Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
Aww, I just love them!! How sad that Christian is so hurt but I love that he talked her into pleasing him!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
oh dear lord this has to be my favorite chapter so far...#1 you have Grace acting like a typical 2 year old, tantrums and screaming are just par for the course, right?! #2 we have Teddy and Grace fighting over attention from a sick and injured Father....#3 you have Teddy asking where babies come from.- LOL!!!! Last but not least we have a very injured Christan begging....Yup, begging for Sex!!!! OMG! Heart stop! then ne is in so much pain, even he can no longer deny that he needs to go to the hospital...Until next update...all the best..... Kathy
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kathy. I believe next chapter is the birds and bees story. Mr. Sexpertise takes it down to a 6 year old level. I liked that he begged. Guess it goes to show you shouldn't wish for something because you might just get it. It was time for Grace to start coming out. She's two and she should be talking more. And throwing more fits. She is her father's daughter.
Thanks for keeping up.
E.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Perfect, Christian death by sex! He is a horny fellow.
Loved how Christian wanted to be with his family instead of resting,that's so him.
Little Grace is finally acting like a two year old, I was wondering when that would happen. She always seems to be down for a nap and never causing any normal two year old craziness! It will be interesting to see how Christian deals with HER saying NO to him!
Love your writing as always and am so excited to see what is coming next.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Glad Christian is home
Date: 15 Aug 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
So I had this really bad day at work; get in the car, check my email in traffic...and find I have an update to my FAVORITE STORY!!! YOUR. WRITING. IS. AMAZING! I agree with the previus review...get a publisher or talk to EL James about having your story lines adapted for the weekly TV show after the movie comes out! This story is my therapy, my escape, my happy place! Thank you SO MUCH for another great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens...Loved that the perfect Grey children are not so perfect any more!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love this story! More Updates Soon please!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for another great chapter. I can't wait to see where this story line is going.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Brilliant as always...hoping Ros not calling and Andrea questioning Ana's authority is addressed....maybe she should rethink joining GEH! As you know, I am always hoping for Ana to develop a backbone and give Christian a taste of his own medicine for once....I am confident you'll make that happen for us, as well as a fabulous demise for Elena!!! Please!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
So awesome. What a tender, breathtaking reading.
Thanks for the chapters, each and every one.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking time to tell me.
E.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Had to read it again....so good! Summer can be a little light for interior design, so I re-read all of your More in totalum. What a teat,not having to wait for the next update like the first time. Mdme. E, it really really reads well! Perfect flow, constant plot and storyline. You are ready to be discovered by a publisher! It's a pleasure to read your work! Tks.Liz
Author's Response:
People are going to start thinking that I pay you to write these reviews.
Actually I have thought about re-reading it as well. I have forgotten what happened. I've written so much and have so much planned out, that I keep forgetting what I have actually written and what I have just planned. Getting old I guess. Out looking at furniture today instead of writing like I should have been. I probably needed a break from Mr.Grey. He is in my thoughts far too much to be healthy.
Design on Ms. Liz.
E.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Such a rollercoaster! Great writing as always. Very interested to see what will happen about Christians grandmother, hope Ana doesnt spill the secret about his father/grandfather to Grace
Author's Response:
It will be interesting when I figure it out as well.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
E.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
You are a fantastic writer. I like the ups and downs of this story. It makes it interesting as well as a very good read. I'll be waiting on the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are liking it. Thanks for taking time to review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
This story is sooooo awesome. Great read!!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Another incredibly well written chapter. I felt every emotion you tried to convey in this chapter. My favorite part was Ana taking care of Christian in the tub. Do delicate, loving and authentic for these two. You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate the review.
E.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
I absolutely love this story , when I finished reading fifty shades for the 4th time I was told by a friend to look on this site , I am not a book reader really normally read magazines and the odd autobiography but this has captured me , I check everyday to see if there is another chapter sometimes a bit impatient and check 3 or 4 times a day .
