Date: 09 Aug 2011 11:53 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
no need for clearing things up, i thoight it crystal. i hop it wasn't to easy because it's a set up.
Great read
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:19 AM Title: Bad Taffy
great action & suspense
Date: 09 Aug 2011 7:33 AM Title: Aruba
What I think is so cute is that Edward has to call his Nanny to get advice. That speaks volumes about how he feels about Bella. Then he spends two nights with Bella who can't have sex and she has cramps. I used to get awful cramps and it isn't anything pretty. Biggest bitch ever. But the fact that he stays there with her even though he's not getting any is priceless. Only someone who really cares about you would stick around for that. And to top it off, he's sleeping on an air mattress just so he could hold her and get some sleep. Now, how sweet is that? E, you can only stay in denial for so long before Nanny cuts your balls off. You love Bella. Oh, how the mighty have fallen. I just love it!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:56 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Is it fucked up that I wouldn't mind if homeboy popped one in Didyme?" ha ha ha
That was hillarious. I am so loving this story. I feel like i've stumbled upon this lovely gem or as my husband says [best] 'needle in a hay stack' of all the fan fic's in the world ... I found this one. lucky me
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:56 AM Title: Light my Fire
Okay, all other fanfiction has died to me. All I need now is this story, I love it. There's this slight angst because they have such a volatile relationship but I don't feel beat up reading it, it's just joyful to read/feel the love they have growing for each other. And this story is completed, yeah. Thanks for writing.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:17 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Wow. That was HOT! So delicious! Ah, I remember those days. Now, I have to settle for luke warm. Oh, poor me. Ha I love living vicariously thru these two. I can't wait to see where all this is heading. Love it.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 10:20 PM Title: Edward
I loved getting a look into Edward
Date: 08 Aug 2011 10:20 PM Title: Bebella
I laughed my ass off!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:01 PM Title: Bella
I can't stop reading this story. The wedding should be interesting but I'm really excited about what he has planned for Sunday. I wonder what kind of job he'll offer her. I wouldn't be surprised if he called her later to see if she's home or out with "one of the finest". It did sound like he may be a bit jealous. Great story!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:59 AM Title: Round Two
He's great at this multitasking stuff. ha ha He sure is;~D)`
There was so much going on in this chapter I don't know where to begin, just that I loved it. I really like how you capture their insecure vacillating anxiety with each new step they take, it's adorable.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 4:14 AM Title: Round One
I feel giggly reading this, it's crayza adorable;~D)
Thanks for writing. I'm also totally thrilled that I'm reading a completed story, I keep telling myself that I'm going to swear off incompete or works in progress as so many are incompete & don't get completed. Never mind, thanks again, loving it.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:37 AM Title: Bebella
OMG! I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to read your story - I seemed to be a bit much but this line "There's a party going on in my vagina, and everybody is coming..." cracked me up! I haven't laughed like that in a long time! I'm going to stick with it and keep reading! Thanks for sharing your story with us! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2011 6:42 PM Title: Epilogue
oh my i can not believe this story is over! i am so happy that you are writing a sequel there is still so much story to tell. the kids are too cute for words, the main players are kinda cute how we started out knowing them as these badass mobsters and here we saw them as parents struggling with pretty normal kid shit just like everyone else. lol.
i can not even wait for the sequel so excited!!!!!!!
thank you for sharing your story!!
suzie :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 6:34 PM Title: Bebella
LOVED the EPILOGUE your doing so wonderfull as soon as i figure out how to put your strory on my watch list its gonna happen! Cant wait for the sequel I LOVE IT!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 4:17 PM Title: Aruba
"Fucking douchebag" she's so eloquent or maybe not eloquent but acurate.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 3:24 PM Title: The Game
;ove reading this story
Date: 07 Aug 2011 5:37 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
I also like the asshole Carlisle, it totally works for me, way more fun.
What is Edward's dads' name? He keeps mentioning Marcus and his dad as just Dad.
Thanks for writing, this story is a joy to read.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 5:20 AM Title: Epilogue
I think you are a brilliant writer. I loved this story and cant wait for the sequel.
