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Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 59

Poor Bree. Breaks my heart to see how she is being treated. It has to be even harder on her being pregnant. I can't imagine. Thankfully Jasper is able to give her some peace. Alice being Edward's sister is out of the bag. Think it's going to take some time to process that. Thanks for the update and congrats on the book. Looking forward to reading my copy!

Reviewer: Trinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 59

Congratulation!

i just bought your book on Amazon. I had to since I have been enjoying your stories for free for months :)

Thanks for giving me well written, juicy stories to escape into. MUCH appreciated!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 59

wow....well i'm glad edward's finally learned the truth about his sister. and poor bree....at least Jasper's looking out for her as much as he can. 

Reviewer: brighteyes22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 59

Thanks for another great chapter! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

I suspected as much. How will they get to safety?

Reviewer: jylway Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 59

Yet another amazing chapter. It made me cry too!! And I will definitely support you by buying a book! Congratulations! You definitely earned it!!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 59

Great chapter

Reviewer: mrscullenxo5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 59

this chapter was so beautiful at the end; im glad that edward finally knows about his sister :)

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 59

Love hearing from Jasper.  And I KNEW IT!!!   (about Alice). :)   I got my copy of Midnight Caller and LOVING it so far!!

 

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 59

I will do that! Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 59

I knew it. Alice is Mary Alice Edward's long lost sister; saw that coming.

I feel really bad for Bree, she got caught in a world she couldn't get out of. Sounds like she's going to kill her self once she's made sure her baby & sister are safe.

I would not be surprised if Bella is caring multiples. If she is hopefully its no more than three & more than that is just ridicules.

When will they get off the island? How? I hope it's before Bella gives birth or is too big to run. Gotta say, I don't think Bree gets out of this world alive. Sad but that's the feeling I get. 



Author's Response:

you are very good with ur gut instincts. And I assure you, Bella is no octomom (or anything close)  I dont wanna give too much away, but it's soon!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 59

Finally. Now give me some hope for getting off the island. Great job. 



Author's Response:

ironic you mention hope.... tanya is making a scarf with the word hope embroidered on it. :)

Reviewer: pcpieterse Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 59

Love it

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 59

I think Bree was better off where she was at least she gets a break at night, finally Edward and Alice are reunited as brother and sister (I knew they were related). I would love to order your book but unfortunately it's not available in Australia (which is where I am).



Author's Response:

it is available in australia... several people have ordered it in print and of course ebook is available everywhere. if you search Midnight Caller NJ Cole on amazon or nook you should have no trouble finding it :)   If you want the paperback, go to createspace.com and search the same thing, or click the links from the chapter.  or the ones below should work.

 

http://www.amazon.com/Midnight-Caller-ebook/dp/B00CZIOIUI/ref=pd_rhf_se_p_img_2_49BF

kindle



http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/midnight-caller-NJ-Cole?store=allproducts&keyword=midnight+caller+NJ+Cole


nook




https://www.createspace.com/4269934

createspace paperback

Reviewer: Quisha1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 59

I freaking knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish he wouold have found a phone.... Even though this is good news I still can't wait till they find a way off the island.... I hope Bree gets the help she needs

Reviewer: puddinglumps Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 59

This is one of my favorite Jaspers ever! I love him for everything he tries to do to make life better for the people there. Great chapter!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 59

I loved this chapter. I hope that they can keep Bree safe while I that nut house. I wonder how Alice will take the news that she is Edward's kidnapped sister?  Can't wait for more. 

Congratulations on publishing. I'll head over and buy one right now. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 59

:)

Reviewer: Fiona Fresh Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 59

oooh I am going to buy midnight caller as soon as my budget allows! loved this update!!!!

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 59

Can't wait to read Midnight Caller!!! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 59

Poor Bree, she's in a living hell. Thank goodness Jasper is trying to ease some of her suffering.

Finally, they realized Alice is Edward's little sister. Looking forward to when they talk to her about it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 59

I knew it.  Great chapter. Glad to see some happy news. Hopefully that will get them more fired up to get off the island.  But I have a feeling there is more evil to come. 

 

Also, enjoying my e-book MC.

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh okay cool! I loved your twilight version so i know ill love this too. Thanks for clearing it up tho..that was so nice of you:)

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 59

I knew it! !!! :-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 59

I knew Alice was Edward's Mary Alice. I can not believe that Edward has not pieced it together before now. I am glad that Jasper could help Bree. 

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 59

Yay! Edward finally got his sister!! Please can we have bonus chapter now?

Author's Response:

oh! the bonus chapter is for a review of Midnight Caller. I'm sorry I wasn't clear. If you email me nocturnalem@gmail.com, I can give you the bonus chapter. It won't make much sense without the book.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 59

Already bought thebook. Haven't had time to read yet. Yeah' Edward knows about Alice. Now to find a way out.

