[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love the story!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait to travel Eurpoe with them!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella and Edward are so naughty. and he didnt even clean his desk of... though thats kind of hot , well really hot lmao.
Emmett's hilarious, I love him and Bella's banter. I nearly died when she said that she loved Edwards ya know, in her hot ya know.. lmao, and it said that Emmett's mind went blank for the first time ever lmao God that was hilarious.
He truely has met his match.
I love how carefree and naughty bella is. hehe. you fucking rock!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhh I want a summer in Europe with Edward! And how naughty are they doing it in the school - that was HOT!!!!
Thanks so much!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter! Absolutey hate Tanya! Lol! Although personally Id have wound Tanya up some more if I was Bella. I would have told Tanya to keep replaying the sex scene in the woods because it would get Edward all hot under the collar and he'd have sex with Bella again! Hehe! That would have pissed her off!
I like the truth or dare game. I couldnt tell if Bella and Edward were going to go at it in front of everyone or were they going to leave. Hehe! X
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love horny Edward.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
So how fun would that be to play Truth or Dare with the Cullens...it has my vote!
Tanya is going to be real trouble isn't she :D
Thanks so much for the update <3
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Tanya... She will never win. Great chap
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
here's lots of love!!!!! grest chapter...
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter..i thought it would have been emmett that walked up on edward and bella in the woods...tanya is such a bitch. good fro edward for being able to taste bellas blood so easily. i have a feeling we havent seen the last of tanya..... cant wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
The are very open in this version about the change. I love it!!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG..........As old as Tanya is, will she ever get the hint that Edward doesn't want her?
Date: 07 Aug 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
heheheheheheh.. that ws just.. just.. fucking awesome.
TAKE THAT TANYA YOU NO GOOD TWO BIT WHOORE LMAO!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett can be such a turd. It is a good thing he has a good heart. Bella is going to get him back as a newborn. This is one thing she will not forget after the burn.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
Our kitten is going to become a Jaguar or Panther so Tanya better look out!!!!! Love this story
Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
i say its tanya that caught them and saw the show i guess thats one way to show that he is taken i cant wait to see if i am right so please update soon
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love the chapter. Im thinking the applause came from Tanya
Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
tanya i think:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
O.M.G., I hope not James!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
good lord! phew those two go at it like animals!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG - roflmao....an audience...that's awesome!
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love that you haver included Jacob and the wolfpack in such a positive way! I really like the relationship you are building between Edward and Bella and look forward to seeing it grow furthur. I would like to see more of the other Cullens and Bellas growing relationship with them too though.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, I can't get over this story it is so different, but so good!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really enjoy your stor I can't wait for more of it.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Best frekin story ever
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am really hooked on this story, and get so excited with each new chapter. Ewww James is horrible.. Perv!!!
Tanya coming for Spring Break ey!? Well that should be some interesting storyline especially with Jake being present as well.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
ugh i fucking hate james. hes going to be a problem i know it.
and fucking tanya, i hope she can at least accept that bella is with edward. i hate when she's all caniving and shit and rude and mean like she's better than BELLA in stories.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
WOW, I HOPE HE EXPLAINS TANYS TO HER, CAUSE SOMETHIN TELLS ME TANYA WON'T LIKE BELLA AND WILL TRY SOMETHING! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE....
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ooohhh an Edward spanking would be delish wouldn't it? And I love that she has the necklace.
Thank you so much! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wouldn't you just die if you got a text from Edward saying he's coming to take what's his? I know I would.
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well James is a real prick isn't he? Trouble trouble trouble.
Oh the visions of Edward in a supply closet........*sigh
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Mmmm, a hot shower with Edward doing wonderful things with his tongue....sounds perfect :D
Thank you!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
lol im happy they are become friends i wander what going to happen is going to good there always something happen to stop it keep up with this great story
you fan
lola
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn - I'll do ya again Edward!
Thanks so much!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
Oh very sexy!
Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Hahahaha - I loved "are you afraid?" "no I'm fucking horny"...hahahaha
that was brilliant...
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wish I had a teacher like Edward in school :D
Thank you so much and I can't wait to read more!!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
james is such a creepy shit. I swear!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so far!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
poor edward and bella they need some alone time! and that creep james i knew hewould be a problem. glad jake and edward seem to get along i knew they would since they both love bella. cant wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Vampire Blue Balls, what a thought! Loved this chapter, Especially Bella and Emmett!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
hmmmm wonder how that is going to work !!!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
liked this chapter, now he needs to explain mates, and vampire mating !!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow great first chapter !!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
i like vixen bella:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
well that was amazing and killer. I love how she got him to Yell You Win!!! LMAO
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
cute story love it thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
glad they finally did it!!! hope james doesnt try and cause a problem noticing that bella isnt in class and edward is out as well......
Date: 18 Jul 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
LMAO, those two are naughty hussies. Eddie and Bella. I love your Edward and Bella, god so much better than the prudeish and angsty ones.
James woods huh? Interesting, that nosey git.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
James is an ass. just sayin. Great chap. Love this story!!!
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
that was fucktastic!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
love this story!!!! cant wait for dinner at the swans no telling what bella will try and do! and that sub....hmm i hope he wont be aproblem....
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
now James Woods is a total prick, thank goodness Edward can here when he is around. Love this story
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
hot shit great stuff
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
gosh I love this story now this is what SM should have written.. yes,yes i know she couldn't.. Oh well we loved it and therefore gives you this wonderful platform to create.. on to more chapters
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
i really like your writing
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love thii love this story
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am reading The Journey of a Swan and love it. This is really goos too. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the story so far. :)
Date: 12 Jul 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward and Jake met, it went much better than either expected, but not as smooth as Bella wanted. At least they have compromised, lets hope everyone else is a willing as these two.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
Having everyone in your family know about certain aspects of your life, can't be easy to handle. But they have had a long time to get used to it. It's Edward's turn now, how will he manage?
Date: 11 Jul 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Bella is taking things much better than Edward thought or hopped. There's still a lot for her to find out and process.
One interesting thing, why of the possibilities would she bring up a werewolf?
Date: 11 Jul 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella is observant and has seen more than most humans have in much more time. But it still isn't enough. She will keep trying to figure it out though. How long will it take her?
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Both Bella and Edward seem braver, I like that. Also, having Bella been in town before them gives it a unique twist.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
now that was hot! lmao.
I like this Edward so much better than the one in the books. Geez, he was such a downer. I like naughty teacher edward who wants bella and willdo shit with her when she wants.
I LOVE THIS STORY
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm loving this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
SO AWESOME STORY! Update super fast!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really love this confident Bella
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
Ooohhhh, great cliffie!! Loved the chapter!! More, please!!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
More please!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Love the chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
i love your Bella's personality.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this so far. Keep going.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
OOh i just love this story already! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT LET ROSALIE HATE HER!!!!??!?!?!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am really excited about your story! You definitely have me wanting to read more. Great beginning!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah! I like you skipping the whole angsty/self-doubting crap. Hell, if I wanted that, I would have read the books. Gasp.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it.
But I have one question...
I've read a few stories where the female is 17 and the male is between 20 and 25.And most people say that they wouldn't date a guy this old. So is it illegal or is it just the thought of dating an older guy?
Author's Response:
Edward was changed at 20 so he's only three years older than Bella. Once she has her birthday and is eighteen it will only be two years and won't really seem like a big deal. (In the story he is posing as older, but they all know he's only 20.)
My friends daughter is engaged to a 20 year old and she turns 18 next week. It doesn't seem weird to me. Maybe each situation is different. I just see it as dating an older guy. I guess it could be illegal if the parents didn't approve.
Hope that makes since. I don't think you'll really notice the age difference after a few chapters.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Like the story so far. I really like your Edward in this story he is not so up tight LOL