Date: 07 Oct 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
Soooo a whole weekend with Edward!!! What will they do?? Hummmmm...
Date: 07 Oct 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I guess that Bella is am observant person isn't she?
Date: 07 Oct 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well I am shocked that Alice didn't see anything sooner but I guess fate just shot Edward in the face didn't it?
Date: 06 Oct 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my who did she kill? And why didn't Alice see it? I know sometimes things get passed her when it's a spur of the moment thing but sometimes she sees it but it's too late. Maybe she killed Sue, I guess I will have to wait to find out. I also wonder why Bella is so crazy sometimes and wants to kill, she even hury Edward that doesn't seem normal.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
DID SHE KILL SUE?
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hahahahaha - that was awesome!!! Wouldn't you just love to break a bed with Edward????
Thanks so much!!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
Perfect! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
a great chapter and I am loving this story
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love it!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story, Im glad Bella was changed, it was time. I guess the timing was a little off, but oh well. I can't wait to hear of the new vampire things to come. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
What a interesting Immortal Mr Cullen's Bella truly is... What does he say about her? I think he refers to her as an amazing creature! Yes, Yes, she is!
Date: 03 Oct 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
Her powers are awesome she should be thrilled, with powers like that she can finish school and be around her dad and not have to worry about things. I can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
was gonna happen one way or the other
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
did the wolves attack her?
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
nice twist in the story
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
awww sweet
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
poor Charlie
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
hot, curious why you have introduced another sibling
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
a great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
so the only foreseeable problem is James
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
poor James always the asshole I just o like the name but now it has so many negative connotations
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
good chaper some interesting twists from the original
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow!! Its finally happening, I knew it would be a "suprise" type of thing!!! Yeah!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
That's Great! What a way to change!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Dum-dum-duuuuuuummmmmm! Oh what an evil place to stop! LOL. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Muah - Fangs
Date: 25 Sep 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my didnt see that one coming wow things just got a whole lot more interesting. I cant wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I bet Edward could make any girls "hooha" feel like it was on fire. :) What a way to burn......
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
WOW, that's interesting!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow what a way to be changed into a vampire.fab chapter.update soon
Date: 15 Sep 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Paul needed to be pulled apart. He went against his brother and against the treaty. Paul is just mean. I don't know how any of his fellow wolves can trust him again. I am so glad that they found her before he raped her.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad to hear alittle more on Rebekah. Can't wait for the next update!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! What an interesting chapter! I like the use of the venom for reattaching her limbs, very clever and for her and Embry to imprint... Whoa!
Thoroughly enjoying this BB ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was a good twist!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow Paul is messed up in the head! He says he hates vampires but he was going to force himself on one, the pack should kill him he's a loose cannon and probably won't stop evem if they tell him too. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
What has Rebekah been up to that ahe's disappearing all the time? Who is chasing her? And what's going on with Bella? Those are just a few questions I have right now and will be anxiously awaiting your updates to find out. I love the fact that Edward isn't afraid of changing Bella in this story it takes a huge weight off of both of them that he just accepts it's inevitable. I do wonder when they will change her will it be after graduation or are they going to be able to hold off until college or after?
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder what Rebekah has been up to the last few days.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
I like the whole Bella supersenses. Can't wait to see if anything else happens to her. I love the whole Halloween coustums. Can't wait to see what is happening with Rebekah.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter and a very long award nomination!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
omg hope rebekahs ok.fab chapter.edward has superman thats hot
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great Chapter update... Was curious if you're making Bella pregnant; but you kind of down played the whole thing so thinking now you're not?! Still not sure tho...
I voted in the awards! Good Luck BB ~ can't wait to see what's been up with Rebekah...
XxOo ~ Fangs
Author's Response:
I'll never tell. lol
THank you for your vote!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
"but with Rebekah, who is also a seer, she had the ability to block other seers."
When did that happen? Was it mentioned before she was a seer? It's weird it seems to just come up now and odd that she can block other seers.
Author's Response:
I'm not one hundered percent, since it's been a long time since I wrote this story, but I'm almost positive I said she had visions at some point around her first meeting the family. I may not have, but this may have been the chapter that her gifts were discussed with everyone. THis is an ExB story so I may not have brought it up until it actually possed a problem. I'll have to go back and reread and find out. I'm always trying to make my stories better.
THanks for reading.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
she's slowly turning...and Superman to save the day!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yeah -congratulations on your nomination - that is awesome!!!!!!
Adore your choices for halloween costumes...Luna and Cedric and Superman...roflmao
Hmmmm - so who attacked Rebekah?????
Thanks so much for the update!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
here is some love
great story
Date: 05 Sep 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
i love this storyand your other one i cant believe you dont have thousands of readers your a wonderfully talented writer!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww - leaving you lots of love for this chapter. <3
Glad Charlie took things so well....
Thanks so much.
