Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:51 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
okay interesting wolves... leah a slut wow!! never really liked jacob really don't like him here.
Author's Response:
Yup I hate Jacob, does it show? haha xx
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:16 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
strange! well he let someone in before and it didn't work out.. he wants her always but won't change her bi-polar much?
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Hopeless
ed you are.... no words can explain
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:01 PM Title: New Surroundings
wow you made carlisle really scary too!!! ed is going drain the other two people in front of her to show her that he is a monster?
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:58 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
Sooo awesome!! I love every time you dish out a new chapter :) :) And how could anyone be confused with this story?? It makes PERFECT sense to me! They just aren't reading carefully enough. It's freakin brillant :) I can't wait for your next update pumpkin! Let's catch up soon :) XOXO :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much sweetie :] Hehe I know it makes sense to me too hehe We really do need to catch up :] and the story is almost over sweetie xx :[ sad! xx
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:59 AM Title: Ultimatum
ok i guess she survived that poor bells! wow you made jasper really scary!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:58 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
wow she is really powerful.
Author's Response:
Yup thats my girl hehe :] next chapter coming very soon xx
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:55 AM Title: Trapped
broken bones are in your future ms. bella!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:52 AM Title: Beautiful Stranger
interesting
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:49 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
Aha! Another power! I knew it. Too bad its so fucking painful for her. Now she just needs to figure out how to use it.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:24 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
Glad to see the update. Perhaps Isabella is the key to their freedom afterall.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 9:53 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Well she is powerful. Ahh.. first target............TANYA >>LMAO
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:24 AM Title: Fighting the Monster Within
Nope Jacob is bad...
Edward my gosh in human terms he is bi-polar!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:15 AM Title: Notes
Wow Jacob is a real sicko!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:05 AM Title: Doomed
Carlisile , I think I felt this all along. Why else? Rose, she is so full of herself. I guess the other girlfriend he had so much sex with was TANYA.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:58 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Okay well I am still reading. So it is dark, but it is more like I picture Vampires than sweet humanitarians.
You know some people are never satisfied. I read some reviews. I mean every chapter in this type of fiction is not buring the house down, so to speak. You set up for the next one or explain what just happened. I like to read continually so I get the rythym.
Your writing is fine. This is just dark. Of course you know that.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:03 AM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
do I like it.. well not sure. They are all so evil. So I probably will not read all of this. I am just going to read a few more chapters and see how this is going. If it is torture and mayham. Then no.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:54 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Interesting chapter. I hope that they are able to get Bella's parents out of there, as well as themselves.
I don't want anyone but Edward to change Bella. And I'm still waiting for Jacob to die.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:36 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Love it cant wait for more!!!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 11:56 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
OMG!!! what happened!?!? need to update soon im sooooo hooked
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:10 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
Great chapter! Let's kill Jacob and the dogs!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:54 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
Great chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:46 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Love the chapter and the progress, =) as always, love her ability, wonder what´s going on.. . I´ll wait and see,
best wishes, Linda xoxo
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:35 AM Title: Trapped
Poor Bella. I like her fighting spirit though. Can Edward read her mind?
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:13 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
yes can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:03 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Ugh. Such a slime ball Aro is. Hope she kills him first thing.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:05 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
wow.... didnt see that coming!!
loved it :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Oh wow!! That was awesome!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:47 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
What is with you people and the Damn Cliffys Loved it by the way and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can....
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:35 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Please hurry!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:50 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
It's good to see her fighting back in whatever way she can... Since you're planning a sequel, I'm going to believe they will all make it out of here okay...
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, damn it I have given away the ending haha what a silly moo lmao, well now you know lol but you can still keep reading xx
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:38 AM Title: Beautiful Stranger
I never called it any such thing. I infact said it was good to see you moving it along. it is appearent you are having serious issues else where and placing them on my review which is unjust. as for you not wanting me to continue reading your story than so be it. i will immediately remove it from fave list. Best wishes in the future.
