[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:27 AM Title: Helluva Day
People are ridiculous!! Find something else to read if you don't like it. I was hoping this story would have 120 chapters! I'm going to really miss your updates.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:43 AM Title: Helluva Day
I have just spent the past 4 days reading this story from the beginning up to the present chapter. Your use of SM's characters in this story is fabulous. I've read and enjoyed other EdandBella mob stories, but not stand out quite like this one does. I love the Brooklyn accents and the drama of Edward's business associations. The descriptions of the wives, girlfriends and various extended family relations is great. I love the moment when Edward went to purchase the flat screen for Dr. Smith's office and when Edward went in a store and greeted his "uncle's cousin's wife's ...." the family tree that preceded the Italian name Maria was hilarious! There is so much about this story that I love...Harry Potter World, Frontierland and the Wild W est shootout...with our Brooklyn Edward's reaction was classic! I loved how Edward can't seem to take Bella out to eat without getting into trouble if he sees someone look at her body. I am so happy with following this story and I plan to reread it once it is concluded!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 10:19 PM Title: Helluva Day
Lovve big fight big! But it seems a few things were cleared up.that's good. Did I sence some nesting going on? Is baby boy gonna come early?
Date: 18 Jul 2011 10:04 PM Title: Helluva Day
i love thi story:)
Date: 18 Jul 2011 6:44 PM Title: Helluva Day
love it love it love it... i really can´t get enough
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:55 PM Title: Helluva Day
Good Chapter....
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:41 PM Title: Helluva Day
You had me worried there for a minute, but I'm glad that they made up and Jacob isn't dead. Love Aro! I hope that you will consider a sequel if this drawing to a close. I love your characters and could continue reading about them forever.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:21 PM Title: Helluva Day
I'm glad they finally talked. There fight was necessary in my opinion. Hope we can get back to the more humorous aspects of the story. Poor Jake just wants to please Edward but I think he is treading in dangerous waters with Caius wife. So sad to see this coming to an end.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:51 PM Title: Helluva Day
You shouldn't take the story off FF unless you have to by admin, you have 4756 reviews over there most of which seem good ones. Don't let them run you off the site. I use FF but not much anymore because so many people have to take down there story or put up edited versions which is a shame.
Anyway back to the chapter...
Emotional but I'm glad things got sorted out and they got to the make up sex :D. Can't wait until Bella has the baby so that we get to see some daddy Edward.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 11:58 AM Title: Helluva Day
Why would anyone want you off? Such a great story. I got worried while they were fighting. I thought no cheating. My writer does not lie she promissed no cheating.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 6:33 AM Title: Helluva Day
I am baffled! How can someone want this of FF. It is a rocking story! I am sad that you want to end it, but I do think that a sequel would be Heavenly! This was a great chappie. I just wish that Jacob would get his stripes and move up. He has gone above and beyone to make the Skip's wife happy like he requested. Surely he needs to be properly compensated!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 6:08 AM Title: Helluva Day
I started reading this story and it got me hooked after the first few paragraphs. I stayed up till 3 am reading it all. Love it!!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 6:03 AM Title: Helluva Day
Such an emotional roller coaster, these two. Lovin the story...keep going please. I'm following on TWCS....I don't know about that FanFic...way to many of the very best stories are consantly taken off...I'd ignore them all together they are so much trouble, but there are still some really good stories there.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 4:49 AM Title: Helluva Day
Love it. Back to their old crazy ways. Make up sex is the best kind of sex!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 4:46 AM Title: Helluva Day
THIS MADE ME SOOO HAPPY, WELL THE ENDING OF THE CHAPTER. I HATE IT WHEN EDWARD AND BELLA FIGHT. its so sad, i actually cried.
I just hope that Edward and Bella can behappy. That they can trust eachother, and neither of them break that trust. Id be so sad if Edward cheated on her, or her on him.
