[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is evil!! I'm sure jasper will think twice before trying to pull a fast one on Bella again
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ah, see the innocent letters start to become more. You never know where you might find your net adventure or love
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it, Bella's letters were great. I definately think she peaked our dr./captains interest!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, Jasper was a very bad boy for lying! Wait til the boys get those pictures. They are going to die!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the chapter! I really enjoyed the glimpse into Edward and Jasper's mind.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've been wanting to read this since you first posted that you were writing it on FB. I'm very excited and really enjoyed the first chapter. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Aww protective Emmett is kinda sweet xxx
Author's Response:
I know right?
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well glad to see that Emmett is going to let them give this a shot!
Author's Response:
me too! Thanks
Date: 16 Jun 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved the story so far. Thank you so much for it. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
yes, I loved how this turned out !!!!! And getting the age thing addressed very good job !!!!! Now to see what the girls are up too. :)
Author's Response:
no good as usual I surmise
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad to see a mature, well thought out response from Em rather than. the explosive reaction Edward feared.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it!!
I hope Jasper is still alive once they get there-he's been in the loo for quite a whiplike!! LOL
Author's Response:
LOL I've done castor oil, they say it will make you go into labor, it didnt work :( LOL
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aw, Em wasn't as bad as i thought he would be.
Loved it.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
OH WOW...AMAZING :D
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
edward what a sweetie
Author's Response:
I know right? I want one
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Big brother is out in force and it sounds like team icepix has a plan to help bella get her man.I hope Jaz is ok he's been in that loo a long time
Hugs xxxx
Author's Response:
LOL we'll see
Date: 16 Jun 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
:-)
Author's Response:
:D
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awwww I love Armyward!!!!!
Loved it!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think they all learned a lesson, although it will remain with Jasper more than the others.
Edward was c,ear with Emmett, as c,ear as he could be, and I do believe Emmett realized how good to Bella Edward can be. We'll have to wait and see.
Author's Response:
I sure hope Jas has learned LOL
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
All I have to say is more more more...please update soon
Author's Response:
I will do my best to write quickly
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
TY TY TY Kim for this chapter update, well that went alot better than it could have considering what Em walked in on...the phone sexy flirting and all, we know that it was for Skanks 'R Us's benefit....but it was totally innocent either....LOL!!!! anyway....hope Jasper learned a valuable lesson.. :-( thanks again and Happy FD to all those Special Dad's in your life...
Author's Response:
awwww thanks babe! ch 11 is gonna get interesting
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor form cracking on others work :-(
Author's Response:
Tell me it's not true and I will apologize
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome!!! I look forward to every chapter:-)
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think she is planning on turning up for his b'day.
Yeah i'd be his patient too any day.
looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
she can't show up in Iraq, but can skype LOL
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is Bella recruiting Rose and Ali to help with Edwards birthday gift perhaps xxx
Author's Response:
we'll see! LOL
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my the convo was fab darn Emmett though for interrupting owell Jazz does need some help hehe xxx
Author's Response:
LOL yeah
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
Gotta love an overprotective Emmett
Author's Response:
yeah yeah, 10s on the way
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the DIG against 50! I bow down to you in your infinite wisdom! LOL!
Author's Response:
LOL you know I had to, it fit! LOL
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
I agree with Rose, Edward wants to play doctor with Bella... What are the girls going to plan now?
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh god, how have I not seen this fucking Fiction before? Too hilarious, its going in my favs.
Author's Response:
Lol thanks!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
He can play doctor with me anytime!!! Lol
Loved it!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL me too
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is great..I can't wait to see what happens next...Please update soon
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Soon
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Yeah, I wouldn't mind being his patient either... **girlie giggles**
Author's Response:
wouldn't we all? LOL
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
Mmmm
Author's Response:
Mmmmmm? do tell why
Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
:) oh yes doctor
Author's Response:
LOL
Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
OK I am laying back and have my feet in the stirrups, Oh Dr. my Dr. Captain !!!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAOOO bad girl
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
She needs to mail herself to Edward! Doesn't he have a leave coming up or something!?
Author's Response:
we all wish right? LOL Nope, 15 more months
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
soon!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ohh whats she planning now well we have skanks-r-us and now we have bitches-r-us (working for the greater good and rid the world of the sknaks) all set on getting their man or maybe thats men
Hugs xxx
Author's Response:
LMAO
Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
OH WOW...I think she needs help with seducing Edward without Emmett being too mad ;)
Author's Response:
we'll see! LOL
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG, too funny, I love it !!!!! REvenge is best served cold, or with castor oil, isn't that the saying???? And the speakerphone convo, I give it an A+ . Em grabbing the phone to see wtf is going on? Girl your are so funny. Great update
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
I want ems pov, lol, but i guess we may find out what she said to em in her pov.
loved the phonecall. they areboth getting in deep and don't know it, haha.
thanks for theupdate.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
yes we will see, ch 9 is coming soon
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
I didn't imagine he would call her, but I must say I'm glad she did. They got to hear eachother, chat, keep working in trying to make Mallory back-off and they made a Skype date!!! I really can't wait for it!!!
Author's Response:
Yep! I can't wait for the skype date
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!! Em walking in on the phone call lol!! Keep it up!!
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think her revenge was completely fine. He shouldn't have lied about the cookies. Oh how i love the flirty banter between b & e. They are too cute.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
i would love to know how much of that conversation Em heard! I wonder if E & B realise the feelings growing between them...
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon! LOL They will soon too
Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH WOW...THAT was amazing! I loved what was said...I hope they can have naughty Skype times soon...for real! ;) Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! We will see in time
Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
OUUUUUTSTANDING, BABY!! Great update!!! Love it, love it!!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! I'm so evil
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
poor jasper haha won't ever lie again lol.. love e/b sexy talking :)
Author's Response:
LOL I know right!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
soon, I'm in the middle of another ch for a different story
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Em is going to have a heart attack because I don't think these two are just acting because they are getting closer and closer. 15 more months just sucks for these two!