I enjoyed every moment of it and love how real to life you are. I laughed, I cringed and my stomach twisted in every way possible during this story.
I loved it so much I had physical reactions to what these characters went through.
I have read all of your stories and have loved everyone and I can tell you just keep getting more brilliant in your writing.
I cant wait to read what's next.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 4:06 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
I'm liking these characters more & more the more I read.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:10 AM Title: Epilogue
thanks for the wonderful story!!! it was great!! :)
Date: 06 Aug 2011 11:01 PM Title: Epilogue
awesome cant wait for sequel and am so glad u didnt write about edward in jail would have broken my heart cause he isnt the same guy he was before bebella love this story girl!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 10:30 PM Title: Epilogue
Just wonderfull! can´t wait for the sequel!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 10:19 PM Title: Epilogue
Sorry my reviews have been few and far between.
I have been reading and loving everyword. I seem to be at a loss for words so hope that telling you I am loving the story, Loved the story, can be enough and help right now.
I am looking forward to the sequel! Will try and do a better job on reviews for you, to at least let you know that I am reading.
Thanks for a wonderful story. Eventhough it was painful in places that helps make the story. What fun would it be if it was all fluff and lemons? Speaking of, you write some fuck awesome lemons.
Apparently I found some of my words. LOL
Thanks again.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Bebella
Wow, that was quite an introduction. Hawt stuff, looking forward to seeing where this leads
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:51 PM Title: Epilogue
i love this tory and i cant w8 the sequel:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:18 PM Title: Epilogue
Boy oh Boy that Sonny is a handful huh? Children are much more perceptive that we adults think they are.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Looking forward to part two!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:09 PM Title: Epilogue
loved this story, looking forward to the sequel
Date: 06 Aug 2011 10:07 AM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for this story. I can't wait for the sequel. You are really good at writing about family dynamics. I hope Edward manages to stay out of jail in the future. Poor Bella alone with two small kids and her husband in prison. Another baby on the way- hope it sticks.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 6:33 AM Title: Epilogue
FUCKING LOVED THE EPILOGUE! I was wondering and trying to figure out what it would like? but fuck this surpassed whatever my mind was working up.
Im staying faithful to this story and will definatly be reading that sequel. Now on to other shit..
Sonny seems to be rebelling right now, missing his dad, and hating being lied to. He thinks he's a grown ass man, but hes not. He needs to calm down with all that, so now that Edward is home, I hope that he can calm down and be at ease.
Damien is adorable. I cant say anything else bout the kid, hes just... too cute.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 5:00 AM Title: Epilogue
oh i just about cried i loved it so much!!! i cant imagine what bella went through those yrs edward was locked up how aweful! and sonny is just like edward but so damn young! damion is too cute! when you start the sequel u should put in the authors not all the characters ages and then list their kids under them with ages to help us keep up!!! cant wait for sequel!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:57 AM Title: Epilogue
thnx i was just gonna ask u for a sequel
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:43 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved it. Can't wait for the sequel.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:18 AM Title: Epilogue
I wasn't sure that I was going to like that you flashed so far forward, but I think that the really long chapter really helped in this case. It gave us a chance to get invested again with the new characters. I love Sonny, he is just like his dad. I also love that tough guy Aro has a very non aggressive cute kid with glasses. I can just see him! Can't wait for the sequel, thanks for continuing the story for all of us.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:09 AM Title: Epilogue
Amazing story, loved this last chapter. I knew Edward would end up in jail hope its the last time!!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 3:00 AM Title: Epilogue
I can't wait to read the sequel. Your writing is so well done, it paints incredibly vivid pictures in my head. I love this story almost as much as your Bon Secours stories. You make the families so realistic. Thank you!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:52 AM Title: Epilogue
I don't think i could have read about Edward being in jail either. loved it, cant wait for sequel!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:40 AM Title: Epilogue
This was a great story, I can't wait to read the sequel! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:35 AM Title: Epilogue
WOW! I am pretty sure this is the first time that I am leaving a review for this story which is kind of sad seeing as it is the last chapter but I just had to let you know that I have read the entire story and loved every bit!