They are posta be the on exeptions. the ones who can make marriage in the ganster life work and be happy. needing no man or woman on the side, just them.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 4:22 AM Title: Helluva Day
first of all why the hell do people want you off of FF.net? what the hell is wrong with them! this is the best story mafia edward is soo dam sexy. this story is funny and has a great plot. soo glad edward and bella reconnected in this chapter. hope jacob doesnt hook up with nicole caius might kill him for it. cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:38 AM Title: Helluva Day
Loved it. Amazing chapter even if you had me really worried in the middle. Can't wait for the next update and seeing Edward as daddy soon. Will he keep his promise to be around more?
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:37 AM Title: Helluva Day
wow, what a chapter! it was intense but great!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:34 AM Title: Helluva Day
One word.....WOW!!! I HAVE TO SAY I GOT A LITTLE BIT NERVOUS EARLIER IN THIS CHAPTER.....I THOUGHT SHE MAY LEAVE. THANK GOD SHE DIDN'T. THESE TWO JUST HAVE THAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP, THEY FIGHT HARD AND LOVE HARDER!! GLAD THEY HAD THIS SESSION OF SEX, PROBABLY WILL BE THE LAST TILL THE BABY, WAIT SEX BRINGS ON BABIES....
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:34 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
VEry nice, I am very excited that they are pregnant and very excited that Edward and Marcus are doing such a great job of covering thier ass so the FED's have nothing on them! I hope Bella and Edward have a wonderful time being pregnant!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:00 AM Title: Helluva Day
So happy the Jacob BS is finally out there and it got cleared up. Hopefully we have only happy times ahead for the couple.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:48 AM Title: Helluva Day
Amazing as always!! I love the intensity of their relationship! This is actually one of my favorite chapters I felt 100 different emotions reading this :)
Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:39 AM Title: Something in the Water
I do hope they get pregnant but it's just hard because I also want Edward to be there for his family and not have Bella be a single parent even if she is married. So if they do get pregnant, I hope Edward can find a way to be a family man as well as a business man.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 10:50 PM Title: Get It
Dirty talking E is hot. Loved the chapter.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 7:41 PM Title: Get It
Mmmmm this chapter was awesome! The title was very fitting! Bell and Edward both got it a few times! Yummy!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 1:56 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
Wow, I am liking where this is going! I like the kinky sex scene, that was really hot! I am sad for Esme and she needs to kick Carlise's ASS!! seriously she could do it, don't underestimate Esme! :^) I wonder if Bella and Edward are going to get pregnant and if they do, I wonder if she will be able to carry the baby to term but I guess I will have to keep reading to find out.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:34 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
I love how your characters are so realistic. It's not all sunshine and rainbows during pregnancy like others make it out to be : ) Great chapter as usual!
Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:33 AM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
yeah that chapter was awesome and that last scene was rockin' awesome!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 8:59 AM Title: Oobotz
Good Chapter.....
Date: 14 Jul 2011 6:42 AM Title: Oobotz
bella is lonely and hurting and jake would be a dead man if he even thought about it. but i do understand ed's fears. too bad to put them to rest he has to stop working so much and come home.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 5:51 AM Title: Oobotz
So Edward is working too much. I understand why he is concerned about Bella and Jacob but I don't think he has a reason too worry. Bella wouldn't do that to him and I don't think Jacob is stupid enough to try something. I think part of why he is so mad about their closeness is because he feels bad about not being there enough. I think the Bella Jacob relationship is bordering on being inapprobriate because she is his wife and Jake is just a low level guy. I think its difficult for Bella because Esme is not around as much and Laurens gone so she doesn't really have anybody.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 5:46 AM Title: Oobotz
well edward needs to be home more then he would know if his wife is screwing around.... i am sure bella will laugh her ass off, once/if edward mans up and confronts her with his thoughts. i just hope jacob doesn't get hurt unneccesary because of edwards insecurities
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:51 AM Title: Oobotz
I think it is great Bella is giving Edward a small taste of his own medicine. Yes, Bella knew of Edwards job requirements, but part of being the boss is being able to make your own hours and he could be home a little more. By Bella not having sex with Edward is making him think about Jacob, and its likely with Jacob being around all the time when Bella needs someone will make her develope feelings for him. Edward hangin around Eclipse makes Bella insecure, especially pregnant. I hope Bella doesn't really cheat, but gives Edward a little dose of his own medicine, make him think twice so to speak. She really needs him right now, everyone whos been pregnant knows how emotional you are and feel fat. Him being around naked girls don't help, at all. He needs to do something special for her, soon. If he wants sex, maybe he needs to be home before 1 am,. He knows how Bella was insatiable a few months ago, so he wonders what changed...is she getting it somewhere else??? Maybe she wants him to think that. I really love this story and have re read several times and look forward to updates. I really want them to stay together. But I think Bella deserves time with Edward before the baby comes. When babies arrive, time disappears. I don't think Edward realizes that, I think he thinks they sleep all the time and he and Bella will have so much time just for themselves....WRONG!! Not to mention the 6 week no sex thing. Does he know that??? He will probably expect BJ's from Bella and that would be selfish, surely he wouldn't stray then????!!! I would love to read more about Edward as a teen and twentyish. Was he a manwhore?? I know he was "popular" but that bad??
