Date: 15 May 2011 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Forks
nice chapter:)
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Forks
Just gettin better and better.
Date: 15 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Forks
well its about time! i hope they catch renee! keep the updates comming
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Swingers, Sweet Potato Pie and PMS
hopefully we are or they are getting closer
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Swan Can Break a Man's Arm, You Know
ut oh
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Sunflower of My Life
I wonder if it is taking this long to kiss how long before they make love?
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confessions
now he knows she knows lol
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Anticipation
A+
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Celebrations and Epiphanies
you may need rehab before you are done
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
Snowqueen is wonderful but you are u their in the top 5, I love this story. I developing relationship and not in bed together by chapter 2 saying I love yous but spiced up with their great fantasies
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! That is high praise, indeed.
Peps
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
awwwwwwwww
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
they are playing him so well
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Things You Learn at Brunch
:)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
he has really sexy fantasies
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Makeover
cool link the the silver rock and roll shoes are hawt
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations
don't think I can write anything that good
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage
great
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
on bottom is ok too
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
here take a hit
Date: 13 May 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
I'm loving this story, hating Renee and looking forward to the next update!
Date: 11 May 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
Wonderful story! Can't wait for updates!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Somebody needs to cut that bitch
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Provocative Poach
Not sure I'd be able to stop.....its been tooooo long
Date: 10 May 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
Hello darling! I am teacher over at twilighted...and just saw this story recc's over here and wanted to help out your review count.
I see that the story is further along over here......is it any different from the story on twilighted?
I haven't read ahead or anything....just skipped to the bottom to leave my review.
I appreciate you letting me know!!!
Have a good day and good luck with your reviews!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Kiss Me, Baby
Finally!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
HAHA...I was going to mention your references to MOTU, but you beat me to it. Just so you know, I'm enjoying your story as much as I did Icy's.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am thrilled that you like it so much :)
Peps
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Smooth Moves
Whoever interrupted them need to be horse whipped!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
Okay...now just exactly when does Edwards head begin to spin round and round as he screams???? Hahahaha....poor guy, just doesn't stand a chance.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Small World
I just love this story. Very different than most here.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Wrong. NOTHING is better than that bulge! *wicked, lacivious grin*
Date: 09 May 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
I printed out your story on Friday afternoon and spent ALL weekend reading it! I could not put it down!!!! LOVE, LOVE , LOVE everything about it!!!!! I cannot wait for the updates now!!!! This is definitely a story that I will drop everything for and read the updates as soon as they post!
Date: 06 May 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
im excited for the next chapter
Date: 06 May 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
Wow. Well, I must say I am VERY happy Bella was able to stop the money transfer, sorry to see all her tips gone, but given the alternative it was peanuts. I would be nice if she never hears from Renee again, but somehow I doubt she could be that lucky.
What a spectacularly romantic evening for Edward and Bella. They have such a stellar foundation for their relationship. These naughty build ups toward giving themselves to each other are just wonderful.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
I love this story. They are so cute. I really hope Renee is gone fore good...
Date: 06 May 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Hateful. Vile. Reprehensible. Toxic. She may have given birth, but that woman certainly is no mother. What an awful person. As horrible as it was for her to see, I am glad Bella witnessed the horror show for herself. Just wish it was before any money left her possession. Certainly the money was the only reason Renee was there at all.
We still have the random issue of her perfume and the outdoor survival classes. Something else is up with that crazy woman. She is devious and manipulative, traits of many prison inmates.
Date: 05 May 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
This is a fucking spectacular story!
I'm sooooo hooked!!
Date: 05 May 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
Sigh... this is going so well. I'm upset about the money and clothes Renee stole and I feel more vengeful toward her than Bella has been, but I can accept her being totally out of the story, I guess. Or is she totally out of the story? :)
Love their elevator time, enough said.
I'm still curious about the mystery that was brewing, though. what of the mysterious break-in at the restaurant, and Bella's apt.??