In my defense for not reviewing sooner...I only found your story a few chapters ago and was instantly hooked and became a selfish hooker and didn't want to take the time to review when I could just click to the next chapter and keep reading and feeding my newest most favorite addiction!
I love this story, it was a complete "page turner" and I couldn't get enough!! I have never laughed as much as I have when reading a story as I have with this one, not to mention cried, cringed, freaked the fuck out, and squeeled like a cat in heat too!! LOL
I could relate to so much in this story; I am from Boston and my mother's family was born and raised in New York and so yeah, all of that "slang" is something I am quite familiar with! LOL
I am so anxious for the sequel and solemnly sware that I will review more often with that one!!
Kudos to you for a great journey!! Looking forward to the continuation of this "FUCKHOT" story!!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:27 AM Title: Epilogue
AMAZING as always!! i love that you fast forwarded to his point i love seeing the kids older and how they are as parents. I absolutely cannot wait for your sequel! I'm going to reread quiet storm in the meantime :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:22 AM Title: Epilogue
this story was so much fun... Sonny and Dame are going to be wonderful as well as AJ and all the cousins and little friends...exciting times ahead we can see...
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:21 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it. Can't wait for the sequel.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 11:34 PM Title: Icing on the Cake
I've been reading this story in FF and on here and I just want to say...You are an AMAZING writer. Im 19 and i want to go to college to study Journalism and just the way you write and the wonderfull plot the twists and turns you inspire me so much. I am dieing to read the sequel i cant wait! I dont even see this as Twilight Edward and Bella anymore, you have twisted and turned and created the newer sexier and deadly Edward and Bella (Bebella) Cullen and I LOVE IT!! Keep Writing!!!!
- Bailey
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am so happy that you have enjoyed this story and that it inspired you. Before I wrote my first story "The Story of Us", I had never written anything. Over time, I have developed my writing, and I am still continuing to do so. Like anything, the more you do it, the easier it comes and the better you get. Thank you so much for the compliment, although, there are plenty of "seasoned" writers around the TwiFanfic fandom that can run circles around me.
Thank you so much again. I hope to post the sequel soon - within a week.
Lexi
Date: 04 Aug 2011 8:53 PM Title: Icing on the Cake
Thanks for this chapter!
Wow, Dadward how I love him. Though I think its mean of him to not get up during the night if its his turn. I hope Bella doesn't let it slide.
I loved how he reassured Bella about her looks though I felt kind of bad for him when Carlisle and Aro were commenting how hot she is looking. Poor guy. Haha, him walking up to the feds with the baby in tow was funny.
Can't wait for the Epilogue and of course the sequel!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Icing on the Cake
nice to have a husband like edard:)
Date: 04 Aug 2011 10:58 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
fascinating, wonderful, lovely your stories I've always loved but this I not only loved the master Edward and Bella I loved their personalities are so funny and so human relationship is I still love your story on fanfiction and WCS thank you for this wonderful story I hope the epilogue and sequel
Date: 04 Aug 2011 5:16 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
awww eddie sounds like he is doing great at being a daddy. and he is taking care of bella too. i really hope what he did for her helps her to see the beauty that she is, but i remember all of the ways having a baby changes you inside and outside and it is hard to just love who you are in the mirror.
so sad to see the story is almost over but super excited that you are continuing it!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 4:44 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
I really love thus story:)
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:42 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
sonny makes me think about when my son was born. he was a chunky monkey lmao. didnt weigh as much. eight pounds, nine oz. but after he was born, the boy was a chubby baby. i loved his thickum thighs lmao. now hes three and tall and lean, all skinny like, no roundness to him at all, not even his face, well maybe his cheeks are a lil chunky but they suit him. i love rollie pollie babies. lol
sonny sounds like one smokin baby lmao.
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
Loved it. Looking forward to the Epilogue. When will the sequel start posting?