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 59

MY BIRTHDAY IS MARCH 10th. (Random fact)

I saw this coming but I started to think it would never happen. I wonder if Edward is still cool that Jasper has been banging Alice for awhile now... Awkward.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 59

I was just thinking about this story today and longing for an update. I have been hoping all along that Alice was Edward's sister. I am glad it finally came to light.

Good luck with the book!

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 59

Another great chapter Noc! MC will do great! Can't wait for my copy!!! Dana

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 59

I, literally, dropped EVERYTHING I was doing & read this chapter as soon as I got my alert!!!!  And, wow, am I glad I did!!!  Serious happy tears right now!  I'm so glad that they have each other now.  It will be interesting to see how Alice reacts to the news.  I've had my suspicions all along, but you wrote the reveal in a way I never imagined.  It was great!  Thanks for the update!  That your brain can think about or process anything but MC right now, blows my mind.  But, the greedy reader that I am is very grateful for your amazing mind! :)

Reviewer: too_cute_24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 59

Love this chapter so much! I'm so glad everyone is stepping up to take care of Bree and try to protect her from those monsters. And I'm glad they finally know who Alice is! 

Great job! 

Oh, and Midnight Caller is Amazing! The changes you made to it were absolutely INCREDIBLE!! Congratulations on publishing your first book! (((HUGS)))

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 59

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Quisha1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 58

Wow, poor Bree

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 58

Bree has a sad story :(  poor young girl.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 58

Just When you think there aren't mire sick people in the world...

This is one of my favorite stories. I love the shock factor of it and usually read it holding my jaw up from the floor. But that's what I love about it.  Thank you!!

I'm looking forward to next week when the book comes out, will definitely be purchasing that Jem.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 58

I kinda of thought Bella would be pregnant with multiples. I think they should enlighten her to the fact though instead of keeping her in the dark about it. Edward needs to stop being so negative about the Bella being pregnant. He and Bella need to communicate better.

Poor Bree. She's had a difficult life. Royce needs to rot in hell, as well as the Peter and Charlotte. I can only imagine her life is gonna get more difficult being on the island with James and Aro around.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 58

Another outstanding chapter!  As hard as this story is to read sometimes, you never fail to leave me begging for more.  I wanted to finish this one before I jumped into your doc about Bree, but I'm heading there next.  

Poor Bree!  What an awful life she's lived.  Our E&B really need to work on that communication.  It was good to see that Edward is falling in love with his baby(ies).  

Thank you for the update! :)

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 58

WOW.   This story gets more and more fucked up.   lol   It amazes me what your mind can conjur up, Noc!  ;)

 

 



Author's Response:

How are you still surprised?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 58

OMGosh!!!!! I never thought about multiples!!!!!!!!!! I hope everything turns out ok for Bella and the babies. 

Poor Bree. Thanks for sharing her story with us. Hope things goes well for her and her baby. 

Reviewer: pcpieterse Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 58

Love it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 58

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 58

Excited to see an alert in my inbox. Bella having multiples? I guess that ups the chance of getting a boy. They are going to have their hands full once they get off that island. So sad to learn more about Bree's background. I do hope she makes it off too. I have a feeling James is going to be requesting her again. Thanks for the update!!!

Congrats on Midnight Caller. Can't wait to read it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 58

:)

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 58

Congratulations on Midnight Caller. I hope Bree can get off the island before her baby is born, as well as the others.

Reviewer: jylway Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 58

:) wow!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thanks for the new chapter. This is such a sad, yet compelling story.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thanks

Reviewer: erin81swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 51

Please say that you are going to update soon.  You spoiled us with a few quick updates and now tough to wait.  



Author's Response:

im so sorry. my book release is taking up all my time. I will get it out asap. If u really want it, message me on fb and i'll give u the unedited chapter

Reviewer: erin81swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 56

Please say that you are going to update soon.  You spoiled us with a few quick updates and now tough to wait.  

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 57

Um, yay?

Talk about bitter sweet. She did it, she got pregnant but that doesn't necessarily mean the trials are over. I really hope they can get off the island before the baby is born. I wonder if its a boy or a girl. 

That was funny though, first Jasper walks in then Tanya XD

Also, how is everyone back on the mainland? Edward's family, Bella's family & Emmet & Rosalie as well?  I do wonder when this nightmare, that is the lifestyle of the island, going to end?  

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 57

please say they are gonna get off this island soon.....

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 57

So, she's pregnant...this is a good thing for her, right???  Your lemons=need for new panties!  :) 

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 57

Seems like she is pregnant. Hmm how much closer at the 4 to getting off the island and saved. I hope soon. 



Author's Response:

4?   who would u think would want off the island? Who is staying behind?

