Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:21 AM Title: Great Adventure
Whhaaat? That makes more sense, but why would Rene have to be mean to her, why not just her Dad?
Date: 27 Jan 2012 5:49 AM Title: To Be Announced
That was awesome! So funny, I never saw that coming:-D))
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:03 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
While I hate the thought of her being away from Eward when she's dealing with her mother and recent news, I'm glad she's reconnected with Aro abit. I think what he had to say and him being there helped her. And bless Sonny, his concern was very cute.
I eagerly await the next chapter.
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:30 AM Title: Long Drive
haha That "inkling" stuff was funny, and how 'pissed' Bella was about C. peeing in the pool. But really, how foul, why not the bushes or a tree?
"I got a clip with her fucking name on it son." haha maybe Bella needs to pluck someones eye out, she's getting kinda kookie. jk Okay, that's too much, huh.?
Great chapter, I don't feel good about them telling Jasper if he doesn't know about Alice's past. But I guess I'm becoming quite blood thirsty cause I hope her dad doesn't live much longer.
Date: 27 Jan 2012 12:20 AM Title: NuMb
Wow, Carlisle's right, he may be the more evil one, he weighs it all out & still chooses to cheat, fuck with Bella and kill others. I don't know whyyy I still feel for the guy. No, I do because you write your characters deeply and he's not superficial, he truly cares for others. So Esme wasn't behind it? I hope letting her go & get away [Az?haha loved how cliche`] for a few years while things cool down doesn't come back to bite them all in the butt.
Turns out Edward's thoughts of revenge crazed off spring coming out of the wood work to haunt him was on the mark. But why would they make the Bella/whore reference. So much mystery and intrigue. Love that about your writing.
Who is this Gina chick? I don't remember her. I don't like how she's behaving either. If it bugs Edward, who gets looks day in and out, it's too much. I hope Aro noticed.
I couldn't help but laugh about all the craziness that went down and the thought of the Nun[twiBella] coming by to hang out with them. hehe
Date: 26 Jan 2012 10:35 PM Title: Breaking Dawn
Wow, that was some hawt stuff Lexi, damn girl.
That got pretty gruesome with the eye ripped out and all. I really wanted him to make them tell him, I guess you can't make someone.
Lord if Esme is behind this sh*t, arghh. I hope to god Esme didn't go conning Nicole thereby conning Caius into trying to take out E.
Can't wait to find out what it's about.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 26 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Voices Carry Part One
I wonder how much time Edward will tolerate Aro`s "friendship" with Bella.Or is it just my imagination?Either way, great chapter.
Date: 26 Jan 2012 8:25 PM Title: Intricate Dance
It was a great brunch, Esme got clocked, haha. The daddies are so cute with their babies;~D)
Date: 26 Jan 2012 7:07 PM Title: Aro's Daycare
He is a ho, he deserves to be, to me Aro's the good guy he should have good things come his way. I know he's a killer and all that but still. haha I think it's crazy putting those things together, somehow I'm always a fan of the anti-hero
Date: 26 Jan 2012 6:07 PM Title: The Twilight Zone
Mean back @ya.
Great chapter, man that no sex thing can erode a relationship & am glad they got a handle on it. Love them lemons;~)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 5:35 PM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Another great chapter.....Meloni, Edward will know all there is to know about him before the enbd of that day. Edward should go to him, explain about Renee, the pregnancy, how Charlie treated Bella and see if this man wants to meet Bella. Bella deserves a happy , well daddy. Not hurt. And Edward will be over the moon knowing for sre Sonny and Damion are 100% Italian. Bella should already know or at least have a feeling about Sonny being very interested in what Edward does. Edward knows and he knows that Sonny knows more than he should. Sonny will take over for Edward. I hope this story continues to that point. there are too many people who love these 2 stories. They truely are great!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for such a great chapter. The AN was good too. I know it should be clear but ??