Author's Response:
They are, you cant stop fate....
Date: 12 Jun 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love the phone call!!!!!!!!!!! Bella is awesome:) Emmett is the typical overprotective older brother! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! me too
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love Bella's revenge. It serves Jasper right.
Author's Response:
LOL no shit!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think they will be lusting for each other a bit more now :-)
Author's Response:
LOL maybe, although, I think they will figure it out real quick when they "see" each other
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
My side is still hurting, OMG awesome!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
ahhhh! I heart it! theyre so cute!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
LMAO!! Way to go Bella. I'm still hoping that Bella and Skanks-R-Us meet up. I wanna see that show down.
Im really enjoying this story
Author's Response:
maybe, I will think about it
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow what a phone call! What's going to happen when the realize they are both serious and not playing around? I'm kinda laughing at Mallory right now. Poor Jasper I bet he never lies to Bella again. Lol.
Author's Response:
only time will tell, I know right, oh he better not or the evil pixie will get him next HEHE
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
OHH what a naughty pair but when will they realize that niether is playing and they both want the other bid LOL at skanks-r-us poor Jasper but what a way to do it
Hugs xxx
Author's Response:
LOL I know right!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Lovin the update! Can't waith for the next one!
Author's Response:
Soon
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great update, sister....Need more...Pleeeeeease!!!???
Author's Response:
LOL I need to write it
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Uhh dissing 50....tut tut tut!! Other than that, GREAT update!!
Author's Response:
What? it needed editing! LMAO
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great story so far...I love that it's B&E...You're doing a great job! Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response:
something different, thanks
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sooo good! Love it babes!!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it so far, beautiful!! Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great follow up to the first chapter Kimmie!! Love ya baby!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter sis...Love it so far!! Keep up the good work, babes!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is an AMAZING story and I can't wait for the next chapter. You're on my favourites list on fanfiction and I have been anxiously waiting for your update when I joined TWCS and I saw your story here too. I saw you had some more chapters up and so started to read it here :) Just out of curiosity, are you going to contiue writing on fanfiction or just on TWCS?
Anyway, your story is awesome and I look forward to your update :)
Author's Response:
we banned ff for the weekend, all updates will be done today to catch up
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love Love Love!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sweet revenge, LOL
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Edward is going to call Bella and ask what she put in the cookies. Poor Jasper. And Edward oh my Bella. Love it !!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
I've been enjoying this so far and seeing them get to know each other. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
lol awwhhh revenge is sweet for some!!!! hum...who is he calling....taps chin...thinking....
Author's Response:
LOL I wonder
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hi Bella...it's Dr. Edward :-)
Author's Response:
LOL thats Dr. Feelgood to you!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
So not a 50 fan. LOL. More power to her :-)
Author's Response:
LOL it needed massive editing
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
:-) She should definitely show the girls!
Author's Response:
LOL I know
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad you posted here ! I loved what she did!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Go Bella!!! LMAO
Author's Response:
*nods* yep! LOL
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
:-) :-) :-)
Author's Response:
:D :D :D
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
!!!!!
Author's Response:
????? LOL
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh no! lol....my dad did the exlax brownies to a guy heworked with that would eat others food from their lunch boxes! lol ...good memories....
lovin it!
Author's Response:
LOL too funny
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is great...please update soon I can't wait to see who Edward is calling and what is going to happen next
Author's Response:
Thanks, hopefully today
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Lmao!!!!!!
Is he calling Bella???
Loved it!!!
Author's Response:
we'll see! LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Gah!! I am so glad you are over here with this story, I absolutely LOVE this story!!!
Cant wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved the girls letters to the guys. Bella's payback to Jasper was sweet. I wonder who Edward's phone call was to. It seemed Emmett noticed Edward said something about Bella being "His Bella" but just blew off is he going to press it more later on? Good chapter.
Author's Response:
HEHE we'll see
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
What did she put in those cookies? Funny!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL you'll see
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
The girls' letters were nice and gave the guys the chance to decide if they want to keep correspondence or not. I'm pretty sure both will, even if Jasper might be a bit upset, not just his stomach.
Emmett heard what Edward said aout his sister but didn't react much, will he say something to either?
And that phonecall.... Will it have something to do with his birthday and Bella?;)
Author's Response:
we'll see......
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Another awesome chapter. Hopefully both Alice and Rose's next letters will be longer. I could just imagine Jasper eating all the cookies............what has Bella put in them, could it be laxative's!!! Can't wait for chapter 8 :)
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon! LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks! More tomorrow
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it.
Oh dear, Em is a little suspisious.
Loved the payback.
Looking forward to phonecall, I presume it is to Bella, but not sure, looking forward to finding out.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
LOL We will see next ch who he calls
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Very good.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Dying to kinow what was in Jasper's cookies lol. Loved the nod to Fifty Shades!! I am part of the grammar police and that story annoyed me no end! This one, on the other hand, gets better and better :)
Author's Response:
*blushes* WOW thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG that was great it good to hear from Rose and Alice :D even a chapter with little ExB is fabulous xxx
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Marvolous
Author's Response:
*giggles* thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow talk about sexual undercurrent, I have high hopes for B & E in future chapters, this is brilliant, keep up the good work :D
Author's Response:
WOW thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love those ladies they are sooo good I hope Jasper has learnt not to mess with them
hugs Babe xxx
Author's Response:
doubtful LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I bet he is going to call Bella.
Author's Response:
We'll see next ch!