[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Life Goes On
Oh god ominious moment... I just dont even know.
Bella and jasper seem to be on the track at least until he confesses.
Author's Response:
LOL... at this point I don't mind that you're left guessing. Now, if I mark this complete and you still have questions, well then I won't have done my job!
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Holy moly... so much happened. I hope she takes what he says and loves him for it. I hope ed gets his act together but if what he admitted was true he has alot of work to do before he can be anything but an douchebag.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 1:39 PM Title: Life Goes On
:)
Author's Response:
xo
Date: 30 Jun 2012 1:08 AM Title: Life Goes On
Wow, I'm really confused now with what's going on with Edward. I know the two girls are Rose and Mary/Alice but what are they rehearsing? Since Mary/Alice wasn't into any kind of kink with Jasper, other than her stalking him, is this a new pairing between Edward and Alice? And am thinking the hands are either Carlisle or Emmett.
Author's Response:
Think back to the early chapter when we first meet Emmett... as Bella's getting pierced. And you've caught on to what I'm doing with Edward... though it won't be easy. Mary Alice is there for a reason...
As for the hands, the clue was there in the chapter and I hopefully won't leave you hanging too long as the next one is started :)
xoxo
tb
Date: 28 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Life Goes On
this story has taken turns that I'm not sure I want to go along with. I won't drop a story mid-stream and will finish it but don't like Bella with Jasper. Sorry. This meeting up of Edward and Alec seems interesting....where will that take us! I will read on....
Author's Response:
Well thank you for deciding to stick with it, but yes, as I warned a few chapters back, I like to mix up pairings and I knew from the start that this wasn't going to be an E/B story... though I promise everyone(characters) will be happy by the end.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:13 PM Title: Life Goes On
What is in store for Edward?
Author's Response:
Some eye-opening changes...lol
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:43 PM Title: Life Goes On
I am floored that Jasper never had sex without a condom. Glad but floored.
Love that Jasper loves Bella. Yay! And that he is going to take over Edward's teaching postition. Wonder what Edward is going to think of that? However, Jasper is the logical choice as he was Edward's teaching assistant.
Hmmm....Bella pregnant? Well, it does only take one time...the right time, right? LOL
Edward and the bar is very interesting. Can't wait to read more on that!
Keye
PS: Went back and skimmed 8, 9 & 10.
Author's Response:
That was one lesson that Edward taught him from the start that was good! And between you and me (and anyone who decides to read thru reviews), I haven't decided yet if she's actually pregnant... lol.
glad you're still enjoying and that this can be a distraction from all the woes of RL.
xoxo
tb
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:26 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
IK...I am so scattered right now. I am wrapping up the construction of my new home which is 3 hours away from my current home. I need to be there supervising but I need to be here packing. I need to be cloned! My brain is fried and I am surprised that I know my own name! All that plus I still have a job, family, my second job with FWAR.....you know how it is! LOL!
Keye
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:37 PM Title: Life Goes On
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Welcome!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:53 AM Title: Life Goes On
Wow...wow...wow.... my love.... WHat a turn of events is happening here.....I can not wait for the next update...
But I'll guess I'll have to be a patient lady xxx
Hugs
Arc
Author's Response:
And your patience knows no bounds... mwah!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:47 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Ohh My Edward... my heart literally clenched so hard at the last few paragraphs... I forgave him for his monsterous out bursts....
ARc :)
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:41 AM Title: Consequences
Ohhh so much... So much turmoil.....
Arc
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:37 AM Title: Mea Culpa
Oh me mohh my... whom has been telling tales of the Prof Cullen!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:33 AM Title: Wake Up Call
FAntastic Chapter my darling... I love the little images that keep appearing here and therexxx m3wahxxxxx
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:18 AM Title: Life Goes On
Wow! What a cliffie you have left us on!! Y'ALL know Edward and Bella are going to get back together? Aren't they? Lord Jasper is just too fucking, sugary sweet...ugh...I want the hot sex back that Edward and Bella were doin'!! Can't wait to find out who Alec is!! Is Alec a man or woman Dying to know!
PLEASE HURRY UP WITH UPDATE....PLEEZ!
Author's Response:
Alec has been introduced a couple of times earlier on in the story...