Oh - can I please have detention with Edward?? hehehehe
Date: 03 Sep 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Awesome!! Wonderful :) Great Friday night reading! :O)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
This was a good chapter. I keep waiting for something bad to happen. Shell shock!!!!
Date: 02 Sep 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
if it wasn't for jacob his ass would have been grass! but i would like to see how the biys "own" him...lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a great chapter. Edward was obviously too engrossed in Bella to hear Charlie. lol
Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is slipping. He has got to pay better attention to the world around him when he and Bella are sexing. They should also never have sex at her house. That was just stupid.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
wow poor edward and bella! i cant believe charlie caught them! but atlest alice says everything works out! cant wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow - so many twists and turns in this chapt - love it!
Poor Bella and Edward getting caught by Charlie - how mortifying...
Thanks so much for the update~
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2011 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my, she set him straight.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
I like Rebekah. She is great and won't put up with Emmett's crap either. I don't get this girl kissing girls just for fun. There is no way I would do it.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hahaha - I just their Truth or Dare games.....hilarious!!!!!!
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
*sigh*
More please...
XoXo ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great story!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just started this today and I'm so excited for this story!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my heavens..... I totally love where you are going with this story! Its fantastic!!! I cant wait for more updates :)
XxOo ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
I am totally loving the. pace of this story. i love that edward isnt all sulking and broodish. I love that bella is so open in accepting her feelings and not constantly struggling with her self-worth. Its just awesome, Baby... Awesome!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Awww.... very sexy Edward... *sigh*
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
OK, I hope I was supposed to laugh at certain parts of this chapter because there were a couple places that just made me laugh out loud...
I'm totally lovin' this...
Muah ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so excited to read more of this... I'm perfectly fine with the pace and the fact that there's an age difference... I agree... it is just FICTION. LOL. Good job so far!
Muah ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
This was an emotional chapter. I truly love this story!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella really needs to watch what she does at school. I get that she wants to get reactions from him but I don't think she realizes how risky it is. Glad James got caught. Did it stop him or just make him mad???
Date: 19 Aug 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
nice to see them all actually like each other
Date: 19 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well that was different. :0)
Date: 19 Aug 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Pretty lucky Edward has that super hearing and the gift of reading minds. Makes it a bit easier to sneak around.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well that meeting between Jake and Edward was kind of weird. Glad they didn't rip each other apart though. Wonder what the bbq will be like. ha ha
Date: 19 Aug 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
I wondered when or if the wolves would be around. This sounds like it could be a different "Jake" though.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Love seeing them grow closer
Date: 19 Aug 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he's actually accepting that she's his mate? It's nice to see he's not fighting it. At least it sounds like she's got a birthday coming up soon so it won't be long till she's 18
Date: 18 Aug 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this so far. What a neat idea, making Edward her teacher. I like the idea of an atraction to each other that they just can't deny.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really liked hearing about Carlisle passed. I aslo like that you have brought
Rebekah into the story. I can't wait to see where this is all going..
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think Rebekah makes a sweet addition.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
i dont trust that rebekah chick
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yeah! Fabulous chapter - thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW!! What a shock for Carlisle!! Poor man!!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think that is a cool twist.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hahahaha - were Edward and Bella reading Twilight? That is hilarious :D
What a twist that Carlisle would find a daughter! Interesting! Anxious to see where this could go.
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love the twist!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMFW, his sister! Sweet....
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is interesting....finding out about Carlisle's human life and finally coming across his first human daughter Rebekah. Wonder if she will be returning to the US with the rest of his adopted family since his vampire change? Can't wait for the next chapter ;o
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
I just started this story yesterday, and now I'm all caught up. I really like it so far. This was a great chapter. I was laughing at Edward & Bella making fun of the "fiction vampire story".. hee hee. I really like the twist here at the end with Rebekah... I am eager to hear her story and why she has chosen a "vegetarian" diet as well.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh wow! thats awesome carlisle preserved hisbirth place like that and WOW his human daughter thts now a vamp is there! cant wait to see wha happends next!!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
You know, the age of consent in Washington is 16, not 18. It wouldn't be illegal for Bella and Edward to have sex. Just saying!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
"I would never condone my seventeen year old dating a 20 or 23 year old, but this is supernatural and Edward and the Cullen's live a little above the law. "
I don't see a problem with it. If he's 20 and she's 17 that's only 3 years AND they'd have been in high school together. She's have been a sophomore when he was a senior. Would you have had a problem with them dating then? If they had, should they have broken up just because he hit the government mandated 18 years old legal adult age? Not to mention in several states the legal age to date someone is 17, some places as young as 15. Every state is different. They are all just made up numbers and if two people meet and are mature then I don't see the problem.
Him being her teacher on the other hand can pose some issues though due to the position of authority. But I'm a total submissive and find that hot so don't listen to me. ;)
Loving the story, can't wait to read the rest of it! :)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait for Europe!!! I love this story<3
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a wonderful summer trip? This will also help her get use to being without Charlie.