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Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

still loving it. Im glad that Edward heard the babies heartbeats.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

Yaaayyyy........Edward finally knows the twins are on the way ;-)

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

Always have a minuet to leave love..

Psoriasis the secret twins are almost out. Of the bag. Just E & C to find oUt now.

As always ********** 10gold stars

Wishing you happy holidays, and speedy jobs done. 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

LOVE IT!!!  I really like how Edward discovered Bella being pregnant!!!!!!!

Keep up the great writing!!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

Excellent, the twins are conceived!!! I hope Bella makes it thru fine, after all Alice seen Edward with them not Bella!!  But you wouldn't do that, would you???  I guess when Edward and Bella get to London, the cat will be out of the bag huh!! Great update, I was missing this story!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

I love this story. enjoyed the details on the room construction/remodeling also. Thats a first for me.  Happy holidays.

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content

Thanks ofr the update it was great. We have missed you. Happy Holidays

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 136 Content

I like the way you wrote about the twins being heard for the first time by Edward.So sweet.I can`t wait to read about Masen`s reaction.

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

Yes!!  Please keep going!!  I am curious though if they are ever going to circumsize little Masen before he gets to much older...I am so happy that they finally got rid of Victoria too!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance

Way to go Edward!! That was awesome how he accepted the baby in this story...Thank you!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday

I agree.  Charlie needs to get over it!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 Home

You are not feeling the love???  That is really a shame because this has to be the BEST story that I have read on any fan fiction site!!  This is awesome!! I really love this Edward & Bella...



Author's Response:

So glad you like it - and you have only just begun!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

Much apologies I don't think I reviewed the last chapter, was sick when I read it.

Will have to give two lots of gold stars, 

So little nudges yay, but will E be desperate to take them home so she can have the baby's or will they be little Europeans ???

Hopefully we will find out soon.

********** ten gold stars for this chapter

********** and ten delayed gold stars for the last chapter. :0)

All the best, 

Lolly



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lolly!  I am kind of swamped and don't even know where to start getting things done at my house today!  Hopefully more chapters soon!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!  Can't wait for Edward to relize she is preggors!!!!!!!!!!:)))))

Thank You for the update!!!!!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

That was perfect. Yea...the babies are coming!!!

Had a blast this Black Friday. But made even better by getting this.

Loves <3

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

Hhhmmmm......a little nudge within? Sounds like there may be little ones on the way ;-) Can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

loved the chapter !

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

mercy   that was killer...  I know what you mean with packing and unpacking... I'm the same way... hate it!!!!   Masen is getting so big!!!! Take care!! till next time!

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

Hello,

I love your story, please go on. And  Masen is so cute. But does he still need a diaper?

Lol - Tiina

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

I have missed you. but the update was so worth it. hope to hear more soon

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

I like how this story is going.  I hope you continue the good work and I hope you have a very happy holiday season.

 

love jukie

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

Just when I think a chapter could not get any better, it does!! Edward and Bellas love, the way you write it, you can just feel it, and yes want it!! I hope that Bellas now pregnant, Edward should hear the baby's heartbeat soon. Lovin it.....Can't wait till next time!!!

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

I miss reading this story. Update? :)

Author's Response:

So sorry I have gone a week without updating!  I had comjpany staying with me and we wee busy seeing the sights and reconnecting!  I will write and post a chapter in the next few days, promise!  Thanks for wanting more!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

loved it! and edward is just a great dad!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

good chapter. More babies coming up. I think it is wonderful. How many people love this much?  Intense.

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions

So loving this BOOK! This is great. Love ya bunches, keep up the great chapters.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

loved it looking forward to the enxt chapter 

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

I love that little Masen is getting around a little bit on his own.....so cute ;-)  Can't wait till his little brother and sister are born!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

Love it!!!   Thank you for the update!!!!!

Reviewer: loveLambLife Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

aw, that's just the sweetest chapter ever. I love fluff :)

Anyway, I'm curious to find out whether the new baby/ies will have the same powers as Masen (at least I hope that there will be more :)

Thanks for a great chapter!

Kate x

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 83 Taken

I am just so amazed that Victoria is more powerful than any vamp in the world. Wow!

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon

Wow

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

Nice!!!!  Love It!! Can't wait for the Bella, Edward, Mason chapter :))))

 

Keep up the great writing!!! I love it!!!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

It's really lovely to have more background, and with the added bonus of a E,B&M chappy is just icing on the cake. 