And the hot schmexy times aren't over... just moving the players around a bit ;)
thanks for reading... I'm working on the next chapter and will get it up as soon as I can.
tb
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:09 AM Title: Life Goes On
Gotta say I think that Jasper would make a great papa. and OMG! Jane and Makenna!! And Alec! oooh noes! What will happen now??? *bites nails*
Author's Response:
Hehe... yeah, I think he would too... the author just needs to decide if B actually got knocked up or not... lol.
xoxox
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:53 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
oh edward... and oh bella and jasper...
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:50 AM Title: Consequences
well it appears that Angela has outed Edward...but I wonder if that's all she wrote regarding him? great chapter hun xxx
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:35 AM Title: Life Goes On
Great chapter as always ... Now ... Edward being at Emmett's bar ... is that a couple of days later ? Because i'm thinking the dancers are Bella and Rose and Jasper's the one that grabs Edward .. Hmmm ... MORE LADY !!! I WANT MORE !! HAHAHAHA
Author's Response:
You've got some of your guesses right :) But no, EPOV is happening parallel to Bella and Jasper's... so you've got one dancer figured out.
Next chapter is started and I'll get it up as soon as I can.
Thanks for reading!
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:28 AM Title: Life Goes On
I could want to see all three of them in my office @ 2pm! I have major work to do on these three.
Author's Response:
PMSL! I choked on my water when I read this one. Thanks darlin'... if I can't get them sorted by the end, I'll send them your way :)
xoxo
tb
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:27 AM Title: Life Goes On
Awesome!!! Rut row. Oh hell who is this?
Author's Response:
You'll know as soon as I get the next chap up... and it is started. :)
Thanks!!
tb
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:52 AM Title: Life Goes On
hmmmmm....Alec and Edward finally reunited huh??? This should make for an interesting next chapter. Not to mention the fact that Bella is probably pregnant with Jaspers child....wow...bring it on!!! ;D
Author's Response:
THANK YOU for remembering and catching on!!! big hugs and kisses to you!
xoxo
tb
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:07 AM Title: Life Goes On
Great, perfect song for this chapter.
Oh the roads we travel, some easy, some not. I do love Jasper and Bella is out of her mind right now. Jasper's calming positive attitude is helping her through. I kind of wish he would talk to her alone and not at Peter's. But I assume he needs the support in case Bella bolts...
Edward, no direction. I am afraid of what may happen to him. What kind of bar was it and who grabbed him? I know you can't tell me but it certainly increases the desire for the next update.
Thanks darlin' xo
Author's Response:
I'm PMing you darlin' smh
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:03 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
All three of them seem sexually broken. How sad that they had to resort tip physical gratification to feel something in life.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
First of all - thanks for explaining how to do the email request and where to go. I printed your response out so I wouldn't lose it. Really appreciate your help.
I've got so many thoughts running through my mind about this chapter. Jasper has fallen, I think, for Bella and does want to do the right thing in telling her about his and Edward's little game or set up that they've had going. He does feel remorse and has now reached his breaking point (he was almost there before he left Texas) with Edward using him as his wingman. He is worried and concerned that his admission will push Bella away but he also knows that he needs to be honest with her. I never felt that what 3 consenting adults want to do in private is wrong. They're all of age and they all enjoyed what they did. What I thought was wrong about it was how Edward targeted and used his position as a teacher to find out about Bella. That she left her door and windows open while she masturbated was on her and she could have told them both to just take a hike but she didn't. That doesn't make her a freak - just a girl who finds herself enjoying a little kink. She is now realizing that having a sexual relationship with her teacher wasn't the best of ideas but again, Edward and Jasper are experts at what they do knowing how to read and say just the right things to get the ball rolling with the girl of their choice. That they've been analytical about the pursuit has worked well for them but it doesn't make them evil guys other than the fact that they're using the girls under false pretenses for the most part. I do imagine that many the other girls probably enjoyed themselves if they were treated as Bella had been.
What I see as the sad part in this story is how Edward was used, abused and left to fester and mutate into an adult who has built so many layers of brick walls around himself that even he doesn't know how to tear those walls down. And as he makes his way to the "bar zone", the only thing he does know is that he is in pain. It's also troublesome that no one besides Edward knows anything about what happened to him as a child so unless this comes out, neither Jasper or Bella will have a reason to forgive and forget or even try to help Edward. I also wonder about Edward's loss of control with Bella in the classroom. If she was getting too close to him emotionally, was this his way of stopping this progression of his feelings for her - make her hate him or fear him by physically abusing her? His thoughts of her start with sexual pleasure, move to his punishment of her and then her leaving in pain as he wonders when he had become a monster. So I'm thinking that Edward might be starting to self-destruct with everything that has just happened over this short period of time.