Just wanted to say thank you and I don't want the story to end there is so many ways this story and the characters could go , can't wait for next chapter , I should be getting ready for work but thought I would have a quick peak to see if another chapter had been added and it had , so had to read it and now better rush to get ready for work haha .
Author's Response:
I also post on Fan Fiction.net at the same time as here. If you sign up for an alert there, it will email you when a new chapter is posted. You can read it on either sight. ( The more mature content is published here.) That way you won't have to keep checking. I usually try to post everyother day, if I can.
Thanks for taking an interest. I was like you. I had never read a romance novel in my life until FSoG. Usually read magazines or sometimes the odd novel, but after Fifty,I was hooked. I needed more of the book and there wasn't any, so I decided to just write it. Glad you are liking it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
E.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
Hallelujiah! He's back! Our favorite guy is back! :)
In all of this hubbub, I'd forgotten about his biological grandmother leaving a note for Anastasia!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
We haven't forgotten about Grandmother Douglas. She's on the way.
E.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was a beautiful reunion. It nearly brought me to tears! Beautifully written. Thanks
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you. I can't tell you how many times I have cried while writing this story.
E.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was good news. I'm glad he is safe now we can get even more answers. Super job as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate it.
E.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
I've been checking your blog about every hour waiting for this chapter and you didn't disappoint. I feel like I can breathe again knowing that Christian is back. Where are you going with his nightmares, hmmmmm. I love how you have kept true to the characters and their personalities. Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying very hard not to veer from the original characters while letting them grow at the same time.
I appreciate the review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh thank heaven's he's home... well they are home, happy that Jason Taylor and all are well too.... i figured that perhpas they beat him up over the phone call.... this is such an engrossing story.....outstanding job....
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words and leaving a review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
What! You can't stop there!!
Author's Response:
I didn't. It's on the way.
E.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
What a cliffhanger! I'm so hoping that's him, because I don't think my heart could handle any more tension right now (also, come to think of it, reading this chapter during a tornado probably wasn't the best "keep calm" strategy. But very distracting! :-P) Hoping for another update soon- can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm just writing away.
E.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter, like always. Hope you post soon, who is sitting there?
Author's Response:
Thank you. New one on the way.
E.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
that was so not right I have been on pins and needles for days I knew he would sacrfice his freedom to get every one else home ...and now this cliffy ..shame on you
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
No, no, no! You can't stop there! I need MORE!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
WOW, what a cliffhanger! Anxiously waiting for the next chapter...Great Story!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hurry, hurry... Don't leave us hanging...!
Author's Response:
This review just popped up. Sorry.
Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my goodness what a cliffhanger! Is the dark figure Christian,Sawyer,the man in the trench coat,who ,who,who? Please tell us soon!
By the way you wrote this chapter so well. Christian interfering in the negotiations was perfect Christian behavior,and Ana visiting with the spouses was so Ana,awesome touches!
Please,please,don't make us wait long!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
good job of building tension......can't wait to read the next chapters.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holding....my....breath....!!!! I know who I hope it is...Once again, you are AMAZING!!! I can't wait to find out!!! Hurry, please!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG what a cliffhanger. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat reading this chapter. I love your writing but write faster. Is Christian in the chair?
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! Once again, you have outdone yourself. Please update SOON. Thanks for another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
Heart fail!!!!! Okay, either it's Gail, or Praise be, perhaps Christian has made it home already..... Talk about pins and needles..... this is soooo much more of a heart stop than when Christian was shot in "More" or when Teddy disappeared from the school... this is just so good.... tills next time...TY again for this latest chapter....honestly, I for one appreciate them.... Kathy
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
My heart is in my throat. Who is it?
