Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
awesome chapter!!! i'm so glad you covered that much all at once. i was afraid to hope they'd get that far so quickly. now edward has confessed his love and everything. what an awesome first time. loved the sexy underwear! gotta find some for myself. this story is one that i'm always waiting for; it's too good to put down. keep up the good work.
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Date: 30 Mar 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
OMFG!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO GOOOOOOD!!!!! GREAT GREAT JOB. CAN'T WAIT TO SEE BELLA'S REACTION TO EDWARD'S WORDS.
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Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Started reading this story this weekend and I am enjoying it. So much so that I have rec'd it to someone else. Just wanted to let you know a few chapters ago I was listening to my itunes play list and Rob Pattinson's Let Me Sign was playing and it thought it was definately a good song to be playing at that particular part of the story. It was just after Alice Pov and Edward Pov had just started. Also wanted to say thanks for writing. Look forward to your next update.
yours,
Lori
Author's Response:
Wow.... that means a lot coming from you! Of course your story is totally hot and I love every minute of it. Thanks for leaving the great review. I've put up a teaser on the blog for the next chapter! I hope you like it!
Krazi
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Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Just hope that Edward takes Jasper's warnings and words to the wise to heart and gets a new phone and restraining order because Tanya is not going to give up - is she? Edward and Esme are just too cute aren't they. And Emmett is just too much - love that guy. Well, the plan is in the works and Edward just needs to chill out for a bit so......on with the next chapter.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
-Bella's really getting on my nerves. It does sound like Alice suspects what is bothering Bella but what irks me is that as long as these two have been friends, Bella doesn't trust Alice enough to be honest with her. We're talking best friends forever here and Bella can't bring herself to explain what's been bothering her. I don't quite understand why Alice doesn't just bring it up unless she's just not sure and maybe worried she might insult Bella - but between the two of them - people could die - rhetorical comment, of course!
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
Well, I know I don't have all the facts and information yet but my first thought is why Edward has never even tried to see where a relationship might go with Bella. I got it that in his earlier years he was too busy studying et al but even in the last couple of years why didn't he pursue Bella at all? Just because he knows that he needs the D/s lifestyle shouldn't have precluded him from making a move to see where things might have gone with Bella. That being said, now he's faced with all kinds of depression and "love lost" and despair. Man, the stuff we do to ourselves because he don't speak up and go for it.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Can't wait to find out what Bella and Alice have in store for Alice. And what a little sneak Alice is for not letting Bella in on Edward and what's going on with him. Yes, enjoyed the background on Bella very much.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:15 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Well, I thought it was very nicely done and wet my appetite for more of your story. Does Bella know who she's actually meeting or is she as attracted to Edward as he is to her and neither one knows it's the other person? (Meaning does Bella fantasize in her dreams about Edward?) Looking forward to reading more....
Date: 29 Mar 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Just found the site, about the 2nd story I read and wow! You write so wonderfully, you can use the English language properly AND you can put them together to form an awesome story.
Never read a story with images before but yeh the images are hot...
Thank you for a mind blowing introduction to the site.
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Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
I noticed that the security guard in Edward's building is also named Seth. Did you mean to give him the same name as Bella's brother?
Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I love this story and I think you have really done great with it! And for what it is worth, I LOVE the pics! I am a visual person (not very imaginative, I guess) and it really makes the story for me to see what YOU, the author are describing. The only thing that I find distracting are the comments from "the peanut gallery" -- it messes up the flow for me BUT that may just be because I am S-L-O-W.
Thanks for sharing your story!
Author's Response:
It's okay, you're not slow, I just like to keep a little humor in things and not make it so stiff. Pun so intended! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
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Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow.. I love this story.. It is truly amazing........ I love the ending of this chapter.. you leave us wanting. What a tease. hehehe. there so in love with each other that there worried to push the other one away. They are true soulmate even when they did not know it was them in the playroom.. they connected. And Edward new it was Bella somehow with all the traits that is totally hers. I can't wait for the next chapter. i just can imagain Edward freaking out.. Because Bella is stuned. hopefull not to long. hahah.
Have a great night. :) Leona
I'm sorry that I did not leave you reviews on the first chapters. But I did rate them. I will rate and leave a review from now on. Awesome story..
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Awesome chapter as always!
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Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
This chapter was everything we could have wanted! You always give us great relationship drama, hot sex, and lines that make us spit out whatever we are drinking. The line about his peen setting off a flare and sending out an SOS was great and the talking trash can outside of CVS... no words. You are too funny! Not to mention one of the best writers anywhere. Thank you!
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Thanks for the panty alert at the onset. Definitely necessary!
You are cracking me up with Bella's 'Inner Goddess" making comments like spending time on 'Dr. Domward's disco stick' to Edward refering to his appendage as 'the Deviant' being in rare form or twitched a hey there... how are ya, at her.
