Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:36 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
Very interesting. I just hope they do not get caught.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 10:48 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
aww charles was so kind to her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 10:02 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 5:58 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
It's interesting to see that no matter what has been done and said to or about Elizabeth, Charlie continues addressing her with respect.
Looking forward to to the next IR update.
Author's Response:
because he is a real man. And I'm writing the next IR update. It's chaos in the hospital. Can u imagine Esme and Renee's reaction? How much everyone is more concerned about each other than themselves.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 2:18 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
WOW...That IS wet! lol
Date: 06 Jul 2013 11:05 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jul 2013 9:08 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
This is the wrong story????
Author's Response:
this is the back story of IR. While you wait for me to write the next chapter of IR. People were asking about Charlie's mom on the island. That's all this is. I said I'd put out the next chapter of IR in two weeks. This should keep you entertained until then :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:41 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
will you be updating soon, you can't leave the story with a cliffhanger like that...
Author's Response:
updating which, the second elizabeth or Involuntary Rapture. I think I left IR at a pretty safe place. They are all together and really, really off the island.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:42 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
So intriguing, love this back story!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
Oh my gosh!!! I would have died if I were "Elizabeth". Can't wait to read the rest of her story.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:00 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
thank you for the updates......I'm so happy yhey arfe finally off that Island......There is a lot of explaining to do..........I'm sorry Emment was always the one to answer the phone..........I can't wait for Esme to see her daughter...Bella and Edward need to get married now that they are safe...........I don't know who should raise Bree, maybe Alice and Jasper..GREAT STORY!!! A little rough in the begining, but I'm happy I stuck in there..well done!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 6:49 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
I despise Aro and his father even more now. The back-story of Elizabeth the Second is fillling in more of the depth of craziness the Masen's are.
It seems meeting Charles is the beginning of a light at the end of a tunnel for her. Looking forward to more.
Date: 05 Jul 2013 4:09 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
Aro was always an ass.
Date: 05 Jul 2013 2:10 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
Um, now I'm getting way confused. I'm thinking some very interesting things. Not sure how to take it.
Author's Response:
keep reading :)
Date: 05 Jul 2013 1:50 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
Looking forward to more
Date: 05 Jul 2013 6:57 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
aww poor girl :( what a nightmare of an existence.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 62
OMG! wow a lot of action in this chapter! so happy they're all safe. wow...emmett has a lot to digest with what's happened, and the rest of them have to learn how to live a normal life again. Great update :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 6:04 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
A very nice surprise to have some back-story. Its terrible that she had to sacrifice herself so much for Sebastian to be treated with kindness.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 05 Jul 2013 4:38 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Jul 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 62
Wow. Thank you. I am so happy they all made it. There is so much to explain. Now please don't keep Edward and Bella apart to long. Also I am very worried about James. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 11:52 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
Im never unhappy when there is MORE story!
Date: 04 Jul 2013 11:01 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
Thanks
Date: 04 Jul 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 62
I was so worried about them going back to the island. I can't wait for more ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 62
SO happy that they are safe and with family and friends again.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 7:20 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
Poor her, I wonder what her real name is; does she remember?
I am glad that she had a friend on that miserable island.
Author's Response:
yes, she remembers, but dares not speak it. And that "friend" is gonna causeher a bit of trouble :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 62
YES!!!!!!!! THEY'RE SAFE!!!!!!!!! ARO IS DEAD!!!!!!!! I'm so happy that they're finally safe. I got so sad when they were taken back to the island & tortured. I'm glad they weren't even there a day though. Oh boy when the story comes out of what happened at that island there will be tiers, there will be wails, shaking & vomit galore.
Please post more of this story, I'm glad they are all safe but what happens next. Please post!!!!!!!Date: 04 Jul 2013 6:39 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
Beautiful pictures!
Date: 04 Jul 2013 3:09 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
Wow, thanks for filling in the blanks. This is a much appreciated surprise.
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:58 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
I love the start of this back story.
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:17 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
Thanks for giving us Bella's grandmother story. I wondered how she got into all this craziness.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:25 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
love this story
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 62
An action packed chapter that was very well written. Even though you kept changing POV the story flowed, it needed different POVs for the whole picture to emerge.
Excellent.
Author's Response:
thanks, I considered writing it as Bree's POV watching from heaven, just so you could see it all at the same time, but I wanted the frantic raw emotions.
