[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:20 PM Title: Thanksgiving
i was wondering what edwards problem with alex was. great chapter. love the father son chat.
Date: 20 Apr 2012 12:16 AM Title: Thanksgiving
the worse of both?the cheating
Date: 18 Apr 2012 9:59 PM Title: Thanksgiving
OMFG!!!!!! I have just finished power reading both stories and will go on to your others in a few. I just had to "Talk" to you. tried to contact you but couldn't find you on face book. Really LOVE the stories I'm an Italian girl from Queens. and you know the Tifany diner..... in Brooklyn....... by the bridge....... MY Godfather owned it!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE contact me stitchmaden@yahoo.com
Twimom1960
aka E. Cartaino
Date: 18 Apr 2012 8:34 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Cheating is definitely worse, in my opinion. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Apr 2012 8:11 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Good Chapter.....
Date: 18 Apr 2012 6:15 PM Title: Thanksgiving
This story is one of my favorties! I love this Edward!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 6:15 PM Title: Thanksgiving
A cheater is worse! I'll take over protective and a tad controlling over a lying cheat! Awesome chapter as always!!! XO
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2012 5:43 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Loved this chapter, and the extra stuff youhad added in, definitely made it so much better, the added part between the three Edward, Alex and Lou outside. And the extra stuff with B & about her dad, and the ending absolutley astounding. I know you had said you have a few chapters and then a time jump coming up, and of course I know the end, (SHHHH) don't want anyone taking a hit out on me for mentioning it ending, but how many chapters do you think about ? I wish it woudl never end myself. Love ya Lexi !!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2012 4:12 PM Title: Thanksgiving
loved it. and carlisle'did the right thing. skip should have layed nunzio out for toucjing alex but i get he believed she was trouble. i wish alex would tell someone what all mauro did'to her and his threats. cant wait for more!!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 3:51 PM Title: Thanksgiving
i have fallen in love with this story. i just reread quiet storm and will start rereading weather the storm this weekend. this should be published!! in my opinion cheating is worse, cuz being crzay in love leads to hot schmexy time and great gifts! love ya lexy
Date: 18 Apr 2012 3:43 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Edward has no interested in anyone else. His problem is that he wants Bella all to himself. If he could get away with it, he would take his little family and live on an island. He never realized how happy he could be with just Bella and his kids. They are what keep him grounded. This is why Edward is different than anyone else in his organization.
Date: 18 Apr 2012 3:31 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Yea... I can totally see Edward being jealous of anyone spending time with Bella. He does NOT like to share. Glad there will be no cheating. Steepen b/e, even if u have to keep reminding us ;). Wonder what's gonna happen withthe brothers... What will it take for Edward to see Carlisle finally finding his Bella? And is that possible or is his head to far gone to actually find his Bella. Also, yeah!!!! Derek seems like he's going to be a good guy... Finally Bella gets a parent she deserves!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 1:51 PM Title: In Like Flynn
edward has an apperance to uphold he cant be nice to everybody and i do think he cant work alex out she is confusing him and he doesnt like that so he doesnt trust her he has alot to loose by trusting the wrong people alex needs to earn her trust with edward not flirt around all his crew and cause trouble you cant judge edward by normal rules he is a mob boss not a normal everyday man respect and fear is everything outside of bella and his kids. If he had been all soft with alex in front of nunzio he would look like a soft touch so not going to happen baddass edward is just soooo hot
Date: 18 Apr 2012 1:36 PM Title: Thanksgiving
luv it, already awaiting the next chapter luv your characters and the story surrounding them your writing is great i hope this story continues for a long while your edward is so sexy and sonny is just a mini up and coming edward
Date: 18 Apr 2012 10:07 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Loved that Carlisle looked out for Alex even though it makes me feel like I must have some blood lust or something,ha. Hopefully Edward has figured ut what h problem is with regards to Alex & can put it behind him. Pretty creepy about the Carlotta sister, bitch, and wasn't she there with her husband? Yuk.
Thanks so much for the update, can't wait to read the next one!!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 5:50 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Awww I loved that mushy stuff at the end. They brought tears to my eyes. Edward did a wonderful job controling his temper, in the past he would have pounded Carlisle for saying what he was saying about Edward being jealous. Edward does have quite a short fuse and it used to not take much to set him off. Great job!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 5:44 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Edward was an ass towards Alex. Him laughing at her was beyond low. For him to believe the Mauro and his family bad mouthing Alex?! Mauro beats women. His credibility should be shot because of that.
