Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so glad he will come clean with Bella and I hope she will be understanding and not turn her back on him. He already talks to the children about her and show her picture to them and for them to call her "Ma" that is just the sweetest thing. Edward needs to let her meet them and his family. Has he started divorced proceedings with the skank crackheaded Tanya yet? Please update soon because you know I am a greedy Bitch and absolutely love your story!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
OH YEAH!!!!!! WHAT TO SAY ? WOW, HOT, I WANT AN EDWARD TOO!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
The beginning of the honesty has begun. Staring with her real name. His turn. I think he is 100% convinced that he can trust her and he will begin telling her his name, then his job, the about tanya, then the kids and what they have gone thru then his divorce. He needs to be very careful how he tells her about Tanya so that she don't hear the words married and shut down. She loves him and has been cheated on so she will be very suspicious when he tells her about Tanya. She has low self esteem and will have a thought that he's using her. Edward...tread carefully. LOVIN THIS STORY!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Aww he's sweet. I really hope they get into more about their lives and they move past secret meetings. Tanya better leave and I hope Bella becomes an amazing mother...but I'm getting ahead of myself. Please keep updating constantly it's as awesome as your writing=)
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please keep updating constantly it's as awesome as your writing=)
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Very sweet!!!! Edward has her calling him Masen now? He is getting closer to the truth at least. Wonder when they will let each other know their real names and when will Edward tell her about his "wife" and children? I am so glad you updated and can't wait till the next one!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
OH wow, that was AMAZING! I agree, that is how their first time should have been, but they are so amazing! I still loved their first time :)
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ahh i just strated this story today and I love all the chapters. Please keep updating constantly it's as awesome as your writing=)
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh sure. He is a mess. He keeps saying wife like he really has one. Nope on paper only. So best thing to do with that is get the papers done. Kill off the link to wife.
He smells her and is addicted already?? I am not sure if I buy that.. skeptic.
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Now she is bright. Leave and tell Jacob off. Don't sit there and wallow in the mess he created.
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
I don't know. He knows she is all of this and yet he is still hooked on a hooker with a coke habit. I don't see him as being very bright. If he loves her so, then there is no future for him and Bella...........ever.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
I await your next capitulo.Achei following story, I could not stop reading, then I am sorry to upgrade now.
I think the situation is complicated, Bella will suffer when they find out that Edward is married, has been betrayed, so I think it will suffer much.
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Lovin it, I feel sorry for those babies. I hope Bella reacts good to them. They need to be honest wth eachother!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
This story is really very sweet... Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella come together sans the smoke screens
Date: 28 Jan 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aw, that was amazing! I loved the interaction with Brooklyn! They sound like little angels!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, an Olderward AND a Daddyward! YAY! I love the names of the twins, by the way! Cannot wait to see how she reacts to the news...whenever that happens ;)
Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
What to say about Edward? I want one and I need one!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet, Sexy, Well endowed, and to top it all of a (swoon) loving father!!!!!!!!! Thank god the children look like him and his mom and not the crackheaded mommy dearest egg doner known as Tanya. I can't wait till they really talk and tell the truth. I hope you get more than 10 reviews. Love it!!!! The Greedy Bitch hopes you get to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
So in love with this story! I need more!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Edward come clean now!!! I have a feeling Bella would understand more than he could hope for. He is in love and feels the same way she does. Now honest needs to come from both of them. Thanks for the great story!!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am LOVING this story. I like short chapters but fast updates. Please continue, I'm looking forward to see where this is going to go!!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
OH wow...that was amazing! I am so happy they are staying together! I also loved the visual you provided ;) Very nice! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
You know what they say, "A picture is worth a thousand words!" Glad you liked it! There´s plenty more twists and turns coming, so hold on! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Off to the hotel!!! I am just loving this story and can't wait to see when they come clean with each other about everything. Please update soon!!! I am a greedy bitch.
Author's Response:
You´re in luck, I love greedy bitches! Lol! Glad you liked it! There´s plenty more twists and turns coming, so hold on! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
I want to joing the mile hight club with Edward and his massive peen!!!! Poor Bella hurt so good. (Lucky Bitch) Yes Bella will want more of Edward and I am sure vise versa.
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too, so I guess you´ll just have to get in line and wait your turn! Lol! Yeah, but it was well worth the pain! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just can't get over how she went through with it either dear Edward, but she did and I hope that you can confess at least enough to give her your real name... but something tells me that NOPE not gonna happen yet.... Tortured... so tortured
Oh, I hope you know I can't get this damn song out of my head....LMAO!
Author's Response:
Haha... Sorry you´re tortured. How about another update. Would that make it better? Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I´m so glad that you´re enjoying the story!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow first time on a airplane...well I'm wih her Mr Sexy would make one go bonkers and hey and reason we love FF right to dream....LOL
yes I would love a teaser of FTLOD I'll pm you from FanFic.....khans
Author's Response:
Yeah, isn´t that the best part about FF, I can write it just the way I want it to turn out! Who says dreams can´t come true! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! FYI... I pm´d the teaser to your ff.net acct. Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow...that was amazing! I really loved it! Do you have a specific size for Edward in mind, in inches? Dirty minds want to know ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! And in the name of perviness seeing is definitely better than believing! Lol! I guess dirty mindes do think alike!
What I imagine Edward´s cock to be like!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
holy shit and this is all just on a plane Before they even take off damn...your so right Krazi forget the panties....just sans panties... have a towel ready...LOL!!!