Date: 04 Jul 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow!!! You weren't kidding. This is dark
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 62
This chapter is amazing. I am super glad that Edward, Bella, and the rest of them got off the island. I was crying while reading. You're so great Noc! You're one of the best fic writers I've ever read. I just hope that the update will be earlier (still hoping it will be). :)
Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 62
That was fantastic, loved this story all the way through. Thank you for sharing it...can't wait for the next chapter...x
Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 62
Can't wait for next chapter love it
Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 62
Omfg that was such a great chapter!!! Please update soon
Date: 04 Jul 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 62
Squeeeeeee love love love it! I Know you are on a little break but I am so looking forward to seeing how it all works out!
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
yeah, I don't much like Edward fucking Tanya, but I understand that he was imagining her to be Bella, so that mitigates it somewhat.....i know it's your story and you can do what you want....and boy, do you! i can't wait for all the lecherous pervs to get what's coming to them....
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 62
had me on the edge of ma seat this chapter
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
HOLY!!! This is the funniest shit EVER!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 62
I can't even begin to explain how much I love this chapter, i mean, not the bad parts... but you know everything else, I have not appreciate you as an author as much as I did when i read this chapter, i love you, i want to marry you and have your babies... well not really but you get the picture, you are amazing, you had me all worried and on edge all this chapter, i swear i was hyperventilating and all... I was like "would they make it or not? and why the hell is Emmett so damn annoying? I mean its all his fault..." anyway, you don't want to know what i was thinking, but yeah, point is this was an amazing chapter and I can't wait until the next one. I think that is all
*squishy hug*
Much love and Respect
Xoxo
Mia
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 62
Amazing chapter! They Re all finally safe. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 62
i really hope my sporadic reviews and that i dont review every chapter doesn't upset you. i was finally able to read the last 5 chapters and i loved them. i definitely thought it was time for them to escape, though i really didn't think you'd write it yet, but im so glad you did!!! i also love that they got to save bree's baby and that bree got some closure when she died. im so glad that she got to be with her parents again and that she knew her baby would be cared for. i am curious who is going to end up with it after all is said and done at the hospital and checking everyone over. even though i dont like victoria, i pity her for loving someone who clearly would/could never love her. its one of the worst feelings ever. im so glad that they were saved, and i really liked the way you did it. even though i hate that the girls got tortured again, i loved that you didn't let them get away with it totally because it just wouldn't have be realistic for the story. i love that charlie, carlisle, emmett, edward, and jasper just went in there all guns ablazing... ha, literally. and im so glad that aro is dead (he died falling out the window right?) and i hope that all of the people still there died in the house fire, though i don't really expect you to let them off that easily. i kind of hope that james got away, goes to the us to find them, and is then caught and gets to be someone's prison bitch the rest of his life. i absolutely cannot wait for more!!! especially to make sure that everyone is okay and to find out how many babies bella is having. im sure there is going to be a lot of weird conversations happening at the hosptial once everyone is settled. im especially looking forward to how rosalie reacts to emmett's call, and then how all the boyfriend/girlfriend/wife/husband talks go with everyone being with each other's significant others. i hope its easy though, that bella and edward can easily convince people that they love each other, and its not just because of everything that happened at the island, that they loved each other before that. PLEASE UDPATE SOON!!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 62
I have been waiting for this scene for so lon! It was fantastic.I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 62
Awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 62
OME what a chapter!!!!! I don't think I took a breath the whole time! Glad Carlisle didn't have to kill his father even tho he deserved it, but not sure what that would have done to Carlisle. What can I say, you gotta love Emmett. Boy does he have a tale to hear. Hate being a pushy bitch, but I hope you write fast beacuse I don't think I can wait long to see what is next. James, Alec and the rest of the "society" are still out there...and there are 5 1/2 very buised and battered people to see to. Possibly the best chapter I have ever read on TWCS! Wow, what a chapter! XOXO, Cheri
Author's Response:
I'm sooo glad you liked it. That means a lot to me that you said that :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 62
Amazing! So action packed! I literally could not read fast enough!!! Had to read it a second time to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 62
Woah, I need a stiff drink after that chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 62
Outstanding!!! I so would have liked more retrobution though. I hope James somehow still gets his. Aro got off way, way too easy. I know I should be more sympathetic but...hell no.
It will be interesting to see how they all cope now. Poor Alice, I hope she's alright.