;-))
Date: 26 Jan 2012 6:48 AM Title: Blondie
:-(
But they got the house, yeah!:-)
Date: 26 Jan 2012 6:03 AM Title: Too Many Movies
Omg, I did not get that at all, until he said go over &look for Esme's blond wig. That crazy bitch!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 5:21 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
ok that was better than i thought i might be. i kept thinking maybe brandon swan was her father....but knowing the way you write and the twists this story has had i think this guy might be edwards enemy from jersey...cant wait for next week. btw i just started reading some of your other stories and youre fantastic
Date: 26 Jan 2012 5:20 AM Title: A Tight Fit
I like everything you write, and if your going to hell I'll be right there with you;-)
Date: 26 Jan 2012 5:00 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Oh Bella. At least she got some sort of answer.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 4:35 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
well sweet Sonny boy... he truly loves his Mommy doesn't he...makes me think of CJ / CC in INI; oh I digress, off on another story tangent....Edward worked so hard on controlling his need to be in charge of the situation Bella was experiencing...in the end he let ner go with Aro...and that showed Huge.....Huge, love by truly putting Bella first...Sure, sure Aro could have stayed with the kids but...it was best to let ner do this on her own, well as on her own as she ever is...anyway..I loved the heart to heart that Bella and Aro had, it was time to clear the air....they are indeed friends and lets get real Bella dies inside without Edward, and vice versa...
Now as for Renee, so sorry just have always had a hard time having any kind of pity for that woman....she did let Charlie take his anger out on HER indescretion if you will, and He did treat Bella horrifically...but I wanted to Howl in laughter when Renee told Bella she didn't have any money to lend her, ohhh....that rigjt there, was flat out comical...sheez lady, obviously she still doesn't see Edward very clearly, but then she might habe a hard time seeing anytning through a Vodak haze she's in all the time...
Date: 26 Jan 2012 4:25 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 3:16 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
This story is so good...update sooner..not a patient person!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 3:12 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
I hope Edward really was ok with Bella going with Aro. I miss their friendship as much as they do I think. ha ha I just don't want Edward holding that against Bella. Wonder if they'll look up her dad or not...
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 2:53 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
poor bella glad she got a name. and glad aro broought up thentopicof the boys being made guys i always wondered if bella even realy thought about that..like would sonny take over for edward....
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 2:51 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
well i'm happy she got her answers, but not happy edward didn't go with her:(
aro is a good friend, I just hope it stays that way forever!
poor sonny, all he wanted to do was make sure his momma was ok.
that totally makes sense now with how Charlie was with bella, that jackass!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 2:47 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Interesting. I was on the edge of my seat. If Charlie isnt her father, than Alice isnt her cousin, that's sad! Does she have Jersey connections? I'm excited to learn more.
Date: 26 Jan 2012 2:41 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 2:26 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Love it
Date: 25 Jan 2012 7:07 PM Title: Eclipse
Wow, too bad for Aro & Bella. I've always kinda felt that platonic relationships were like playing with fire.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 6:17 PM Title: Two Weeks Later
Oh my lord, that was intense. I was so scarred he was going to follow thru with that send the kids & Aro off to some island-- his whole family would be coming after him Sonny probably the most or as much as Bella.
Great chapter:-)
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:29 PM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two
How the hell is that pos Jonny still out & abut walking upright?
I hope Bella has good advice or that Aro could get his brain back super quick, otherwise he'll be a huge liability.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 1:47 PM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One
Aghh. God they have a point about Bella but I think Bella would pick her family & Edward over Aro everyday.
Poor Edward. This is a horrible time, did they kill Ronnie yet?
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:54 AM Title: Great Adventure
ok that isnt as shocking as i thought i might be....especially after hearing she was married before and the way charlie treated her....omg have i mentioned i am loving this storyand cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 8:45 AM Title: Long Drive
alices story sounds alot like mine when i was a kid and one thing i wish i could do is kill the fucker myself so let the miserable son of a bitch die but allow alice to have her moment of revenge...just saying...btw love this chapter
Date: 25 Jan 2012 5:45 AM Title: Bucked Up
Wow I did not see that going down, the bedroom scene (minus the gun to the head) yes, but not C. I hope to god he more than pulls through.
