[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Round Three
Ooohh that damn Carlisle, had me seething! I wanted Edward to knock him in the mouth for busting in on her and scaring her like that. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Olde E
Ok. I'm ashamed. I thought E was gonna do something awful there for a minute.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:24 AM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Bella is a tiger! She will be fine... the question is, did Edward put a hit on Charlie?
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:19 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
Two questions:
How do you pronounce bookyak?
And, Can I watch Edward's naked six? ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:49 AM Title: Boxed In
Glad E knows about those vile V twins....
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
I had never been so freaking confused nor scared.... thank God Aro was there, can I give him a proper thank you? ;) [I know, I'm such a h00r LOL]
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:50 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Still hooked!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:27 AM Title: Stages
the calm, eh? Ok. Bring it on...
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:48 AM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Well I didn't finish it before the weekend was up but I'm so glad I tried because its a great story & I'm glad I'm finally reading it!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:57 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
i think the last time i reviewed this chapter it was a bit personal... this time, im just going to say... i would of punched carlisle too after the karma comment.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:30 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
:(
It's a hard thing to know what you want when it's too late...
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:54 PM Title: Antipasto
Edward with babies = swoons & kills over dead
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:23 PM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
;-)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Bad Taffy
Wow... You spin a good tale SL
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:03 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Still riveted!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:17 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
really this and when you show the girls time in ac was two of my favorites written in the story. getting to see aro talk to bella, even if it was because the job... yea.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:16 AM Title: Light my Fire
The fights these two have. It's definitely foreplay...
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:13 AM Title: TKO
Yay they're married. And stupid Charlie in this one...
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:23 AM Title: Decision/Draw
Anothr great chapter
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:19 AM Title: TKO
and the beginning of bella trying to get aro to speak to her. woohoo, edward and bella are married, and they just figured out old people are manipulative haha.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:26 AM Title: Round Three
So much in this chapter to think about -but most importantly he admitted he loved her!!! Squeal!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:33 AM Title: Round Two
Ok so no Vegas but I agree Nanny should be there. The tampon thing - eh well, whit like that happens in real life
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:31 AM Title: Round One
So many things... Jealous of a tampon?!? Oh my lord. SLC you have a way about ya! Freakin love this story. & hooyah!! Going to VEGAS baby to get married!!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:27 AM Title: Round Three
honestly forgot about the interaction between carlisle and bella here too. its a good thing we dont do pop quizzes for stories i read to many to keep up with the full details or my head would explode. carlisle trying to be scary is kind of funny though especially when he turns around and watches something like jepordy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:00 AM Title: Aruba
Dang Eddie Boy was talk-a-tive. Still don't like Carlisle.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:33 AM Title: The Game
All damn day it taken me to read this chapter! People won't leave me alone!!! Urghhhhh.
Love it story - I can't believe I waited to start reading it. They're driving me crazy not knowing what they want!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:58 PM Title: Round One
i cant paralle (sp) park either... fortunately for me the only real place you have to worry about that here is in the ghetto and downtown.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:54 AM Title: Aruba
haha. i love that edward was ranting like that when he was calling to get info. and carlisle... he deserved to be hung up on lol
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:25 AM Title: The Game
them two... i love their craziness.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:33 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
i think i had better comments the first time i read this... but just like before i love reading it. carlisle... what was it? whorelisle. right, and yes. fits him perfectly.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:27 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
is it weird i take some oddly sick pleasure in bella finding carlisle fucking jane right after his wedding? possibly. but i still love it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:16 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Ok Carlisle is officially on the list with Alice...
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:29 AM Title: Bella
you know... i remember when the stuff came out about alice's dad in the sequel but i didnt remember this at all about the "creepy" uncle :( i forgot about pushy leah was.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:15 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
2am. Need sleep. One more chapter. Maybe two...
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:39 AM Title: Bebella
You are fucking amazing, you know that? Yeah...you do. :)
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:29 AM Title: Edward
haha, alice skimming. and jasper thinking because hes family they wont count. though with everything i like alice, shes trying to look out for family the only way she knows how.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:40 AM Title: Bella
I don't think I like Alice in this... well it's still early.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:27 AM Title: Bebella
bebella never gets old. thanks for giving us the challenge to reread because really had no clue what to do during the boycott. heres to hoping i dont run into the same issues i had last time trying to read on here...
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:43 AM Title: Edward
I'm hooked. No sleep for me this weekend. Love this so far & that it's B&EPOV
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Bebella
Wow! Why did I wait so long to.start this?
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2012 3:30 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
;)
Date: 10 May 2012 2:37 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
Thanks for this out take & your contribution to charities, great read. It had me in tears when Edward gets emotional,love it. They were so idealic then:-( too bad it couldn't last but all things must change:-))
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2012 4:32 AM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
Damnable Bella was a big whiner this go rout d. I was ready to smack her when she was ranting about having to go back home.
Great story. Cant wait to keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2012 12:16 AM Title: Bebella
I first began reading Quiet Storm with the first chapter when it was first posted; however, for some reason I did not follow it as it was posted. What a fool I was.
