I'm still thinking Bella is going to find out about Lauren here........can't wait:-)

whats up with the extra protection?  

this was so good....  on a personal note: about Twitter junk, Lexi dear, your awesome, try not to let "it" get to you...okay!?!  You have loads of fans and supporters.... We believe in you.... laters doll.... Kathy  09.25.12

oh where do i start....you packed so much in this chapter....Kylie and Maggie are natural friends...the nun and the spoiled princess! LOL! Kylie's scheme to have Sonny flirt with Maggie to make Dame jealous? That has potential to backfire big time! I think Layla likes Sonny. Edward letting his girls wear skimpy Halloween costumes?? Unheard of!  Is he getting soft in his old age? J/K....oh and Kylie telling Eddie to show Maggie his peen cuz she's never seen one....I'm rolling on the floor laughing.  I fucking love this story...

Love it

Love it. I can't wait to see what happens at the Halloween party. Lol I'm still holding out for Maggie and damion. Thanks so much for updating. 

Sadly I must admit that Kylie is a spoiled brat. ha ha  I think Bella has the right idea, maybe in this circustance she shouldn't have just ripped everything away. I think it'll all work out though. It's a good idea for Kylie to learn to take care of herself. They should expect her to work, help out around the house. 

Loved the new chapter and laughed out when Bella told Kylie, "Ok" to going to Texas and Edward screamed " Fuck that!"!" haha these guys are all crazy & what the hell is Dame having a problem with Edward for? And That thought, "Damion planted that seed because he's still pissed at me—my bad seed was causing trouble . . . again."

What is Edwards problem calling Dame his bad seed. Because he's like him?

Anyways, I'm not missing the parents because I think I'm enjoying the offspring so much.  You put a smile on my face when I read, I'm still nowhere near finished. Yay

Sonny, my heart breaks for you always.

I am starting like Kylie! As a baby, I thought her hair was as red as Edward's?

this was good.  mAGGie's intro between the brothers will be interesting.  nicely handled the sonny/katie situation

Uh oh, Kylie dressing up Maggie for a Halloween party and alcohol..........I see trouble with a capital T.  I think loose lips will be here, maybe Amelia will spill the beans about Damian and Lauren!

Seems like Sonny's got a clue when it comes to Katie.  We gotta find him a hotty.  Layla?

Another great chapter I really like hearing from the skip. But I can't imagine him without his BeBella, I hope it never comes to that.

I'm thinking that maybe Sonny hooks up with Maggie at the halloween party. I wonder how Dame would react to that one.

I can't wait until the next chapter x