Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hate the man in the jacket is back ~~~ I was so nervous reading this chapter!!! I look forward to the updates, I know it's time for some drama...anxiously waiting to see what happens! You are the best!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Drama on the way, but not what you expect.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
As always, you are fabulous, but please no more Amy, unless it is just to tell exactly what happened in the playroom...I mean didn't he get rid of all the whips, belts and canes years ago??? I also hope the new housekeeper is a forty something blond...surely Ana knows better on that the only person that needs temptation these days is Ana :) A little worrying on Christian's part would be well deserved after all she has gone through. Of course, we all know Ana would take the high road, but a little attention would surely be good for her battered self esteem!!!
Author's Response:
Ana will get her chance. It's hard to tell what happend with Amy, because this is Ana's POV and she can't know anything unless Christian tells her. Maybe we can figure out something.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
I was so nervous when Anna received the flowers right after the mysterious hung up. I agree the new housekeeper should be good at her job too, but not a pretty brown haired submissive type lol & she should be pushing about 75. Could spell drama for the Grey's.
Author's Response:
Jusr what they need more drama.
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
Another great chapter. Please keep them coming
Author's Response:
Writing as fast as I can.
Thanks for wanting...more.
E.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can you please be the story where Elena dies ;) Seriously love your story and I think getting Christian hard and having him revert to old ways is exactly what she wanted. Christian telling Ana, always love me please, kinda makes me nervous...like something is going to happen. Going to review on FF now cause it's so good you deserve 2 reviews :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
I was concerned for a few minutes, thinking the flowers were from the Psycho Domme, Elena! Glad Ana mentioned the phone calls... Loved the chapter and lemony goodness!!! till next time!
Author's Response:
I figured Christian started prepping her for it 7 years ago. Surely it had been in practice. Thanks.
E
Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! I was surprised Christian didn't respond to Teddy's eye rolling. But I loved "You guys need to get a hobby". Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
I guess Ana's eye rolling is the only one that affects him. Next on the way.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Had to come over here to read you again! Love this chapter, love the baby's name, feeling all warm and fuzzy and recharged for what life has to throw at them next! I am but a puppet on your strings and loving every moment! You make mine and many,many others' day! Hope you enjoy writing as much as we enjoy reading you! Liz
Author's Response:
Thanks Liz. I always appreciate you. Do we know each other?
Look for yourself soon. Couple more chapters.
thanks.
E.e
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Always enjoy your chapter updates. Is the Amy story line done with?
Author's Response:
Who knows. anyone can pop back up anytime.Elena is my villan right now, but that won't last forever. Do you want more Amy?
Thanks for reading.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome writing! You really capture each character's inner feelings. Please keep writing so I can keep reading. Love it!
Author's Response:
As long as people read this I will write it.
Thaks for reading.
E.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh wow!!! this was a great read. i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. next chapter probably Fri or Sat.
E.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
I have the same bad feeling as Ana I don't think we have seen the last of Elena. That is bad for them but great for us ,we love the drama! I hope you let us hear what Dr Flynn says about all this, that would be REALLY interesting. Can't wait for more... Keep up the wonderful writing. Thank you as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving the comment. I appreciate them.
E.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi just read your response to my review..............samuel?????
Oh you are such a tease :-)
Author's Response:
Next Chapter.
Thanks
E.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
Of Course, that woman would be back. When is she not wreckign havoc in the world of the Greys?
I'm liking this sequel. :)
Author's Response:
Hopefully she will get the message sooner rather than laters. (Couldn't resist.)
Thansk for reading and leaving a review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Elena is crazy with a Capitol K, she kidnapped Teddy in order to get Christian back in her playroom. Elena has also stressed to Christian and Anna that he needs the Dom/Sub lifestyle & this was her sick way of trying to push him back into it.
Author's Response:
I guess this round goes to the bitch troll.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
E.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the DRAMA these past couple of Chapters!! Elena is not done with him for sure....Will he screw up again?????....I love your writing...I am secretly wanting Ana to go back to work and maybe have some Drama maybe a love triangle or friendship with the opposite sex and a jelous Fifty!!! keep him on his toes.....feels like it is Ana's tiurn to screw up!!! Okay i am a DRAMA lover..Thanks Again can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Everything is possible. We have the rest of this book and a third one to get through.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh, I have such mixed feelings....Of course, I love your writing, but I really felt like he finally had remorse in More...now this makes it seem like he may revert again...Ughh! Poor Ana...they both need Flynn now! Elena needs to go down for good! This also makes me go back to Amy and the need for details there...was hoping to get past that, but this made it rear it's ugly head again. All for the drama, but maybe a different kind...still feel like Ana needs a distraction!!!