When I was browsing for something to read last fall, I once again began reading. By the end of the second chapter, I was totally drawn in. I believe I stayed up all night reading it in it's entirety! Now, I have to admit that I have probably read it at least 15 times, if not more! LOL.
I am amazed with your writing style. The descriptions of the movements of the characters and the give and take conversations, almost puts the reader in the room with the characters, but just unseen.
I have so...... enjoyed this story, and being somewhat familiar with this particular lifestyle--you have absolutely captured it spot on! I have not missed an outtake, and am looking forward to the other outtakes that you referenced in the AN at the end of the chapters in Weather the Storm.
Again, I simply would like to state how much I sincerely enjoy this fiction.
Date: 01 May 2012 4:05 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
It was sweet to see a young more carefree Sonny. He was still independent and too mature for his age but not as closed off. He seemed very close to Edward. I hate that they lost that closness. They were tight knit little family.
Date: 29 Apr 2012 2:08 AM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
Wow what a day they had! This was fun to read
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:07 PM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
Loved it! It was great to see their reunion and then him getting reaquainted with the boys. As I've said many times before I love these guys
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 1:18 AM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
loooved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 12:43 AM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
OMG this was good, I wanted to off that ASSHAT Agent Winsor, Myself! How dare they! So this was the beginning of the time that Edward spent in prison due to Felix. Hummm this was really good
Date: 28 Apr 2012 12:28 AM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
I love this family
Date: 27 Apr 2012 11:48 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
loved it.... but then, i love everything you write. lol
Date: 26 Apr 2012 11:48 PM Title: Epilogue
Wickedly good story! I couldn't stop reading. Now I'm hoppin' right over to the sequel!
Date: 26 Apr 2012 11:35 AM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 20 Apr 2012 12:18 PM Title: Round Two
I think the whole tampon shebang goes well with the story. Talk about initiating Edward in to the plesures of womanhood. Poor guy, should run while he still can ;)
Date: 18 Apr 2012 10:18 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
I had the same thing happen to me. I had a miscarrage and ended up in the hospital with hemorrhaging. I fainted three times before I finally went to the ER. Anyway, very accurate situation. Well done.
Stephanie
Date: 04 Apr 2012 7:32 AM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
He totally deserved to get his ass beat. Now his wife should leave his ass.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 6:27 AM Title: Get It
i REALLY dislike carlisle. I know...i haven't been reviewing, but I have been reading on my phone at "work" so it wasn't easy. Esme needs to cheat on him a couple times and stop being a dumb ass. I would leave that jackass, but i know she won't.
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:54 PM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
I love this story, but I have to admit that when I first started to read it I only read the first chapter and was not sure I was going to read anymore, it was different from the other Bella and Edward stories that I read, and it was a bit harder to get into, so I left it for a while and only just started reading it again a few days ago, and I have to admit now I really love it, yes it is different from the other stories and I think thats what I like about it, and I can't wait to read more and also the sequal. I like how you are explaining some of the sayings at the end of the story, some of them I get and others I don't, and the one I don't get is sometimes you say that they open their arms wide whats that.
Anyway thank you for an awesome story.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:32 PM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
It was a tough 2 years for the whole family. It is a shame that Sonny lost his childhood. He became so bitter. Edward loves his family so much, yet Sonny doesn't realize this fact. I can understand why they lied to the children. They won't understand the facts. Damien is such a sweet soul. He is so full of love. He will help Edward adjust to life back at home.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 5:53 AM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
I like it. took me long enough to read it. lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2012 2:37 PM Title: Helluva Day
CHEESUS! that was scary! i thought the worst for a momemt but of course they´ll make it thought everytime! those crazy kids :D
i´m so sad this story is almost over but i know there´s a sequel so i´m eager to read that also!
And i don´t understand why would someone want you off FF?! WTF is that?! people need to mind they own business...ugh
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:11 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
LOVED all the italians reference! and you did great! my family is Italian (all from the North) and here too, when mi nonno and nonna start speaking Italian is because it's bad and you better run...the hand gesture under the chin Edward made was spot on! bahah! i've seen it so many times and i use it too, it's almost worst than saying "fuck you" lol anyway, amazing chapter as always!!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 6:02 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
WOW! i love this story so freaking much! i just started reading a couple days ago and i'm sorry this is my first review, i suck! but i just wanted to say that i love everything about it! i have a thing for Mafia anything, fics, stories, movies, anything! i can just watch the Godfather 2 all day long :p Also, thank you for introducing me Mobb Deep! i love Lil Kim since the 90's and when i listened to Quiet Storm Remix with her i went ape shit! seriously! now i have all the MD discography! never heard them before because i'm from Argentina and hip hop isn't so popular here but i love it so yeah, thank you! is there a plasylist for this story? cause i'd love to listen to anything you listen too! :D ok, this was long! i'm off to read more! you're amazing!!!! ~ Shei
Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:55 PM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
Yeah hes back, and ready to take charge again, IM off to start the sequel
Date: 22 Feb 2012 11:48 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story, so glad I sat myself down to finish reading it, I cant wait to read the sequel. GREAT JOB......