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:10 AM Title: Oobotz
Bella is trying so hard not to be whinny because lets be honest, she knows that she gets that way, even more so due to pregnancy hormones... But... she does miss him and ever since the Dr's appt where he talked to her about her weight BELLA has seemed even more insecure.. Edward tries to show her how much he desires her, but she feels lonesome.. Jacob is just a boy, EDWARD is a MAN that can only satisfy her and that's another reason for the horrific Night Terrors she has been having... HER Fear of loss... reinstilling in her all the terrible things her father made her feel about herself for so long.
Loved how we got a look into Edwards mind and all the ramifications of taking out Marcus and where the responsibility was placed and HOW it was placed. It was way too complicated for my simple mind, I fear *giggles, and snickers*
Love how Carlilse is once again backing is his little Sis Bella up with Edward reassuring him that she would never ever cheat on him.. Can't wait for Chapter 40, I know I know I'm greedy what can I say... you created this wonderful addictive story ... so I can't take all the responsibility here... :-) Hey take care; hate moving by the way...good luck with that, and will see you on Twitter. These Banners are kick ass wonderful RoseArcaida.... Oh, and yes, Edward is OCD in the same manner Bella is about her love for him.... Bella just doesn't show it in the same way... hence the reminder of Women are from Venus and Men are from Mars or whatever that books name was... Okay Later Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:42 AM Title: Oobotz
great chapter! Edward's mind is running away from him!! Love the new photo layout!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:32 AM Title: Oobotz
damn i knew he was going to flip out about jacob. poor edward. =(
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:28 AM Title: Oobotz
i think bella is being too easy on him i am glad he is suffering he deserves it he is not treating her very well. he is the boss get a grip ed!!! he should be afraid of jacob.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:01 AM Title: Oobotz
Are Edward's concerns ridiculous? You told us along time ago, you did not have cheating Edward & Bella. So I trust YOU! How about that? He has as much opportunity to cheat with a club full of strippers as anyone. Bella is attached to Jacob because SHE IS LONELY. Well we all get that, too bad Edward doesn't.
No pregnant woman wants to be husbandless.
You always write such good chapters.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:53 AM Title: Oobotz
i dont think edwards concerns are messed up i would be pissed to...but i dont think bella would do that to him she loves him waaayy to much but with all the crap with carlisle and his dad i can see where that would mess with his head... and i loved the inside look to edwards job..hes a badass...cant wait for more and hopefully they get to spend some more time together and get back to some lovin!!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:45 AM Title: Oobotz
Loved it. Can't wait for the next update to see if Edward still stays upset of Jacob and Bella's friendship. Update again soon!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 11:55 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
I am really enjouing this story, I think it is great! I was thinking that Bella may be pregnant which would explain the reason for her gaining weight and crying so freaking much! I really do hope that they can have a family at some point because Edward sounds like he really wants one and I'm saying, who would not want to give Edward what ever the fuck he wants?? Anyway, on to the next chapter, great chapter and really great story so far!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:37 PM Title: Poker Face
Oh Em jr !!! I cant picture E and MC kids tougth
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 12:54 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
Awsome story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Do you see Edward taking Bella to the Sanginaro feast belly and all.