Author's Response:
I was unbelievably hot headed, however I have already sent an email. I was a bitch, thats it and I do apologise.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
Another great chapter!!! I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the mugs and the review, but I'm seriously finding it difficult with this story, I feel like I've fucked it up and I just dont know if I am going to continue, please don't hate me. I just can't handle the pressure anymore
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:22 AM Title: Isabella's Ball
It's good to see you are moving forward. honestly i almost didn't read this chapter dreading it would be the same as the last few. But i'll be even more honest and say it has been dragging so i hope you have more planned for the future chapters. I'll try to hold on and hope it moves forward quickly. i would like to see it to the end.
Author's Response:
Well thanks for the honesty, but if I'm going to be honest, you have just seriously made it difficult for me to even consider writing any more for this story, I am so fed up of reviews like this, if its so shit, then that's it I'm just going to scrap it, I seriously can't be bothered anymore. I can't please anyone, I was so fucking happy to post this chapter, but now, just fuck it, don't bother reading anymore I can't be arsed.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:10 PM Title: Gratitude
Good to see an update! Please let Edward (and Monster) see Bella in the next chapter. They really need some private time to talk without an audience.
Author's Response:
they will see her soon, however there wont be any privacy I'm afraid :/ xx
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:40 PM Title: Gratitude
I understand SOME thins that are going on but nnot every thing AND I hope It becomes clear soon.
Author's Response:
well send me a pm and I shall answer any questions, plus I can post them on my blod and it may help other people who may be confused :] xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:27 AM Title: Gratitude
I miss you woman! It's fantastic to hear from you! We need to catch up...sounds like life has been as rough with you as it has for me recently. It always helps me to remember God will never put us through anything we cannot endure and overcome. He's kinda awesome like that :) I'm thinking about you and you're in my prayers! Just know your update has made a day that TRIED VERY HARD to be hellish...a much better one :) Xoxo!!
Author's Response:
Aw sweetie I miss you too! aw thanks sweetie, thats very nice of you :] and its been bad but nothing I cant handle, I just needed a little break from this story, sometimes the pressure just builds a little too much :/ I'm glad i made your day :] you always cheer me up with your awesome reviews xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:15 AM Title: Gratitude
IT LIVES!!! Thanks for updating; it's been a while, but I understand that the outside world does take over from time to time. I enjoyed this chapter; it feels more like a teaser than anything else though. I'm intrigued by the development of Bella; perhaps she will be one of the few who access their latent gifts as humans? I could definitely envision a human Bella busting some vampire ass when she suddenly realizes that she is talented, in some manner or another. Thanks for sharing! Don't abandon us!
Author's Response:
Sorry that you feel its a teaser, I have revised the story line and tried to cut the fillers but then its gonna be over in like 5-6 chapters so I'm not sure if people will be too thrilled with that idea :/ I would never abandon this story or you guys xx
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:03 PM Title: Gratitude
Banners look great! Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work. MWAH! Lurves babes.
Author's Response:
aww thanks sweetie :] I will be getting the next chapter out soon xx
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 11:58 PM Title: Gratitude
Love the chapter and the progress, sorry to hear about your bad news, hope everything will be fine,
best wishes, Linda xo
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie, and I'm doing alright thanks, I still have to wait to get all the results back :/ thanks for the love xx
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 11:52 PM Title: Mute
Love the chapter and the progress, =)
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
thank you sweetie :] xx
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 11:33 PM Title: New Home
Love the chapter and the progress, =) glad he´s letting the monster come out and play,
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
yup the monster is out to play :] hehe xx
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:38 AM Title: Gratitude
loved it thanks for sharing this with us update when you can......
Author's Response:
I will thank you very much for your support :) and mugs xx
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:16 AM Title: Gratitude
So glad to see an update on your story. Bella is in such a tough predicament. Talk about a rock and a hard place. I do hope that Monster or Edward or someone can come up with a solution to get them all out of Aro's grip.
Author's Response:
Don't you worry about that, they are working on it as we speak xx
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:07 PM Title: Gratitude
Man, those Cullens really make you prove your worth to them, but it is nice to see them finally come around. I hope Edward/Monster and Bella reunite soon.
