[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Epilogue
that was more than fantastic!!!! Can't wait for your next story!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Epilogue
I loved this story!! I'm sad to see them go. Looking forward to your next one!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
kick ass wonderful!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks - I'm very happy you liked it :)
Peps
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
WOW!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE EPILOGUE AND I HOPE THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL??
SO ANYWAYS PLS CONTINUES OON AND I HOPE TO READ THE EPI VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO PLS CONTINUE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
No plans for a sequel, but a few outtakes and a future-take will be coming down the pipe.
The epilogue will be published in a couple of weeks. Thanks for your reviews :)
Peps
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
Excellent ending...there was something really special about this story..loved it.
What do you mean if!!!!! I want to read it...I can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate your support :)
Peps
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
Another great chapter. I can't wait to see how this ends..
Author's Response:
Thanks you so much for reading and reviewing! The epilogue is coming in 2 wks or less.
Peps
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
wow what a chapter. I am so darn glad Renee died. Thank you. I hate it that Billy will die, that unfortunately is life.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for reading and reviewing Wild! Yes, sadly, Billy is ready to move on, but at least he has Sarah, Jacob and Charlie awaiting him :)
Peps
Date: 14 Aug 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
great chapter looking foward to the next one !
Author's Response:
Thanks so uch for reading and reviewing!
Peps
Date: 13 Aug 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
This chapter was really fantastic! I just loved the whole thing, and how long it was. You dont half things you go all ouut.
I feel bad that Billy was going to die, and I honestly cried when he said that he could see Sarah, Jake, and Charlie and what he said that they said. It really was a heart felt moment. I was relieved though that at least his daughters came to say goodbye. It was really nice of Bella to pay for one of them to come.
Jasper really is a secretive bastarted though huh? I think Edward has a child like annoyance when it comes to Jasper's secrets, but fuck its a good thing they dont know everything he does, or did. The whole men in black thing was hilarious.
I love this story and cant wait to read about the wedding honeymoon. Its gonna be sad when this story ends, but at least they're getting their happily ever after you know? They've been through so much and rose above it all. Bella being kidnaped and everything, and thannk god that Edward didnt die from that gun shot.
I gagged when we found out Renee was wearing Bella's engagement ring. That woman was sick, and she deserved to die. To bad it was by a tree and not by somebody elses hands.
I love every Character, I like how you evolved them and re-molded them and made them even better in this story than in Twilight.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! It was sad to write about Billy that way, but I felt that after all of his loss and then what Renee managed to pull, he would be better off joining his wife and son.
Jasper... my favourite character to write because so much could be left to the reader's imagination. Glad you liked the MIB reference :)
I will endeavour to make the wedding and honeymoon worthy of my fans' expectations. I expect the epilogue will be up in 2 wks.
I chose to kill Renee with a tree so nobdy else would have to be sullied by her. Everyone seems to think it was Charlie who caused it, but I have to admit, in my mind it was Charlie who placed a hand on Alice's shoulder while Jake downed the tree :)
Thanks again for your support and great review! See you at the wedding!
Peps
Date: 13 Aug 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
Absolutely loved it!! Great chapter and I can't wait for the epilogue!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! It's been a real pleasure and adventure to write this story. The epilogue should be up within 2 wks... Peps
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
I don't know if my other review went through!
I just want to thank you for this story. It was a good, long ride, and very exciting! I loved it!
Glad they survived all their ordeals, but I'm sorry Wild had to be burned down. Such a great idea for a restaurant. I would love to see Chef Edward in his whites......
Renee totally came unhinged. Wonder what her real problem was? Just jealousy and greed? Something else must have made her so nuts! Well, Karma is a bitch!
Looking forward to the wedding and honeymoon. Bet it will be a lovely Christmas wedding, especially with all the ladies helping to plan!
thanks, bb.....
xoxoxoSus
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my story and for taking the time to provide feedback in your reviews. I have read and cherished them all.
Wild burned, but there might be something even more exciting to be revealed in the epilogue! Renee always had the seeds of whackadoo ready to sprout - Charlie's death and her own unsatisfying life brought it to a head.
I'll see you in the epilogue... and hopefully in my next story!
Peps
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
You made me cry! Not just shed a couple tears, you actually made me cry. The hospital scene with Billy was so sad. His pending death would have made me weepy, but having him know Sarah, Jacob and Charlie were there waiting was more than I could withstand.