If Edward doesn't apologize sincerely to Alex then I think she should just avoid him in the future and not go to his home. She should only agree to see Bella when she is away from Edward. That's make things very clear.
Date: 18 Apr 2012 5:22 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2012 4:27 AM Title: Thanksgiving
I think Carlisle had a right to be pissed - he laughed at the comment nunz made. The fact that he stopped him and made him back off was good but I can see why Carlisle is pissed.
I cannot get enough of this story. How much more do you think you will write?
Date: 18 Apr 2012 3:32 AM Title: Thanksgiving
I don't like that Alex chick either. I'm with Edward on that one. I'm actually tired of reading about her. Hopefully the next chapter will be about something new. No matter what it's still a great story. I love mob stories and wish there were more out there. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 8:36 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Cracked my ass up! The boy's got some big ones! Great chapter.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 5:19 PM Title: That Thing You Do
wow....great chapter..sonny is soo much like his father..hope we get to see edward and bella nxt chapter though..i miss them..omg please tell me alex is not going to get pregnant..that would just make her and carlisle even more annoying then what they are now..lol
Date: 15 Apr 2012 3:59 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Aro and Alex did play it well. I wish she wouldn't have given in to Carlisle... Old fuck. Hahaha
Date: 15 Apr 2012 3:56 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Oh! I looked around me when C/A were getting it on! I felt embarrassed for Sonny, that little punk! He is so adorably smart. Like his father! Gah! I wanna see a time jump with him. Please!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:29 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Wow, Sonny realloy is his fathers son. Interesting. He takes after C alot too. Why didn't Bella at least talk to Sonny about Derek. In some ways, she needs to realize that Sonny is growing up. Very interesting chapter. Many cringeworthy moments but very well written and totally within the story. Until next time Lexi!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 6:11 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Lex - so is Big C finally going to get his happy ending or is M going to come back for vengeance. While I am not a lover of Alex, I do love this story. Great chapters (the last two). See you next time.
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:16 AM Title: That Thing You Do
Loving the updates!!! Sonny is a pervert... Just like his father. Damn, how kids grow up earlier and earlier cuzz I'm sure boys this young are thinking and doin just that. And you know bella can't wait to tell Edward about earlier... She was gonna burst from it upstairs. Poor Alex tho, she's gonna give herself a heart attack between her fear of one Cullen and anger at the younger one. Hillarious!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 6:32 AM Title: That Thing You Do
OMG what a trip! I love Sonny, cunning little Child! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 11:02 PM Title: That Thing You Do
I really got a kick about this chapter from Sonny's POV. It was too much fun!!! As ever, I'm loving the story.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 10:34 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Awesome chapter, you are amazing!
Date: 13 Apr 2012 10:26 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Loved this chapt, hilarious BS from Sonny, heaven help E & B in the coming years, Katie too.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 8:11 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Edward and Bella have their hands full with Sonny. I think they need to put camera's in his room, the common rooms, and I guess the bathrooms also to keep track of that boy. I guess Carlisle also. Bella is going to need to know so she can sanitize appropriatly. If not she will have bodily fluids throughout her house.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 7:32 PM Title: That Thing You Do
loving it sonny is a young edward carlisle mix. he is going to be a real headcase in a few more years
Date: 13 Apr 2012 7:03 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Sonny that little shit :P Love him though :D haha!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 6:32 PM Title: That Thing You Do
omg! im dying! this was awesome and sonny is a little pimkp. lol cant wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 5:30 PM Title: That Thing You Do
I loved these last chapters!
Date: 13 Apr 2012 4:48 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Omg I loved Sonnys pov it was great lol.... I have a question are you doing a trilogy? I hope you are I am obbesed with this edward and Bella.. Please let me know
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:20 PM Title: That Thing You Do
ha ha I love Sonny! I know he'd hate hearing this but he really is a "cutie" I wasn't quite sure I wanted to read a chapter from Sonny but I'm glad I gave it a chance it was a lot of fun to hear from him.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:17 PM Title: That Thing You Do
LMAO< I loved this chapter !!!!! Great sex education maybe Carlise and Alex could do road shows !!!!!! Love your story as always lexi !!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 1:36 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Lived the sonny pov... The little perv. He's a crafty fucker lie his dad too,
Date: 13 Apr 2012 12:38 PM Title: That Thing You Do
That was a very entertaining chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 12:17 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Great chapter! Loved everything! Sonny is quite the character!