Author's Response:
that they do hehe, they just kinda dont trust/like humans, they're wierd lol but she seems to be winning them over :] they will be seeing eachother shortly xx thanks for your review and support xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:20 PM Title: Gratitude
OMG!!! So awesome!!!! I need more!!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! more will be coming soon xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:21 PM Title: Gratitude
Great chapter! I am so happy that your beta and you are working on this story again!:)
Author's Response:
Aw thank you sweetie :] Thanks for th mugs xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:41 AM Title: Gratitude
I think you are writing a wonderful story and you should not doubt yourself. Any writer writes for themselves and are generous enough to share their work. What's the line "you can't please everyone all the time you just have to please yourself.
Anyway keep it up, you had a plan now follow it.
Author's Response:
Aw thank you very much, you're right, I should remember that I am doing this for me :] thanks for your support and the mugs :] It's lovely here, I love it a lot more than ffnet cos they can be harsh over there lol xx
Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:56 AM Title: Gratitude
OMG that was a fab update!! DONT EVER DOUBT YOUR WRIGHTIN ABLITY AGAIN!!! Please update much sooner next time please!!!
Author's Response:
Aw thank you very much :] thats very sweet of you, it's just some people have been saying things and posting reviews that are kinda harsh, and after a while you start believing them lol, but I wont let them bring me down, cos they have probably never writen a god damn thing! lmao thanks very much for your support xx
Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:41 AM Title: Gratitude
You haven't let me down, but I am hopeful that you will continue to feel better day by day. I too, have been struggling much of this past year, so I completely understand that bit. I also hope your beloved beta feels better soon. Thank you for continuing on this path. I'm hopeful for an HEA, but this is your story after all...
Author's Response:
Oh thank you very much, it means the world to hear what you think. And I know I will be fine, but it's just shaken me up a little bit thats all, I will probably write a story about it :]
Tameas is doing so well, she is such a fighter, she just needs a little more time, she has kept telling me to post without her, I kept saying no, but I did miss posting, and I will replace this chapter with the BETA'd version :] xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:02 AM Title: Gratitude
She has a long frightening road ahead of her, but she is gaining ground none the less.
I love it!
Author's Response:
Yes that she does, but you're right, she is a tough little cookie and is fighting her way through it :] thanks so much for your review and cups :] xx
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:47 AM Title: Gratitude
oh please let Jazz kill Felix....please please please.
Author's Response:
Well it could still be a possibility, I still haven't decided who kills who :] but its gonna be exciting :] xx
Date: 09 Feb 2011 8:44 PM Title: Mute
I really like this story...can't wait for the next chapter !!!!
Author's Response:
Oh thanks sweetie, the next one is up now hehe xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:33 AM Title: Mute
Now I amcaugt up pleas hurr and post soon, grea story
Author's Response:
wow, thanks for all the reviews, sorry I'm only replying to this, I have the flu :/ but the update will be soon, thanks for the mugs and your support xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:58 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
sick mf's
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:41 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
I sure hope Jacob gets his painfully
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:59 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic
A++++++++++++++
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:31 AM Title: Trust
Bella is an idiot
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 11:25 PM Title: Manipulations
sexy Edward
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 11:05 PM Title: Bitter Heart
he could bite me
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 10:11 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
it's Alpha not Alfa
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:55 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
awww Bella always soothes the beast
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:38 PM Title: Magic Eight Ball
getting better and better
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:20 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
excellent writing
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:03 PM Title: Hopeless
wow evil edward
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:22 PM Title: New Surroundings
scary cullens
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:58 PM Title: Ultimatum
not sure whats going onbut my interest is piqued
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:37 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
interesting start
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:25 AM Title: Mute
Update!!!!!!! please...
Author's Response:
don't worry sweetie, I shall be updating soon, just waiting for the editing to be done :) thanks for your patients xx
Date: 22 Dec 2010 7:35 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic
aww i hope everything is going to be ok
Author's Response:
hehe dont worry, they will make it through xx
Date: 06 Dec 2010 5:47 AM Title: New Surroundings
im lovin this story!!
Author's Response:
thank you very much xx
Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:30 AM Title: The Voluri
Hmmm, B's power perhaps? Can't wait to find out how the wolves are involved and where are Rose and Em?