Sorry to beat a dead horse and jump around in your chapters as much as I just did but one more and then I'm done - can't help but be curious about why Alice has showed up working for Rose (at least I think she's Alice) and where that might be going cause I can't see her ending up with Edward but do figure she did come for Jasper.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
You know what bites is that when I press the + sign that makes the other stories I read on here's text bigger, it doesn't on this story. *pouts* Wonder why?
On the last chapter it enlarged only a portion of the chapter's text. Never have seen that before.
Well I cannot wait to hear what Jasper has to say and where he is going to say it. And, oh...we making a baby? LOL
This is news: Being abandoned by my parents, being drugged, being raped, being abandoned by my best friend.
Well I don't remember this being said before. Are we going to learn more about that? Perhaps through Edward's drunken haze?
Oh snap...is that what Jasper is going to talk about with Bella? Or is he going to do some ILU back? Or both?
Just so many options to chose from that I don't know how you do it!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Okay Keye... I should beat you for this review... lol. Go re read chapters 9 & 10 (I think, it might be 8 & 9)... can't believe you forgot such an important bit of info!
xoxo
tb
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Consequences
Oh wow...score one for Angela Webber! However, I just don't see Edward letting her get away with that crap. Paybacks are a bitch!
Oh boy....she told him that she loved him!
*races to next chapter*
Keye
Author's Response:
our dear professor cullen is finally opening his eyes and growing up... i don't think revenge will be in his plans.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:26 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Lol. Yup Cherry is gone. You popped it. But there is just no way this deep in, I can pull out now. Pun is intended.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:31 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
I didn't want Edward to quiet. I wanted him to stand up for himself and fight for his job. Angela really had no proof that he gave A for sex other than she word. I don't think Bella would have said anything. I wanted Bella to come back to class on Wed and just stare at him the whole class and see if he would say anything to her after class. Now we will never no.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Thanks!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Oooh , I'm getting so eager to find out how it all ends! Thank you!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Now your fucking with my emotions damn it. I want to HATE edward but with the way your painting him at the moment i cant, all I want to do is hold him and love him. As for belsper i think getting away is just what they need, and i cant wait for more. Keep up the awesome work doll.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:13 AM Title: Consequences
Texasbella,
I've read a nuber of stories you have beta'd and pre-read but I've never read anything youI have written. WOW!!!! I'll be reading them all now! You are an exceptional writer and your ability to write so graphically is incredible. Ihope ypu finish this one the second time around. I am really looking forward toreading them.
Author's Response:
well thank you so much darlin'! I fully plan to see this through to the end... can't say when that will be, but we are coming into the home stretch I think. thanks for reading and enjoying!
xoxo
tb
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:05 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Love this story, it's taking a interesting course.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 10:02 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
:)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:21 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Hope Bella can overlook Jasper's revelations and see the man that he wants to be.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:25 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
this story has morphed so much from it's start. i hardly recognize it anymore. i love edward and bella together and now think that is not where this is going....i will still read until the end.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
*Sniffles* This all feels like good bye...I don't do well with good byes.
I really want to be by Edward's side, he's on a course for destruction.
Jasper is darn serious about Bella and Bella? I'm not sure she realises the severity of all that's happened and will happen.
Good job capturing these three emotions with the characters.
Hugs xo
Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Oh my!! I wonder if Bella has any idea about Edward/Jasper. My gut tells me that she knows that Edward was the one "in charge" and that perhaps she will have sympathy for Jasper, perhaps that he was taken advantace of also. Edward, Edward, Edward.....just not sure what to say about him at this point.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
*sobs* I don't know what to say, the worm has turned, the game is over. Crying about Edward, not liking him at all, but so worried about him. wtf is that?! ha And poor Jasper, knowing what he has to tell and how Bella will react to it. In the beginning I really thought I wouldn't like them together but now feel the complete opposite. I love how you've turned things :) Thanks Rach <3
xox
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:28 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Nawwwww so so sooooo sweet .. Gosh you've made this couple adorable !!! & In a way i feel for Edward .. time for him to get some therapy ... Is Jasper's going to take Bella to Peter & Charlotte's farm ???