Author's Response:
Um...The time of year is a little wrong. Where I am now, the San Gennaro feast would have already taken place. We're at the beginning of November now. (in ch39) Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you have enjoyed it and continue to do so. THANK YOU
Date: 10 Jul 2011 11:21 PM Title: Boxed In
Yeah!! I think those have something to do with shit happening but I think that is aomething bigger too and Jake is going to be more around I think :)
Date: 10 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
so what is the deal with Jacob? btw i caught that beforyou tweeted that no one noticed i just hadn't finished yet
Date: 10 Jul 2011 5:20 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
Really really really loving this story! it's so different to any other twilight fiction that i've read before! looking forward to how Edward reacts to the birth of the baby and i'm dying to find out whats going to happen with regards to aro and lauren!!! (aro is secretly my favourite character :))
Really well written cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Karen
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[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 11:36 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two
I just started to read and when i came carlisle and jane's disgusting part i wanted to punch him to the death. That man deserve it. I can't believe what he did. Arrgg !!! I have just finished the chapter and i am very disapointed. I hoped that esme will find out everything (maybe bella telling everything while she is drunk at the wedding but that hadnt happen :() Now I hope in the next chapthers she can learn everything. By the way your writing is amazing. I cant stop myself. this story totally rocks. I hope you dont thing that i am a crazy. I was so angry to carlisle so I wanted to write. While i was reading i felt like i was bella (even it was epov:) I hope you dont finish this story soon and after that a squel. And i am sure there are a lot of reader that thinks the same with me(sorry for the mistakes because english is my second language and i am still learning it :)
Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:50 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
I love that he can't stay mad at her! Even after falling asleep. I also like seeing Carlisle as daddy. It suits him.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 3:53 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
Super hot! Poor Edward finally got some!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:41 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
Good Chapter....
Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:28 AM Title: Round Two
Can you believe it......I jumped right in the middle of this story and love it already. Good job....keep the chapters going. I catch up from the beginning to where you are as of 7-9-11 :0
Date: 09 Jul 2011 7:52 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
Interesting too see a day of Skip at home.
So Lauren is pregnant. I understand why she is afraid to tell Aro but still, she left knowing she is pregnant. I think he has a right to know. Why should he go after her if she was the one who left in the first place?
Date: 09 Jul 2011 7:17 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
oh my goodness aro is gonna be a daddy! b&e are having a boy! :) b&e are having a bit of the prego dry spell:(ed is so cute and crazy i think i would have died if hubbie had wanted to take a look if i had gotten hemmies! and he said he wanted to lick them! ewww next daddy ed goes to work and turns into edward the skip the boss...
Date: 09 Jul 2011 4:26 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
Loved it. I remember how hard it was to feel sexy when I was all big and pregnant. I just hope he stays tolerant of her and doesnt look outside the marriage.
Date: 09 Jul 2011 4:15 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
The thing is he is so bad but with her, it is all love. I am SOO VERRY GLAD he is not GOING TO CHEAT.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 3:12 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
falling asleep during sex with edward???? that should be a crime....just sayin!!! cause we all know a capo edward is yummy!!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:47 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
Another great chapter. You got the pregnancy stuff right on. Poor Edward---ya gotta feel for the guy! Really looking forward to the next chapter--to see what a day a work is like now that he's the Boss!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:38 AM Title: Bebella
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!! I quite literally embarrass myself by squeeeing like a fangirl whenever it updates .. lol
Thanks ever so much for sharing this story with us! ;o)
Charlie
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:22 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
thanks for the update i am glad to see carlisle seems to have it together and he is getting closer to ed again they were so close before. poor bells been there done that will just feeling terrible... glad ed is supporting her he can be soo sweet. thanks for the update!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 1:59 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
loved this chapter...poor bella pregnancy hormo. are a bitch. and WOW lauren pregnant hope aro goes to see her..and as usuall it was great and funny. cant wait for more..