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
i soo love these 2
Date: 05 May 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
I am so looking forward to more. I'm sure we haven't heard the last from that bitch who calls herself Bella's mother, the fact she took a wilderness survival course is just too much coincidence for me to not suspect something bad is lurking around the corner for Bella and Renee will be knee deep in it. Just let Edward save her I hate it when horrible things happen to either of them
Date: 05 May 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
16 thousand is so much better than 200,00. Renee should have gotten zero, but hopefully Bella is done with her. Bella needs to put her money in the bank from now on and use a card for big purchases. She gets cash daily for most of her smaller needs. I think Edward and Bella are so sweet. They have a very strong relationship because they haven't rushed it.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
yea no way anyhting could be better than edward likcing anything onmy body. great story really love it !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
okay I have to say this is my Favorite Chapter so far... Holy Shit $16K she took, well I knew that somehow that Bank Transfer had to be able to be stopped in time, thank heaven's... and the clothes yep, I just knew that she was going to take clothes and shoes but Heck that much cash, well... Like Chef said, that's a small price to pay to have her gone... but I have this sick feeling that she is NOT gone totally from our good story yet.
Great story and looking forward to more as soon as your ready!!! TTFN Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 05 May 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
great story.
Date: 05 May 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
Very Glad Renee is G-0-N-E...but is she?? I still something is up with her! I have to say, I commend Edward (& Bella) for their willpower.....not sure if I could do it!
Still loving this story and always look forward to updates! Went and voted for you!
Date: 01 May 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
amazing story:0i hope renee dont get any monney
Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
VERY GOOD STORY!!! Just found it two days ago, and had to read it all the way through! You are definitely building up to something---been throwing "hints" out there, and I REALLY suspect that Renee is the somehow behind all of the stuff that has been up, and she will be at the center of Alice's dreams!!
Can't wait for the next update----have been squirming for AUGUST to come for our couple.....FORKS at its most romantic!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Renee is a biotch and is getting what she deserves. Hopefully there is no money transfer happening.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
omg please tell me that bella can call the bank in time and stop the transfer so her mother gets no money please she is a lying coniving bitch and deserves nothing i await the next chapter you are a great writer
Date: 28 Apr 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Wonderful! But please, please, please find a way that Renee doesn't get to keep a dime of that money, the p.o.s. excuse for a mother that she is!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
ohh i really hope that the transfer did not go through!! that is bellas money she should have smacked renee. man...hopefully the trip to forks is comming up..*wink wink*
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Glad Renee is gone. She is an older version of Tanya.
Date: 28 Apr 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Here we go again...I CAN'T READ THE LATEST CHAPTER! GAHHH! When I try to go past chapter 1, the age consent things comes up, and then after I click that I'm FUCKING OLD ENOUGH TO READ THIS, it takes me back to chapter 1. You should feel honored that I even put up with this crap, just to try to read your story. Otherwise, I would just say to hell with it. Just sayin'. Sorry, I spewed.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
please tell me that the cullens figure out how to stop the transfer of money or get it back from her bank i cant stand it if renee gets away with that basically stealing her money from her i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Talk about a Evil Mommie Dearest! Holy Shit Batman and Catwoman that is one Evil wicked Cougar... Great chapter! Love Love Love this story!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
I hope Bella doesn't lesve Renee in the condo /loft by herself and it looks like thats exactly what she is gonna do!! OH NO!! I hope she doesn't think shes not getting Bella's money so she is gonna steal her expensive shoes and dresses to sell!! Maybe I am just a suspicious person. And lets not forget the money in the bottom drawer!!! Christ I hope Renee disappears and never returns!!! I can't wait for the ball and the Forks trip to the cabin!!! I LOVE this story, can't wait for more!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Its great to start the story how you have
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
WTG Alice, I love it when one of her plans falls into place.
I hope Bella can stop the transfer before renee can get her hands on it.
I knew renee was up to no good.. I wonder if phil knows what she was up to..hummmmm
update soon i cant wait for more .. i am so hooked on this
Date: 28 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
well i hope that she stays out of her life and moves on with it ! keep the updates comming
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Wow! This Renee is quite the bitch. Bella needs to stop making excuses for her. Awesome lime, BTW. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confessions
love Jared
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Anticipation
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Celebrations and Epiphanies
loved it but what the hell did alice see???