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:48 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
It's a no wonder Edward is the way he is, he's had a rough life. I think Jasper's doing the right thing by taking Bella away to talk.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:47 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
I think I know where you are going with this one. I have a pretty strong feeling what is going to happen with each character. Also, professionally, I know what should happen for each character, but this is not real life.
s far as the no condom situation, it is called the morning after pill (Pan B).
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:43 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Ohhh girlie.... Ohhhh TB... if I didn't have faith *whispers* and a little inside info* hehe.. I'd be worried...
Ok... off to write.. k??? *mwah*
Author's Response:
Thank you J~ you and the other girls are helping me more than you know to keep this moving forward!
xoxo
tb
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:40 AM Title: Consequences
Hmmmmm.. Angela had balls... errr.. you know what I meant.. right???
Ohh Bella and Jasper.. *sigh*
Author's Response:
actually, she didn't have balls anymore which is why she tattled...lol.
xoxo
rach
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:37 AM Title: Mea Culpa
ohh evil cliffie woman... good thing I can click next...
Hmmm.. I have a feeling Edward is gonna be fucked and well Jasper and Bella.. got some shit to deal with...
*straps in with the seat beat and off road harness*
will you hold my hand if I need it??
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:31 AM Title: Wake Up Call
Ohh is it possible that Edward has had an ephipany?? I should hope so...
Go Jasper.. be a good man..
Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:34 PM Title: Consequences
Well, looks like this is going to wind up being my first Bella/Jasper fic.
Author's Response:
*happy claps and dances in a circle as I pull the cherry jar off the shelf and open it up* Toss yours in rdmickey... I like collecting cherries! LOL.
xoxo
tb
Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:30 PM Title: Mea Culpa
Rut Roh Raggy.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:28 AM Title: Consequences
:)
Author's Response:
xo
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:14 PM Title: Consequences
Wow....I didn't see all this happening. So now I can't wait to see what happens next. They are all hurting, it's killing me. Angela needs a fucking beat down...J/S
xoxo
Author's Response:
so much hate for angela... it's kinda funny.
thanks for reading!
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Consequences
um, no condom? so they are declaring their love for each other, which is amazing & maybe conceiving a child! are they ready for that, if it happens? so is Edward going to try & tear them apart? was not expecting stupid Angela to do that, UGH! great chapter! Hope you have a wonderful weekend darlin :) ~Tracey xoxox
Author's Response:
nice going Tracey... not many caught that, or if they did, didn't comment on it :)
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Mea Culpa
dun, dun, dun! so who is standing in the hall staring at Edward?? it would be obvious to think Jasper & Bella, so what do they have to say? what did your pretty lil head conjure up darlin?? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Consequences
Sure didn't see the Angela thing coming at all. She's alot smarter than most to have figured out how to get back at Dr Cullen. So where does this leave Edward now that he's out of a job? (I mean it's not like he was innocent and he was smart enough to cut his losses right at the getgo) And I'm assuming that he has no intention of getting counseling or going into therapy. I was also surprised that Bella would tell Jasper that she loved him. I'd think that her revelation was a product of what had happened in the classroom and because of Bella's internal thoughts concerning her own sexual preferences (meaning that she's somewhat overwhelmed emotionally). Am I correct in assuming that at this point she is unaware of the "tag team" that had been unleashed against her and how long it had been going on? Wonder what she'll think if and when Jasper tells her how he and Edward targeted young women over the years. Of course, Jasper was just the wingman and not the brains of the duo but he knew and laughed about what they were doing. And finally, where does this leave Edward with Bella and Jasper now? I mean Jasper is his only friend and Edward was showing signs of more than just another pretty face/body where it concerned Bella.
I do have a question about TWCS reviews and updates. Where do I go to look at others' reviews of your chapters and is there anywhere set up to be notified when you have updated? I keep looking but am not finding any area to sign up for email notification. I've added your story and you as the author to my Favorites so is this what you're supposed to do? Sorry, I'm just so not a tech/computer person. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Linda
Author's Response:
Technicalities first... here's what I could find for your update question:
Q: How do I get chapter and new story alerts?