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow. Scary
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please, oh please, oh please let it be Christian in that chair and not someone who came to take Ana because she wouldn't listen to Christian!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh no, that cant possibly be good!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
It just hit me... Christian telling Ana to take the deal, it was to stop the person who came to her room! AH THIS IS SO GOOD!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry. This review just popped up. Don't know where it's been. This is a quirky site.
E.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loving this story! Update soon , pleaseeeeee.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Woah Please please can we have the chapter 21 now my heart is pounding who was sitting at the end of the bed pins and needles.
Author's Response:
On the way.
E.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Your story is great. I love that you covered k and r insurance. I have to admit that I didn't know what that was. You thought of everything! Post more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
well alright Ana!!!.........She's right, bring the wives and signeficent other everyone will be happy when they get back to seattle......I prey they all come back in one piece
Author's Response:
Me too.
Thanks
E.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
I want a quick solution to this whole problem,however that is why you are writing this and I'm not. You know that building up suspense and rounding out the story with details is the better way to go, but still I hate waiting! Again please update as soon as you can.
Author's Response:
Resolution on the way. Gotta' mix a little drama and a little relationship to keep it interesting.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you so much for another great chapter you did a phenomenal job. I hope you will continue this story beyond the Grey's having Gray hair and beyond. I really feel as though you captured Anna's strength and her compassion for others. I will check my email on a regular bases for the next chapter. Please update chapter 20 as soon as you are able, sorry I'm being greedy but you make us want more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate that you took time to leave a comment. More on the way.
E.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow great chapter. I have such a love hate relationship with the tension of the situation but that is what makes your writing so good. Please continue and update often.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a comment. Resolution on the way.
E
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hate this :( such good material for a story tho! You rock! Bring our Christian home soon! :)
Author's Response:
On his way.
Thanks for leaving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow E, that was really great! I saw the movie Proof of Life, years ago, so yes knew about the dismemberment issue, but never thought of all the leaks of information that could possibly happen..it really does stand to reason that something innocently said could be used in the wrong hands. Ana is very compassionate...
In my last review I said James Hunter when I meant Jack Hyde...I must have been thinking MOTU and SnowqueenIceDragon days....ahhh, memories..... Thanks ago for this update and I look forward to chapter 20 .... Kathy
Author's Response:
I knew who you meant. Thanks for leaving me a comment.
E.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Just wanted to say, I love it, I hate having to wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
No more waiting. It's posted.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
you are amazing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. So are you.
Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Waiting with bated breath for Chapter 19...thank you for continuing the story.
Author's Response:
Posted.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chatty chapter... loved Gail and Ana's conversation....Yes, I figured that Carrick was going to want more involvement in knowing details; however, Christain picked Ana not Carrick for a reason and we need to trust in those choices....Ana is wiser than she gives herself credit for..... we learned that when James Hunter kidnapped Mia, our Anastasia is extremely and unasumingly smart and sees things others do not...... sorry I'm later in reading and reviewing this chapter, RL and work has had an effect, but just so you know, still loving and supporting you in your story and encourage your writing.....Laters E...... Kathy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate you. Thanks for leaving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
PLease update the next chapter as soon as possible. This story has gotten soooo good. I like this as it keeps the adrenaline flowing.
Author's Response:
Thanks. They Greys' are in for a ride.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG this is getting better and better. Please keep Christian and Taylor safe. Can't wait til your next posting. Love it!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
SAFE! Thanks for reading and leaving a commnet.
E.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
As always I love every chapter you write. Not a lot of answers yet but at least we know what k&r insurance is. I think you were right to have the caracters feelings and emotions explored a little before jumping into the whole big k&r scene. (what do you think of my use of k&r.) lol Really wonderful as always and looking forward to chapter 19.
Author's Response:
BDSMKandR. Answers on the way.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
He's either talented or it doesnt take much to please him --- funny.
Ah I love this plot so much! Makes me want more! I hope he is ok!
Author's Response:
It's Fifty Shades of GREY, so he has to be okay.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
yikes!!!! I cant wait for the boys to get to come home at some point :( , but i loved ana and gail finally bonding!!!