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:08 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
thanks for making him a doting hubby and daddy. i was worried from the last chapters that he was going to blow her off. it is nice to see. can't believe it is coming to an end!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:53 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 7:08 AM Title: Helluva Day
Good chapter - you do a great job!
Why does someone want you off fanfiction dot net? I'm just curious :-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:08 AM Title: Under Pressure
omg omg, i want to freaking cry! they have a ba-baby!!!! awww. what an amazing amazing lovely chapter. you're so real with you're humor. i love it! lol :)
Date: 28 Jul 2011 1:57 AM Title: Under Pressure
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:21 AM Title: Under Pressure
yay it's a boy and he is here and everyone is great! i was worried there for a second that you would make something go wrong, but everything is great! perfect! i can't believe eddie stuffed his gun in his scrubs! heehee and ed with the intern! too funny! i told the interns to turn thefuck around and get the hell outta my room! real doctors only! i know so bad! oh well.
kinda sad it is almost over but so stoked as to what youare gonna do with the sequel!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:26 PM Title: Under Pressure
I love seeing Carlisle's softer side. Will Bella ever know about Jacob? I feel bad that she is asking about him. Santino, really?
Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:47 PM Title: Under Pressure
yeah she finally had the baby!! are we going to find out what aro and carlisle were fighting about?? can't belive that it is almost over.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 7:41 PM Title: Under Pressure
That was fantastic, from Carlisle and Aro fighting to baby Santino's surprise name!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 7:37 PM Title: Bebella
Great chapter even better birthday the same day as mine.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:55 PM Title: Under Pressure
loved it!!! verry italian name..very fitting. cant wait for more and the sequel!! squeeee!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:45 PM Title: Under Pressure
nice chapter:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:09 PM Title: Under Pressure
Awww i can just picture those fat chubby little legs and cheeks. Both my girls were little babies,so I could just picture this one.And how sweet was it that Edward was so emotional with his birth.*sigh*.I loved this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:55 PM Title: Under Pressure
I loved this chapter! Welcome to the family, Santino Anthony Cullen! How did Bella go along with Santino for her son's name...Italian Mafia...hehehe. At least, they will call him Sonny (cute). I can't wait for Bella, Edward and Sonny to get home and try to get used to being a famiy of three. This should be amusing.
Edward is the ultimate husband...even when Bella is in labor and with her water broken, Edward is ready to make love! Yeah! How could Bella not "redeem" Edward's fake BJ coupons? He is just so loveable!
:)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:15 PM Title: Under Pressure
Oh I cried! I really did!!! I just knew that she was going to go into labor when she said she would go with Edward to the track, and with her getting soo excited about PB racing, it was awesome!
Whats up with ARO and Carlisle fighting??
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:17 PM Title: Under Pressure
Love it. I love Carlisle!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:40 PM Title: Under Pressure
Wonderful stuff!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:06 AM Title: Under Pressure
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:42 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
i just cAN'T ...GOTTA RUN TO NEXT CHAPTER LMAOOO
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:50 AM Title: Under Pressure
You know it has been an amazing story. We all will hate to see it end. Thank you again for no Bella & Edward cheating. He may be the mob boss but he loves his wife, and now his son.
Thanks,
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:50 AM Title: Under Pressure
I loved it....loved the name as well so different.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:29 AM Title: Under Pressure
FYI...Santino "Sonny" Carleone was my FAVORITE character on Godfather...I actually had the biggest crush and refused to watch the rest of the movie after he died. I freaking love this story. I am soooooooooo glad BeBella isn't pregnant anymore, lol. I can't even imagine pushing a 9 lb baby out of my hoohah...you go Bella, thank goodness for C sections. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:21 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
that! Bel ami!!!!! lmfaoo!!!! just a scoundrel!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 2:09 AM Title: Edward
I FUCKINg LOVE THIS!!! LMAO
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:45 AM Title: Bebella
this my dear is eye catching I love it!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 10:37 PM Title: Parts of life
I absolutely love your story, to me it doesn´t feel dragged out, I enjoyed every minute of it... And for once, I will be the first in line to read your seguel.