A: For both items 1) you have to go to My Account (on the top of the webpage), then Edit Preferences. Select the radio button for "contact when favorites are updated" (one time only) and 2) favorite each story and/or author (click add to favorites; when next screen comes up, hit submit). If you favorite an author, you will get notification when a new story posts only. If you favorite a story, you will get notification when that story gets a chapter update.
Q: Help! I've set up my account to receive email alerts but I'm still not receiving them. What should I do?
A: A lot of our members are having problems receiving email alerts. It seems to be a common problem with members who have comcast.net emails. A few other members with different email providers are experiencing the same problems. Our alert system is working properly. The emails are being created and leaving our server. For some reason they are not making it to your inbox. All we can do on our end is ensure that the alerts are generated and sent. After they leave our server I'm unable to track the problem. The best and easiest solution we can see is to set up a free gmail account if you are not receiving email alerts. In gmail's settings you can set up the incoming mail to forward to your comcast address. A lot of people like this option because they can use the gmail account for all of their fanfic needs and keep their person email private.
Now, for the story :)
Most people figured we hadn't seen the last of Angela when he "dismissed" her so carelessly, and obviously we hadn't. He's hit the point in his life where he needs to grow up and take responsibility for his actions, even if he needs to be pushed off the cliff, so to speak. Which is why the next few chappies will be a little rougher emotionally. They all have some stuff to sort. Jasper will finally realize he can make it and be loved without Edward. Bella will figure out she's not weird or a freak for her likes and that a happy medium can be reached... but of course, Jasper has to be the man and tell her what he and Edward did... which is whats coming up next.
Thanks, as always, for sticking with me on this and your ever insightful reviews!
xoxo
tb
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:26 PM Title: Consequences
great chapters. But Edward's going to lose his job? What? I didn't see that coming at all.
Author's Response:
He's losing his job, but not his credentials by bowing out gracefully and owning his wrong. It's a baby step towards his overall healing.
thanks for reading!
xoxo
tb
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:04 PM Title: Consequences
is edward getting whats been coming to him? Yes but not in the way i thought. He still needs to come to terms with his past and why hes the way he is. As for the Bellsper moment at the end, umm yeah she said ILY or atleast thats whats im gathering from the last sentence, i WANT to know what Jasper thinks and will he say it back? Great job as always bb.
Author's Response:
love ya darlin'! thanks for helping me stay sane with this...lol
xoxo
tb
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Consequences
Ack! So good! I can't wait to find out what happens next, thank you!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
I can understand better than you know. I have to carry my dad to Nashville for cancer treatments twice a week. I am praying for your son. So, whenever I get your update...that will be just fine with me.
Jen
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:37 PM Title: Consequences
*THUD!!!!*** okay, that one was not what I thought was coming next (although I knew Jasper would be.... ;) ) Great chapter...keep 'em surprising, this ride is getting even better!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: Consequences
Thanks for the update. I hoped this story would be more about exploring a polyamorous lifestyle. I am not sure I am into where this is going. But I appreciate your sharing with us ;)
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Consequences
Fucking bitch Angela. She has to go ruin it for everyone. Why did he not fight for his job. It was his word against hers. She had no proof or did she I don't know. I don't want him to leave. Now Jaspers in love and Bella just caved in and said it. Does she really love him or is it just this man meat she loves. Ha
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:22 PM Title: Consequences
oh holy hell........................i feel downright dizzy.....the room is spinning....
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:00 AM Title: Consequences
I can't wait to see what Edward does, but I have to say in this story, I really like Bella and Jasper together!! I hope it stays that way. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:01 AM Title: Consequences
Loved how Angela turned on Edward because he did not want their deal anymore. He wa still giving her A's regardless. She is just a very smart jealous girl. She got him good. I want Edward in my office so I could pick his brain. Jasper thinks he will lose Bella after his confession, but I think that she will forgive him eventually. Normally, I could tell which character is going to end up doing in the end. I just do not know what your twisted mind. ;)
Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:21 AM Title: Consequences
my oh my !!!
like i said before...not used to Bella ending up with anyone but Edward...but he really has been a dick so far...now he's jobless, which means that he'll be moving on to the next university and next poor young woman to victimize...by himself though...cuz I feel like Jasper meant what he said when he told him he was out. And maybe he and Bella just made Jasper Junior...can't remember if she was on the pill yet or not....hmmmm....I don't guess I can get another chapter can I?