Now that the cherry popping mess is out of the way let the Dom/sub sessons commence. Will they be in a 24/7 style relationship?
Author's Response:
Yeah, the sad part is that I crack myself of and find myself laughing all alone! Haha! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
You're more than welcome! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. That, and how much I like having the pictures in the chapters. I actually started reading this story on fanfiction, and just found posted here recently. After reading this chapter, and seeing the pictures, I will be rereading the other chapters when I have time.
Thanks for sharing the story (even the cliffhangers at the end of the chapter).
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Great update!
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
It doesn't get much better then this. I can't believe Bella would even think that Edward would set all this up just to tell her he didn't want her.
Their night has been perfect so far. I hope Bella is honest and tells Edward she is in love with him too. Great chapter....thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow, thats all I have to say. Getting thru all the Jake bullshit was well worth the effort. What a great story. Thank you very much.
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I just adore this story! It is unbelievably well written, and the way you get the characters emotions out so much so that I can actually feel them, is simply amazing!!! This chapter was awesome, and just absolutely perfect for them!! I love that you didn't keep it mussy slow and soft, it just wouldn't suit Edward and Bella, they needed the passion and WOW!! was it incredible! Thanks again for this incredible story, and I will wait with bated breath for Bella to tell Edward she loves him too, and put the poor baby out of his misery! LOL! Till next time, take care!
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
The L-Bomb has fallen. At least one was concious when saying it and the other half concious. I wonder how Bella will now react to this. I just hope she accepts his confession and does not think it is a trick or something like that.
Also the "date" that Edward planned for them was really sweet. He is such a great guy, who just needed a chance to show someone worth his affection.
The pictures in between the paragraphes are really cool and give great visuals for the story and also enhance the chapter atmosphere.
I am looking forward for the next one!
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow, that was great and loved all the pics and that was a long chapter worth the wait.
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Great chapter! I hope that end was just her suprise to hear him say it and she doesnt freak! I love the pics in the chapter BTW! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
No!!!! seriously? You left it there? Ugh!!!! Have you posted the next update yet?
Other than that, it was perfect!!! edward was so romantic with all the preparations!!!
Loved it!!!!
Author's Response:
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
OMG! That was amazing!!! I loved every word! And their first time was absolutely perfect!
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
omg that was so awesome i hope in the beginning of the next chapter that you have her telling him that she is in love with him as well and that she has been all along i am so looking forward to them having a personal relationship and a dom/sub relationship as well i await the next chapter you are a great writer
Author's Response:
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Krazi
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
About time he told her. She feels the same way.
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Holy shit!!! After changing my ruined panties...this chapter was wonderful... girl you are so awesome!!! I have been drawn in to your story and stop everything to read your updated chapters... I love that Edward is telling Bella how he feels...they love each other so much....just tell each other!!!
Author's Response:
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
OMFG What a first time she will not be able to walk for a week LOL. I am glad he told her he loved her why did she freeze???
Author's Response:
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
So many parts that I loved about this chapter. This is just a few. Otherwise I would be quoting back to you the entire chapter! *smile*
I´d let him fuck me on top of one of those talking trash bins outside the CVS! Can we say, “thank you for the deposit!”
The feeling of his morning wood suddenly poking me in the back caused me to gasp. “Sorry,” Edward rasped, his voice still thick with sleep. His warm breath cascaded across my shoulder, causing my skin to pebble with goose flesh. “He wanted to say good morning; I hope you don´t mind.”
Pfft... mind? I was just thinking, how rude of me not to say, “Good morning” to him!
Where are my manners!
It took all the strength I could muster to get up off the floor and not go jerk one out before dinner. Instead, I headed to my room to wash up, changed into a pair of loose-fitting jeans and regrouped, all the while pouting like a Kindergartener. Yeah, Isabella took away my favorite toy... her pussy!
Wow, what a first time! I don't think it can get any better than that, can it? Oh and Edward said the ILY's! *Squee* Now you know that Bella loves him too. Maybe she was just surprised that he said it? I mean, she came to the hotel suite thinking he was going to dumb her so wth does she know? LOL!!! Like a guy would drag a woman to the Presidential Suite to dump her ass! More like take her to Dairy Queen for Blizzard! LOL!!!
Great chapter.........can't wait to read what happens next!! Oh, and I love the photos. Everyone who doesn't can suck it! *wink*
Keye
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Glad you enjoy my whacky sense of humor! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Ground covered!!!!
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Dun, dun,dun!
The nice, generous Dr. Domward grew some balls! Can't wait to see what little B has to say to that!
I totally would still be drooling after all that lovin. *shakes head* Such a silly couple.
Til next time, happy typing!
CrimsonR
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Leaving the love...gobsmacking first time...
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
thanks as always awsome chapter
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
GREAT CHAP!...cant wait for the next..
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow!!!!!!That was some hot chapter.....Please update soon
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow. Bella is one incredibly lucky lady here. Finally, she has the man of her dreams. What a beautiful evening at last expressioning years of repressed desire.
