[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
Yea! have they even told her parents? I dont think I recall that happening yet!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
Wow!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
Well whatever trouble Jess causes it best not be anything that willl hurt those twins! Give them some happiness please... yes, so happy they are back together and really together
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
Favorite lines of ALL TIME:
If I find you standing in the middle of a room, your clothes covered in orange paint and paint all over the walls and floor with a brush in your hand and you say you didn’t do it. You didn’t do it. Agreed. Forever.”
That is fucking priceless
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
Happy Dance Touhdown!!! Shabang!!!! yes!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
Well lets hope he is saying NO to Bella leaving!!! and telling Jess to get out
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
Oh for pete's sake are you fucking kidding me!!! Bella and Edward TALK please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
Wow Bella Wow Girl!!!!! You should hear him and really listen with your heart! and not with what you think.... he loves you girly! You love him too!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
what the heck can't wait to find out why he ran!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
Holy Hell!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
OMG he left the bear and her rings under the tree with a note.... OMG
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
Yay!!! Help has arrived
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
poor dear
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
Well I agree finally shit I was in near tears with what this Man has been through 360 degree change over Bella and she is feeling the same damn way about him.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
Heartbreaking Edward!!!! kept the teddy bear!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
OMG he is going to be so upset
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
Bella Bella Bella what are you doing girl! Can't believe you!!!! Okay Okay deep breathes here.... love the story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
Okay Bella he spelled it out, now you need to hear him and not over think this!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
holy shit Tanya Denali NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Leave Bella's Edward alone
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
It's a heartwarming story in so many ways... You feel for the insecure, self reliant, unassuming Bella, and warm to the love that is growing within Edward... great Story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
Awww that Million Dollar smile will get ya every time dearest One!!!! Love this story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Thank goodness they found her but yikes now Carlilse knows, Hummm both of them are having feelings aren't they
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
Bella, Bella Bella
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
Oh no what happened to our girl
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
you go Bella
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
Didn't take nearly as long as I feared for him to start caring
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
Wow
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
Dang
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
Can't believe I am feeling compassion for Tori
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)
Well somtimes you have to like the characters that you have always hated... Meaning James
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 3 Promises (L)
Awesome Story!
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
Really like this story, not so much Edward's personality at this juncture of the story... but it is what it is. Right?!
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 75 Information
ugh......I hope so!!!!! Thank you for the update!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
Love it!! Thank you for the update!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 75 Information
I hope he can get info out of Mike. Edward can not found guilty of htis. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 75 Information
thanks for the update, Chief's getting closer..;-D)
Author's Response:
Yep! Any progress is beter than none!
Thanks for leaving a coment!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 75 Information
oh i hope Mike can shed light to all this chaos! i also hope he brings up about Tyler...
Author's Response:
Yes, I hope Mike spills about Tyler as well! Wonder if Mike knew that Tyler's wife's name was Jessica?
Date: 29 Aug 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 75 Information
Wow you passed 500 just like that! You go Girl!
Author's Response:
I had to think for a minute about what you meant! I love keeping in touch with thereaders, not so much the number of reviews, but the interest and comments that I get. It keeps me writing!
Wish I ws at the beach! really . . .
Date: 29 Aug 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 75 Information
finally they have mike! PLLLLEAAASSE LET HIM SPILL ALLLL THE BEANS!
Author's Response:
I hope he sings like a canary!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 75 Information
great chapter!! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 75 Information
Hello,
I must praise you for the turn of the story. It's really nice and exciting!
Go on - Lol Tina
Author's Response:
Thanks, I just didn't want him getting her back to be the end!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
you know, i was almost mad that this didnt give more info, but i'm loving how you end it right before anything juicey like info comes out.
it keeps us on our toes and wanting more. so right on!
Author's Response:
Ha! you read that o ne right, but i sure didn't mean to makje you mad! LOL
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
Oh bummer, it's been such a treat getting the daily & multiple daily updates, you've spoiled me rotten.
Will wait patiently though, good luck with RL, great chapter. Poor Edward & all his family who are kind of going through it with him.