I'm going out of town Friday...would love to get more of the story before then please!
Jen
Author's Response:
Very observant Jen! Though I haven't decided if I'm going that route yet... just laying the groundwork in case I want to. And I'm sorry but this will be it for this week... I leave in about an hour to head down to MD Anderson as my son has some appts with his cancer doctor. Hope you can understand.
Thanks for reading :)
xoxo
tb
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:28 AM Title: Consequences
LMAO You threw Edward under the bus :-)
Author's Response:
oh geez... you are the first to find humor in this chapter...lol!
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:03 AM Title: Consequences
Maybe Edward should tell the Dean that he needs to ask Angela which other professors will need to leave the university?
Where will he go?
Author's Response:
Haha.. I love that, wish I'd thought of it. His next stop will be taking him on the next step towards healing.
Thanks for reading!
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:07 PM Title: Consequences
Well Angela sure screwed over Edward .. & Jasper and Bella .. awww *wipes tear from eyes* Beautiful !
Author's Response:
You're too kind sass... thank you.
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:06 PM Title: Consequences
Holy Hell, NOW what happens? Even tho Edward deserves what he gets, I hate what Angela did. Poor Jasper...feel SO bad for him... Feel bad for all 3 of them! I have no idea where you're going to lead. Thanks for all the updates, so soon. Enjoy your weekend, see you on the other side :)
xox
Author's Response:
I'm just tickled that I'm managing to surprise people, gives me hope that my last couple of twists will surprise ya'll as well.
xoxo
rach
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Consequences
What a chapter!
Does she really mean it? She'll crush Jasper otherwise.
Please update soon
Author's Response:
Oh she means it, but he's about to really test it.
Thanks for reading! I'll post again as soon as I have the next one ready.
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:51 PM Title: Consequences
Hmm I was extremely glad to find updates here! But I not completely in love with what I'm reading right now... I haven't got a clue about what to expect. And everything is getting more and more angsty. But I'll keep looking for more :)
See you later.
Author's Response:
Thank you Maria, but yes this is the climax of the story ... it has to get a little rough to shake out the kinks before everything can line up for a nice HEA for everyone. Thanks for sticking with me.
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:01 PM Title: Consequences
i feel like i'm on pause... this was an important chapter...sort of like a bridge...and i feel like i'm waiting in the middle because i'm not sure i'm ready for what's on the other side...
Author's Response:
Ummm, this is a good thing... right? :S
I'll try not to drag out the rocky times for too long... just need to get everyone in place to coast into their HEA's. :)
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:58 PM Title: Consequences
Oh boy Angela I think was a bit jealous of Bella and now Edward is in a heap of hot water...not good for him..and is Jasper leaving??
Author's Response:
Jasper doesnt want to leave, but he's afraid of how Bella's going to react when he tells her about their "game" of targeting girls.
Thanks for reading.
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:54 PM Title: Mea Culpa
I wonder why Jasper feels like he's lost her...is he worried that once she finds out their backstory she'll turn away from him?
Love the cliffie with Edward...i don't think there was anyway for things not to crash and burn...hard.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:54 PM Title: Consequences
I'm not crazy about Edward, but I also hate that Angela got what she wanted. I hate girls like that. She needs to go down too.
Author's Response:
Hmm, you're the second one to express extreme displeasure with Angela... I may have to see if I can come up with a way for her to get hers.
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:48 PM Title: Consequences
Oh the mooshy gooshy goodness... I swear I kinda wanna cry and to me that just isnt okay but good for you since I'm a gorey bitch that doesnt cry over much. Love you for this but damn must you break into my heart and steal a little bit for these three? *Huffs* I'll just sit here in my puddle and think of whats to happen next.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:40 PM Title: Consequences
They're all falling like dominos...sad chapter but so glad you gave us a treat of three this week. When you're hot, you're hot!
Thank you. ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:45 PM Title: Mea Culpa
I think were going to need more then seatbelts, probably harnesses to get through the next few chapters.