Jasper's secret will really remain just that, won't it? Guess it is one of those 'I'd tell you but I'd have to kill you' things. Making Edward (and me) really wonder though!
So glad they were able to switch the ring. No way could she wear it after everything that happened, even if Renee hadn't died wearing it! Glad to see Jessica is moving on with her life.
I saw the surprise party just moments before they walked through the door. Good thing the crowd reacted whan they did or else they'd have had quite a show.
Author's Response:
It's amazing how proud I feel that I made you cry... but not in a weird or mean way, LOL :)
Thanks for reading my story and for all the great reviews you left. I read and cherished every one of them.
Yes, a took a page from Stephen King and decided it was better to let each reader develop their own idea of what Jasper must have been into... just as King never really describes his monsters.
I'll see you in the epilogue, and hopefully in my next endeavour!
Peps
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
I hate the thought of this story being over.....sigh....
I have loved every word of it! Well written, excellent plot and character developement, and such sweet loving. Hard to find a story with it all.
Thanks so much for sharing it and I look forward to the epilogue.
Catherine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words! You've been with me ever since I started publishing here, and I really appreciate your support :)
Peps
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Ha, bitch went down!!! Loved that one!!!
OK, shes alive and they are together!!!! Thank God!! I knew he would find her.
Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
Oh he is soooooooo fucked!!!
Well if I ever need to retrain on how to give a BJ, I know just where to go!!
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Small World
OOOOOO...Chefward has a little competition. Serves him right! Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
OH HOLY CRAP!!! That was HAWT!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Ha, i was right!!!!!
OK, Edward in jammies is just too much to take....swoon!!
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage
OK on the AU at the end...im not sure I agree with that one. I think Edward fingering ANYTHING is WAAAAYYYY Better!!!
Was Jake gay? I cant fathom why he would never touch her again.
Loves <3
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
I am so glad that Bella is safe. I think Charlie and Jake crushed Renee. I can't believe the story is almost over. I love it so much.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Yeah off course it would be Charlie and Jake making the end of Renee
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Wow, the last part was so sick. I started cracking up. Lol. That was the greatest end for a bitch like Renee. Lmao. Unbelievable. Loved the chapter. Thanx so much for such a great story ;). And what's wrong w Eddie boy? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Oh this is gonna be good. My BFF started this not long after you started writing it. I waited till the end. It was KILLING me, but I did it. I CANT WAIT TO FINISH!!!!
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
PLS CONTINUE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!PLS I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT SO PLS CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLS CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
I have grown to enjoy this story. Love the Edward torture
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
OMG I was going to go nuts if you had of stopped it where you were.
I am sure you would have had a lot of hate review.
I cant beleive that it is nearly over... always the way.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
yea ding dong the witch dead
but you need to rethink ending this so soon, cant you take us thru Christmas, spill on Jasper, wedding planning etc, they have to rebuild the restaurant and oh my so many lemony possibilities
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Excellent...
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
thank good chapters
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
OKay I love that Karma kicked Renee's ass and she got what was coming to her. Now I have to lend my theory.... Is Jasper a a U.S. Marshal? that would be so Texas, but I can also invision the CIA angle.
so in my new language Jasper = kick ass....
Girl! you are so Jasper!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
I love that fate/charlie/jake killed renee with a tree. awesome!!! I'm so sad that edward had to get shot or grazed though.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
OMG...that was a great chapter! So exciting! Thank you, thank you for not ending it with Edward getting shot (I'm assuming he was just grazed by Renee's bullet. And yay, Charlie and Jake! They gave Renee her justice, eh? Great job, bb....I absolutely adore this story and the characters. Is Jasper CIA or something?
xoxoSus
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Thank you for not making us wait to long for this chapter. I love the lighting strike.Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
ohh lord... renee is so damn crazy!! so glad bella played along to stall adn glad quill helped bella some. did edward get grazed bya bullet? or did he get shot? and pleaseee tell us what the heck jasper is!!! cia, fbi what??? and was the cold wind alice felt charlie andn jacob? ding dong the witch is dead! glad a tree fell on her crazy self!! cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Mean trick... nice save. I about came uncorked when I saw the first author's note. You did manage to redeem yourself, though. I can't wait for the next and must say that I will greatly miss this crew...