Date: 22 Feb 2012 4:03 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
Sexy fun times, and secrets coming out, and the joys of bing preggers..... Neep more
Date: 22 Feb 2012 2:25 PM Title: Par for the Course
Those funky dreams can sometimes lead to some ultimate fun times..... as for MArcus being an ASS, well I cant wait for him to get his and Edward gets to do it, since he just tried to the missus. great job......
Date: 22 Feb 2012 2:02 PM Title: This is it
Shit just got deep
Date: 21 Feb 2012 10:02 PM Title: SunSational Day
WOW, poor bella cant win for losing, I know the whole stress part of being preggers is a bitch, but If he keeps stuff from her its just going to stress her out more. Great job......
Date: 21 Feb 2012 8:41 PM Title: Prove It
AWWWW hell, the shit has hit the fan
Date: 21 Feb 2012 6:28 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
HOLY HELL, kinkella is making an appearance and I LOVE IT. as for the douche head, he doesnt deserve Es i think she should leave his ass and make him earn her love and such back.....
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:15 PM Title: Poker Face
Kill the bitch off, she wanted Bella dead its only right for her to DIE as well.....
Date: 21 Feb 2012 3:26 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
JAne is one crazy bitch, please let her get whats coming to her..... Great job
Date: 21 Feb 2012 3:02 PM Title: Hot
Ok Im picking back up on reading this stroy again. I started it awhile back and side tracked with rl and other things, so now Im back and plan on reading it til Im done. Great job so far LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:47 PM Title: Epilogue
I had to go and read from the beginning again! I just love the Storm series!
Date: 14 Feb 2012 2:07 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story and I could not stop reading.
Thanks for sharing your talent.
Date: 12 Feb 2012 11:52 PM Title: Bebella
When he said clock him did he mean to follow or off him?
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:21 AM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
I thought it was a forest chapter. Loved the Dad & Sonny & Damion reunions. Poor Sonny, I'm glad he was able to tell his dad his fears.
Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:55 PM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
I thought you would never post this! I love their small family.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 9:42 PM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
Absofuckinglutely LOVED it!!! lol
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 5:02 AM Title: Bebella
Holy hell. Where do I even start?
I LOVE the nicknames! BeBella and Mr. Fuckhot. Actually my favorite banner for the story is the one of BeBella and Mr. Fuckhot. ;)
This Bella is amazing! I LOVE everything about her! And Edward .... *falls to the floor in a heap* He won my heart before he even made it in Jasper and Alice's house. ;)
"There's a party going on in my vagina, and everybody is coming...So not the time." --- LMFAO!!! This had to be my single favorite line of the entire chapter! And Mr. Sprinkles ... I LOLed like whoa when he scratched Bella's ass.
This is the single hottest lemon I've read in a LONG time. It made me wish I could run out and find my own Mr. Fuckhot to drag back to my house, LOL! ;)
I love this story!!!! I can't wait to get farther into it and see what happens, cause I have a sneaking suspicion that little miss BeBella is going to work her way into Mr. Fuckhot's heart. ;)
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to read :) Enjoy. Thanks again!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 3:38 AM Title: Bella
I think Alice is a BITCH!! and Bell should tell her to f__ck off!!! grrrr they all treat Bella like she is 5 or something.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 2:23 AM Title: Edward
So did Edward Kill Jake in the last chapter?? I dont remember it ever saying!!
I love the way Edward talks!!
Date: 27 Jan 2012 9:49 PM Title: Epilogue
Asome!! Loved it. Cant wait to read the sequel!!
Date: 20 Jan 2012 10:16 AM Title: Bebella
Well, that Bella is something different :)
Date: 18 Jan 2012 9:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful fic !
I loved it !!
Thanks !!!
Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:32 AM Title: Parts of life
I am so afraid for Edward when Bella finds out that Jake has been killed. Hopefully, she believes the truth... She should when she finds out that it was Caius that pulled the trigger.
Date: 11 Jan 2012 7:22 PM Title: Round One
I fell like this will end badly but Im happy about it.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 11:36 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
clock? follow or off him?
Author's Response:
Follow :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:41 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
There's gonna be a lot of angst, huh? Gonna drive me crazy, huh??
Date: 30 Dec 2011 12:31 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
Bella's getting little bits and pieces. I'm glad she's telling him what Alice told her so he'll get to know the 'real' her.
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:17 PM Title: Bella
I'm having trouble leaving you reveiws. I'm loving your story. This is the first time on this website so I can't get the hang of it. Have patience with me.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Sadly, this site isn't user friendly for authors or readers :/ It takes forever just to do review replies and whatnot. So annoying. LOL. Very happy you're enjoying it! Hope you go on to read the sequel, too. <3
Date: 26 Dec 2011 5:23 AM Title: Bebella
It was this chapter that informed me that the sex would be great; somehow bettering the last.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 1:39 PM Title: Epilogue
you did an awesome job
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:34 AM Title: Under Pressure
good job wondered where the cool banner when the shot of Edward Carlisle and Aro was awesome