Thanks, wow it was fucking fantastic!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 62
holy crap, you wrote so much and it was so filled with everything!! i need more, and waiting will be torture. ah, i can't wait! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 62
O M G ! !! ! I am utterly speachless! :D
Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 62
I'm speechless! I'm ecstatic! I'm jumping up and down like a madwoman! Holy shit that was heartbreaking, angsty, unfreakingbelievable!!! I was laying down when I started the chapter, then I was gripping the iPad and almost hyperventilating at the end! I'm so glad it's over for them. I know emotionally they are all messed up and will be for a bit, but at least they are off that island of sick fucks! Now I hope Edward and Bella can get their shit together and realize that they love each other and it's not one sided...but is it going to be that easy? **looking up at you with puppy dog eyes** please say it will and Emmett won't cause too much of a problem.
Anyway, if you couldn't tell, I loved the chapter!!!! Please don't make me wait too long for the next one. **again, puppy dog eyes and my lip poked out for good measure**
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 62
WOW!!! What an event filled chapter! 4 characters died, Edward, Bella, Tanya, Bree, Alice and Jasper have all been rescued! James is on the lose, but I have a feeling his "just deserts" are coming very soon!
I can't wait to hear about your new book! Until next time!!! Dana
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 62
OH MY GOSH!! YES!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 62
OMFG!!! Best chapter thus far!!! You totally nailed it. Loved how you jumped from each of theirs POV's, giving the occurance of what was happening with each of them all at the same time.
I feel emotional that they were rescued, though a bit pissed at Emmett for withholding the information so long. Aro was a lot sicker than I thought. Eww!! Keeping his parents and dead sisters bodies. So glad the house of ill repute is destroyed.
I'm concerned James escaped, and will go after Bella again. Please don't let Edward pull away from Bella once their back home.
I'm excited for more.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 62
Best chapter EVER! I just loved it so much. I have been waiting months and months and months! for them to get off the island. and the death of Aro was completly perfect. One question...is James alive?
So much awesomeness in this chapter. Jasper saved Alice and Carlisle knows she is his daughter...how touching. i hope Emmett doesnt get between Edward and Bella, even though i know he has only the best of intentions. And Bree is off too, i hope Alice keeps her. Poor Tanya been through so much and i'm glad she is alive. And way to go Charlie, walking in like Rambo.
two weeks cant come soon enough! Great job!
-Roxy
Author's Response:
I don't want to spoil too much, but Edward feels very guilty about Bella. It's going to be a long road. Alice is a bit young to be a mother and she is going to have her own issues. She doesn't know what a cell phone is, let alone the internet. Do you have any idea the culture shock she's going to have? Tanya has a very very long road.
There will be a body count in the next chapter.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 62
WOW! WOW WOW! With the message that you left at the top of the chapter, I thought I was going to hate this chapter. But WOW there was so much in this chapter, that I have read it 3 times to make sure i got everything......great chapter and can't wait to see what happens next....
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 62
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
im so happy they got to safety but all hell is gonna break loose when they explain everything AAAAHHHH cant wait for the net chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 62
O.M.G. What a chapter!!!! I was litterally sitting on the edge of my seat reading this!!
They're free! THEY"RE FREE!!!!!
Fucking Aro is DEAD!!! YES!!!! James has to die too.
I cannot wait till the next update!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 62
Whoa, what a fucking chapter!! Two weeks to wait, I hope that its not the last chapter and there is still much more to come...
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 62
Omg what an amazing full on chapter, all sorts going on from all the different points of view. Please let Edward and Bella get everything straightened out quickly I couldn't bear for them to be apart. So back to real life and finding out what's happened to everyone and they need to take care of James, god how he needs to get what he deserves.So yes fuel fuel fuel.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 62
OMG it's all happening in this chapter, one of the best chapters so far.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 62
NO,no,no,no,no.... what the fuck "she belongs to him" ? Men are stupid even in fanfiction. My fear dear writers right now, after all this shit and when i was looking forward some free drama bonding between E/B you are so going sending us in another rollarcost.
My hope.... Some lemon juice and mama and dady bonding, because Bella will feel life shit if Edward gone pull from her. I've been reading this story with one eye open and one close, but always loving the way you write the story, but now.. I don't know, i want to believe that my heart will be broken.... and can't forget Rosalie said her baby was Edward and Edward said to Bella he didn't had sex without condoms. What a potencial mess.