Thans for the lemon;~D
Someone better give a heads up to the cuz before their headless.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 4:45 AM Title: Great Adventure
please please finish this shit is good I stumbled apon it and its good.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chasing Regret
So WOW, what a chapter. Jesus, how did I know we probably weren't done with that crazy desperate Roger, frickin Uncle Ronnie, I don't even want to speculate where that might be going, hopefully just Ronnie in a body bag.
How heartless can Lau be? He's the father of her kids? I hope Aro's kids don't stay in Cali, Sonny will be crushed. And he's adorable beyond words, that bedroom scene, just wow.
I love your Edward. I'm kinda scared to read further, this has been the best Aro character ever written,js. I hope he pulls thru;-)
Date: 25 Jan 2012 1:27 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
ok i wasnt planning on reviewing until i got caught up with this story...i found it recently and went back to read quiet storm but i changed my mind when i read ur author notes and the people giving you a hard time....i am abosolutely loving this story, how real it is and the fact that you are an amzing writer. i honestly didnt think esme could be so cold hearted and wish someone would ice her too...i dont trust her anymore and she knows too much especially about bella. im really glad you didnt kill aro either...besides edward and bella and carlise (hes always getting his ass kicked) hes my favorite character...tho i wasnt a fan of him falling in love with bella or whatever he did...i understand but still dont like that it caused things to be weird between them...anyway back to reading quick question do u update every wednesday? keep up the good work and tell the haters to fuck off and find some happy sappy fic to read
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:28 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep
Wow, that was exciting...for just one second there I was hoping to god that Carlisle would not be foolish enough to put a hit out on Aro.
What a crazy situ that is.
;-)
Date: 24 Jan 2012 3:34 PM Title: Thou Mayest
Wholly crap, these two are not playing with fire more like land mines. Carlisle would kill Aro. Aghh, but I wish those two could be together, I think they could be really good for each other.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 2:21 PM Title: Misery Loves Company
That was so funny, lol, I have tears running down my cheek. Loved the Kylie interjections.
So what the hell is Lau's problem? I mean Aro shouldn't take it for granted but still.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 1:36 PM Title: This Time Around
I don't know why Carlisle can't learn his lesson. And wow, Edward hit the nail on the head with the Bella-model comment.
I'm glad he just listened in & heard how his wife can handle herself & Carlisle.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:46 AM Title: Wag the Dog
Wow, at first I thought she came in there pissed that someone had killed Roger. That was an exciting chapter.
Yes, Edward needs to take Aro's kids so him & L can get away.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 5:43 AM Title: And Once More for Luck
That was an excellent make-up. And hilarious the way Nunzio was going to trail around Roger. Haha
I have a big smile on my face, what a happy chapter.:-D)
Date: 24 Jan 2012 4:58 AM Title: Knee-Jerk Reaction
Aghh, I feel the pain & anxiety when they fight. Their both so frickings host headed & temperamental.
Great chapter!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 3:09 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
Ohhh, that evil Matthew I'll bet. Poor C, he just doesn't seem to ever have an easy go of it.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 2:09 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One
I love this story. I loved the first one and this just as much. IMO, the best family & family with value (that likes and happens to kill people) out there.:-)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:47 AM Title: Great Adventure
Sopranos huh? I never watched that show. But I thought it sounded good. I guessed that Charlies wasn't her father way, way back because of how hateful he was to her. But that doesn't excuse a mother for letting it happen. I knew a mother like that once too. Its so painful and its something that stays with you forever. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 3:14 AM Title: Great Adventure
Great chapter! Cant wait until the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 12:35 AM Title: Great Adventure
This isn't going to be a "gopod" twist is it? Grea chapter Lexi. I am worried that eventually Edward is going to go down and I really hope he doesn't.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:54 PM Title: Eclipse
You accidentaly named this chapter 18 and It was 17.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 9:23 PM Title: Great Adventure
No effing way!!!!! Just when I think you're going one direction...you bob and weave, girlie! Great shocker. Definitely can't wait to go on this ride!
Date: 20 Jan 2012 10:33 PM Title: Great Adventure
Holy shit. Are she and Alice sisters?
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 11:51 PM Title: Great Adventure
Omg no don't save it till next week please!! Lol I need to read more after that cliffty you left great job as always have a good weekend! Xo Sandra
Date: 19 Jan 2012 5:49 PM Title: Great Adventure
Love the story so far ... can't wait for the next update
Date: 19 Jan 2012 5:37 AM Title: Great Adventure
Wow didn't see that coming
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 4:42 AM Title: Great Adventure
Well I guess that info about her father will disttract her from the fact Edward had a button ceremony, she wanted and deserved to attend. Now about Carlisle, think Edward really has had it with all his shit. esme probably knows to much, and Carlisle knows this and knows if Edward finds out Esme is dead. HMMM>>>I wonder who Bellas dad is or was, somebody exciting I bet!!! PLEASE, Im beggin don't make us wait too long for the next one.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 3:37 AM Title: Great Adventure
Wow what a bomb to be dropped. I wonder who her father really is if she even knows.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 3:07 AM Title: Great Adventure
Oh you meanie ending the chapter there and then making us wait a week lol.
It made me chuckle when Edward asked Bella if they'd had sex last night. I love how Bella just took what she wanted from Edward when she couldn't sleep.
Jessee
Date: 19 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: Great Adventure
Definitely a build up chapter. I am looking forward to finding out what the deal is with who Bella's real father is. I totally saw this forshadowed in the chapter where Sonny was doing his family history research, you kind of hinted to it then and I have been biting my nails waiting to see if that would come back in to play. I thought for sure that Rosalie was going to tell Bella that Emmett has been working for Edward, but I wasn't expecting this to be the issue.
I eagerly await the next chapter, I would love to have it earlier than a week, but I know that holding out builds the anticipation. Love your writing as always!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 1:53 AM Title: Great Adventure
Ya know, some time back I had a fleeting thought that Charlie wasn't her Daddy, because normally Daddy's are not like that towards their daughters. But I let it go telling myself I was reading too much into it...telling myself if that was true, when the time was right you would tell us. Well that time is now, and you did.
I love it that your characters have flaws. Sometimes, I wish I could just crawl right onto the page with them all...ya know be a fly on their walls so to speak. Reading them is the next best thing.
I normally don't make comparisons, & this is no different, but when I see your updates & read your words, I find that I get the same chills of anticipation like I had reading Winndsinger's "The Red Line" & "Coloring Outside the Lines". The feelings I have are the only comparison but still.....
Loved this chapter & SOOOO looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 1:44 AM Title: Great Adventure
wow, i always wondered about out that, when it was mentioned previously about Renee being married before, and just the overall way Charlie was. Liked a peek into the button ceremony. and the bomb that Rose dropped. Poor Bella. Loved edwards feelings about his home/family life meaning to him.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 1:13 AM Title: Great Adventure
Poor Bella. That's gotta be a surprise for sure.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:48 AM Title: Great Adventure
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:27 AM Title: Great Adventure
Wow! Cliffhanger....
Great chapter!! Loved, loved, LOVED the "button ceremony"!!!!
I really love this Edward! Just sayin...
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:05 AM Title: Great Adventure
loved the button ceremony!! hmmm and will we find out who bellas dad really is....hope so!!! cannot wait for more!!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:04 AM Title: Great Adventure
omg, lmao, no wonder he treated her like shit... i dont know if i can wait till next week... sorry inpatiant..... cant wait to read more
Date: 18 Jan 2012 11:27 PM Title: Great Adventure
DUDE...totally didn't see that coming! Aww...how long do I have to wait for the next chapter? Will my whining help move things along faster? Well - it was worth a shot.
Man I love this story!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 11:01 PM Title: Great Adventure
Ok I wasn't expecting that!!! WOW
Date: 18 Jan 2012 11:00 PM Title: Great Adventure
You don't have to hold out until next week. We promise not to think any less of you if you decide to post it this week;-)
Date: 18 Jan 2012 8:21 PM Title: Too Many Movies
I kind of thought that, maybe just maybe, Esme had something to do with Carlisle and Candy getting hit.
Date: 18 Jan 2012 6:47 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
yes, maybe, Edward is losing it!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:48 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One
Is Edward losing it? I think so.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2012 2:56 AM Title: To Be Announced
hi, great chapter
it was amazing, and funny
kisses, until the next
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2012 9:23 AM Title: NuMb
As much as I understand what Edward had to do, it still hurt just as much to see him kill Lenny. I was almost angry at him. I loved Carlisle's sympathetic approach for the man but in the end, it's their lifestyle that demands these murders. I still think Edward's a little loony haha.
Great story, btw. I've been feeling all 'gangsta' since I started Quiet Storm. I think I've even gained a Brooklyn accent just from reading. You can imagine how hilarious that must be here in Texas.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2012 11:19 PM Title: To Be Announced
Great chapter lex. I loved that they solved the kids problems with kick ball. Awesome!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2012 5:18 PM Title: NuMb
wow I thought he was going to kill esme after he shot marcello wow getting good hun !!
Date: 13 Jan 2012 1:55 AM Title: To Be Announced
Great chapter as usual. Curious about what Rose has to tell Bella.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 11:29 PM Title: To Be Announced
I love to see Sonny interact with his little brother and A.J. Like his fater, he may seem rough but that's just the outside.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 10:19 PM Title: To Be Announced
funny!! loved the kick ball game!!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:47 PM Title: To Be Announced
That was some funny shit! Loved it. Good luck in your competition!
Date: 12 Jan 2012 3:11 PM Title: To Be Announced
Another great chapter,cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 1:03 PM Title: To Be Announced
What is it about men loving their wives pregnant? Seriously! My husband is delighted, I say enough! I love your historia.Está in my favorites and jump as a 15 when I see (I'm 29, so sue me). I know as real life sucks and you can not know how I'm grateful for every capítulo.Bella know Edward as well, of course he wanted to do something with their pills. we have babies on the way.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 9:08 AM Title: To Be Announced
Good Chapter.....
Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:57 AM Title: To Be Announced
The whole kickball game made me giggle. That was fun. Oh I haven't forgot about Rose wanting to tell Bella something. I wonder what it is?
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 4:15 AM Title: To Be Announced
okay I can breathe again now, thank you for the much needed comedic relief...LMFAO...and I don't mean the "music group" either... that was too flippin funny....okay seriously Bella WHY can't you see what a fantastic motjer you are, not must to hour three but to any child in need...the very thoughts of this little precious 3 yr old wanting to help out and play with the Big Boy's and adults...then top that off with Bella sneaking over to cheer him on, then swoop in with loving and protecting arms, just to habe Ant be so excited over his accomplishment... What a huge heart....
I could totally see Edward sabataging her Birth Control too! Yup this is what we love and hate about our Edward, he always thinks he knows whats best for Bella, granted he generally is right but still, she has a valid point, if she is not wanting another baby then he has to love her enough to respect her feelings and fears.
Now what on earth does Rose want to tell Bella and I bet its something about Renee.... Can't wait to see how Edward and Jazz handle Alice's scum of a father.... Gosh I loved the chapter
Date: 12 Jan 2012 4:07 AM Title: To Be Announced
Aww i like that this chapter was lighter. They had some fun without Edward shooting anyone lol and without any angsty drama.
I'm looking forward to finding out what Rose wants to tell Bella.
Jess
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 3:56 AM Title: To Be Announced
loved the update, i like it when you show family interactions, once in awhile wiht the other characters. And yea I woudl have probably tripped jermy, noone picks on my kid. really wonder what rosalie was going to say.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 3:31 AM Title: To Be Announced
Hillarious. I am loving these last two chapters. This was so funny with the kickball game.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 3:20 AM Title: To Be Announced
This story is one of the most exciting to read. I love the drama. The times Edward has almost gone overboard..like that time poor Bella was praying for her life, well it was hard to read, but so well written and so emotional. I've enjoyed the entire story from the begining. love just reading along in their life....so much more drama than I'm familiar with, but fun to read.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2012 1:59 AM Title: Long Drive
I think the worst possible thing you can think of needs to be done to Alices dad. no not dad, sperm donor. No dad does that to their kids. Maybe cut his balls off so he cant get an erection anymore. At 55ish he probably doesnt care that much about that, and then maybe he does. But men, in their minds, if they cant have sex or get hard they arent men....death is too good for him, he has to suffer long term, she will always have her memory. And also, threaten him about going around nAlices kids, if he knew or connected Alice-Bella-Edward Cullen mafia king - all together Im suprised he didn't go into hiding. He thinks hes above "the law" cause hes gotten away with it.
Carlisle needs to stay at home and raise Anthony, just visit bella n Edward, not stay. All couples hit rough patches, Bella and Edward are fine. She doesnt need to have another kid, if the drs. warned her not to....if she did and something happened to her, Edward would really loose his shit. Literally.
Date: 06 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Long Drive
Great chapter as always.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2012 12:49 AM Title: Long Drive
I love it! I love this story never want it to end!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2012 12:24 AM Title: Long Drive
I was dieing all day to get home and read this! Woke up bright and early this morning to see that you had updated but had to hightail it to work and this is one story that I can't risk sneaking in on my work computer!! LOL
Finally got to read it! Great chapter as always!!
As for Alice's father....well I could think of many things that should be done to him! Like for instance, cutting his fuckstick off and shoving it up his own ass! Although, I like Edward's idea of shoving his glock up the guys ass too!
But wouldn't want to dirty a perfectly good glock!! LOL
Date: 05 Jan 2012 11:31 PM Title: Long Drive
I love it when he gets sad on her. He's even more adorable! My heart breaks for Alice and I feel murderous when thinking of anyone being forced by a sick fuck.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2012 9:50 PM Title: Long Drive
Happy New Year!!! AWESOME Last couple of chapters..I was starting to worry about B&E..They don't seem to have that same passion they used to have..but then I started thinking,3 kids,mob boss,yea who would.B had a valid point about having another kid and E was being waaaayyy to selfish.But the end,yea he's still the adorable,lovable mob boss we love.But something tells me its gonna change.No?
Last chapter.that was wicked hot for Carlise to kill Esme's lover.First time for soft Carlise to get his hands dirty without being told..YUMMY..
Date: 05 Jan 2012 4:41 PM Title: Long Drive
The fucker should die a slow painful death! Great chapter. I love the story so much, and I really like a glimpse at their everyday lives. Really great.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 9:06 AM Title: Long Drive
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading your drabble. I also think that Edward should go absolutely crazed on Alices dad. You have made it clear since the very beginning of Quiet Storm that Edward had a soft spot for Alice, so it would make sense
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:22 AM Title: Long Drive
First I think he needs to be caught. Then Alice needs to show him how to put a condom on a dildo, the rape his ass and see if he likes it. Eye for an eye so to speak. But for true poetic justic just to take place, they need to tie up and blindfold her Mom and the whole time ask her if she believes what she hears. Because she sure did not when Alice told her. Then the two of them need to have their legs and arms broke, put in a car and driven off a bridge. Go ahead and use this, but Alice needs closure. Then She and the broad need to move closer to the city so they can tag team Esme when she returns, because we all know she will. Oh yes she will!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 5:54 AM Title: Long Drive
It's always great to spend some time with these guys.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2012 4:54 AM Title: Long Drive
Lex - another amazing chapter. So much drama and up and downs. I liked the conversation about another child. Edward wanted to use it as a fix and Bella uses a child as an escape from finding herself and doesn't want that anymore. That was an excellent scene. very real. The whole alice thing was hard, but you did a good job with it. Since Alice and Jasper aren't really key fugures in theis story, it seems a little much. I would like you to mention that E took care of it, but I don't know if I need the detail. Seriously though, I love this story. It is the one I am always anxiously awaiting an update for. Thanks Lexi.
I have no idea what a drabble war is, so I will learn next weekend, since I read everything you write.
Vic
Date: 05 Jan 2012 4:53 AM Title: Long Drive
Loved it. Another amazing chapter. I think we all know how Edward should handle Alice's dad...painfully and slowly.