Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:08 AM Title: Collisions
I really like the story... are you going to continue it??
Author's Response:
Of course I'm continuing it. Right now chapter 14 is in the hands of my beta, and then Drinou, the author, has to read it and give me the green light to post it, and it can take her several days to come back to me with it. But this coming week I will be working on chapter 15 even though chapter 14 is not back to me yet. Also, I'm still mourning the death of my other beta Just4ALE (Tunes with Tony Masen, An American vampire in Chicago, etc...) who was also a dear friend, and it's very hard for me to focus on writing and translating fan fiction.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:34 PM Title: Strange
I like the story... Do u think u would be planning to maybe write from Edwards point of view soon or is it strictly Bella's?
Author's Response:
Sweetie I'm only the translator... I don't write the story so I'm not the one who decides if there will be an EdwardPOV. The only thing I can tell you is there are 24 chapters so far in French and they are all from Bella's perspective. Sorry...
Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:30 AM Title: Strange
Ah, comme il est pauvre! Pourquoi est-il tellement désolé?
Author's Response:
Euh, si tu es une lectrice francophone, tu peux aller lire la suite directement sur la page de Drinou sur FF... Although maybe you're just practicing your French, which is very sweet :0)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:16 PM Title: Strange
hummm what is up with him? can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:31 AM Title: Strange
fab chapter.wonder if she will say yes.update soon
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:27 AM Title: Provocations
ooo edwards mad lol.fab chapter.go bella!!.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:23 AM Title: Strange
thank you so much!
it was amazing!
see ya!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:01 PM Title: Strange
Two weeks, that's how long he had been away. Two weeks in which Bella didn't have too much time to think about him. But now, having him there and in such state... What will she say?
Author's Response:
Actually I think it's more like a week. She saw Edward for a few seconds on Monday morning, and then she sees him again the next Sunday night. Not that it matters much... As for what she's going to say, I think Edward will be able to be very persuasive...
Date: 25 Sep 2012 9:32 PM Title: Provocations
Work has had me tied up, so I couldn't get here sooner, although it might have turned out better since I get to read 2 chapters :)
Two can play, but how will Bella's game be?
Date: 25 Sep 2012 6:31 PM Title: Strange
Please update soon, I love this, it's like a movie script, makes so many mental pictures
Author's Response:
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[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:25 PM Title: Strange
Oh come on, don't make me care about what's wrong with Edward; I kind of like hating him. haha! :) I can't help it though, I actually find myself feeling bad for him. It's almost like seeing Bella with Yorkie that one night has really affected him. Maybe he actually likes and wants to get to know Bella on a personal level, and not just a sexual one. Maybe he's tired of all the empty sex he's been having.
I wonder what that silver rectangle is that he was gazing at. Depending on the size, maybe it's a name plate for someone's desk or office door. I don't know why that popped into my head. It's probably not important anyway.
I will be so happy when I see chapter 14 in my inbox! I can't wait to see if Bella will say no to the dinner invitation, or if she will take pity on sad looking Edward and share his meal.
Bye for now, you take care! See you next chapter! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:50 AM Title: Provocations
Argggh!!! I want to rip that damn smirk off Edward's face! It just kills me every time he toys with Bella, he truly gets off on seeing her struggle with herself.
I just knew who was on the other end of the phone call Emmett got at that first party. Of course as soon as Emmett said Zanzibar, I knew that poor Bella would end up seeing the cocky bastard. I just rolled my eyes at the image of him with those two barbie doll bimbos. I swear to god Edward is totally evil. Why does he always throw shit in Bella's face, like staring right at her while he kisses the hell out of other women. And what was that glare he was giving her while she was dancing with Yorkie? Why the hell should Edward care about who Bella is with, especially when he has tons of women at his beck and call. Could it be that he wants to add Bella to the long list of women he has at his beck and call? Or could he actually have any true feelings for her, and maybe all the other women he's with are just empty encounters?
Of course I'm not asking for you to answer me, I was just asking rhetorically. :)
I'm kind of proud of Bella for putting on that show for Edward, even though I know it will come back to haunt her. I hope she can get away from Yorkie now that she's got him all worked up. I can't wait to read the next chapter, this one was great!
xoxo Kelly
P.S. I hope you have been well.
Author's Response:
Me love long reviews :0)
I have been doing well but my former beta is very sick and she's dying...
I finished the story The slave who wouldn't obey this summer so she could read the end before she's gone...
Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:45 AM Title: Strange
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:24 AM Title: Strange
No!!!!!!!! lmao, cant wait to read more......
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 3:59 AM Title: Strange
hum, what a shocker.... he wasn't rude and mean to her.....interesting.....curious to see what's up with him...