Faith is my only hope. But hell is your story so.... I must be patient and wait for an HEA, you are a HEA kind of girl, right? And a HEA kind of story, right?
love you
Luisa
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 62
Yay!! They're finally off that horrid Island! The question is how do adjust to the real world after that craziness?!?!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 62
OMG! Great chapter! Don't know if I can wait two weeks!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 62
Fuel...fuel...fuel....fuel...should I go on...
Date: 02 Jul 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 62
Noc,
Wow!! That was fucking awesome!!! I think they will still have to deal with James though. Charlie should have killed him, but maybe Bella or Edward will get the chance to kill him. So Laurent, Demetri, Aro and Victoria are all dead? I loved it. Thanks so much for writing. I can't wait for the next update and the teaser to your next book.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 62
Amazing! I loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 62
Omg!!! I almost stopped reading when they got busted! But I loved it! :) can't wait to see what happens when they get home and hopefully Bella will get some good medical care!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 62
Oh good heabens, I rrally hated yoi gor a fee minutrs Noc. Hope Edward tells Bella he loves her.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 62
Loooooovvvvvveeeee it omg finaly its about damm time the are save
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 62
On the edge of my seat. So much happened! Edward needs to stop being so negative. Like Bella would ever leave him even now that they are free. Can't wait to see how this all pans out. I guess Rose will be involved too. James is still alive right? I didn't see his death. So much was going on but I don't think I missed it. Hope you have something good planned for him.
Btw I don't think I could've gone back like the girls did. I'm glad they did since help was on the way. But if help wasn't coming, I wouldn't want to be there.
Thanks!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 62
Phfew...I feel like I just ran a marathon! That was action packed. Please tell me that Bella won't go back to Emmett.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 61
Wow. They made it! At least away from the island. I hope they can make it far enough away.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 62
About F-ing time. Jesus, Mary and Joseph I thought they would NEVER get off that damn island. Too bad Aro won't be facing earthly justice , though. Hopefully James will be.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 62
LOVE IT!!!!!!! I never thought about the boats having a tracking device on them. I guess Jasper and Edward did not think about it either. :) I am so glad that Emmett finally told Carlisle. Glad that they got to the girls in time. What happened to James???? In a way I hope he burned but then in a way I want him to suffere like the girls had to suffer from him. I want him tortured!!!!! Can't wait for you next update. Loved all the different POV's in this chapter.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 62
Holy Shit! Talk about a roller coaster ride! And we have to wait TWO weeks for an update?!?! I don't know if I can survive the suspense.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 62
Wow! I was really upset in the beginning of the chapter. I was so ready for them to get off that damn island, when they got caught, I didn't know if I could read any more. Thank you for getting us to this point. It looks like there is going to be lots of explaining to do to Emmett. Let's hope that Edward can get over his guilt and Bella can get over her insecurities long enough to realize that they belong together!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 62
Holy carp that was action packed. I can't believe you are going to make us wait two more weeks for an update GAAH. We need more please soon!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 62
Wow! So... Just... Wow!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 62
Noc, loved, loved, loved this chapter. Was so afraid when the girls got taken from Edward and Jasper though! Glad that Emmett told Carlisle about the phone call and everything clicked. So happy that Aro is dead (I hope) and hopefully James will be gone too! Looking forward to your next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 62
:) loved this chapter
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 62
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 62
Wow! What a chapter!! Loved it
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 62
OH Edward why did you say you violated her, there's gonna be a hell of a story to tell
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 62
YES!!!!!!! Oh thank you Jesus! At the beginning I was worried but thank god this ended well.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 62
They did it! They got away!
Man, Aro is just a sick fuck, as is James. I will have to go back and re read to remember everyone's ending place. I liked the escape/rescue.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 62
I just relaxed considerably. I've been reading this story ever since it was on FanFiction and I'm so glad everyone is safe... I really wish you would have let James go ahead and die though... Anyway, my favorite chapter so far. I'll be back in two weeks!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 62
OMG OMG OMG!!!!! They're finally off the island for good. I would feel better though if I knew that James was dead but he's probably one of the fucker running around the island. With him still alive, there is no telling what could happen. I just hope that they don't try to keep Bella and Edward apart thinking that Edward callously raped Bella.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 62
I'm so glad they were rescued. Crazy chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
you can have Jasper. I'll keep Edward.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad Bella confided in Edward about what James was doing to her. She needn't be ashamed, it is not her fault! I'm glad they have an ally in Jasper.