Author's Response:
thanks for your support! I will update as often as possible, especially when I know you are out there waiting for it!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
Great chapter... hopefully Charile finds something :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
Both of your stories are simply put....great!!!! We all are thanlful to get regular updates, I look forward to them!! Now, Carlisle's private eye better get on the stick before Jessica does die or whoever did this to her finds out she is still alive and comes to finish it. Maybe he needs to issue a statement saying she is getting better and expecting to wake up any time and hide a guard in the room, so when the person comes in to finish her off, he gets caught!
Author's Response:
Ha! That's a really great idea!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
At least Carlisle has someone looking into this too. I hope the guy can help Charlie out. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank goodness someone is checking this out, right!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
Good for you.
Thanks for the update, great read.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
wow! yes go talk to mike charlie!!! :) Can't wait to see more!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
THEY NEED TO QUESTION MIKE, AND MIKE WILL SURELY TELL ON TYLER RIGHT?? I DONT WANT EDWARD GOING TO JAIL OR GETTING CONVICTED!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
Wow, I sure hope Jessica wakes up and tells the truth even if Bella has to promise money to her. Edward will probably be in jail a little, huh. I hope he gets to be there for the birth.....Victoria is out for blood, surely someone will get behind the truth. Edward will probably never return to being a dr., thank goodness for his inheritance!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
Well Charlie seems to have the right names. I hope he can find everyone to talk to. Mike has got to help out in this... Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
Nice!!! LOve it!! Glad Charlie is getting closer to the right person!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
My question is, is this story going to have a happy ending?
Author's Response:
Dear GreenEyesLove06, if you read my profile, you know that I only do HEA! Live has too many things that aren't happy, might as well read only the happy things in my opinion! lol
Yes, there is angst, but it will always end with Bella and Edward together, Always.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
this is depressing me lmao
Author's Response:
Ahhh, sorry! It will get less depressing - more intense maybe?
Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
Great chapter, wow, didn't see Vic back in the story, bitch, she just completely forgets that Edward was supportive to her after her breakup? Of course, he did kind of not have anything to do with her after that day she came on to him. bitter much?
Good luck moving hope nothing gets broke;-D)
Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response:
Nothing got broke! (at least today)
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
Wow...so he has other people against him too. They DA doesn't care about the truth or who is innocent or really guilty. This is really scary for Edward and he doesn't even know how bad it is. Charlie is really going to have to come through on this one. Maybe Lee can change his attitude and help out. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I think Lee will be no help. and Charlie will have to work overtime to solve this one!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
Yeah, i don't care f Bella is pregnant, she needs to show Lee first hand what assault & attempted murder is! he he
Author's Response:
Yes! you go girl!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
awe, how annoying.
Author's Response:
Edward just does not like to loose, especially to death!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
Aww poor Edward, so much against him :((( Even though I don't like her, I hope Jessica recovers and tells the flippin truth!!! Also I kinda hope something they do upsets Bella enough for her to go into early labor and the twins lives be at risk (of course in the end they all have to be okay) But I know we'd get to see some very pissed off overprotective Edward :)))))) WHich as you know I love!!!!! Thank you for all your updates!! Love your stories!!
Author's Response:
Glad you love the story! Thanks for reviewing, I love hearing from you!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
well, foe me Lee doesn't need only a slap...damn if i just hit him with a bat! who is he to command Charlie of what to do?! He can clearly see that Edward is cooperating with them and is too willing to follow Charlie. What is it with this Lee character of yours? trying to be a good policeman?
Author's Response:
Lee is a character I chose because no one has any predetermined idea about him, we are not familiar with him . . .
Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
I guess we all knew this was coming. Something has to give. I just have no idea what it is going to be. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can keep you in suspense for a bit!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
:: SLAP :: God that felt good to virtually slap that childish whiney prick!
Author's Response:
Yes! Thank you, the prick deserved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
uh oh.... lets please let Jessica wake up soon
Author's Response:
I don't think we're that lucky!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
oh no...I hope they don't make Bella go into labor or something.......Thank you for teh updates!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, it's almost time! Charlie obviously wanted her to calm down as well, probably thinking about her going into lable prematurely.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
Awwww so sad!!!