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:09 AM Title: Provocations
Such a fantastic story! Thank you for translating. I'm anxious to see if he gets a little of his own medicine!
Amy
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:41 PM Title: Provocations
What's good for the goose is good for the gander!
Author's Response:
:0)
Date: 11 Sep 2012 7:30 AM Title: Provocations
please don't make us wait too long update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:54 AM Title: Provocations
GO BELLA! Check mate Edward!!! Love it! Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:25 PM Title: Provocations
Seems like eveyone is leaving cliffies lately.. My poor heart is going to jump out of my chest and run away!!!
Well good for Bella!! Finally she isn't letting Mr. Arrogant get away with tramping on her heart!! Take Eric and have some fun...maybe she might end up liking him in the end!
Can't wait for the next chapters!! Luv ya!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:38 PM Title: Provocations
okay, just going to come right out with it. LOVED IT......... cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:24 PM Title: Provocations
Thanks good chapter
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:18 PM Title: Provocations
Wow, I haven't stopped reading for anything, this is so well written. Great
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much. You made my day :0)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:39 PM Title: Provocations
ha ha that was awesome:))
Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:31 PM Title: Provocations
this isnt' going to end well.. she bit off more then she can chew!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:40 PM Title: Provocations
Loved it :)!!!!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:28 PM Title: Provocations
Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 10 Sep 2012 4:08 PM Title: Adaptation
Gahhh, this story is GREAT!!!
Author's Response:
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:46 AM Title: Murderous thoughts
Argh! I wish a big hole would open up in the floor and swallow him up! I bet I know who's throwing the party that she's now going to, or at least I'll bet Edward will be at the party, and no doubt with the red-headed slut. Poor Bella, just when she thought she might win the fight with her hormones...I can't wait for the next chapter. :o) xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:23 AM Title: Infernal rise
That man is so infuriating! I just want to kill him for treating Bella the way he does, but at the same time I find myself giggling at the whole situation. :o) xoxo Kelly
Date: 24 Jul 2012 12:18 AM Title: Murderous thoughts
How often do you update?
Author's Response:
It's never the same. Depends on how busy I am with my other translations and in real life, but it will be more often when I'm done with Save the frog.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:37 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
defo gonna slap him then the angry sex lol.fab chapter.update soon
Author's Response:
I have to finish the story Save the frog, and then I will have more time to devote to Collisions
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:34 PM Title: Infernal rise
shes either gonna slap him or jump him lol or maybe both.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:28 PM Title: Harsh day after
an invitation i think.fab chapter.the sexual tension is electric its gonna combust
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:56 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
Oh boy...what is his problem? He is very hard to like!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:49 PM Title: Infernal rise
I knew it was the dry cleaning bill!
Love it!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Murderous thoughts
This is great. Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:36 AM Title: Murderous thoughts
Can I just re-itererate Srrongly, Loudly... This Edward needs...no!,, Make that, this Edward is is REQUIRED to be taken down many Pegs....I am such a Edward fan, but I must say....not this Edward.... each word, each line...I'm praying for redemption for our Girl!!!!!! Cruel MoFo, that's Edwards new nickname Cruel MoFo!!!! Laters Baby
Date: 18 Jul 2012 9:30 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
I think Edward should have a taste of his own medicine.In my opinion he deserves some sort of punishment.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:04 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
Okay was she really about to let him go there after he had just been with the nasty girl and probably didn't even shower? Yeah a little self-respect please Bella....
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:42 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
As much as I want to say Bella will accomplish her new goal, sadly, it's easier said than done.
He is mean!!!! But oh! So handsome...
Author's Response:
Yeah, especially if you take a peek at the pitcure below :0)
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:25 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
Ugh, so frustrating!! Bella needs to stop being so cowardly and speak up! She needs to let Bossward know exactly what she wants, some good hot lovin'!!! lol I can't wait to read more, Will Edward be at the party she attends with Jasper, I wonder? Or is it Edward's party? Maybe? I guess I'll just have to try to wait patiently to find out!
Author's Response:
Two words: Zanzibar again
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:08 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
Revenge will be sweet!! Bet Edward will be there. Thanks for update!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:03 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
Loved ot and ohhh do I love a cocky edward he's the beat lol cnt wait 4 nxt update xx
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:29 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
This is how I pictured them in the mens room the first chapter!!! I found this picture recently and thought of this story!!! 
Author's Response:
Whoever photoshop this made a grat job :0)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:45 AM Title: Infernal rise
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:22 PM Title: Infernal rise
Argh" suck a prickward! I wonder if he thought that the amount was insignificant to her as it is to him? How many hours does she need to work to earn that. I hope at some point he gets his due.