Author's Response:
I think Ana and Gail are close. Gail seems almost like a mother to her.
E.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
The suspense is killing me
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
I just wanted to say that I love your story, I can't wait for new chapters to come out! I can't wait to find out what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you. I paareciate it. More chapters on the way.
E.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow!! This was a powerful chapter, full of emotion for me. I'll be waiting on the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for posting a comment.
E.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story can't wait for next chapters don't want it to end .
Author's Response:
More chapters on the way.
Thanks for reading anc leaving a comment.
E.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow! I'm so confused, who on earth is holding him....is it a drug cartel? and since when did Christian come in contact with a seedier "walk of life" TY for another chapter, I for one appreciate it.... love the story, as you know.....Laters BB Kathy
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Laters.
E.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
So suspenseful! Please write again soon!
Author's Response:
Another chapter probably tomorrow.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
You always keep me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sit back in your seat and enjoy.
E.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! Please hurry, I am on the edge of my seat biting my nails. You are so awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks and sit back.
E.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
ahhh too many cliffhangers in a row, cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
On the way.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
This story is so intense...has me at the edge of my seat. Wow!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.
E.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Columbia Oh the suspense heart pounding nail bitting wow I thinking held my breath whilst reading. Thank you for the fantastic update I cannot wait for the next chapter:)
Author's Response:
Next one on the way.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loving the newest adventure you are taking us on. Thank you again for another great chapter. I'm checking all the time waiting for the next updates.
Author's Response:
Next update probably Tuesday.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
WE NEED NEXT CHAPTER NOW!!!!!
Author's Response:
On the way. Probably Tuesday.
E.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG!! So much drama!!! Poor Christian!! Will he ever learn to stay out of trouble??? Lol. Let them get home safe!!!!
Author's Response:
Poor Christian. You gotta love him.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
Nice Chapter but not enough for me i could read your story all day. Woman you have me on the edge of my seat...Suppose to go to a house warming and thinking i might stay home! I want more waiting patiently!!!
You are a fabulous writer and know how to keep us tuned for the next chapters...Keep up the great work, and thank you...
Author's Response:
WOW.Thanks. More Tuesday.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
God my heart is sinking too! K&R insurance, what is that all about.? Oh Christian you are such a good guy and yet, worry your family at every turn. Come back safely soon. Don't let Anna go into labor without you.
OK little miss nuwriter to many opened questions and not enough answers. We need some answers soon, as Teddy would say we are all a little" stressed" here and you are the only one with the cure for it! Please post soon , thanks your story is great!
Author's Response:
New Chapter Tues, probably.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing once again...can't wait for this drama to resolve...makes me very nervous :-(
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Post another chapter soon.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Not the government? Then the drug lords? My imagination is going wild!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you. More on the way.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
Holy crap woman.... give me more! lol
Author's Response:
Thanks Ms. Liz. you are a writing machine yourself.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful as always. Please don't make us wait long for 18! Hope he hasn't lost his business ethics with whatever this insurance company is... Doesn't sound good. Oh the drama, but such a nice reprieve from subs and Elena!:)
Author's Response:
Yes. Elena needs to die. Put her and us out of our misery.
E.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow I can not wait for Chapter 17. Christen's grandmother and Jason and Christen stuck in a remote place! I dont think i can wait another day to read the next chapter i will go crazy. Hmmmm so now i know why that guy with the long cloak was hanging around when Ana was at Carolines and down town or am i wrong!!
Author's Response:
Asking will get you no where. You'll have to wait.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hope Christian and Taylor comes home safe and sound!!
Author's Response:
How safe and how sound? More today.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh please bring Christian & Taylor home safe, on pins and needles waiting for chapter 17.
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a note. More today probably.
Thanks.
E,
Date: 05 Aug 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Why dud you stop there? Makes no sense!