Author's Response:
There are things down the road for Mrs. Grey. Don't get down on poor Christian. He has come so far. He didn't really mean to slip and fall. It was probably more of a slight trip.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope this one stays, have tried reviewing on this site many times and it doesn't show up, try again and am told only one review per chapter. So sorry haven't forgotten you!
This was so amazing in the interplay between the two of them, her pushing for details his not realizing what he may have really done. I gasped again when he confessed his physical reaction, he needs our favorite Dr. to help him thru this. Sorry to be so winded, I am still trying to catch my breath! Such a stellar writing endevor and creative mind! As always am in awe of you. Liz
Author's Response:
I know. I don't think he realized what he was doing. He always thinks he has to handle everything himself. He always knows best, according to him. He's going to start listening to Ana one of these days.
Again thanks for the review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yes, Very well put...sometimes our Megalomaniac CEO/Ex-Dom just doesn't see clearly does he? I have to agree with Ana, Elena only saw that she got what she wanted from him, and that was him in Her Playroom....She was the top in that situation.... He did Exactly what she wanted..... had he turned it over to the authorities he would have shown her that she didn't know him at all..... Hope Dr Flynn can help before its too late.... great story
Author's Response:
Thank you. Christian always thinks he knows best. Ana may have to smack him upside his little CEO head.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow!!!! That's all I can say. I can't say enough how glad I am about bringing some drama back into this!! Great job!!
Author's Response:
It's difficult. Some readers like the constant drama and others like the sweet at home relationship. I try to put in a bit of both. More drama on the way.
Thanks for reading.
E.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter as usual, your writing is fantastic
Think Elena's beating was a bit creepy and I think Ana should give Christian a telling off for dealing with it like that. Also think she needs to have a bit of a backbone and deal with Elena herself..........this was her son after all
Keep up the good work and can't wait until the next chapter
Author's Response:
I agree it was creepy. Very unlike Christian. I didn't like it. Hopefully chapter 13 will help a little. Ana will get it taken care of, but she has to watch out for little Samuel right now. (Did I let a cat out of the bag?)
Thanks.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! I'm glad Teddy made it home safely. I don't believe that beating is going to stop Elena.
Author's Response:
You're probably right. Ana has her number.
E.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG that woman is damn sick-...
Author's Response:
I'd say.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh Nuwriter....I have LOVED these 2 books of yours every bit as much as FSOG...BUT please don't go there with the children...you have done an awesome job, even on this chapter keeping us on the edge of our seats but again, let's keep it with the adults. I look forward to getting the email that you have added another chapter and I am never diappointed! Thanks for bringing Teddy hope quickly and unharmed...PLEASE let's keep the kids that way!!! Can't wait to ready more!!!
Author's Response:
That is something you will never have to worry about. Ever!
I even hated having Christian go balistic on Elena and I realised it was more for him than Teddy. I don't like the dark stuff.
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I don't like anyone to get beat, however I must say she had it coming. I wish Christian would have gotten the police involved,arrest her ass!
I wonder where it will go from here,it almost sounded like in some sick way she liked it. I don't think they have heard the last of her.
Author's Response:
Ana will address it. She isn't happy about the way he handled it either.
Thanks for the comment.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
All I can say is WOW! Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Written and on the way.
Thanks
E.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my thank you for bringing Teddy home safely and fir beating the shit out of Elena. I cannot wait for chapter 12
Author's Response:
I love Teddy to death. I could never let him get hurt.
Thanks. E.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
im so surprised he even told her what all he did to the troll
Author's Response:
Well he had to. Since this is written from Ana's POV, it's the only way I could write about what happened. But I think he is getting better about being upfront with Ana, as long as it suits him.
Thanks for leaving a comment.
E
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW. Can't wait for chapter 12. What the hell was she thinking when she took Teddy. Did she want Christian to beat her?
Author's Response:
I think she just wants Christian and will do what is need to get him. I think she actually loved the guy. And he is so easy to love. But we all know that.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG!!! When is the next chapter coming? This was indeed a breathtaking one. You are an excellent writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading. New chapter today.
E.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
i love the way elena slips back into the picture, bringing out all sorts of emotions. yes, we love the romance, but there has to be some drama in there also and you've accomplished that very nicely. fantastic job!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Terrific addition to the FSOG series -- and such a realistic extension. I love your version of the reality that sets in after the whirlwind romance.
Now, please don't read another word of this or anything rlse until you have the next chapter for us!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh please, dont let anything bad happen to Teddy. They've suffer so much to face another one
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my god I HAVE to know what happened to poor Teddy... More, PLEASE!!! : )))
Author's Response:
Thanks. New chapter today.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
I review on ff, but doing it here too. WOW. Update soon. Love this story. Wonder who had him. Elena, Any or since they were just introduced, a bio relative. Hurry please ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing x 2.
