[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
awesome chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Hmmm my only question for you is when is the next update... you left us hanging on to our seats again!!!
Wonderful chapter, I would love to see the other side of it and she what Bella sees when she is in front of the restaurant till Billy ending up in the hospital.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Fabulous chapter!!! looking forward to more.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
well this is an intresting turn of events im excited to see what happens next chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
OMG .. it cant be Bella.. is just cant be.....I wish i would of buckled my seatbelt before this chapter I think i fell off my chair. *rubs bottom** yep definatly fell of me chair.
hope you update soon.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
I was expecting Rene's involvement. I'm not sure who the driver was....hmmmmmm, I don't recall leah being short.....or Emily.....but whoever it is why would they be in the truck. I'm gonna have to go back and read again about Billy's "Tanya". I'm missing some understanding of his comment "no my Tanya, Rene". Surely he would have known Rene...I can't imagine her being able to tell him her name is Tanya....but that is where I guess I have to go re read. I read several fan fics because it takes so long between chapters...so sometimes I forget details during the wait or just get them mixed up between stories. So, lots of suspense. Really getting exciting. I hope Bella is OK. What would Rene get from Bella...surely she cannot get to the money if Bella is dead....unless she gets' Bella to take it out now and give it to her then she gets rid of Bella. She's already killeed one and tried to kill Billy so I think she would kill Bella after she gets her money.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
OMG! Yes, I thought it was Renee all along, especially since she grabbed Bella on her birthday. Who else would have known that!
Poor Edward. He is beside himself...
And what WAS Alistair doing there..did he set the fire???
Please update soon....I am really scared!
xoxoSus
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Hmmmmm...wonder if it was Renee?????? Don't like cliffies...shakes her head back and forth....no, don't like cliffies. But LIVE this story!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am dying here!!! Excelent chapter keep it up and quickly!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Thanks for keeping the mystery going. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Shit. Poor Edward. What a mess. Billy needs to recover to share what he knows. Thank heavens the Olympia PD see things differently and will start a search for Bella. She just CAN'T be the woman in the truck...
Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
DAMN IT I JUST KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPY. the whole draem makes since. but why would billy call Renee Tanya.. wtf i'm so lost and confused and scared like seriously i jus want bella to be okay.
RENEE IS ONE FUCKED UP FREAK
Date: 11 Jul 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
ohh god! please let it be renee and not bella. i knew that bich renee would show up soon...but why the name tanya? any reason or just to throw them off a little thinkin tnya denali? cant wait to find out what happens!!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
yes i wasvery sure aboutt renee.i dont know why but i think itis more in that
Date: 11 Jul 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
I knew it was Billy luring her, and I was kind of convinced it was Renee who was his GF. Somehow I don't think the body is Renee or Bella...
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
OH MY GOD, PLEASE LET IT BE RENEE! BELLA MUST HAVE BEEN THROWN FROM THE TRUCK??? CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE...SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT.....
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Ok... so now I'm sitting on the edge of my seat!!! I'm certian that it's not Bella in the truck... but Renee would be good.. the evil bitch needs to have a house dropped on her!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
well it has to be anyone but Bella of course... but I think we have more than one thing going on here. somehow a fire was set at the restraunt and Bella's abduction... Holy Hell I hope the update is like sooooonnnn very soooooonnnnn for the love of all that's holy don't make us wait too long....
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
What di we think? We think you need to give Bella back! Bella is not dead or the story would be off.
SO you killed off Renee good for you!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
OMG!!! I cannot believe it! Poor Billy. I hope Bella makes it out without to much drama. And I feel for Renee if she lives through it !!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Agh!!! *pouts* now we have to wait, really glad I waited to read this, now I only have to wait 4 days...God I hope they find her.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Hurry!!!! Don't you know that you can't go on vacay till you update!!!! Awesome story and I get the "river"....love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
I think she sees Jake, remember Alice said that in her dream Jake said, "it's not what she thinks"!!! She sees Jake but it's not her Jake that she sees... hummmmm.. Goodness this is good. You have been so awesome to update so fast, thank you for that.. Please Please update soon.....
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
OMG...she thinks she sees Jacob, doesn't she!?! Aaarrrggghhh... I hate cliffies!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Ok- now she is a damn idiot! First, why in the he'll would she leave the loft alone. Next, why would she go to anyone alone. I am guessing it is Billy, but I don't care. Please don't make her an idiot; I just can't stand it if she becomes one. I love the story up until dumbass Bella left the loft. Good lord, that is like the first rule of horror films-don't go out alone.
Date: 03 Jul 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Jesus, now it's happening and u just gives us a cliffie like that. SMH unbelievable. I was so happy the way they told Aro, Tanya and everyone else to go f*ck themselves in a nice way by the way. Love ur story and can't wait to see what happens next *biting my nails
Date: 03 Jul 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
wow the street when it rains?