That elevator ride was a fantasy come true :) Still, I think kissing another woman infront of her would not earn him any brownie points. (not that he is trying to earn them...but i can't help and think that a small part of him wants her approval)
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:33 AM Title: Infernal rise
He is really mean!!! And he loves being that way!!!
as for Bella, er menal battles have to leave her exahusted, she really is having a tough time figuring out what to feel and think about her boss. What will she do now? She will try to do something to get him, but what?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 9:32 PM Title: Infernal rise
41st floor. My safety zone already terribly undermined melted like snow in the sun. 49th floor. My inner prayer was unfortunately not heard. A new wave of people rushed inside. I followed the movement in spite of me, which pushed me a little more in the back, even tighter against him. The contact of his chest with my back intensified and his breath irradiated my skin completely. My heart went berserk and I held my breath as I found myself utterly glued to him. But you need to breathe otherwise you’re going to pass out! What was that? Holy shit! Was it what I thought it was? Noooo! It was simply impossible. Except the growl that ensued in my back consolidated this idea. Was it really possible that...You can always believe it’s his cell phone in his boxer short but in my opinion it’s something else... Something manlier, if you know what I mean. I had to get out of here, and quick! Or you can stay, wait until the elevator is empty, and jump on him. Isn’t it a better option? I needed to think about something else. Anything but that. Especially not that! The weather... What kind of day was it today?...Certainly not as hot as it is here! Failed attempt. What else?... Edward’s hips purposely moved toward me and I barely restrained a groan. Red alert, we just lost my panties! This man would be the death of me!
OMG!!! I can feel the heat just reading this passage!!! Please...please....please....please .....please UPDATE SOONNNNN!!!!! Love this whole ELEVATOR RIDE!!!! I've been there in my day!!!! lol This chapter earned you a rating of "100!!!!!"
Author's Response:
LOL :0)
Thanks :0)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: Infernal rise
I swear almost very chapter I want to kick Edward in the family jewels. Bella really needs to flaunt another man in front of him and see how he likes it. Lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:38 PM Title: Infernal rise
I love this story and am Team Edward all the way...BUT, I must stress once more I Hate, no! that's a very strong word...I DISLIKE this Edward Big Time!!!! Seriously what a douche!!!!! we are onky 10 chapters in so perhaps he can redeem himself...we shall see.... TY for the chapter!!!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:04 PM Title: Infernal rise
I don`t know what other of your readers will think, but after reading this chapter I had the sudden urge to see Bella bring Edward to his knees by seducing other man in front of him,or rather in his face.Maybe because I can`t easily accept an inferior Bella, or a Bella in an inferior position?Anyway, great story. Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, right now it looks like Bella has the lower hand, but appearances can be deceiving...
Thanks for reading and reviewing :0)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:41 PM Title: Infernal rise
Bella needs to meet a sweet guy who come and takes her to lunch and picks her up. With some kissy face of her own
Author's Response:
Yeah, that would teach him a lesson :0)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:50 PM Title: Infernal rise
What an ass! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2012 9:32 PM Title: Harsh day after
iiih, i want moore!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2012 3:15 PM Title: Harsh day after
I love this story so much. Edward is like a faucet, one minute he's on and the next one he's off. His moods are maddening, but I love him anyway! I can't even begin to guess as to what is in the envelope that Edward gave to Bella. I'm sure the clue is in something I already read, but I can't remember. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter; I can't wait to find out what's in that envelope. xoxo Kelly
Date: 08 May 2012 12:18 AM Title: Harsh day after
If Bella wasn't about to go crazy, she probably is now. That will be until she opens that envelope. Who knows how she'll react to whatever is in it.
When will she be anle to openit?i don't think she'll want to do so in front of Alice. And she might want to keep her reaction private, so it might have to wait until she gets home. I guess I'm going crazy too. I just need to go give you my guess first ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 12:05 AM Title: Harsh day after
And back to having no back bone, yay! No. I really wouldn't stay with the job if it meant seeing him if he makes her so flustered and unlike herself, but I guess then we wouldn't have this story. I really do like the writing, don't get me wrong it's just that this Bella is like nails on a chalboard to me, I just want her to be stronger!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2012 11:56 PM Title: A déjà vu
I am so happy about the ending of this chapter and I really hope she can keep it up, because seriously shes borderline if not crossed over to pathetic when it comes to him. It's hard to read, but I won't deny that I am hooked, I just hate that she barely has a backbone and when she shows signs of having one the next chapter will come and we see how she lost it so quickly, it's frustrating.