Congrats! Truly you are an excellent writer!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:45 AM Title: Parts of life
Woooah!! First off don't ever feel bad about
Posting long chapters..feel free in fact I
Insist! This is one of the best stories I
Have ever read it keeps me checkin for
Updates religiously hunny.. You don't know
How glad I am to hear that there's gonna be
A sequal!!!! Hopefully 50 or 60+ chaps *hint
Hint**wink wink**nudge nudge* =) jus sayin!
Keep up the good work..an this story could never
B dragged out..feel free to write 100 chaps or
More =D
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:37 AM Title: Bella
so sexy...wear your hair down Bella!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:04 AM Title: Edward
i love this story and how Carlilse treated Edward early on reminds us how far C comes by the end
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:17 AM Title: Bebella
i'm reading this again I just can't seem to get enough
Date: 23 Jul 2011 9:55 PM Title: Parts of life
thanks for the udate i can't believe you killed jacob!! ciaus is a hypocrite!!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:04 PM Title: Parts of life
I am so excited about the sequel. I am sad that Jacob is dead now, Bella will be to when she figures it out. I hope that she doesn't blame E. He really tried to do right. I just want you to know that I don't feel like you are dragging this story out at all. I look forward to the updates and love the long chapters. I never get bored. I can't wait for the baby to come so you can get back to the kinky sexing again. Thanks for this story. It makes my day. Loved that E had Carlisle forge more bj coupons. That was awesome.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 3:49 AM Title: Parts of life
This was so good. I loved Jake in this story. He was such a young guy who acted his age. Too funny how he wanted to kiss E ass. So sweet how E touched his cheek when and silently thanked him. Yay, Aro found out about the baby. Excited about Lauren coming back. Caius totally inability to see the double standard of him cheating and not wife is so fucked up. I love all the different personalities in this story. I do wonder why Jacob shot him 1st. Hopefully Caius will get shot by Nicole. What a shit for beating her up.
YOU SHOULD NEVER SAY SORRY FOR GIFTING YOUR READERS W/ AN EXCELLENT LONG CHAPTER.
Sequel- Hell yes. Damn I'm excited. I buy more books probably more than most and lately they have been so boring. This story is totally holding my interest. Thank you.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 2:36 AM Title: Parts of life
awsome chapter, the cheese part was too funny. Hate that Jacob was killed but thought something like that would happen!!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Parts of life
well i waited alllllll day to read this i wanted to read it at home without any interuptions! so worth it.
i about fell of the couch when you said it would be over at ch43. but so excited you will continue with a sequel!!!
jake should have listened to bella and stayed the fuck away from caisus' wife, that shit don't fly in normal life let alone with people who carry guns and shot people all the time. seriously stupid move jake! sad thing is if ed did tell bella what happened she would be sad yes but she would kinda understand. she did warn him over and over.
almost time for baby almost time for baby! will ed be in the delivery room watching the 'c-operation'? wonder what he will think of that shit? and what will he pick for a name?
the fooling around of ed, aro, and carlisle about what their kids will be like was too funny. all parents go through that 'my kid will be better than me and do better than i did' wonder if that will be the sequel? once the kids are teenagers, like 16-18 and their daddies beating on them to be fucking god kids! heehee!!!
so excited to see where you will end this one off and where you will start the new story from!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 8:44 PM Title: Parts of life
never apologize for a long chapter girl! lol we're all very thankful for it. and it doesn't feel dragged out at all me.. who ever said that is nuts!!!!!
lol, bella is so cute with her mood swings. omg.. crying about not being have to have cheese. hahah so cute!
w00t w00t for freak tendencies! HOLLA!
aww. bye bye barry! :(
I'm so glad aro is trying to work things out with his baby mama! :)
i LOVE aro and skips convos. lmao funny shit.
i seriously teared up with the whole jacob part!! OMG
you're a genius!