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Good chapter! Especially liked the resolution of dear 'ol Renee!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Holy shit!! I'm actually only on chapter 20 but had skipped ahead. I swear I'm going to go back and catch up. I really like this story and want to get to the sex!! (smirk) Sneaky author's note there before then end. I almost died. Can't wait for the next two chappies. Wonderful!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Oh my word, fabulous chapter and I would have been sending flames if you hadn't of added that last part. Whew
Date: 01 Aug 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Loved this chapter. Charlie and Jake sent the lightning bolt to save the taxpayers of Washington the expense of a trial for Renee.....I though the ending was brillent.....can't wait till next chapter.....
Date: 01 Aug 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
OMG FINALLY THEY GET BELLS. OOOH IM SO HAPPY. I EVEN SQUEALED A BIT!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Sweet!!!! Charlie and Jake killed her!!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Lightening strike, huh? Didn't see that one coming....hehehe
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Oh, for the love of PETE!
Seriously??
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
it is a real ghost cabin:)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
wow bye renee fitting demise
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
im glad that charlie and jake took care of renee!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Oh my. Do wonder just what Jasper has in his wallet!! So, who is injured and how badly?? Think Charlie and Jacob had their own justice delivered from above? Yikes.
Date: 31 Jul 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
OMG
Thank you for NOT ending it at a cliff hanger. I have been dying over here because the past few chapters have felt like cliff hangers bc they hadn't found Bella yet. Very suspenseful! --- any more suspense and I think I would have spontaneously combusted!!!!
I LOVE how you ended Renee!!! Like Charlie and Jake had had enough and just fixed her little red caboose. I would love to see Alice have a vision of her being tortured for eternity --- but I think that might make the story a little too "twiligh zone" weird. --- So I will just close my eyes and imagine it myself . . . . . . . . Nice!!!
Keep up the good writing! Cant wait to see what happens next! ---- Oh and will we Ever find out what Jasper really does? Has to be CIA or FBI deep under cover spy or something.
Oh well
TTFN!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Haha...Oh damn...Renee...oh well...no loss there, karma can be a bitch sometimes.
Glad that Bella and Edward are okay...can't wait for the next two installments...truly enjoyed this story!!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
I just found this story and read it straight through,let me tell you that is an annoying chapter to have to stop at bbut the story is fantastic. thank you for not making Jared or Billy evil/purposely part of the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Yea go the clans...
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
About time!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Jasper is Amazing!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage
Greatness!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
WOW!! Great start!! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
omg you are a great writer i await the next chapter i was so on edge i cried i was scared i feel so bad for edward and bella her mom is phsyco
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Wow what a great chapter, so much action, and when I read that the Mourning Doves were dead, my mouth dropped open, didn't see that. Can't wait to read what happens next......Anne-Marie
Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Bravo Bella for not losing her head, for keeping her cool and leaving what trail she could. Trying to talk to Quil was a good effort. While not having an obvious result just yet, it might just be the crack needed in the near future.
Renee is obviously certifyable and ought to be locked up in a psychiatric hospital when this is over.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
OMG .. this is getting so exciting.....i am on the edge here .. where is my damn seatbelt? uggg !!!!!!
hurry back and update i'm not sure how long I hold on .
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
WOW!!! ITS GOING GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! SO PLS CONTINUE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I REALLY WANTTO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT SO PLS CONTINUE SOONER AND I HOPE THAT EDWARD FINDS BELLA SOON!!!! RENEE IS A CRAZY BITCH AND QUIL IS GOING CRAZY REALLY SLOWLY. SO PLS CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!
PLS CONTINUE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
I can't believe how crazy Renee and Quil are. They may get sent to the mental institution instead of jail, but at least they will be off the street . I am glad that the drugs did not cause Bella to loose her memory.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
i hope renee rots in prison and wuil too
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
OH COME ON!!!! I WANTED THEM TO FIND BELLA AT LEAST BEFORE THE CHAPTER ENDED!!
thank god bella was smart enough noot to take the fucking pills, and to loose her socks aaaand shoes!
OMG I WANT BELLA AND EDWARD BACK,BEFORE QUIL DOES SOMETHING HORRIBLE TO HER, AND RENEE DO SOMETHING HORRIBLE TO HER. GAAAAH!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
The story is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter:)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Yeah right like Bella would ever forget Edward. and the morning doves=( Renee is sick and twisted
Lets go save Bella=) ... with some awesome ATVs=)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
OMG!!! I can't wait for them to find Bella... I hope Esme smacks that crazy bitch around for hurting her daugher!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
great chapter, I can't wait to read more!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Okay - so I hoped, that in this chapter the fining of Bella would happen - it didn't - so hurry up and come with the next - I can't wait.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
excited to see what happens next !