Date: 13 Apr 2012 11:19 AM Title: That Thing You Do
Wow, thank you for the laughs, it was great. Can't wait for more:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 11:00 AM Title: That Thing You Do
OMG haha this was amazing! Sonny is such a little perv ;) looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Apr 2012 7:55 AM Title: That Thing You Do
Thanks for the update! Love Sonny's POV. :-)
Date: 13 Apr 2012 12:03 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Excellent chapter. It was fun to see Aro cutting loose and getting sweet with Alex. I would be happy if either one of them ended up with her. I also like to see Skip from other people's pov. Mauro is a real douche-nozzle. I hope Aro or Carlisle kick his ass.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 6:36 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
loved hearing from alex and c. and mauro is trouble the skip needs to know what all he did to alex and his little threat. hope she tells carlisle or bella. cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2012 5:41 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
I always prefer Edward or Bella's POV, but i can see why you wrote some from Alex's POV. It gives us a better insight as to whats going on with her an Carlisle.
Date: 12 Apr 2012 12:02 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
I'm sad for Carlisle, how I don't know but I'm a fan of C's;-))
I blame your great writing!
Date: 12 Apr 2012 12:01 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Great chapter & glad that Carlisle finally has his other half, at least possible other half. We'll have to see how those two do together:-))
Date: 11 Apr 2012 9:55 PM Title: In Like Flynn
I have to say, I LOVED Quite Storm, so I KNOW I'll love Weather the Storm. I can't believe that some people have been so rude and harsh. IT'S A STORY PEOPLE. And it's not something your getting paid to do, yet, so NO ONE has a right to complain NOR call you a horrible person. You're not horrible. You're an AMAZING story teller and I for one LOVE your stories. Keep your head up and don't listen to the negativity. It's so not worth it. People are jealous of your abilities and I'd like to see what they said if they wrote a story and had people bashing on them. I am in the process of writing my own story, and I vow to try not to let peoples negative opinions affect me. You do the same. Don't let the haters hate, if you let them get to you, then they win. No one wants that. :-) Again, I LOVED QS & can't wait to start WTS!
Date: 11 Apr 2012 9:31 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
So this chapter was fuckin hillarious!!!! I LOVED IT!!! Between Bella getting ready to fight Pennywise, Edward having to control the both of yous... Aro talking in thrid person... LOL at work funny.
Mauro needs to watch his ass... he's gonna be swimming with the fishes soon, and i dont really feel sorry for him.
Im also glad to see Bella may have a keeper in the friends department. I only have select few friends that are women... they really can get catty and bitchy and straight up high school!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 9:05 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Dear, dear, my beloved Lexi, I am your long time loyal fan. I am reading every word you write and my honest opinion that you are THE BEST on FF and you are becoming better and better with every chapter. I am old woman and I am reading a lot since I learned to read. There are many wonderful writers but your talent is absolutely unique. Your ability to create so many different characters and make them act according to their personalities just never stop to amaze me. Your story lines extremely interesting, intriguing and in a same time very, very realistic. Your descriptions so vivid, I have no problem to transfer myself to your story world and go with your characters through all their ordeal and predicaments. And your humor is really funny. Lemons are very lemony. Children characters are best children characters I ever met. And on top of all that: You are wonderful, kind, honest, amazing person yourself. It is shining through all your writing and ANs. Every word you wrote belongs to where you placed it. Reading your stories is like watching well choreographed, beautiful ballet, so much grace and harmony. ALEX and C POV very good addition to the story. I will try to pay my debt to you by going back and placing same short comment after each chapter I enjoyed before. I also will place this comment in each your story because it’s about my admiration of your talent and not just one story or chapter. Sorry, I just not equipped to do more.
Love you so much. You are god send to make my life sweeter.
Nora Yar
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 7:32 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Hey, I know people are bitching about it, but I feel like we get two stories for the price of one. Bring it on. Carlisle's as fucked up as the rest of them and I find that shit highly entertaining! Aro hittin' the pukey floor...priceless.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 5:08 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
I think I got lost sometimes in that. Over all. Mauro needs to be found out about. He will hurt Alex again and worse. He won't do it sober because he knows C will wack him. I sound awful there. Oh well on with this. Aro and Carlisle will be all over this and I think Edward would to, as far as Mauro hitting and hurting Alex physically. If Bella is around I think her 9 would come out and she would do it. She thinks of Alex as her little sister. She feels close to her. The void left from Esme. Then again Bella did not respect Esme.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 4:45 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
YAY!!! Awesome chapter! Bella vomit, lmao!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 4:23 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
I love Alex..and love reading about her and Carlisle... Another awesome chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2012 2:03 PM Title: Fork Me
I loved the chapter but am a little bummed about Bella painting Carlisle into a corner but then again he's brought that on himself sue to his past actions. I'm hoping for C & Alex to get together but in some ways I'm not so sure about Alex, what she did that night was pretty messed up & her insecurity is pretty significant. Still C is crazy for her & who's perfect anyway. Thanks for writing & I'd love a Sonny POV
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 12:36 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
love the update, you know what would be cool would be Edwards pov from the club, it just came to me. GLad ella and Alex are getting closer woudl love to see that realtionship develop. She is a good person to add to the mix.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 9:30 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Good Chapter........