Author's Response:
Loosing a baby will always and forever be sad.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
When Edward said "I just lost the baby" I knew someone would take that wrong. I hope Jessica make it through this so Edward can be cleared. I feel bad for what Jessica has been through, but I don't want Edward to suffer too. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Doesn't look as though Jessica is walking up!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
Poor baby......I hate to hear of anyone loosing a baby, even in a fiction. It's hard to accept and get over it even if it was 16 yrs ago :-(
Author's Response:
Not sure you ever exactly get over a thing like that.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
people are still soo stuck on it being his baby, but he's the dumbass that fucking words it wrong ALLL THE TIME. idiot lmao
Author's Response:
I suppose he doesn't pick and choose his words cause he knows he is innocent!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
loosing is really fucked up especially if it's a human being regardless if he/she is a relative or not. but the situation Edward is in is really getting worst until Jessica wakes up. can't imagine the misery he is in including that of Bella, Charlie and the rest of the family. when are you going to wake Jessica up to shred light to all this things? will Mike come up for Edward?
Author's Response:
Mike is a cowardly little twit . . . still!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
:( so hard for him...no doctor wants to lose a patient
Author's Response:
Yep, but I love that Edward cares so much!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
YES FINALLY PROOF THAT JESSICA'S BABY WASNT EDWARDS! IF HE GETS THE FILE THEN HOPEFULLY WE CAN FIND OUT TYLERS MARRIED TO JESSICA.. WELL I THINK THEY WERE MARRIED .. EITHER WAY.. STILL.
AND WHERE THE FUUUCK IS TYLER!!???
Author's Response:
Good question - I'll see if I can answr that for you . . .
Date: 27 Aug 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
It is sad the baby died. Edward will take that hard. I hope Jessica wakes up. Someone jas to know she was married. Where are her parents? I like how Charlie let the info out about the baby not being Edwards. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
Charlie is becoming team Edward!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
I can't believe the way things are going....ugh :((((( Can't they figure out Jessica was married, and consider that person???????
Author's Response:
You would think so, right!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
Yes, he is but sadly he doesn't have the faith to trust him or his daughters word on it. Of course bein a cop I'm sure scepticism comes with the job. thanks for the updates, can't wait for this to unravel..;-)
Author's Response:
Faith, well . . . he's working on it!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
poor baby :( so sad.... i wonder if anyone even knew about Tyler.... would certainly help out alot!
Author's Response:
I think she kept Tyler a BIG secret!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
:)
Author's Response:
TKS for reviewing!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
He better stand back and let the pro's take over, he'd be killing the baby if he tried to interfere & I'm positive he would not want to do that.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
i guess the baby didnt do anything wrong to nobody yeah, but i still wouldnt have helped jessica, i just hope that damn tyler comes to the hospital with some scratchs on his face and shit so maybe they can get this shit over with and leave Edawrd and Bella the hell alone.
Author's Response:
Me Too!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
There is nothing Charlie can do. He has to all the doctor do what they can to try to save the baby and Jessica. It would look worse if Edward did nothing and he was the one that could save her baby. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Totally right.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
uh oh :(
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
:)
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
Oh, great! So no one knows about Jessica's ex-boyfriend???
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
well at least they can blood test the baby soon and prove Jessica is a lier!!!! Thank you for the update!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
Oh boy, not looking good for E. But the thing is if she's beaten to near death & she's gotten knocked up --why not try & do some investigative work & see where she lived before & who she was with? She'd just started work there.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
i wouldn't be surprised if her boyfriend didn't tell her she needed to blame E & she's ___ enough to do it.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
what a great wife
Date: 27 Aug 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
Edward certainly not shy since he knows the truth! what i'm afraid of is if Jessica does not wake up at all or if she wakes up she'll not tell the truth that it's Tyler who beats her up and the child she's carrying is not Edward's.
Date: 26 Aug 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
:)
Date: 26 Aug 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
:)
Date: 26 Aug 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
Damn, I should have thought about all that shit when it happened. Damn! Everything is pointing to Jessica! HE SHOULD HAVE LET HER SUFFER OUTSIDE THAT DAMN CAR! SHE DIDNT DESERVE THAT HELP FROM HIM AFTER ALLTHE SHIT SHE'S PULLED.
I BET THAT BITCH SAYS EDWARD DID IT!