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Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 149: Bella

All of that was just beautiful!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 150: Edward

Hot lemon

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 149: Bella

I suspect there will be lemons for a few of the upcoming days, for them anyways!

Reviewer: cloudiekp Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 149: Bella

I know I'm probably supposed to focus my energy on the lemony goodness but, I'm not going to lie, I got a little misty eyed when Edward recounted that memory of his father.  So sweet!

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 147: Bella

fuck i am sitting by a pool on holidy with tears rolling down my face and i have another chapter to go yet . kisses from sunny cyprus x

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

I CAN'T WAIT!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 147: Bella

I love it! * sniffling* :)

Reviewer: Fraulein Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

So glad to see that Sarge made it home safe and sound.  Looking forward to seeing how you tie up a few of the loose ends! Thanks for sharing such a touching, enjoyable story.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

You better not stop now!!! Sarge is home!!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 147: Bella

mwah!!! Love it

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

i absolutely LOVE this story! i am gonna miss it so bad! but...please do continue ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

:-) :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 147: Bella

Oh Oh Oh

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

HE'S HOME!!!! So freaking excited! Can't wait for tomorrow! I also can't wait until Edward meets Charlie....and Jake!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

yay!!!!!  he's home, they are all home......yippee!!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

Awwww....  Loved it!

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

this would have been a parfect day for a four chapter bonus ...just sayen....but he is home now finally ...i wonder what will happen next unpacking boxes and seeing what evil that tanya has shipped to him or sex against the door

Reviewer: kimmysunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

I just want to say thank you to the both of you so much. This fic is pretty personal to me since I met my boyfriend online and now he is in Afghanistan. It gives me the hope that he comes home safely.

So thank a bunch ladies!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

Awwww... so sweet... needed kleenexes!

 

Catherine

Reviewer: Isabellamae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

yeah so glad to have Sarge home.

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

Your darn right pitchforks and torches!!! :)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

I cant wait for more

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella

thanks for the recipe :) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

Home.. so good together now we start learning to live with each other.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

Sweet reunion

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 147: Bella

finally.. tearing up here.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 147: Bella

Woo hoo they're home!!!!

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 148: Edward

Can't wait to read more.  This story is just good and makes me happy.  Keep up the great workk ladies :)

Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Oh wow I cant wait until he gets to meet Charlie. :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

I'm all caught up! I can't believe he is not there yet. But it has all been great!
Now I have about 10 more stories I am behind on.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 145: Bella

I Love that he wants a kitten!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Fabulous I just love this story. keep up the good work and writing

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

SO AMAZING!  YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

Oooey Gooey Edward! Tum!!!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

5 days! I can't wait for the homecoming, but part of me dreads it too. I am so worried that Tanya is gonna try something...What needs to be brought full circle??? Can't wait for tomorrow!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Oooooo love it soo close

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 139: Bella

The elevator

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 138: Edward

He is so sweet

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Getting excited!!!

 

Catherine

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 145: Bella

SO amazing :)  SO happy Christopher's mom wants to get better :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Love ourguys. Em is such a goof. Oh lord. Skankya packed a box for him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 145: Bella

Aww for kitten stuff

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Tanya well that is a sore subject.

 

Count down and unpacking!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 145: Bella

Count down.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Ok i love it but cull circle sounds lime its almost over and that i dont like...unless of course u 2 write another story right away!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 146: Edward

Oh! I'm so excited!!  I hope we get a glimpse of them married with children or at least to the birth of one!!! :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 135: Bella

He is so responsible.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 134: Edward

Better than Tampa!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 132: Edward

!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 131: Bella

He is going to lose his stuff! Literally :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 130: Edward

Down to 15. Maybe I will be caught up by the weekend!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

Great chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

Poor edward.  Em would test the patience of the Pope.   still loving hte emails

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 143: Bella

Glad she and the girls got out..  Poor sleepy edward.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

awww  only 2 more weeks to the start of forever.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

yummy chocolate and shower time

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Shamwow indeed.  OOOH  naughty elevator action.   Love the window.  YOu get a lemon for that one

lemon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 139: Bella

awww for the little old lady.  Poor Thomas.  lol

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 125: Bella

Only about 22 behind now

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Bad pick up line Reply:
One asshole in my pants is enough!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

I cant wait till hes home

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

Go Charlie!!!!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 138: Edward

Such a nice day. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

Oh wow, so amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 143: Bella

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  A Walk to Remember is also one of my favorite sad movies/books too :)

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

Great chapters ladies. I'm so glad that they will be back together soon. C-ya tomorrow!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

By the tome o get caught up they will be together again :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 114: Edward

I have been away so very far behind. Now you aregetting close to my home! I work in Dunedin and live in IRB

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

I can't wait for the guys to get home!!  Sounds like Sarge is counting the seconds!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

I'm ready for you to be home too Sarge.  Emmett is like the bad child in their group.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

SAYING GOOD BYE IS SO, SO HARD

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

Oh wow, SO amazing :)  I really loved it!  SO happy they're not separating again afte rthis :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

GAH!  That was amazing!  Loved it!  So, Edward was a Junior when 9/11 happened...how old was Bella, or better yet, how is she "now" (when the story takes place)?



Author's Response:

She was a junior, too. They are 25 turning 26 in the story. :) We mentioned that in an early author's note. :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

I love this! I can not wait until tomorrow! I am addicted! :)

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

Thank you for not making us suffer with this goodbye.  But each one is rough.  Bella cannot complain about her birthday because it has been perfect.  Until tomorrow.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

Last time!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

lol

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

I thank you very much! ;)

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

Aww! Thanks for the updates. Great chapters. 

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

glad ths is the last time!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

oh dang! *out of breath*!

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

Ummm chocolate and Edward Chocward yum x

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

That was sweet and not to hard to take since it is only two and half weeks!!  I know you probably already discussed this but I hope we get to see them at home and what their life is like together.

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

That was so sweet on many different levels!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

I'm glad that I got the tissue warning. I teared up a bit there. I love his gift...C-ya tomorrow!

Reviewer: jazzyjaz134 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:56 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Just started reading this story and can I say AMAZING !!!! Will we be expecting for Edward to pop the question soon ? And maybe a baby Edward in the future ? 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

SO AMAZING :D  That picture was AMAZING...I wish I had followed directions when it came to ShamWows...oops.

Reviewer: dana1644 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Ummmmm, thanks for the extra Shamwow! Fans self..... What kind of ASS submits an annonomous review and says this story is boring? YO>>> ASSHOLE, Yeah, You..... If you don't like the story MOVE ALONG! No One is twisting your arm to read this story. The rest of us enjoy it and love this little community. Nuf said... delete that shit Ladies! Now that I have that off my chest, back to the pic porn on FB! Love you ladies

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Very hot

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Yhea... got a couple of them? Dang that was hot!!!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Thanks for the ShamWow...because WOW!! That was HOTT!! C-ya tomorrow...Should I have a tissue ready?

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Wow!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 139: Bella

How sweet!  I think a lemon is coming! :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Hot chapter!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

Where are the shammy's? Damn good stuff. Looking forward to more!!

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 139: Bella

OH WOW, SO amazing!  Loved every bit :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 138: Edward

I am still loving this!! :)

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 138: Edward

Well yeah it's a featured story!!! It should be the top one!!! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 138: Edward

So awesome!  I love these two :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 137: Bella

OH SNAP!  YEAH!!

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