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 1:41 AM Title: Skip's Day Off
omg! bella not being able to shit in public and needing to rush home was funny...but edward taking a picture of her on the toilet? hilarious! lol... i had a huge feeling that lauren was pregnant with the hints that bella was giving him... omg.. damn i love this story so much. i hope bebella gets better, poor thing fell asleep when the skip was going down on her... baby boy is a big one!! :) gah.. amazing. love it.
Date: 08 Jul 2011 8:15 PM Title: Antipasto
I was wondering where my good judgment goes cause i have a have a lot of fun with bebella and coke lol!!! You fanfic ppl are changing me :)
Date: 08 Jul 2011 12:48 AM Title: Round Three
This is just such a cute story, I love it, thanks so much for sharing it with me.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:02 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Google it ah!!! And claps to the best dancer the one and the only busty LEXI:) and Wow!!! Great wirh the codes in really impress if i'd been a editor i 'd publish this story. Sooo good !!!! Love it
Date: 07 Jul 2011 12:28 AM Title: Light my Fire
How do u picture ur Aro??? Younger aren't u? And whats Esme up to ?? And i Love the Love they share :)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 9:40 PM Title: TKO
Great weeding pretty close to reallity :)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:05 AM Title: Bella
Wonderful chapter!! Can't wait to read more into this & see what the deal is with Edward & why he is so scary... Til next time....
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:53 AM Title: Aruba
This chapter was so cute, Edward is completely a fish out of water and I love that he is trying to understand his feelings and his need to be around Bella. I also love how well you speak the slang, it's a talent that some writers don't have so not only is your stroy about new yorkers, the slang allows me to hear it from a new yorkers perspective and that is very nice. Thanks for the story I am really enjoying it and please don't change any of your slang just because someone may be offended. Please tell them if they are offended don't read it. **Kissess**
Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:06 AM Title: Decision/Draw
Cedric lol!! That was fun among darkeness i mean this is getting dark and next the weeding :) im having a great time reading :)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:44 AM Title: Edward
Wonderful chapter, it has kept my interest!!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 10:51 PM Title: Edward
I am almost speachless, your Cullen men are so Dark! And so good, I am still smiling after reading this chpt. Lovin' it. But it does seem that Edward really likes B. Plus you have dope dealing Jasper and Section 8 Alice.... wow! Excellent job.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:53 PM Title: Bebella
Found this story on Avant Garde Awards site. That was a hell of a steaming, hot first chpt! Drunk BeBella and Mr. Fuckhot-PussyLips, and he seemed to live up to his name. Whew!! Interesting twist E. & C. are half brothers. Can't get to next chpt quick enough.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:16 PM Title: Round Three
What a prick i totally don't trust this Carlise :( good thing like i said;) and i think i love Brutus more !!!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:14 PM Title: Round Two
Ah!! So cute This Edward is so complicated but in love :)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:38 PM Title: Bebella
I am loving the feel of this story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Great work!!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 11:55 AM Title: Round One
Oha!! I didnt see that coming... Vegas. And u know what is what i like about stories, books, movies etc when they are not predictable Is what i love the most :)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 10:41 AM Title: Baby Blues
Again a lot going on in this chapter. Poor Esme, I hope she is feeling better soon.
I still don't get why Edward won't tell Bella anything, he knows she worries more if she doesn't know whats going on.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:32 AM Title: Baby Blues
Love it!!!!!
Poor Esme. I hope she can get out of her funk soon.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:40 AM Title: Baby Blues
gah! i love u so for writing this amazing story!!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:38 AM Title: Baby Blues
Good Chapter.....