Author's Response:
Okay... I work myself up just writing all this steamy goodness! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
GAH, that was AMAZING! I really loved this! Just so you know, the PM feature is not activated on any account, they disabled this feature for some reason. If you are on twitter, follow @purpling08 (my account) and I will follow you back and then you can DM me and I will DM you with my email address. I am not sure if I am already following you or not. Anyway, cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Glad you´re still enjoying it! Hope you loved my response to your other review! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMFG!!! Amazing chapters! Can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response:
Glad you´re enjoying it! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yes, still here and loving it!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
I need a smoke and a big drink after that and a new pair of panies!!!!! Loving this Edward and Bella. This is going to get very interesting very fast. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love it!
Author's Response:
Well get out the Tequila while I upload the next chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
FYI... just forgo the panties! I won´t tell if you won´t!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
GAH! I really loved it! I love dirty-talking Edward! I wish I had an experience like that whenever I fly somewhere ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I´m glad you´re enjoying it! I tried to PM you a teaser for FtLoD, but you have your PM´s turned off!
Thanks for reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
OH YES!!!!!!!!! Fake names will come back on Edward I believe, maybe Bella will become friends with a certain girl named Alice and then she will find out Alice's loves name is Jasper Whitlock? Bella is going to get the big salami and I bet she will be very please and so will Edward. I know I am being greedy again but please update soon. I am so captivated by this story and can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh yea CHANGE of undies is a prerequisite for sitting next to Mr. strip-to-your-fucking-birthday-suit hot Guy!!! Oh Shit they are giving each other fake names oh hell I can see right now that this is gonna be getting way out of hand eventually! So good!
Author's Response:
Haha... glad you enjoyed that, but I suggest you get a towel and forgo the undies for the next couple of chapters! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Gah, that was amazing! I am not a fan of the fake names, but I know they will rectify this soon ;)
Author's Response:
I know, but, in thier defense, they really don´t know each other. And with Edward´s family ties and his children, he really can´t afford to just come clean just yet. And in Bella´s defense, she didn´t completely lie to him! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Gah, that was amazing :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yes, Yes I am here reading and reviewing as fast as I can honey!!!! OH Hell he is gonna have some happy time in the baffroom on the airplane...too funny, he though he wa imagining her!!! LOL
Author's Response:
Yeah, it´s definitely going to be a flight to remember! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
better get out a change of panties honey!!! its gonna be a wet ride to ChiTown!
Author's Response:
That probably would be a good idea! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
well that was more than a little interesting for a first meeting.. it makes my heart hurt thinking about Dear Sexy Edward with a limp ...um.. you know **whispers** cock... and nothing in over year.. Dear mercy.... you better say and meet you other half Buddy!!!!
Okay just getting off work and ready for the reading and the weekend... thanks again for the story! Hope all is well with you and the story gets lots of reviews!
Author's Response:
**whispers** cock! Too funny! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh Yes!!! Here and waiting for the next update like the greedy person I am. I love this story! I can see that perhaps Bella's drink gave her a bit of liquid courage? Poor Edward he seems to be having a hard time of it. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
You got it! I´m gonna update right now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! YAY for meeting!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
OH SNAP! :)
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Gah, Jacob is always on my shit list ;) I really dislike him most of the time! Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I´m pretty anit-Jake myself, although, he may have redeemed him in Breaking Dawn pt.1! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
OH GOSH! Poor Edward...divorce her soon! Found one little mistake here, that your beta missed, Tanya Cullen, the women that adorns all the society pages of Chicago with all of her charity work, book clubs, and garden meetings… yeah that wife. It should be "the woman", not "the women", women means more than one woman ;)
Author's Response:
Lol! I probably overlooked it during edits, but thanks for pointing it out. I´ve since changed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
OH wow...I loved it :) I cannot imagine, but Bella is strong!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
OH SNAP! That was amazing...cannot wait for these two to meet ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewin!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow can not even imagine the pain she went through... wow... but Yeah I love to hate on JB and Leah!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I´m pretty anit-Jake myself, although, he may have redeemed him in Breaking Dawn pt.1! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Drug addict; he must be trying to save her for I presume Children.... they must have little ones
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow thanks for 5 chapter today! This chapte just tore at my heart thinking of loosing a parent or loved one is...well....just not something to imagine..... well written...
Author's Response:
You´re very welcome! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well now so Tanya is his wife, so I take it Bella is who he is truly in love with then... This is going to be a wonderful ride I just know it. So Happy to know that another chapter of FTLOD is coming soon.... Lots of great writers out there, but you have a quite unique style all your own and it thoroughly draws me in..... :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It´s great to know that you enjoy my stories! Yes, unfortunatly, Tanya is the wife, but I hope that Bella will change all that! Strap on your seatbelt and let´s keep this party going! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think that I am also reading this story on fanfiction. Where the hell is Tanya?
Author's Response:
Hmm... I´ve already posted it there, so that´s possible. I take it as a good sign if it caught your attention on both sights! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am really ready to see where you are going to take this story....
Author's Response:
Glad you´re up for the challenge! It´s going to be a wild and krazi ride! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
yippeee!!! your back!!!! Now his sounds very good as anything you do does!!!! Laters Baby!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes... I am! I can´t wait to post the new chapters, I think you guys are going to like them! Thanks for giving this little nugget a try!
Krazi
xoxox
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is amazing :) I really loved it! I really cannot wait for the new chapter of "For the Love of Domination" too! :D
Author's Response:
I can´t wait to post the new chapters either, I think you guys are going to like them! Thanks for giving this little nugget a try!
Krazi
xoxox
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I want to know more........
Author's Response:
Wow... glad you like it so far! I promise to give you more now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start but not much to go on...I'd read more
Author's Response:
Glad you´re interested! Stay with me and I hope you enjoy the ride! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo