Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
I hope Bella doesn't let him get too far away before she tells him how she really feels. They love each other. They need to be together and stop hurting each other by not being there for each other. I am glad Cindy is going to be okay. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for always leaving a review!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
Yes lmao they really DO need to talk. Jesus, they both need to stop jumping to conclusions or whatever. she thinks it didnt mean anything to him, then he thinks it didnt mean anything to her. FUCK. lmao
Author's Response:
Crazy that people can so easily just not talk, isn't it!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
LOL yes they do need to both talk!!! I hope they will, and um is Bella on birth control???????:)))
Nice chapter!!!!
Thank you for the speedy updates!!!!!
Author's Response:
Nope, no b irth control other than abstinance!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
I'm liking this story as well, reading avidly even if not reviewing, just remember extra smilie face for every chapter :)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it! I do appreciate the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
Oh My Goodness what was that?
Author's Response:
That, was a hasty exit!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
OOOPS Hi jasper.
Author's Response:
Ha! Hard to hold a conversation when naked!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
Please tell me this is not a dream.
They have 4 years to make up for!!
Author's Response:
No, not a dream!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
Finally he has found her!!!!!
Author's Response:
They really NEED to talk!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
What?!?!? why'd he leave?!?!? please hurry and UD :)
Author's Response:
That's the question!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
wow!!! there has to be a reason why he left... maybe he got paged or something... but he should have said something before he left like that.. gah! Can't wait to see more!!!
Author's Response:
She surely needs to wait and find out before she jumps to conclusions!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
oh he probably feels guilty or something for not talking, maybe she'll read the note! Love it!!
Author's Response:
You would think that she would think and read the note, wouldn't you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
WHAT???? Why would he run!
Author's Response:
That's the big question!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
lol...didn't see that coming, and yes they do need to talk
Author's Response:
She has grown so negative about herself! No doubr she won't wait to talk to him!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
omg why did he leave
Author's Response:
She needs to wait and find that out, not jump to conclusions, right!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
What was that? I don't understand it.
lol - tiina
Author's Response:
Keep reading . . . more to come!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
Wow dude! why did he run the freak away?? He wanted her back right?? he wanted her!! god what an idiot
Author's Response:
This is where missunderstandings cause problems!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
hell fucking yeaaa! woooot wooot wooooot!
i feel like doing the irish jig.. well iduno how to do it, so i wont.
but HELL FUCKING YEAAAAHH OOOOOOH im so excited. cant wait to figure how what happens next jeuss! wooot !!!!!
FINALLY BELWARD ARE TOGETHERRRRRR well... of course like u said, they have to talk.
WOOT WOOOT!
Author's Response:
Irish jigs are awesome! (But I can't see them from here!)
More to come before they settle things!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
wow great chapter cant wait for the talk
Author's Response:
They really do need to have one!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
Please let them talk. They can not have anymore mix ups! They have been apart for too long. They have to stay together. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Well, there is still some miscommunication to come!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
Halleluja!!!!
what a sweet story. You just saved my day.
LoL - Tiina
Author's Response:
Well, it isn't settled yet!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
im glad hes found her, but why is his pov repeated twice?
Author's Response:
It was an accident! I'm such a goof sometimes!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
Sweets you doubled EPOV for this chapter just a heads up :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! I'm such a goof sometimes!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
the second half of this chapter was repeated from the first part.
cant wait for the update
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! I'm such a goof sometimes!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
She definitely should,she loves him,he loves her.They should be together.
Hopefully.
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
Finally he knows where she is. It may take a litte bit for him to convince her that he loves her, but I don't believe he will stop until he does. I love Bella loves her Christmas present. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yep! They need to be together!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
She better!!! Edward is a saint!!!! love it!!!!!!!!!! thank you for your wonderful writing!!!!
Author's Response:
You are sooo good to me! Thank you!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
Its me as promised. Is this different or am I just lost in an Edward induced lust??
Author's Response:
No trance, just different numbers and smaller bits - - - shhhhhhhh . . .
Date: 08 Aug 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
Swwet!!! I wonder if Edward will figure it out :))))
Author's Response:
He Better!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
yay! Hopefully he goes home and reads it! :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
wooot woooot! :: MAJOR FIST PUMPING GOING ON!::
FINALLY JAKE GO THIS HEAD OUT OF HIS ASS AND IS HELPING HIS TWO FRIENDS. JESUS, HE SHOULD HAVE JUST TOLD EDWARD WHERE SHE WAS AND THE TWO WOULDNT BE SO FUCKING DEPRESSED. but i understand his reasons for being loyal to his friend.
THANK GOODNESS THAT HE'S FINALLY HELPING, IN SOME SORT OF WAY!
Author's Response:
It took him long enough to understand that they loved each other, and didn't realize how the other felt! He should have gotten that sooner and done something!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
Very good. Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
Finally someone is helping! I am so excited. I can't wait to see Edward's reaction. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward needed to let his family in for some support!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
This is so sad. I hope he gets Bella soon.
Author's Response:
Heartaches make us appreciate it when we are happy!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
more must have more...
Author's Response:
Ha! It's coming it's coming! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
he need to get up and on a plane go get the womam he loves. een if he doesnt know it yet
Author's Response:
Yes he does! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
shes always trouble isnt she
Author's Response:
Luckily she only makes a cameo appearance in this story! lol
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
he likes her ...
Author's Response:
Yep, he's finally figuring that out! Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
getting better
Author's Response:
Thanks, my first chapter writing the story!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
well i saw that one coming. will we ever knwo what really happened on the cliff? Did he jump or fall?
Author's Response:
We don't know if he jumped or fell. Hard to say if we will ever know!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
Oh god you are evil!!!!where in the hell are Bella!!!! does she know Edward is back??? I think you like to see everyone suffer with Edward is a long time now please do something?!?!? I´m jumping here lol
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm not evil! These two just need to learn to talk to each other!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
loce it. hate him, but love him at the same time. :)
Author's Response:
I know, I couldn't stand him when I first read this chapter!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
I feel bad for Edward. I hope Jake has talked to Bella. She needs to know that Edward has kept their wedding vows. I can't wait to see what is next. I hope all the Black family will be okay. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
If Bella would just even let Jake talk about Edward to her!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
great chapter! I don't think he is going crazy... he probably really is seeing her! :) Excited for the next one :)
Author's Response:
He really did see her - she is friends with Jake still!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
Did Bella see him? My heart goes out to poor Edward!
Author's Response:
They are getting closer to seeing each other!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
Edward is SO SWEET!!!
Thank you for all the updates!!
Author's Response:
Edward always ends up being my ideal man, so of course he has to be sweet!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
I wonder if it was really Bella he was seeing and if it was, did she see him??? Loved it!
Author's Response:
It could have been just his hopes! We will see!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you contnue to enjoy the story!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
I feel so bad for Edward and Bella. They could have been together all this time. I can't believe she is living so close to him. I hope he figures that out soon. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Weird how things turn oput sometimes, things are just under your nose and you don't even know!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
Love it! Hope he finds her soon!
Author's Response:
He seems pretty determined!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
:-(
Author's Response:
Ah, was that a frowny face ? Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
Love this story. I can not wait for more I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
So glad you feel that way!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
Edward is going to be so sad. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yep, brokenhearted!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
I am so sad for Bella. I hope Edward goes after her. They both have feelings for each other. They can make this work. Bella is going to have to find a way to go on with her life. She needs to go to school and get her degree. Great job...thanks!!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
Oh please pst more!! My heart is breaking for Edward! I can't take it!! He needs Bella bak and she needs him!
Author's Response:
They really do need each other, don't they!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
Oh NOOOO
Author's Response:
Yea . . . I know . . .
Date: 07 Aug 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
AWWW THIS MADE ME CRY! i feel like such a sappy bitch! gah! this was so wonderful!
Author's Response:
Family stuff is sometimes sappy!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
wow! Great chapter... if only Jasper will tell him what the name of the woman in the cottage is! LOL :) Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Well, the woman in the cottage reallly dos keep to herself!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
Your Edwards are the BEST!!! Naughty...naughty Bella!!!haha
Author's Response:
Thank you - he really wants to find her!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
ummm gotta say Bella sucks!!...sorry :( She doesn't deserve Edward to forgive her, he's too good for her now! You know I love your writing though!!!
Author's Response:
Bella is really confused, isn't she! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
hmph! He cant be angry, or nothing. HE didnt tell HER how HE felt about HER. HE should have made it clear that he had feelings for her. sure he said he wasnt going to sleep around, but that doesn tmean he has feelings for her. he's pretty much making her think he's only doing it because he feels like he has to... ugh.
HE NEEDS TO GO HOME AND FINE BELLA JESUS!
Author's Response:
You're right! I think he just really misses her and wants her!
He will look for here, do worry!n't
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
wow! Great chapter.... so we have jumped ahead in time now right? Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
We have jumped ahead a few years to college being over - Bella has been a no show and no one will tell him anything!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know you read the chapter!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
:)
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
:)
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
wow... great couple of chapters! I was out of town and so excited to see so many updates when I got back :)
I can't believe there was no baby... how sad :(... and then she just left...hopefully he goes after her! :)
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, he couldn't find her!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
:)
Date: 07 Aug 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
DAMN .. is he going to go after her? go back to forks and get her back, tell her tha he has feelings for her??
I hope he does, but Bella was wrong for leaving, taking the choice of him wanting her away. I hope he doesnt go off and fuck somebody now , ugh thats just hidious.
Author's Response:
It is awful to take his choice away, she should hav talked to him but she didn;t know that he actiauly cred about her because he didn;t talk to her!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
ohhhhh Poor Edward!!!! Please don't let him go back to his old ways!!!!
Author's Response:
I know, he needs to keep his head about him, doesn't he!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
Wow, that was quite sad, I don't think Edward is gonna like this. Please post more.
Author's Response:
It is very sad, in a way - but there never was a baby, so one didn't die!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
Naughty Bella, I must say I did not see that coming :) Nice!!!
Poor Edward, I hope he doesn't revert back to his old ways.....
Author's Response:
Poor Edward, he is really hurt!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
Sad she would just leave him!
Author's Response:
They both had no idea how the other felt . . . they should have talked!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
This sucks. Guess Edward should have told her how he felt instead of making comments like, "This is why I love New York."
Author's Response:
True, so true. He should have told her how he felt!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
Well, this is a start. I am glad they talked a little bit. I hope they continue. Tanya is going to try and be a problem. I hope Bella doesn't listen to her. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank goodness Tanya is not successfu!l, or even important in this story!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
ah oh
Author's Response:
Yep. I agree.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
hmmm....interesting......love it!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you continue to enjoy the story! Thanks for reviewing and letting me know what you think!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
i wish i could knock tanya out. what a slut.
Author's Response:
Yep - just one food smack!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
I so hope he doesn't screw up! And I hope they start to talk and show love for one another!!
Author's Response:
He isn't going to screw up - - - yet!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
jesus, tanya is going to add fucking drama huh? cant there ever be a story where she doesnt try to 'steal' edward away, even if she doesnt manage it?
i get sick of those situations, where shes slutty and shit. oh well.
other than tanya being added to the story, which i hate... it was a nice chapter, i love Bella and edward are settling in.
Author's Response:
Trust me, Tanya is not very relevant! No trouble from her at this point!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
They really are so sweet!!! Awww........darn Tanya.....lol!!!!
Author's Response:
Not to worry about Tanya!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
Love how sweet Edward is to her!
Author's Response:
He is starting to get thoughtful, huh!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
I think these two are going to be just fine as lome as they start talking. I can't wait to see what nice thing Bella is going to do for Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
They really do need to talk, don't they!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
So he's admited to falling for her, or is falling for her. wow. he's done so well so far. He's really came a bit of a ways since the first few chapters. I'm really glad he's decided to finally look at her and see how good of a girl she is.
I wish for Bella to get more comfortable around him, mayybe they could iduno go on a date or something, like him asking her on a date? maybe that could show he's feeling something for her, and she wont have to feel so.. nervous or unliked?? iduno.
Author's Response:
They need to spend some time talking!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
Nice, Bella should just give him some good loving...taht'll make him happy!!
Author's Response:
That really would make him happy!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
Thanks for writing tonight. I washoping to be able to read a few good things and this fit the bill. Edward is being so charming. I hope it lasts!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the compliment! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
Edward is doing a good job of taking care of Mrs. Cullen that is for sure! I can't wait to see what is next. Greta job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Apparently when Edward does something, he really gives it 110 percent!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
I am glad he is taking care of Bella. I hope they talk and get a plan going soon. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
It sure would help if they would talk! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
Oh no, no, no. Edward better get there in time! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
I hope she is okay. Edward is changing. I am glad. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
Well I am glad he went to graduation. That is a step in the right direction. I wonder where Bella was going to school....NYC maybe? Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Bella doesn't even know he's going there yet!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
So the spark is there. I can't wait to see how this works out. They are going to have to start being around each other. What is Edward planning for New York. There is a lot to discuss! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
I hope he goes to Bella's graduation. That would be horrible if he didn't. Especially since Tori calls and runs right out the door.
Author's Response:
It was nice that Bella gave him the option.
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
It is sad that James thought this was the best way. I can't believe Bella was ready to join him. I'm glad that Edward is keeping his promise. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
James might have fallen, we don't know that he jumped!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
James is one messed up dude! I worry about Bella being with him. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
James means it, he is just so mixed up!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
Great stuff! Curious to see if she will bring up "the other women" conversation!
Author's Response:
Funny how she just assumes he will have other women, isn't it!