Author's Response:
Had to stop somewhere. More today probably.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh. Wow. When is the next chapter coming?
Yes, we need drama and stuff.
But PLEASE, happy ending.
Christian and Ana together!!
PLEASEEE!!
Author's Response:
Always a happy ending for these two.
Thanks for reading.
E.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love your stories!!! Looking forward to reading what you have in store for us!
Please continue... soon!
Author's Response:
Working as fast as I can. Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Big girl thong lol
Author's Response:
Poor Christian has no idea what 'big girl panites' are.
thanks for reading and reviewing.
E.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
I feel another plot twist coming! I really enjoy your writing. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Lots of things on the way.
E.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Surely after all they have been through this last year no housekeeper could come between them...possibly planted for something, but please nothing romantic! At some point, enough has to be enough, right??? Please:)
Author's Response:
I agree. Things coming up, but nothing can separate these two.
thanks for reading and leaving a review.
E.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was so happy today to see another wonderful chapter was posted. I am worried now that you could put Christian in danger and I hope that doesn't happen.
Author's Response:
Me? Put Christian in danger? Christianis always in control.
Thanks for reading.
E
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hummmmm.... The first one they interviewed, if they hire her I think she may have a dark side to her! Did Troll lady have something to do with her???? Hummmm
Author's Response:
Not sure who they will hire.
thanks for reading and commenting.
E.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
My favorite line, " why don't you buy a diaper factory?" very funny! Ana and Gail need to keep looking, the right gal should "feel" right for both to fit in. Worried about South America....be kind. Thanks again,Liz
Author's Response:
I am kind. You're up.
E.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Will we see patricia in the next chapters? She is kind of weird with all her questions and boyfriend situation...himmm "wait and see" you'll say i think.
Author's Response:
Not sure yet. Wait and see.
thanks
E.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! The new maid is so going to try for Christian. She's also gunna get a beat down from Ana! Well, that's my prediction anyway. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Next one coming up.
Thanks.
E.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
yeah, that Patricia lady bothered me too, Ana and Gail....I concur, she definitely seemed interested in Mr Grey way, way too much!
Author's Response:
Just don't know who to hire.
Thanks
E.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
I reviewed this previously but it did not load, will stick to my iPad, don't have that problem??? Love the set up for things to come;) Giggle,giggle so cute! "I don't do patience" so hope to see you soon. Liz
Author's Response:
Just posted, Ms. Liz.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
Maternity car! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Author's Response:
Good heavens who knows. I sort of liked the idea.
Thanks for reading.
E.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
What a nice ending. I am so curious about the man in the trench coat or is it even a factor. Anyway, it was an awesome read. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
He is a factor leading to another factor. Huh? answers on the way.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. More on the way. At least I hope they're good.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awwww! I love the "maternity car". Keep them coming. Sooners rather than laters. ; )
Author's Response:
Everybody needs a $180,000 car to use while they are pregnant. Doesn't everybody have one?
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for adding another great chapter & continuing the love story, we can never get enough of our favorite couple. I was totally bitting my nails when Anna had to retrieve her car from the dress shop (would the man in the coat ambush her) & then when the door bell rang at dinner I thought it might possibly also have something to do with the man in the brown coat. Does Anna have a stalker? Thanks for keeping us guessing & please keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
I think Christian is her only stalker. We should all be so lucky. There's a reason for the man in the coat.
Thanks for leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love that Kate told Christian to get her a maternity car, that's so Kate.
Author's Response:
Kate gets it taken care of.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
nwo who wouldn't cry over a 8 speed Triptronic Transmission....22 seat positions and massager.....What a hubby!!!!
Author's Response:
It really is a great car. $180,000 worth. I still don't know what a Triptronic transmission is.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was soooooo sweet! Your writing is beautiful. I found my eyes tearing up as I giggled towards the end. I just love their relationship! Thank you
Author's Response:
I love them too.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.