E,
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG,OMG I am having a heart attack! You are so evil (that's good) Madme E, giving us an insightful and informative last skeleton in Mr.G's closet to Grace's development. Then hit us with a thunder bolt with Teddy and Oh the angry words from Ana broke my heart!! You HAVE TO FIX THEM!! Please? Tears in my tea.Liz
Author's Response:
All is well....sort of. New chapter today.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
WHOA! I don't know how you always manage to sirprise me. That was so good my heart was pounding the minute Ana called Taylor with no answer. The entire chapter was great!!! The twist with Christian's biological father, man you are good! I am on pins to read chapter 11. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Hope I can relieve your prickles from the pins. Soon.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are the best!!! Please don't keep us hanging!
Author's Response:
Not too much longer.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sadness. I am not okay with Teddy getting kidnapped.
Also I think the story behind Christian's mom is really nicely done. I mean it's just one of the fifty shades of fucked up.
And i'm sure teddy beign gone might become his 51st shade.
I hope he does get found.
Author's Response:
I love Teddy, too.
thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent please keep it up, cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Coming soon. Just hold on.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Elena is a dead woman and just does not know it yet....
Author's Response:
You know it.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG what a mess.....well, naturally I think its Elena, but not exactly sure, it could be Amy Peterson or someome else entirely....geez, this is so good......
Now "that" was some interesting stuff about his birth mother and perhaps biological father......
Great story, can't wait for more.....
Author's Response:
There will be more of that to come down the road. Can't open a door without walking through it.
Thanks for leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, I swear you could write real books. You gave us so much information in this chapter.You take us on such a crazy emotional roller coaster. My heart is breaking for all of them. Ok with that said... Why doesn't Christian AND the police look for Teddy. If it is not to protect them from the press why wouldn't Christian have his security team,the police ,the FBI ,the coast guard or anyone else he could pay looking for his baby boy. This just doesnt sound very "Christian"! Now I'm frothing at the mouth to find out what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Who knows what goes on in the mind of Christian Grey? He follows the beat of a different drum....and we just follow right after him.
Thanks for following and leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
WOW! I did not see that coming. Very good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks.
E.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
You are a great writer do you know that? İ feel like i am eatching a movie while reading your stories, such a talent you have! And by the way angry bella has no limits towards christian-the love of her life!!!
Where is teddy, who has him now?
Cant wait for the update pls write as soon as possible;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment. I'm not so sure I'm a great writer. Just a very active imagination. But I thank you.
E.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am speechless right now...
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow!!! So much happened in this chapter, excellent writing and plot development as always. The only thing that could make it better is MORE, waiting impatiently for your next update
Author's Response:
On the way. Soon.
And Thank you.
E.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
WoW Worth the waite, Loved it very much...The things we say when we are mad and hurt!!! I am soo excited to read the next chapter...Hmmmmmm could it have been Elena??? I hate her....
Author's Response:
Thanks. Chapter 11 on the way soon. Thanks for leaving the comment.
E.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh I hope she wants to talk! Loved the chapter!
Author's Response:
Did you ever know Ana, not to want to talk? Next chapter.
E.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
love the story
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved the Chapter cant wait to see what is in store next...It feels like forever having to wait for the next chapter as i am just soo excited to read your great twists and turns....
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a comment. I relish every one.
E.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
um talk? haha
and totally did not expect mr. grey to attack in the middle of the night
Author's Response:
Why? He is, after all, Mr. Sex on legs. They will talk.
E.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good lemon!!!! Good chapter!!! Got me wondering about that guy though!!!! Hummmmmmm..............
Author's Response:
Writing another one right now. Thanks.
E.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
LOL at the name Alvin, so funny! I'm nervous for Ana with that guy watching her, keep up the great work, I get so excited every time I see an update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Confused about how far along she is....top paragraph says 12 weeks and Dr. Greene says 15 or 16 - maybe that is why she is so big????
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate you catching that. She is farther along. I'll correct it.
E.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Just got caught up on this story!!! Loving all the twists and turns!!! Keep them coming!!!
Author's Response:
Cahpter 9 on the way. Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh....this chapter is awesome! I couldn't stop reading until the end. This continuation fits perfectly in the trilogy.....you developed the characters perfectly......I want more. KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING!!!!
Author's Response:
WOW! Thanks. I'll keep writing, if you keep reading.