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
Brilliant chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Smooth Moves
omg - reading on!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
the moment that Edward walked in on was priceless
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Small World
Oh dear Mike thinks that he has a chance
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Things You Learn at Brunch
The gangs all together
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Why He Is the Way He Is
Great chapter - poor Edward, he is so screwed
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
Brilliant - nice fantasy!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Makeover
Can't wait for them to see each other again
Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Oh my word - Jake was gay! so didn't see that coming!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage
So Edward likes her muffins! Poor Bella, but I have a feeling that she won't be 'poor Bella' for long
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
wow Edward thr Chef!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
omg please get rid of her mother and do not let her take anything from bella or do anything to harm either edward or bella i hate that women i want her gone for good i await the next chapter you are a great writer
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAAA!!!! FUCKING EM HEARD!!!
too funny!!!! he's gonna give Bella shit (I hope)!!!!!!
I'm feeling the need to kick some incompetent mother's ass!!! ugh, i hope she's not around for long...what a shithead!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Absolutely love this chapter....Can't wait to see what Renee is really upto.. I think Bella will pay dearly for her verbal responses to their rest time
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
God I love this story but...I absolutely loath renee. Keep up the great work!!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Renee needs to be tarred and feathered. Are you with me?
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Rene is a nasty ***ch.. i hope Bella gives her a swift kick to the curb.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
im waiting till she goes crazy on her mom! cant wiait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Holy Heck what a chapter!!!!! Loved it! Can anyone survive a mother like this! Yuck she is horrrific!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Ha ha..
Renee is up to no good. Send her packing, she will put Tanya to shame. Victoria too!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
It just keeps getting better and better, hotter and hotter. is it just me or is everyone ready for the "big day" of Bella turning in her v-card??? I can't wait for more updates!!! GREAT WORK!!!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Hi I'm loving your story... how often do you update?
Well, that was a hot scene. I absolutely hate Renee in this story, promise me bad BADA things for her soon.. please.
I love your Edward and Bella... well I REALLY LOVE your story.
Author's Response:
Hi there! I try to update weekly, sometimes a little more often if the story is really flowing.
I'm so glad you like my story - thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Peps
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
The phantom Renee makes an appearance?
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
love this story...fans self!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
well i hope that they can wait that long!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
oh shit wanting more nowplease 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
i had a feeling it was her mom.. i ge the feeling he has gone off the deep end
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
I wait every friday for a new fantastic chapter. This is the best story. I am preparing a glass of ice cold water for the fireworks when they go to Forks !!!
You are a great writer !!!
Brenda
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
These guys are going to be so hot when they finally do have sex. Its driving me crazy and I must admit gets me pissed at times. I am thinking what ever Alice keeps dreaming about has something to do with her mother.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
Love
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
Good God, the pent up romance in Edward is FAN-TASTIC! Surprise lunch prepared by your own loving chef, a beautiful candle light bath, soft music, favorite flowers to relax by and decadent treats; oh my!
I am thrilled that Bella is taking on an additional role at Wild. I hope it gives her added sense of belonging in her new home. Alice and Edward know she is part of their world, but I suspect she will occasionally feel inadequate still and try to withdraw herself.
Alice’s dreams are certainly disturbing. To feel that there is an ominous threat but be unable to pinpoint and prevent the danger has to make one feel impotent. I am glad Bella is willing to be proactive about her safety. The skills her father taught her are wonderful, but better to stop a threat before it becomes physical if at all possible.
Bella’s conversation with Rose about sex is fun. It is good to see Bella able to open up to someone about such things.
What a naughty movie night! Silly people, Alice is aching for her own lover there is no way she would be oblivious to their shenanigans!
Yikes! Mom is here. I’ve been wondering about her, her conversations with Bella have been most peculiar. I do hope Edward isn’t forced to leave Bella alone with her, I can only suspect she will continue to belittle Bella with her snide comments.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
oh no what kind of crap is her mother going to pull? and why does Bella even put up with her anymore she is not good to her at all
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
James & victoria. UGH
now I am worried.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Building a Flavour Base
Option 4 please
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
Great chapter! Mercy who on earth wouldn't love some Chef Cullen as an attentive BF, the spa treatment he had set up for Bella after the gym was so sweet! Then he fixes her lunch too! He is just incredible! I'm still not so sure about those dreams of Ali Cats ~ at times I think it's James and Victoria that are up to no good, but then again I think it's the wacky Mother Renee... I'm just not positive but I am glad that she has decided that she needs to be more on guard so to speak; but if it's her mother than she wil not be on the look out for something from her....hum I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens....
Love the story!!!!