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:08 PM Title: Parts of life
Oh I just can´t get enough of this! and ich can´t wait for the sequel. Thanks so much
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:42 PM Title: Parts of life
So Jake is dead, ha! serves him right for fucking somebodies wife! He knew what he was doing, he knew there would be hell to pay if it were to be found out.
He shot first, he's the one who fucked up.
Glad Bella and Edward are alright, still some rough patches int he road, but they're gonna be good. He did right by not fucking that woman, and getting rid of her by having her fired. RIGHT ON!
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:08 PM Title: Bebella
I'm looking forward to Bella having the baby now too. I wonder if Edward will freak out?
I hope Bella does okay with the news that Jacob's dead. Great chapter as always.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:21 PM Title: Parts of life
EXCELLENT!! I LOVE THIS STORY, KEEPS YOU "ON YOUR TOES" I ALWAYS KNEW JACOB WAS GONNA GET IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE BABY. WILL BELLA TELL EDWARD ABOUT THE BABIES R US WHERE NICOLE GAVE JACOB HER NUMBER? AND THE SEQUEL....GREAT NEWS!!! THANK YOU!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:14 PM Title: Parts of life
Hey lovely one! Great chapter, perfect as a matter of fact... loved the stuff with the coupons! that was pretty damn funny honestly..Just thinking about it. Big Mob Boss making construction paper FORGED Blow Job coupons to give to his wife... LMAO! Then on top of that both his Lead Cappo and Brother are made to be accomplisses.. great shit. That's why I love your writing so much, its not just the serious stuff and all the wonderful SEXING that goes on, but your wonderful humor.
I thought I was going to fall out of my chair laughing over Edward wanting to run back into the Dr's office wanting to put a beatdown on Doc doing a rectal exam on his wife. LOL! Come on Edward that's normal... he wasn't trying to be a pervert LOLOLOL!!! But yes, we love to get our wonderful Mobward and how he feels about his lady love...
Pretty cute both E&B and A&L are having boys and C&E have a little girl, yep I can so see Aro's little boy and Esme's princess hitting that shit when they become teens...
I think we all saw what was going to HAVE to happen with Dizz, sad as it was though but in all fairness to Caius, Edward did give Dizz the chance to come clean with him about Nicole, Dizz didn't. I did think it was nice and pretty compassionate of Edward when he leaned down and thanked Jake for all that he did for Bella and taking care of her - see Bella does rub off on Edward in a compassionate sort of way....
Nuff said... Ready Freddy for the final chapters!!!! OnWard!!!! and UPWARD!!!! to the Sequel... Have to go VOTE and read INI EPI - Chapter 48....
I read on Twifans website that the 3 Majors RobKristenTaylor are suppose to be at Comic Con I think tomorrow Saturday but not positive... Laters Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:35 PM Title: Parts of life
This story is FAR from being dragged out! i can read about these guys forever.. seriously. I am so ecstatic that your making a sequel! You have me cracking up every single chapter. I loved them in the office making the coupons!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:32 PM Title: Parts of life
I can't tell you how happy I am that you decided on a sequel! I am not ready to tell these two (three!) good-bye : (
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 12:04 PM Title: Parts of life
Great chapter and I am happy that Jacob is gone. I could not stand him in this story.
Date: 22 Jul 2011 11:27 AM Title: Parts of life
Stupid Jacob, Bella probably will be very upset about his death. She even warned him off Caius wife. So next time the baby is coming, I'm sure it will be interesting.
Date: 22 Jul 2011 9:14 AM Title: Parts of life
Loved it. So happy there will be a sequel.
Date: 22 Jul 2011 9:12 AM Title: Parts of life
good chapter....
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:39 AM Title: Helluva Day
Holly Hell!
THAT was one emotional roller coaster. At one point you actually had me thinking that they may not make it.
You did an awesome job. Reading stuff like the fight sucks, but sometimes that is how life is and you make it work. Scary Edward though.
As always your lemons are great. I am glad you resolved them and didn't leave it hanging til next chapter.
Almost over??? They say all good things must come to an end, but I just have to ask WHY??? LOL
Thanks for a great read. I love this story.