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
You need to kill Renee off. TO do that to your own child. She is worse than sick. satan in the flesh.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
wonderful chapter, i am glad bella had a chance to speak her mind to quil even if he is just crazy and not believing her. keep up the wonderful work can't wait to read more!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Oh, holy fuck! Renee AND Quil are two sick puppies! This is scaring the hell out of me. I hope they get to Bella soon....WTF with Renee? Is it all about the money? I hope someone kills her...she doesn't deserve to live, really!
Very exciting chapter, bb....please update soon!!
xoSus
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Evil cliffy! Grrrr! You sure are good at giving us those. hehehe
Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
wow, great story. love the suspense. I can't believe she killed those poor birds though! Can't wait for your next update
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
I had a feeling, that was where there was. I hope that you will come with an update soon - because I need to know how B is doing. Fuck the money - she can give them to Renee in my head. She will do okay anyway - and Renee won't have them for long - but Quill? GOD I want to kill that fuck.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Wonderful chapter addition... i am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter :) Keep up the good writing!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
I feel so bad for Edward. He is used to being cotrol of his life and now he is at the mercy of crazy people. I hope Jasper can freeze Bella's accounts so Renee can't get anything even if the drugs do work on Bella. Jasper sure is well connected.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
OHHHHHH goshhh, Edward better save her in time. I'm like addicted to this story. please update soon!!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
It better be Bella's mom that died. Bella's not dead it's just not possible. I gotta keep reading to see when happens. You are an amazing writer and I love this story
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Oh god, who is so important? My first reaction was like "OMG her dad is alive" but thats not possible. could it maybe be Billy or Phil. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
lol tanya got humiliated and the group should work on the turning their heads at the same time thing lol. I love the dressed you picked also.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I loved the proposal, its a little public, but it was in the moment and really sweet. Bella better say yes=)
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
AHH I'm trying to figure out who is sabatoging her but I can't figure it out because there are so many possibilities. Love sex-days and love your drama lol. Awesome chapter
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Dear heavens. Edward might just come to adore those damn doves after all!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
oh my word!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! PLS YOU GOT TO CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN?? I REALLY HOPE THAT EDWARD FINDS BELLA SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!SO PLS CONTINUE SOONER AND PLS HURRY!!!!BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
THEY HAVE BELLA AT THE CABIN!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
oh lordy please let them get to her before those monsters can do any damage...... gosh this was wonderful... dont let that witch get her hands on Bella's funds that would be such a travesty the love all the Cullen's have for one another and Bella too is just wonderful
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Oh see I knew she would snatch her away to the cabin evil woman that she is !!! Thanks for your wonderful story .i love it more each week !! Cheers Lou xx
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
well im excited for the next chapter
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Wow...Renee is one sick puppy. Would she really kill her only daughter? This is getting really tangled...
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
I have to say that I was prepaired this time I had my seatbelt on and it's nice and snug but I imagine that it will get tight if you leave me hanging too long. update soon and get our girl back.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Another awesome Chapter!!! I can't wait unitl they find Miss Bella:)
Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Renee is crazy...more so than her usual. Poor Billy was fooled too. I hope that Edward and Carlisle make it in time and I hope Renee doens't try to harm them.
Excellent chapter, left me on the edge of my seat.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Wonderful chapter, once again, too short, just want to know what is going to happen, I know they are at the cabbin!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
knew that creep quill had something to do with it!!! cant wait for edward to beat the crap outta him. hope edward and carlisle get to bella fast!! and renee needs to go down bella or alice heck maybe esme should beat the crap outta her yea esme should doo it! cant wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Renee needs to be taken out as well as Quil!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
ugh, wonderfufl chapter and I look forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
holy shit please tell me that edward gets to bella before they can do anything to her and that jasper and emmett show up too and that they get renee and embry or kill them and save bella please i am dying here i await the next chapter
Date: 16 Jul 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
Please do update soon - pretty please? with sprinkles on top?
Date: 14 Jul 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
I'm LOVING the story so far, can't wait to see what happens!
And my fav quote so far... "Alice seems to be a really stylish dresser, whereas my wardrobe is more suited to a lesbian lumberjack." Haha, awesome :)