I haven't even imagine that
maybe is Phil? or Billy?
I hope you enjoy your vacation meanwhile I will be thinking about this jajaja
and then when you update it will be like ohhh I didn't think about that jaja
aww but it had to be in her birthday?
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
I'm thinking Billy.... Man I am anxious for the next chapter.. Hurry, hurry... I love this story1!!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
well im excited and scared for the next chapter !
Date: 02 Jul 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
OOOh that is not how I expected the river to arrive- but you do the twists so well, I love it. So I keep going over "I have to get to him..." and putting that together with the fact that we have sooo not seen the last of Renée.
Is Edward in trouble? It sounds like it's neither Edward nor Jasper... is it Charley, in the clutches of a crazed Renée? is it JAKE? what other "him"s does Bella have to get to?
Enjoy your vacation :)
PS I'm still laughing about Esme and Carlisle
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
well first im soo happy for edward and bella and glad chelsea, mike, aro and tanya all got put in their places. now bella ohh no i hope u update soon thats gonna drive me crazy!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
UGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
OMG! You leave us with a cliffie like this? Shizz, woman! I'm thinking it's Jake.....
have a great trip....Loved Edward's proposal!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
So many suspects removed from Jasper's critical list! How wonderfully easy it was for Bella to make nice with Jessica. Aro, well, he is a special case; spoiled and expecting any and everything he wants to be presented handily to him. Tanya seems a bitter woman who likes playing games but not having the tables turned.
I love the idea of a Christmas wedding for them. My question now is, how long an engagement do they want? Alice and Jasper definitely do things their way, don't they? Edward needs to bleach his brain from THAT image. Wonder which is worse, that one, or what he heard from his parents hotel room?
Darn cliffy! At the same time, I shall be releived to have this madness behind them. Once Edwar wakes and realizes his Bella is missing, we can get on with her rescue. I am not sure that whatever is about to happen will exceed the stress of imagining all manner of things such as they all have been doing.
Date: 02 Jul 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
this could be the river. she went without a second thought? Jacob, Charlie or Edward only those people can move her without a second thought. Jacob is a stretch.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
OMG!!! I didn't see it coming this soon!!!!! Have a great vacation!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
ugh, the river, feel free to post sooner than Saturday.
Date: 02 Jul 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Loving this story!!! I only found it a few weeks ago and have caught up reading to where you are writing. I have been spoiled to now have to wait for updates. I am so glad that you are a quick updater because this story is too good to wait! Especially when you leave us with a cliff hanger! ;( That's ok I know we will survive :o)
Well buy the way Bella is reacting to who she is seeing --- like she can't believe her eyes Im thinking she must think she sees Charlie or Jake. And since Quill is still high on the list and is the same coloring my vote is either ---- She thinks it's Jake and it's really Quill ---- OR she thinks it's Charlie and Renee is showing up again ---- OR my even wilder theory (LOL no pun intended) is that somehow Quill and Renee have gotten together in their vendetta.
Well thats my guess anyway (Ms Scarlett in the river with Mr Green and the rope)
TTFN!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
the river;9
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
thanks good chapter
Date: 02 Jul 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
charlie? jake? Billy? Grandma swan?
Date: 01 Jul 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
wow!!
is a great story!!
I just read it all and it is so cool jaja
I love Edward!!
and I hope Bella says yes!!
and I love all the dresses, they are so beautiful and sexys
and the proposal was unexpectedbut very cute and romantic and in the faces of everyone jaja
Date: 30 Jun 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
I have to say it is about time. He has been carrying that ring around for quite awhile. Tanya and Aro are crazy. Edward needs to finish up the night and figure out what to do about Aro. He doesn't seem to take Edward's and Bella's relationship seriously.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Well that's one way to claim her in front of everyone! Probably the most tactful way...
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
No! I did not like Edwards proposal!
The reason I am saying that is you left it there and you are not going to update for 3 weeks, so how the hell do you think we feel about that! Actually that is a silly question on your behalf.
The least you could have done is told us what she had said... we all know she is going to say yes! There is not reason for her not to, unless she wants to be a heartless shrewed and embarrass herself and Edward infront of a room full of people.
Anyway looks like we are waiting. You are getting a low score for the crappy ending.