Date: 11 Apr 2012 6:25 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
and a fun night out was had by all... till the end cause of course Bella got sick again
Date: 09 Apr 2012 5:47 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
I think Aro should have a nice girl. Carlisle has had 3 women die because of him. Aro should have Alex. She deserves a nice man, who would treat her right. Carlisle would have an affair on her just like the other women in his life.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 5:39 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Another great chapter!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 5:02 PM Title: Fork Me
too cute with Carlisle using his son to pick up women!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:23 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Love this chapter.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 9:34 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
well, ive spent over a week on these fics and i wish there was more to read!!
Update soon!
Rae x
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2012 10:12 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Hey congratulations, over 1000 reviews on TWCS !!!!! WTG. Loved the update !!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2012 6:15 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
they are like teenagers!! lol but i love it! and cant wait for more!!! lol poor nunz having to hear the skip get head lmao....
Date: 06 Apr 2012 5:50 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Wonderful, as ever. Thank you for your hard work at keeping this story as interesting and exciting as ever!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2012 12:29 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Glad that the chapter ended with Edward and Bella on better terms! Cannot wait to see what Carlisle and Aro will do when they see each other!
Date: 06 Apr 2012 11:42 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
totally love these stories fantastic writing looking forward to next chapter already
Date: 06 Apr 2012 7:21 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Woohoo!!!! So much better than a surprise Sunday update. Loved it and the back seat tonsil poking. Damn Edward is hot!!! Haha!!!
Date: 06 Apr 2012 7:00 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
ugh why is it these two can't go out without some kind of drama? ha ha To be fair Bella's "he's cute" was way more innocent than Edward describing what Alex was wearing and how it looked on her. I'm glad he realized that and apoligized. Wonder what will happen during the rest of the evening. Aro and Carlisle going after Alex this should be fun. I hope Edward and Bella get to enjoy the rest of the night too. Please don't have Bella get stupid drunk They always fight when she gets like that. I can handle the fun and tipsy though.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2012 6:07 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Gotta love road head...:) great job
Date: 05 Apr 2012 8:51 PM Title: Fork Me
Sonny is just like his father, it is kinda funny, but if it should be real life I think in our days Sonny would be in trouble.I really love the way Edward loves Bella in your story.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 7:00 PM Title: Fork Me
I like reading chapters like this one where they're a little more normal. When there lives are a bit quieter.
Bless Bella being scared to call Derek. I don't blame her, i would be too. I think it was better for her to know that Edward has already met him.
I imagine the guys plan of making Alex jealous going wrong :S
Date: 05 Apr 2012 6:22 PM Title: Fork Me
i love this story :))
Date: 05 Apr 2012 3:47 PM Title: Fork Me
Im loving this chapter!!! Especially more of e being a dad more... But so outta touch with stuff cuzz his "job". He still manages... In an awesome awkward way. It's good they have some drama free time, they definitely need it after all that other bs. Sonny pov should be pretty funny, a smaller Edward, but loving e's pov in adventurous fatherhood. 3 hard core mobsters with a shyt ton of kids.... Classic!
Date: 05 Apr 2012 1:33 PM Title: Fork Me
Carlisle is a mess. He needs to be neutered. Then maybe he can get his life together. He needs to stop thinking about women and getting laid. Who would want to be with a man whose last two women are dead? Carlisle does not have a good record. Aro needs to find a good woman. He is a good man who had a horrible wife. He is a very good dad as well. I think Sonny's POV will be interesting. He is a very in your face type of kid.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 5:46 AM Title: Fork Me
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:49 AM Title: Fork Me
fun chapter. carlisle is clueless
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:31 AM Title: Fork Me
I love this fucking story...that is all...
Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:21 AM Title: Fork Me
Lots of great stuff in this chapter. Love Edward with his kids. Those kids are the cutest! Seriously they crack me up and little Ant too. I'm so glad you aren't ending the story just yet.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:00 AM Title: Fork Me
No kidding. Forks used to be the Title of Twilight before they renamed it. Somehow, I'm imagining our old boy E with fangs. ;-)
Date: 05 Apr 2012 3:58 AM Title: Fork Me
I think doing Sonny's POV would be awesome he has changed so much in the last few chapters... from being a lil shit to Bella to helping out and seems to be trying to be the man of the house...
Date: 05 Apr 2012 3:53 AM Title: Fork Me
I so love them. I wonder about myself for loving Mafia figures.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2012 1:20 AM Title: Fork Me
first i was super excited about the an.!!! cause you know sonny is going to be just like edward. loved the chapter and cant wait for more and yesssss a sonny pov would be awesome!!!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2012 1:12 AM Title: Fork Me
LOVE THIS STORY ITS FANTASTIC LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT CHAPTER
Date: 05 Apr 2012 12:28 AM Title: Fork Me
Another great chapter, best birthday ever.lol..... cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2012 12:16 AM Title: Fork Me
oh wow, loved this chapter, the heavy day to day relationship stuff with Edward and bella are my favorites. Especailly if they play when they get home but i like all the day to day rl stuff. And on your a/n at the beginning. This is your world after all and we are just thankful you share it with us !!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 10:16 PM Title: Breaking Dawn
That was one intense chapter...
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2012 5:38 PM Title: The Light
OH my God i LOVE Carlisle and Alex! They're perfect for each other and I really hope they end up together. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 3:49 PM Title: The Light
That girl is out of control. She has no self worth. Carlisle was actually trying to be a decent guy and she wanted to act like a whore. Carlisle needs to work on being just a dad for awhile. He needs to stay away from the ladies for awhile and change his reputation. Ronnie needs to learn to love herself. She needs to work and maybe date some one outside the family.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2012 3:25 PM Title: Members Only
Another amazing chapter, I'm looking forward to fiding out what happens next :)
Date: 02 Apr 2012 9:45 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Best Parts:
His eyes widened and he quickly closed the door. "Please leave—I'm calling the cops!"
"Whoa." I banged on the door. "There's no need for that—"
"You Derek Meloni . . . Junior?" Aro asked.
"Fuck you!"
"Oh!" I shouted. "We're looking for senior—Derek Sr.?" I asked.
"What the hell is going on?" Another male inquired. His voice was gruff, more mature, and I thought it might be the father.
"Nothing, Pop—honest," Junior said as Senior opened the door.
"Did'ju borrow money?" Senior bopped Junior on the head. "How much does he owe? My son, the low-down dirty gambler—"
"No, shit—I knew you looked familiar . . . you run New York." Junior pushed his father out of the way. "It's an honor, sir." He grabbed my hand.
"Get inside!" Senior pushed him back into the house.
I chuckled, finding the kid funny.
"My kids are full-blooded," I whispered under my breath. It never meant anything to me. All the worries about my children getting involved in my business never truly mattered. They couldn't, since some rules just can't be broken. Now, if they wanted to, Damion and Sonny could join the organization, get their buttons one day.
Then he turned to me. "Things work out and our families get close," he waved a finger, "don't lend my son any money."
I laughed again. "I'll remember that."
"I'm serious . . . he's Irish, mostly Italian, and all balls. He thinks he's a tough guy and tries to hang around his uncle every chance he has. He's a good kid, just a little stunad. He doesn't think." He pointed to his temple. "And you, he'll idolize you, try to get as close as he can."
"Huh?" I mused.
"I've been doing my best to keep him away from all that garbage."
"Yeah." I nodded.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 12:57 PM Title: The Light
i enjoy reading your story.great concept
Date: 01 Apr 2012 12:54 AM Title: Eclipse
Just wanted to drop a quick review in regards to your message - i think you're an extraordinary writer and this story is so unique. so yeah, dont let those immature jealous pricks tell you otherwise. Sure, it can get a bix extreme at times, but that's life right? And that's one of the reasons i love this story - the little details that make you think this could actually really happen in real life. Another amazing chapter and im looking forward to finding out what happens next. I'm a bit behind but catching up quickly so i hope you'll get to read this :)
love hicupcake x
Date: 01 Apr 2012 12:48 AM Title: The Light
This wasn't fluff, it was great. I love it when you explore the other characters a litle more, like Carlisle and Aro. This was a great look at Carlisle and how Alex is his Bella, he was so sweet with her. I hope that they can come back from this and that Bella will support them when she sees the changes in Carlisle.