Hope all is well with you. And your story is wonderfully as always.

********** can't forget your gold stars. :0)

Hoping to hear more soon.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

AThe Cullens don't need that trouble!greed,  interesting chapter, I hope Aro stays where he is and never finds out about Masen, Bella the wolves, Jacob or the new babies to be. 

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

Love hearing from the fam. So the rents are heading to London!!

Can we have more babies now!!!??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Loves <3

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

always like to seee the parents POV a nice change. eleazar had a point though how long wil they be able to hide mason from aro they will need to bee verry careful with who sees him...cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

I liked Daddy C's surprise for his wife to meet the kids at the castle.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 133 Surprises

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 69 Sue

Yes, I love the story. I just cannot turn the pages fast enough, I can't wait to read the next chpt. My housekeeping is suffering and I forgot to roll my hair today after my shower. Page turner!

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants

My first time for a review. I really really love this story. At this point in the chapters I don't know if it is complete or not. It is so much fun to read a different story of my favorite characters. Love hearing what the siblings and parents are doing also. Love it, love it, love it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 132 Back Home

loved the chapter looking forward to the next one 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 132 Back Home

Loved it!!!!!!   I keep hoping for Bella to announce she is pregnant, but you always suprise me, so I am sure it won't be till we least expect it!!

Keep up the great work!!!  Thank you for updating!!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 132 Back Home

Go Charlie!!!!  I see Emily's point, but you have to forgive, not forget.  With a baby on the way.....move forward!!!  The council delt with Sam and his punishment fit the crime ans was more painful that Emily realized I believe. And Bella's move on the driving of the cars...hilarious!!!!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 132 Back Home

Have to say. 

.................

LOVE the catch up from back home. 

Really breaks up the traveling :0) 

Wonderful job as always :0). ********** there's ya 10 gold stars.

Take care. (more soon)

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 132 Back Home

glad bella and edward got some family time with just the 3 of them...and poor emily i hope jacob comes back soon to help her out and charlie is to funny i bet he does try and go to where bella and edward are! haha cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

A very sweet time between the three of them...

Reviewer: lilredridinghood Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

OMG!!! love you story.. it is never to soon for am update hahaha... keep up with creative jucies because this is a doosy of a story...

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!  Thankyou for updating!!!!  I  am crossing my fingers for Tanya to behave from now on, and I am thinking the Voltori,,,whenever they do show up will be no match for Mason!!!  

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

Soo sweet, so more and more likely that the twins will be coming. Yay. Glad Tanya's mind has been changed for her but could do without her, don't like her. Lol

 

As always 10 gold stars**********

And hope I will catch each cappy as you post as I seem to be on a delay these days :0) 

Take care

Keep wrighting

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

Cute chapter. I could just imagine Bella freaking out about masen swimming. Beautiful pics. Do you have a pic of what you think Masen looks like?

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

I love this Edward and Bella.  Can't wait for the nrxt chapter!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

I love this story, and this trip and been so nice.

 

Thank you,

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

I like the alone time they spend together.........I like the idea of the locket from Edward's mother and the pictures of him and Mason.....so cute ;-)

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

So cute!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

poor bella freaking out over mason! but wow mason is just an awesome little boy! i wish you could find a pic or manip of what u think mason looks like! wonderful and cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

loved the chapter looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 131 Verona

Yes,it did surprised me a little,and yes I enjoy the story very much.I hope you continue to write it.It`s an incredible story.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

Love, love love baby Masen.

Reviewer: twilightgirl1690 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

love the chap xx



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

FYI...Still lovin the story.  You never know what to expect!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

Interesting..........You sure do keep me guessing, but I always end up loving where you go with it!!!!!!!!!!!   Love it!!!!!      Thank you for updating!!!!!!

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

I really liked this one. Hearing Masen POV was great. Cannot wait for more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

Great chapter... yet again!!!  Oh, I hope that Edward gets his chance at Tanya....Mason will tell Daddy everything!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

loved it 



Author's Response:

So happy you did!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

I Loved masons pov so sweet. Wonderful as always. 

Cant forget your 10 gold stars********** :0). Have a great weekend yourself



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed Masen!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

poor little mason thought hewould be in trouble! such a cutie! and wow what a power....great chapter! loved getting inside masons head!



Author's Response:

Really glad you liked it!  Masen is difficult because he has to have full powers, yet he is just an infant!