Author's Response:
What makes you think I'm not updating for three weeks?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Gotta have next chapter asap!!!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 24 - A Little Poison in the Pot
I've just started this story recently and I love it. I can barely put my laptop down. You are an amazing writer and this story is amazing.
lmao Bella is Edward's personal brand of viagra. Nice twist=)
Ahh this sh** just hit the fan. Now on to keep reading because I'm addicted to this story
Date: 27 Jun 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
How romantic - I think he wants to put an end to all of this nonsense tonight!! What a caveman - she is mine!!! This is a great story and I am really enjoying it, each chapter gets better and better.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Beautiful...as was the way the entire chapter was constructed.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Uhhh, yeah... Great proposal!! Can't wait for the response and the fallout... hehehe
Date: 26 Jun 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
omg .. you left me hanging here on the edge of my chair.... i sure hope i can hang on til the next update i cant wait.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
OMG, OMG, OMG....YAY EDWARD!!!! That was awesome! Hopefully, that will shut a few people up? And, she did say yes, didn't she??????
You mean girl....leaving us on a cliffie.. update soon!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
wow what a enthralling chapter, I really thought it was either Tanya or Renee as Edward's date. But with it being Tanya it makes more sense considering Aro and his antics with being obsessed with Bella apparently... The IMing all around the table was pretty hilarious honestly and the color of that Dress Tanya had on OMG... I have to agree why did she even bother wearing clothes at all... LOL!
I just love Edward from the way he got in the mix of the IMing during dinner service and his handling of Bella and the DISGUSTING naked Tanya in his room to the way he dealt with Chelsea by putting Bella in front of him as a Shield!!! (Pretty Cute) Then he goes on to get a triple with the way he handled Aro after bringing up his previous daliancy with Tanya... to then Hitting a Home Run by knocking it out of the Ball Park with is HEART STOPPING ROMANTIC, marriage proposal.... Hav' Mercy Please not long before the next chapter..... You rock!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Cool!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Totally beautiful!!!!! I am so excited for the next chapter:)
Jo
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
ABSOLUTELY GREAT, ALL OF IT!!!!! AS ALWAYS, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! SUCH A PERFECT STORY!!!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
ahhhh!!!! great chapter! aro-very creepy and delusional..tnaya-needs a beat down alon with quil, mike and jessica! cant wait for more!!!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
yay!!!! plz update soon i cant hardly wait for her to say yes in front of all those losers......great story
Date: 26 Jun 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Yes of course she will say yes. She loves this man and TRUSTS him.
YIPPIE
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Awww, that was so freaking sweet. He is so damn cute. And that Tanya...the effing nerve that lil wench has. It would've been funny if Bella wouldve of pulled her hair in da process I know I would have!!!! Thanx for ur amazing story I love it!!!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
That was so beautiful. Please please update this story sooner than later. I don't think I can wait.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
O-M-G!!!!! I was squealling like a little girl the minute he got to 'a firm decision'. So did NOT see that coming. I was far to distracted by the numerous individuals leering at Bella during the evening, not to mention Tanya's crazy ass stunt.
I am soooo excited, as I expect the entire head table is as well.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
OMG what a cliffy what away to givr certain people a smack in the mouth
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
OMG!!! that was the perfect place for a cliffy!!! Please dont leave us all hanging for too long though...
Date: 25 Jun 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Wow! I loved the proposal but I hated the cliffie...
What an amazing chapter. Please update asap and don't leave us hanging for a long...
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
omg i am in tears that was so beautiful i love how he proposed and i am on waited breath that bella says yes yes yes i am so happy for them i await the next chapter you are a great writer
Date: 25 Jun 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
im excited for them ! cant wiat to see what happen next chapter
Date: 25 Jun 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
HOLD the BUS, WTH u cant leave us a cliffie like that, please please update ASAP.... Damn it, just when things were getting good. Love this story, cant wait til the next one, please post it soon
Date: 24 Jun 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
I love this story. I just want to read more. Please update soon:)
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
This is starting to get creepy. I thought Bella was not to be left alone. I don't trust Quil and Jessica being there. Especially since they were not on the original list.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
omg i am so scared for bella what happened please tell me they will be okay who the hell was that they need to be caught and punnished for good i await the next chapter
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
huge cliffhanger;0
Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
OOOOOHHHH how interesting... I like the way Bella has been so smart and capable with the planning of the big dinner, and has a good head on her shoulders about this tension. The story is so intensely building intrigue (where oh where are Renee and Phil??)... I can't wait to see what you have planned for the ring :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
Hmmmmmm...just when I think I have it figured out, you throw a monkey wrench in the works! Stringing me along.... :-) I love it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
well here is another review so keep on going. You are doing a wonderful job a great mystery
Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
What a crazy tangled web of nutjobs!! Thank heavens whomever only targeted Bella's dress and didn't seek her out in the shower. Given that Billy has his mysterious new fling, I am rather worried just who Aro's date may be...
Date: 19 Jun 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
well all the players are there, so here we begin.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
Okay... so this is getting really exciting! I'm dying to know what Alice has seen... and Edward's reaction to Bella's dess... and... and...
I really love this story. Thank you.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
Quite a mystery. I don't know what to think. Is Tanya Aro's date? Is she Billy's paramour? How are Jessica or Quil involved? Are they decoys or merely pawns? Looking forward to more!