Date: 05 May 2012 11:27 PM Title: Harsh day after
It could be the $20 or a bill for the dry cleaning of his shirt! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
If you want the teaser, you have to contact me on FF
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2012 4:43 AM Title: Harsh day after
I love this story and love to hate on this Edward's arrogant ass right now...Want him to change my view....till next chapter
Date: 05 May 2012 3:53 AM Title: Harsh day after
This is great please update soon...I cannot wait to see what happens next
Date: 05 May 2012 3:47 AM Title: A déjà vu
This is great please update soon
Date: 05 May 2012 3:31 AM Title: Harsh day after
looking forward to more
Date: 05 May 2012 2:43 AM Title: Harsh day after
Awesome chappy it can't be a dismissal letter Edward would not let go of her that easily... I am gonna guess cleaners bill or ticket to pick up and pay for cleaning of his shirt that does seem more Edwardish in this story.
Author's Response:
Whoever wants the teaser must tell me so via FF because on TWCS I can't contact the readers anymore...
Date: 05 May 2012 2:25 AM Title: Harsh day after
I really like this story so far.
Ok, i have no idea whats in the envolope but my guess is its the drycleaning bill for his shirt.
Date: 05 May 2012 1:54 AM Title: Harsh day after
Not sure don't have a clue unless it's the shirt she let him have or her underwire some how...
Author's Response:
Nope...
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2012 1:49 AM Title: Harsh day after
I think it's an invitatIon for fun plus the 20!!
Kay
Author's Response:
Wrong answer...
Date: 04 May 2012 10:25 PM Title: Harsh day after
Bella is going to have to work a lot harder to throw Alice off the trail. It seems that Edward is playing games. I just wonder when he is goons clue Bella in on the rules. The envelope I think has the contact from mike. So Bella is now Edwards employee. That's what I think Update soon! :)
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, it's not the right answer, but thanks for reviewing :0)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2012 3:53 PM Title: A déjà vu
very proud of bella
such a cocky asshole
gods gift to women
i bet he has never had someone turn him down
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2012 3:41 PM Title: VIP party
man what nerve sending champagne to her while someone is clinging to him
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2012 3:14 PM Title: Contact
man he is a prick and knows it and loves it
i am surprised she hasn't hit him yet
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 6:04 PM Title: A déjà vu
I can't believe that B can belittle herself like that, and let him use her like his personal toy.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:14 PM Title: A déjà vu
I wondered if she was going to have the strength to turn him away. He is too cocky for his own good. She needs to make him jealous then maybe he will change his ways.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 11:38 AM Title: Contact
go bella think edwards met his match lol.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2012 6:00 AM Title: A déjà vu
Go Bella! I'm so proud that she stood up for herself finally!
Date: 06 Apr 2012 4:46 AM Title: A déjà vu
I am SO happy she dumped that drink on him. As much as I love the lemony times in this story I didn't want her to give in so quickly. He has been an arrogant ass and an utter jerk to her so far.
Good Girl! Leave with dignity!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2012 12:22 AM Title: VIP party
Very interesting chapter. Execellent writing skills. Please update sooner rather than later.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:23 PM Title: A déjà vu
I'm so sorry about your mom! I lost mine 5 years ago & it was awful... it will get more managable but the whole is always there! I will keep you in my prayers!! I love your story & hope you keep up with your obviously talented writing career!!
Looking forward to more,
Kay
Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:23 PM Title: A déjà vu
so sorry for your loss i am there to with my grandmother...
glad bella came to her senses.. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2012 9:31 PM Title: A déjà vu
You go Bella! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 7:49 PM Title: A déjà vu
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Date: 04 Apr 2012 6:40 PM Title: A déjà vu
Bella almost lost it there. I would have been i her same situation no doubt. She did the right thing leaving him, even if she should have done so sooner. Not that it was possible. He had her "trapped" in body and mind. But his enticing words changed and thankfully made Bella snap out of the Edward-haze. Has she lost her job? I hope not.
Author's Response:
No, she hasn't lost her job, because Edward can't have her far away from him now can he ? Even after what she did to him...
Date: 04 Apr 2012 5:45 PM Title: A déjà vu
Glad she finally got the balls to walk away from the prick.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 5:34 PM Title: A déjà vu
I loved Bella's inner dialog, she's so funny. =) In my head I was screaming for her to break away from Edward, he really deserves to learn he can't toy with Bella the way he does. Besides, the more she refuses him, the more he'll want her. Maybe she will end up being the one with the upper hand. I was so proud of her when she poured the rest of her drink on that smug bastard! I can't wait until they see each other at work again. I hope that Bella will stay strong. I look forward to your next chapter. xo Kelly P.S. I am so sorry to hear about your mom, my thoughts are with you.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:41 PM Title: A déjà vu
yess good for her i'm so proud of her for not falling again in his stupid game i mean WHAT A JERK he is crazy for her
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:12 PM Title: A déjà vu
woot woot!!!! hurray for Bella!!!! At this point Edward is very much a prick and I'm happy to see our girl take a stand... thanks for another update.....