Author's Response:
you shall find out very soon i promise xx thanks for the review and support xx
Date: 27 Nov 2010 12:37 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic
Man, she's like the friend who bitches about her bf constantly cuz he's a douche but the second he smiles she's all stupid over him again. I feel bad for A.
Author's Response:
haha yeah I suppose she is haha, insecurity is a killer xx
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:43 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within
Jacob is probably bad but either way, B is an idiot. E is right about her falling all over herself for anyone who shows her an ounce of kindness. Ahhh the damage poor self esteem can do.
Author's Response:
hehe I love your reviews haha they are funny, and extremely erm in depth haha thank you very much for your reviews and support xx
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:13 PM Title: Trust
Dying to know what else jacob said to her or did to change her mind.
Author's Response:
well that shall be left to your imagination, untill you hit the later chapters xx
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:38 AM Title: Trust
wow what a great story!
Author's Response:
thank you very much xxx
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:07 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
After reading gobs of lemons I have generally become less excited about many of them. I am aaaaaaallllllllllllllllll sorts of tingles after this one! Good job.
Author's Response:
wow that is an amazing compliment :) thank you so much :) i always thought my lemons would be shit lol xx
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:11 AM Title: Waffles
Jc! Would she just frickin' mention that C has been talking about another girl and she wants to know what's up?
Author's Response:
unfortunately she is stubborn and paranoid lol, so she aint talking just yet haha. thanks for your review and support xx
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:33 AM Title: Mute
Nice, really enjoyed the Monster's POV - sounds like poor Edward really does have a split personality, but they both appear to love Bella, so it works out okay.
Aro and his stupid power trips, I hope Bella can harness this power she has and kick some serious ass!!
Author's Response:
:) thank you very much, and Bella shall harness her power :) but will it be in time? xx
Date: 24 Nov 2010 12:44 AM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
I wonder if this is how murder groupies think. You know? The chicks that write letters to and fall in love w serial killers
Author's Response: haha I have never thought of that, but yeah totally, bella is a serial killer groupie :) haha xx
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:00 AM Title: Mute
wow I was wondering if you were continuing this story. I can imagine that the monster is really going wild right now. Hopfully they will figure something out.
Author's Response:
:) yeah I would never give up on this story, its my little baby. and he is furious, however he has to keep his calm xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:10 AM Title: Mute
loved it update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
thank you very much for the mugs and thanks for your support xx
Date: 21 Nov 2010 11:59 PM Title: Mute
poor bella
Author's Response:
don't worry she is going to be more than fine :) thanks for the review and your support xx
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:47 PM Title: Mute
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I will be don't worry xx
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:19 PM Title: Mute
I have faith in monster
Author's Response:
hehe you should :) he is a genius xx
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:12 PM Title: Mute
Great chapter!:)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much xx
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:07 PM Title: Mute
Hopefully Edward / Monster will figure something out to get them out of this awful place soon.
It looks like maybe he will need to use Bella's developing powers to help them make an escape. Will Edward have to turn Bella before they can escape? Will they have to elimnate Miranda?
Author's Response:
Don't worry Edward/Monster have a very large brain hehe they shall figure it out :)
Well they will use Bella kinda :) but probably not as you think, remember I am a little wicked haha and Miranda is actually not a huge deal to the vampires, she won't slow the escape down xx they shall use intelligence rather than abilities xx
Date: 15 Nov 2010 11:27 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
wwwwwwooooooow
Author's Response:
thanks for the review xx
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:14 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
olololololo
Author's Response:
thanks for the review xx and mugs xx
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:41 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
whats going on?????
Author's Response:
what do you mean? email me, I shall answer questions for you xx
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:01 AM Title: Beautiful Stranger
mmmmmmm......interesting
Author's Response:
I am glad that I have interested you :) and welcome new reader xx
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:02 AM Title: Waffles
i cant wait to c where this goes and when bella is going ot be his ex
Author's Response:
well keep reading :) and you shall find out xx
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:44 AM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
it going to be interesting!
Author's Response:
he he very interesting :) xx
Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:52 AM Title: Magic Eight Ball
awww story is great
Author's Response:
thank you very much :) and welcome new reader xx