Loved the update.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Mea Culpa
i love this story so much, and Im glad we could twist your arm to post it early. Ok first off Bella is not in her right frame of mind no matter how you want to spin it, Edward just beat her ass (even though not intential) Jasper has come in to save the day, yeah shes not all there ATM. I see why she stopped and Im glad Jasper stopped when he did. They need to really talk about EVERYTHING and no damn sugar coating. Edward needs some serious help and PRONTO. cant wait for more doll. Keep up the awesome work. Just know if you post more teasers on FB we will beg and plead for you to post, its our way of showing how much we <3 you.
Author's Response:
Well, I just circumvented your begging by posting 43.... hehe. The "talk" is coming.
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Mea Culpa
Who could it be outside Edward's office and what do they want?
So Jasper confesses they set her up. Then what? Does he expect her to just forgive him and become exclusive?
I have this feeling that both Jasper and Bella will be needed to get Edward out of what ever mess his visitors are trying to pin on him. And they will participate willingly.
Somehow thus threesome is going to survive and become stronger in their need for each other.
They are incomplete without the other two-thirds.
Am I way off base?
Author's Response:
Well, you have some interesting ideas, but as Jasper and Edward are cousins, I've said from pretty early on that there will not be a HEA that has the 3 of them as a couple. Next couple of chapters will have Edward meeting some people that will get him back on track.
Thanks for reading!
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:17 PM Title: Mea Culpa
damn just to short, I need more
Author's Response:
awww, sorry darlin'. I do have the next chapter already started... shouldn't be too long hopefully!
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:28 PM Title: Mea Culpa
Busted !! Angela & A Teacher ?
Pleaseeeeeeee don't let Jasper get hurt !!!!!!! Him & Bella belong together in this story ;)
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks for the enthusiastic love sassy! Glad to see you got to catch up ;) And yes, the cats out of the bag... this is a J/B story, so hang in there :)
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:21 PM Title: Wake Up Call
Jasper needs to show Bella he can be as 'wild' (Don't judge i'm trying to put it in a nice way lol) as Edward is and still have the sensitive side .. In this story i'm all team Jasper
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:16 PM Title: Sticks and Stones
Holy Fuck .. Edward lost it !! Glad Jasper was there
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:10 PM Title: New Girl In Town
Nooooooooo Bella ... Go back to the hot Doc ;) Muahahaha
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:06 PM Title: To Wrap or Not to Wrap
Helloooooooooooooooooo Doc !!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:23 AM Title: Mea Culpa
Oh no don't hurt Dr. Cullen
Author's Response:
Dr. Cullen is a big boy, he's made his bed and now has to sleep in it... but me thinks he's going to be making wiser decisions from here on out... mostly. hehe
Thank you!
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:16 AM Title: Mea Culpa
time for Mr. Cullen to pay the piper. I just wonder if the piper takes the Edward Express. great chapter. never really liked Bella with anyone but Edward, but he is really being a total douche here...so it' s very understandable. MY guess...with today's technology and all...somebody got some video of that little ass-thrashing in the auditorium on their iPhone and the shit is about to hit the fan!
great chapter dear....really mean that! hope I can expect another one real soon.
Jen
Author's Response:
Hey Jen! Interesting idea with the recording, but no, I'd set that everyone was at the assembly and the lecture hall was empty except for them. So glad you are open to seeing Bella with someone else, I've done my share of E/B stories, but I have fun mixing them up.
Thanks for reading and enjoying... I do have the next chapter underway :)
xoxo
tb
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:44 AM Title: Doubling Up
Totally loving tender Jasper
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:38 AM Title: Freedom
Ooooh Let The Games Begin !
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:19 AM Title: Appointments
Sweet Sweet Jasper
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:11 AM Title: Cracks in the Armor
Argh i can't stand Angela !!!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chastity
:| Errrm .... LOL
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:46 AM Title: Are You Amiable?
Oooh lies Edward ! LOL
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:32 AM Title: Decisions
See a game to Edward but i know he'll probably turn around and end up falling for her but argh .. i want her with Jasper and then Edward will turn into my wonderful and i'll want him with her too .. lol
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:00 AM Title: Eyes Wide Shut
Ahh Jasper !!! & Peter !!! I Love Peter
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:53 AM Title: What Now?
And that's why this reviewer is liking Jasper more .. Edwards treating this as the game it is .. where as Jasper well .. he's feeling more ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:48 AM Title: After
Is it wrong for me to want Jasper with Bella ?? Because Edwards cold & I know he has his reasons but still lol