E.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
so completely hooked, fantastic chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks. glad you are enjoying. Thanks for leaving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
o-o the bitch is back and wants Christian back as well.
Author's Response:
Oh, yes she does.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved loved loved it!
Author's Response:
Love, love, love you for leaving a comment.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ahh, Madame Nuwriter what web are you spinning? This is a delightful chapter, I always like the Charity Event evenings and trips to the third floor, but this time you have added a new intriguing element that has us all simmering waiting for the water to boil. I hope your web catches a nasty spider and squishes it! Always a pleasure to read your words, you are the most talented in this whole now popular catagory!! See you soon? Toodles, Liz
Author's Response:
WOW! That was encouraging. Thanks again. Liz.
Madame E.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
"horny" will always wake christian up! haha
and i'm glad you made sure christian got a sense of being watched whilst sleeping.
And I hate Elena even mor ewith this chapter. I mean how far gone is she that she is now listening to this husband and wife have sex.
Author's Response:
Yes. Sometimes I'm surprised that Christian has enough blood left to get up to that CEO brain of his. Evidently Elena has added voyeur to her repertoire. Oh, well. I guess everyone needs a hobby.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
that woman is sick..... so glad to see a story point out that she is a Pedophile!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, Elena does seem to have issues, doesn't she?
Thanks. E.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
My stomach gets in knots every time Elena is involved in one of these chapters. I think Ana should tell Christian what Elena said about Amy. The last thing they need is the two of those women joining forces. Also I hope Ana goes to see Dr Flynn to talk out some of her anxiety. Should we be concerned about the health and safety of this baby? How would Christian deal with a problem like that? Will Elena finally get what she deserves in your story? These are only a few of the questions that I am wondering about with your story. You are so good at writing and so great at the twists and turns of this story, I never know just what to expect. Update soon please! By the way "Thank you so much" for updating so often. It really does keep us readers so connected and emotionally tied to your story!
Author's Response:
So eager for information, Miss Steele. If I gave you the answers then you wouldn't read. Stay tuned.
Thanks for reading and posting.
E.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love this chapter...I just got married 2 days ago and checked up to see if u added any more chapters every day....I am in love with the direction things are going and wait to read more.....
Waiting patiently lol
Author's Response:
I really appreciate it, but don't you have better 'things' to do, just being married 2 days. Go buy a tie and pick out a safeword.
Seriously, thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was awesome! I loved every word of it! I am really enjoying the dialogue between Ana and Christian, they sound like they have been together for years. Him teasing her and being annoyed is hilsrious! The hormones raging is also a nice touch with her not wanting any hearts and flowers, but for him to just get on with it. Excellent job well done as usual.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I like hearing what people enjoy reading. It helps me to know what makes it more interesting.
Thanks for lraving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
There are so many good one liners in this chapter, I had to come over to this site to re-read just for the fun of it, to heck with the lemons this was just plain entertaining!! Ana and her zingers and Christian w/his side comments... You crack me up! You must have had fun writing this? Thanks for the giggles, you really never disapoint!! :) Liz
Author's Response:
Liz, Liz, Liz. You are so nice. Sometimes I have fun, because I get to be Ana to write this. That means for a while, I get to be married to Christian. Glad you are liking it and following. You always brighten my day.
E.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Haha, I love this!! How awesome that Kate knew ana was pregnant by just looking at her!
I think Ana still needs to punish him for taking her keys, I would've freaked! Lol!
Author's Response:
Not too hard to tell if you really know someone. Thanks for reading.
E.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
very good
Author's Response:
Thank you. E.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my goodness this chapter made me smile and laugh throughout the whole thing! So many funny little lines and moments. You are such an excellent writer.
I can't wait for your next chapter,I am guessing that the bitch troll is at this party somewhere. I hate her but she sure makes things interesting!
I am so addicted to your story.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate the review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
You are adorable! FF notifys us you have a new chapter and we stop our worlds to read you! Only to come here and find ther is MORE !! ;) you are the best! We love what you write and can't wait to read you twice tee,hee. With much gratitude, Liz
Author's Response:
I'm always up for a second time. I love you, Liz.
E.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow best chapter in a while! Oh what a surprise Mrs. Bitch Troll Lincoln was! She was soooooo evil to Ana at the salon! What a blast from the past! I wonder what Christian is going to do about it.( get a new phone for one thing) lol. I am glad he was surprised by the whole thing and was not in touch with her before Ana brought it up.
I am always looking forward to reading your updates but now I'm on pins and needles! Please update soon! Awesome chapter thanks for you fresh creativity!
Author's Response:
Thenks. I knew she would never just go away. We'll see where this goes. E.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love a good lemon!!!
Author's Response:
Wonder how in the world it ever got that name?