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:33 AM Title: Baby Blues
Amazing as always
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:55 AM Title: Baby Blues
loved this chapter, it was great
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:12 AM Title: Baby Blues
momma e is low and she has been ignoring baby hannah!? that is some bad shit and i hope that bella has helped them move towards better days. eddie is kinda a freak here getting excited that baby kicks when bella hits the o! too funny. these 2 are so crazy i love it. sad that ao lost out on lauren do ya think he needs someone to come and give him some lovin'to help him forget and move on? just throwin my name in if he needs a special touch in his time of need. heehee
all caught up here and off to read the out takes! type type baby! :)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:55 AM Title: Baby Blues
thanks for the update! that was quick! esme is a mess. you make bella so grown up for her age. at leas carlisle seems to have gotten it together! that's good. ed is sexy as always. too bad bella never sees him. can't wait for more!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:07 AM Title: Baby Blues
Our girl Bella is growing up. Yes Esme is depressed. She needs a therapist and probably meds.
Edward and Bella will be great at the parental thing. I think.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 1:57 AM Title: Checks and Balances
yay shit is done and it looks good for eddie to step in without a huge fight on his hands. but i can't believe he shot aro! ed fucked with my boy!that is not cool!everything is good so far and it is time to head over to red lobster! heehee!
congrats on all of the award wins. but seriously your aro should have won... was there a best aro catagory? cause if there was you should have nailed that shit. in this fic i think i want aro over the rest of them. heehee never said that before. but dayum! you make him sound sweet, hard, bad, and sexy as hell!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:45 AM Title: Par for the Course
oh my fuck!!! this shit is getting heavy! i think bella will definately have made a name for herself when all this shit is done. definately not your average wife that's for sure! ed is gonna take marcus out while marcus thinks ed is off getting taken care of. bella is awesome and shit has officially hit the fucking fan!!! you had better be writing cause i only have 1 more chapter till i catch up!!! and fucking family wants me to put this shit down and go cook what the fuck!! see what you do to me? type type sweetie! lol
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:51 PM Title: This is it
holy shit! holy shit! holy shit!!!!!!!!!! marcus made carlisle kill gail and the baby! carlisle is crazy fucked in the head right now! ed is gonna take marcus down and we are about to go to war! holy shit! i can believe marcus wanted gail dead she was a fed and posed a threat to his little girl's happiness, puh like he really helped on that one! but to say words about bella??!?!?!?!? that shit is fucked! i thought the rule was you don't fuck with the wives! the woman and children are innocent and bella is technically both! plus he is stealing aro, and setting eddie up?!?! he needs to be taken out!! dumb fuck
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:17 PM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
baby is coming! baby is coming!!!
btw i love the chapter splitters you got goin on! heehee
Date: 04 Jul 2011 9:19 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
looooovvvveee it! jersey shore meets godfather lol edward/rob with mucles and a nine soooo hot told my husband if he didnt stop whining id pop a cap so he betta watch his six :) so love this story great job
Date: 04 Jul 2011 8:43 PM Title: SunSational Day
Eddie needs a girl to be wrapped up in! Yay they are having a baby! Wonder what is up with carlisle? Who killed gail? What's up with aro and christina?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2011 7:00 PM Title: Edward
I like it a lot so far! It's definitely a different take on the E&B scene but it's nice. I am saddened that you have to state that you don't intend to offend anyone. If you don't like the story, don't freakin' read it. But don't stop artist from creating their take on E&B for fear of upsetting someone delicate sensabilities, the story is rate NC-17 so if you don't think you can handle it (and if your not 18+) just do us all a favor and don't read it, for crying out loud, these stories are for entertainment purposes. NO ONE woke up todyay and decided to try to offend you!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:11 AM Title: Prove It
i kinda figured esme had more of a thing for aro. i think he did/does too but things are too late now. :( the fbi are here! the fbi are here! shit and at sunday dinner too??!! i so think bella is preggers! i hope eddie gets out before she hears the news she is gonna need him one way or the other. bella is gonna be a horney pregnant lady love it!!