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella

Loved the last chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  More to come!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

Yay I'm glad renee, has gone home, she's great and all but.. Well home she toddles and bye.

Love little mason being a minx and turning Tanya s mind round. Love it wanna see that again maybe with her sisters about so they can watch her humiliation as well.

 

Oh and big apologies for this beeping really late. Been running around like a blue arsed fly and this is the first chance I've had to read.  As always ten gold stars ********** in fact I think I might just add ***** some bonus ones as the idea of Tanya flying into the lagoon was priceless. :0)

Better late than never. 

Lolly

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

wow. Lots happened here. Renee finally left. Edward and Bella really need some time alone. Since they got back together they have had non stop company. I love what Masen did to tanya. Is she going to go to aro now? Was Masen happy and clapping because of what feelings he gave to tanya or because he knew his mom and dad were back?

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions

lol Jacob is so funny. I was wondering about him and if he was back to see his girl yet.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected

I want Masen to put some thoughts in her head! Im glad Bella does not let Tanya get to her.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 126 Venice

sounds like they just ran into trouble.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery

Love the pictures.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I just realized I could add pictures!

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

im glad you made them fight. They are too perfect otherwise.

Author's Response:

Well, they just need to learn to communicate, like everyone does when newly married!

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

So could Edward get drunk off of her breast milk?

Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely!

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

lol. Renee is going to be fun I think.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

great chapter. I was waiting for Masen to pee on Edward while he was changing his diaper.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 104 Details

I forgot that Bree had a boyfriend.
It seems like everytime i wonder about things in this story you always answer them in the next few chapters. A true sign of a wonderful writer.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

Ok I get imprinting from the wolf's/persons point of view. But how does it work for those who does not have the wolf gene? Do they feel the imprint too or do they just fall in love with the imprinter? And if Jacobs punishment for Sam would be banishment from the tribe and would tell him not to phase anymore can he fall out of the imprint?

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

They need to ask masen. They keep saying he is so smart but no one is talking to him. Does he want a little bit of pain.

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

Glad that Renee is finally gone too ... she was starting to get a wee bit annoying with ther questions all the time ... Now it's time for Tanya to disappear. That girl has got some mental issues for sure :) but her idea of getting rid of Masen are pretty upsetting. Thinking the Volturi might get involved ... i hope not :(

Either way, great story, great lemons and i love to find updates :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

lol. Funny Tanya POV. Can't wait to see what'll happen ^^



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  Glad  you liked it!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

WOW!  Mason has some great power there to get Tanya to like the idea of Edward with Bella.  Would have lasted too if Daddy hadn't come in and gone ballistic.  Now Tanya is back to being Tanya.  Thanks for the great chapter.



Author's Response:

We have to se if the thought holds in Tanya's mind!

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair

Maybe just one more.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 85 Queries

I need to stop reading now and go to sleep! Just can't seem to do it. Can't wait to read more in the morning!

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 82 Hungers

im surprised that Masen is not jealous that Daddy is drinking his milk.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie

I hope Sam comes around and sees what an ass he is being.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance

When Emily and Sam were arguing she should have told him that he was acting as if he didnt have a heart when he mentioned that edward was dead and didnt have a heartbeat.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected

Well maybe they finally got away from Tanya!!! How cute is it that Edward sang to her!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 126 Venice

Oh man Tanya is here now... I hope that she doesn't try something that she is going to regret.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing

Haha I hope Edward tells Bella what Charlie and sue are up to.

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

I loved Tipsey Bella

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

OMG I just loved it!!!  Mason is SO funny!!!!   Loved Edward tossing her out!! I bet he'll be furious when he figures out she was thinking about killing his son....eeeek!!!!!  Poor Tanya is going to do something stupid I think....  :(((  Keep it up I just LOVE this story!!!!!

 

Thank you Thank you for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Not sure Edward had heard all the thoughts, or he might have dismembered her, then thrown her out!  lol

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes

Well at least Jacob can afford to replace the clothes he destroys now.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

loved it im glad that thye can get on with their trip with out mommy hainging around 



Author's Response:

Absolutely!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

LMFAO...Tanya is such a slut and cow...I can't stand her.  I LOVED, absolutely loved Edward pushing her into the lagoon.  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I enhoyed him tossing her as well!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving

wow what a chapter. glad renee is gone but that tanya will never learn! mason better tell edward what all he read in tanyas mind!!



Author's Response:

I think Edward is going to blow a gasket when he finds out the whold story!

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