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 56

Jamesis playing mind tricks and Edward is falling into them, he has to calm down or James will win. Good thing Bella is taking it as a joke, that will help Edward. Maybe between them they can find a way to get back in the same way ;)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 55

They are so in love with each other, lets hope they can keep it a secret and Jasper finds a way to get them off the island.

Reviewer: fairyfairy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it! glad you are back to writing

Reviewer: jcullen17 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 57

What a cliffie! Urghhh..Now I am more than excited for the next chapter. I really love this chap, full of E/B love..I hope that they would be able to leave the island before the baby is born or before Bella's tummy gets bigger. I'm kind of worried for them. Thanks for this amazing chap! keep up the good work! :)



Author's Response:

awwww thanks!   I love this chapter too!  

Reviewer: pcpieterse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 57

Awesome

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 57

Best opening ever!! Loved how she woke him up. So good! Then you had to top it off with some oral scenes. Yummy! Hope she gets more comfortable talking to Edward. She needs to understand how different she is from everyone else he has been with. Oh and she needs to stop comparing herself to Rose. Oh and yay she is preggers? Not sure if I should be happy or not. Mixed feels as I'm sure they are having. Thanks for the update!

I forgot to mention last chapter but I love the images and gifs. Thanks! 

Reviewer: Muddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 57

Another good chapter! OMG I can't believe Tanya talk about foot in mouth in more than one way! She knows how Bella and Edward feel about each other then starts talking to Bella about how much Edward loves blow jobs like she is going to want to think about Tanya doing that with him!! That came across as so insensitive. Ok good now she's pregnant so that gives them more space to breathe doesn't it? Or will James now demand he be allowed to fuck Bella? Now they have to plan how they are getting off that bloody island I don't even want to think about what will happen to the baby if its born there :-(  I have very violent thoughts about what I would do to those men before I left that island. Thing is you don't know how you would react in an extremely stressful and strange situation but while I am comfortable and safe in my home typing this I am thinking there would be a lot of blood and appendages hanging by a thread at my hands and slow painful deaths!! loL!! You said I could pm you to get a spoiler on the conception date and I would love to pm you Noc but that function is disabled on here - something about abused facility which is sad for the people that wouldn't abuse it. So how can I do that?



Author's Response:

You search nocturnalemi@gmail.com on facebook. Or you search Nocturnal Emissions Wreck Room.... then u message me, and I message u.  And thanks sooo much for the chapter.



Author's Response:

You search nocturnalemi@gmail.com on facebook. Or you search Nocturnal Emissions Wreck Room.... then u message me, and I message u.  And thanks sooo much for the review!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 56

I think this is a record for the number of sweet, mostly drama free chapters. Nice for them to get a little break but I'm sure you have something up your sleeve. The shower scene was really hot. They can't get enough of each other. I like seeing Bella get more confident in her sexual encounters with Edward. I'd be really insecure at Edward's previous experience. He is doing a great job of encouraging her and expressing how much he loves her. Her riding him at the end was so sexy. So nervous about James. He is trying to weezle his way into everything. Hope Edward doesn't take the bait. James is obviously trying to get a reaction out of him. Anyway. Fantastic chapter. 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 55

Sorry. I've been a little behind on read but I'll be caught up today. Such a beautifully hot chapter. My favorite part was Jasper's lines at the end. So true. Thanks!

Reviewer: Jorja fox Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

i havereally been enjoying this story up to a point  I'm about ready to see them rescued  i think i was ready about ten chapters ago.  the rape degradation and abuse is just getting old for me. I need the happy ending. good story though.



Author's Response:

It's hard to write a happy medium for everyone. I get far more requests for more abuse than I do for a HEA.... but i think that is because HEA stories are a dime a dozen. I should know, most of mine are just that. There are few that have this. With that said, the rescue is coming, relatively soon, because once again, the next few chapters have huge time jumps in them.

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

forgot about the fertility drugs

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 57

mmmmm oh those gifs were an awesome addition to the story.   wow.   I'm a bit concerned.   Just how will Aro treat this poor little baby?   And why the hell is Tanya walking in on their bedroom?  Come on already!!  lol

 

Reviewer: eyelubtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 57

Holy Moly!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 57

Gah, that was AMAZING :D

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 57

seriously is there any hint of hope for them to get off the island?  Plus, when are they going to discover the secret of alice?  Great two chapters.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thanks for the chapter. It's great that it came so soon. Can't wait to see what he'll comes next if/when she's pregnant. Will Edward be expected to "share" her now. Will James try and rape her? Aro probably wouldn't see it as a bad now that she's pregnant.  He'd figure that Edward just needs to get use to other men using her.

When will we see some type rescue happening?

Thanks for sharing your amaizing  talent!!!

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 57

Hey I'm on time. What a dream!
These two get caught in the act a lot. :-)

Reviewer: jmullinax Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 57

Please don't take a month again to update that was a great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardsKitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 57

I am so nervous that James has substituted his own semen for Edwards. Should I be anxious about this?  Huh, huh?!