E.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Always read the story on both sites to make sure I didn't miss anything. So glad I do. Quite a nice scene cut out of the one on fanfiction please keep writing. I love your story!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes. Sometimes I just have to slash out entire paragraphs for FF. Thanks for reading both sites. Sometimes I do change a few things around, but story stays the same. More story lines coming.
Thanks again.
E
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
still such a great story! so glad you've continued it.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And thanks for following it.
E.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
and christian gets what he wants again, haha. im excited to read about baby number three :)
Author's Response:
In an upcoming chapter, Ana tells him it is his ultimate act of controlling her. Luckily she is good natured about it.
Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
im glad Ana andChristian are in a good place before they got the baby news. they will be able to enjoy this so much more as a happy couple. I also hope they keep working on their problems so they can continue to be awesome parents. Super great chapter. Thanks!
Author's Response:
The two things you can count on with Christian and Ana. They adore each other and they love their kids. I think they're a pretty strong family.
Thanks. E.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this chapter! Are you planning to revisit Escala/Amy at all. Not sure why I want him to explain that in detail, but I feel like Ana would need that....thanks again!
Author's Response:
Maybe. I was almost lynched for bringing her in to start with. I thought Flynn did a good job, by explaining that Christian returned to the only way he knew how to handle stress and anger and that was to have a sub. Hopefully he will learn other more acceptable coping mechanisms. But, we'll wee. There will be more villans, though. Never a dull moment with the Greys.
Thanks. E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Knew it :) Awesome!
Author's Response:
It was pretty obvious, wasn't it? Oh, well. Everybody likes babies.
Thanks. E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
One of my favorite stories. Can't wait for more;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate you following and leaving a review. E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
hahaha! I love this story already, of course with it being the continuation, of course I love it!!
I was thinking she was pregnant but I'm happy that I was right!! Great update..btw, Tomorrow is my birthday... will I get some amazingness for my present?! LOL!!
Author's Response:
I sort of liked the pregnancy thing, but I don't think a lot of people do. It's really been done to death. I was hoping maybe I could do a different take on it. But, we'll see. Who knows. I'm sort of stuck right now. Got one more story line going that will show up in the next chapter. Happy Birthday!!! E.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! Nice to see them having some fun after all the angst of the last few chapters. It was also great how you gave us some insight into his subs. I can't stop thinking that Ana may be pregnant again. It seems something is going on with her after all the little clues you've been dropping. Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response:
They're a fun couple alright. I should have so much fun. Thanks for reading and reviewing. E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
This was a GREAT Chapter, I am soo happy that you have continued on, there might have been some serious tears....I can not thank you enough everyday i look forward to being able to sit down and read another chapter...You are a great writer a very big kudos....Thank You
Author's Response:
Thank you for following this. I appreciate the kudos. E.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am so glad you started another series! Great job, as usual!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate the nice words. E.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love you for life! You are an amazing writer and I'm so happy that you decided to continue your story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and following the new book. And thank you for the kind words.E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. And all during lunch. I'm excited to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm sure Christian is glad to hear that you are eating properly. I appreciate the review. E.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I know, I know I reviewed on FF and you are probably rolling your eyes...but I agree with your fan Lynne3 we really do appreciate a rare and authentic intellect such as yours. Just wanted to add to your read count (tee,hee) Thanks for continueing!
Author's Response:
If I thought Christian would spank me, I would certainly roll my eyes. But, Thank you for the kind comments and review. I appreciate you following and finding the new book. E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Do you ever get tired of people telling you how talented you are? Because truly you really are! The reason I review the stories I read is because I appreciate the talent that you writers share with us free of charge. The very least we
can do is tell you thank you and to let you know
that your talent is being recognized. You however
are one writer that stands out among your peers.
My review is ... You nailed it again,wonderful as
always! I hope you dont get to tired of being told
you are an excellent writer because if you keep
writing I intend to keep telling you!
Author's Response:
No. I can't imagine getting tired of nice comments. I appreciate you taking time to leave them. Thanks for following the new book. E.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Why do I feel like there are something sub related is coming out of the woodwork? Maybe that Phoebe? Since he seemed to like her and lasted 8 months with her. I'm still getting over the Amy Patterson stuff so I'm hoping no affairs with subs.
Author's Response:
No subs at this point. Thanks for reading and following.
E.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please, please, please no children by subs - can't believe his control freak side would allow that! Please no!
Author's Response:
At this point there are none. Already too many stories with that plot.
E.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter. How come you switched to a new story? Will you keep updating both or is More over?
Author's Response:
This is a continuation of More. I will be updating here from now on. Thanks for following me. E.