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
Wow, this is getting scary. I'm thinking it's a woman, to cut and shred the dress. I don't think a man would do that! Poor Bella....she's going to be a wreck before this event finishes!
xoxoSus
Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
i cannot wait till the next chapter and i cnanot believe she let her in the room by her self !
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
Awesome. I am addicted. I rarely read unfinished work, but I love this story.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
ohh i cannot wAit to find out thwta happens next/....im betting jessica and quil had something to do with the torn dress.....
Date: 14 Jun 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
The men are all jewelry shopping freaks!! I ADORED the Bilbo Baggins reference! Having Edward and Jasper meet at Tiffany's was a hoot. I loved how Jasper cut off Edward's questions with raunchy references he knew would shut the man down.
Go Bella. Just awesome how she reclaimed her man at the car show.
While his rant was creepy, I think Jared was drunk and depressed. While he surely has had dark thoughts, I like to think he really doesn't feel as poorly toward Bella as his voicemail makes out. (I hope)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Rolling Boil
Loving that bella and edward have finally been getting some ;)...i bet aro has tanya as his date thats what he is hiding maybe, also I think bella should put phil dwyer on her list of possible threats...
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
I think they need to check on Jared. He maybe bipolar. He definately has his ups and downs. He needs to get help before he hurts himself or others. I love this story so much. It is so addictive.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
I'm not sure, but for some reason, I feel it's a woman. I could be all wrong, of course! What is your update schedule? Do you have one???
Thanks, hon,
xoxoSus
Author's Response:
Wow, you had quite the reading marathon! :)
Thanks so much for your reviews! I update weekly, usually between Thursday and Saturday.
Peps
Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Rolling Boil
"I want to give you wedding rings" from "The Book of Love".....
This thing with Bella is scaring me! Gawd, their sex is HAWT!
I love Jasper being the empath he is!
Things are truly getting interesting!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
interesting turn of events here..would it be greedy of me to beg for a update? LIKE NOW? *giggle*
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
Well Holy Hell, I didn't see that one coming from Jared! Well I don't think I did anyway! Good twist... Now as for Phil, I am getting a sad feeling that perhaps he is dead or something.
Gosh this just keeps getting better and better, Oh ... really loved the anxiety that ChefWard felt over what Jasper spent on Alice's jewels in compared to what he spent for Bella... remember ChefWard that's not all that important to our Girl... Chin up handsome, she loves you and you have the better JEWEL in your pocket!!!!!
Can't wait for more... TTFN Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
Oh no....Jared...what have you done? Is there someone else working with Renee? I don't like this new development with him!
I love Edward and Bella. I can't wait to find out when and how he proposes.
Also, I'm feeling a little nervous with this wholel dinner thing with Aro.
Great cahpter...can't wait for the next!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
Oh my another person added to the mix! Hmmmm....not thinking Jared might be it. However, I am wondering if Renee killed off Phil!!! I have a feeling this is going to turn into one of those---someone NO ONE SUSPECTED!!!!
Great Job on the chapter!!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Hot Sex, Cold Sex, Chair Sex, Car Sex
GREAT!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Let's Get Physical
Not bad....5 times...he's a stud, eh? But they've waited so long, and he's kinda primed her, so it doesn't surprise me....Love the music selections
Date: 12 Jun 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Forks
Oh, my! Well, that was worth the wait!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Oh, goody! They're rid of Renee. But, did she really get the money? I can't believe she did this....what a big beotch!
Love the green dress to match Eddie's eyes. And also, I forgot to say that I like all the Twilight quotes you've sprinkled in here and there!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
I'm sure Emmett heard everything, and will use it against Edward...LOL...F*ck Renee...get her out of there! She's just trying to find trouble, and/or she wants money!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
Love all the music you used....Mom's here? WTF for? Is she a lunatic?
Boy, I love this story!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
Man, I love this story but I just wish you would move on and get the great mystery already!
I feel it has something to do with someone in or from Forks. I was heading for Jess and I still am.
All this waiting is sort of turning me off the story, it is brought up in nearly every chapter now and I understand it is a monumental part of the story, but if you are not going to tell us for another couple of chapters then move the story along and get Aro's party out of the way so we can find out who it is!!!
Okay I am being a skirt, I understand but is driving me nuts... I think I might leave a few chapter go and then read a whole heap at once, then I might get there and be happy to find out and know...
I am loving this story don't get angry with me... I think it is a good sign that you are frustrating me. OKAY honest truth... I want all the story now, I want to keep reading till I find out what is going on and I cant wait... I am impatient ... there I said it.
Keep up the excellent work, I know I will tune in next chapter!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Antidote
Well, things are certainly getting hawt around here....the only thing left is a home run!
Wow...good sexin' here....