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 57

lucky they are so fertile



Author's Response:

not really that lucky... she is on fertility drugs and they are having sex like every 6 hours. lol

Reviewer: RowanBronze Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 57

Baby on the way!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 57

thank you for the update..please get them off that island

Reviewer: erin81swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 57

Yay, I'm glad that she is pregnant but now they need to focus on getting off the island.  Plus Alice, Jasper and  Tanya.  They can't leave them behind.  And please let them finally be honest that they each have loved the other for a long time now.  ps I love that you are updating more often.  great job. 

Reviewer: noomom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! And as others have said, we've got to get them off the island before the baby comes!!

Reviewer: Bec Rose Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 57

I cannot believe that I let this one go, that I didn't read this before you posted it. You know I'm pouting right? It was a hot chapter as always and I miss sitting in the doc with you while you write. Maybe a little on the weekend if we both get the chance. 

Love u

 



Author's Response:

I love u too!

Reviewer: tammy0208 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 57

I'm scared to death of what's gonna happen to this baby. Pleas let them be rescued before she has it.  Aro is one very sick individual.  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 57

Finally the heir is conceived. I suspected Bella might have been cause she was getting so emtional over not being able to give Edward head. Amazing that they got their routine down.

I'm curious though, James hasn't been inserting any of his jizz instead of Edward's stockpile in Bella has he? Maybe thinking he could outsmart Aro and Edward by having a chance to father Aro's heir. As twisted as James is I could see him doing that.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 57

Love it

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 57

well it was jyst a matter of time theyve been at it for a while

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 57

This should speed things up now right? I mean now they have to kick it into high gear to get off the island before bella gives birth or shes gonna be too big to run! Ah the suspense ...its a good burn. Lol! Keep it up!

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 57

Well it looks like Bella is pregnant... I hope that they get off this horrible island before worse things happen which I fear will be happening soon. I love the chapter and hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 57

Now they really need to start thinking of a way off that island it would be to hard with a baby not to mention bringing a child into Aro's life.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 57

Well, Bella and Edward finally talked and did not let something come between them. Maybe they are learning!!!! lol Glad they had fun giving each other oral sex. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 57

I am glad there will be no help from anyone else in getting Bella pregnant. But I worry about James, there will be nothing to stop him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 57

:)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 57

wow! well now bella's pregnant....what will happen? it's sure looking as though aro's getting what he wants so something has to upset the applecart. loved the update hun xx

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 57

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Fiona Fresh Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 56

love the update!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 56

More romance :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 55

That's 3 romantic chapters for this story I think. Wow

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a quick read

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 53

Hi Noc :-)
I am not sure how she managed to block most of that out but I am glad she did!

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 56

too bad Aro wasn't awake.... he'd be so happy to hear the screams.

Reviewer: Muddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 56

Second attempt at submitting my review so sorry if this has come through twice. Good chapter! Got me thinking that it's good that Bella and Edward are still able to separate everything that happens to them there to their own personal intimate relationship with each other. I would imagine in reality most people would shut down sexually, or maybe it would heighten your urges because you crave a more normal (to them) experience so they don't forget how sex should feel to them, I dunno.  My paranoid mind was praying that James wasn't injecting his own fluids into Bella to try and get her pregnant with his baby instead of Edward's as some sort of revenge. I really hope not and that it was Edward's swimmers!! :-/ I am glad the breast feeding/conception thing was mentioned as I rememeber being told after having my two babies not to rely on breastfeeding as birth control as it just isn't reliable, but I had heard it made it harder to conceive as it can stop ovulation.  Anyway, starting to get anxious for them to find out she's pregnant so she's out of danger and can hopefully think about escaping that place.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the super review! I'm not so sure James isn't injecting his own swimmers, and he has thought of it. But here is why he wouldn't. If he were to get Bella pregnant, it would piss Aro off to no end. And it would do him little good. He is much better to let Bella carry Aro heir, make sure it is born a boy, then kill Edward in an "accident" and take Bella and the child as his own and wait for Aro to pass. PM me for a spoiler as to the date of conception.

Reviewer: intotherain72315 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 56

I am loving this story. I never read incomplete fics,but I came across yours and got sucked in then it was too late. I really appreciate how unique you're writing and vision for this story. I just cant quit u lasigh

Author's Response:

I love your review. I won't abandon you. I'm constantly working on this fic, and there is a lot of plot movement coming up in the next few chapters :)

Reviewer: Bec Rose Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 56

Ok, so I loved that chapter. and the sex in the shower, ugh!!! So u know I always love it, and I had read it, but not all the way through before you posted it. I'll always read it and always love u



Author's Response:

that better be a promise. I'll hold u to it. I love u too. and you beter always think of me in the shower! 

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