I do hope Bella's shock wears off quickly and she does not leave the poor man suffering in suspense for long.
Author's Response:
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
AMAZING CHAPTER :: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATED, AND FOR THE RECORD I ENJOY SOME PICTURES IN THE CHAPTERS !! CAN T WAIT TO GET BELLA"S FEELING
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Yeah, it was a wait but "Daddy, oh so goooooooood!"
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
There is no other word than...Fuckhot...to describe that! I seriously wish my first time was that amazing. Anyway...great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
PS-I greatly enjoy the pics in the middle :)
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I give you AAAAAAAALL my love. I thought that there will never be more sensual scene of their first union than Maggie Chambers`s "Honeymoon", but yours, girl, is au pair.
And also they both are just as beautifull persons as in the original.
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
absolutely perfecgt!
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
15
Come on Bella. Don't hold back now. It's not the time to be shy. Let Edward know how you truly feel about him.
Something tells me B & E are going to have to watch out for Tanya & Jacob.
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
AHHHHHH!!! That was f*ing amazing. You are such an amazing writer. I love that you covered a lot of time so we can start to see teh rest of teh relationship.
Bella better say that she loves him too, because we all knoiw she does=) Update SOON please!
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
YUM, YUM, YUMMY!! What a fan-fucking-tastic chapter!! Way to go!! It was perfect and Edward needs to calm down. I'd be surprised if Bella is anything but estatic about his confession at the end of the chapter. She loves him just as much!!
I sooo enjoyed this long ass chapter. Can't wait for the next. Sucked that some of the pics didn't come through, b/c your pics are fuck hawt and I love them!! That's okay though. I got what I wanted out of this chapter.
Have a great week, honey!! You deserve it!!
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I fixed the little picture problem and added a few more, if you´d like to take another peek! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter! Krazi xoxo http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
awesome job!!!!
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
a dream :)
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
will i hope that she dosent freeze up about his comment! i cant wait to see what happens next with these 2!
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Good Chapter....
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Oh.
My.
God. *fans self*
Edward's plan won't backfire...Bella won't over-react...He did the right thing (& beautifully)...She will be over the moon happy...That's my story & I'm sticking to it...
Mighty fine chapter!I so glad that E & B spent some quality time together before his big reveal. NGL though I really worried about Bella's reaction. I'll be on pins & needles until I hear what she has to say.
Beyond well sone...again! Thanks so much.
Kat
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
all together now ,,, mmmmmmmmmmm
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
oh god dont let her ruin it by getting freaked out
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Date: 27 Mar 2011 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
wow!!!!! awesome, awesome chapter! I don't know if Edward is going to be able to keep up with Bella, lol ; ). Also it was sooooo hot to see the all powerful and dominant Edward beg her, just brilliant on your part. and ty for the pics they make what you are describing easier to visualize. Again Good Freaking Job!!!!!
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Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter! Krazi xoxo http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Great chapter. But I think I will read over at fan fiction because the last set of pictures were a little too hot for me. ......I liked the banana picture better :) than the real thing....Im kind a less is more type of person and I have a very vivid imagination with your mind blowing writing.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
brillant way to end a saturday night
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Krazi~
I fucking love you! This was exactly as I hoped it would be! I just absolutely LOVE this story. You should be so proud of yourself because this is just flat out fucking amazing.
Kasi~
Author's Response:
Kasi- Haha! I love you too Hon! Even though you left me hanging out on a limb with that mysterious teaser! Arghhhhh! Couldn't you at least have given me a hint at what the note said? You my dear, are a cruel woman, but I´ll be waiting on pins and needles for your return! Now how about I return the favor and see how you like it! Lol! You always leave me sum good lovin´! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Oh I like the Cliffy and we know she feels the same I just hope she is woman enough to say it back There in a way to post on FF you can PM Katmom and she can tell you the back way to update till they get it fixed http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/20103/40031188/1/ here is the link to the back door solution to update till FF can get it fixed Hope it works for you.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the help with Fanfiction.net. It worked and I was able to update! Squeee! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow .... Just..... Wow.....
Well that was worth the wait,
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Gah, that was INCREDIBLE! Well worth the wait! I cannot wait to see what else happens in the next chapter ;) Hehe!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow! Only had to change my panties twice while reading that! I may have to go shopping before they hit the playroom!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Oh My God!!!! Wow!!!! I mean totally, fucking incredible, insanely intense... just W.O.W. Geezus! You are the woman... W.O.M.A.N. There is no other like you Ms Krazi. I would totally bow down and kiss your pretty little toesies if I were there... and I'm sooO not into feet... or women... but anyway, I got off on a tangent...
This was an awesome chapter! I am just beside myself with joy and excitement for them. This is like every girls dream coming true all at once. I know Bella is just caught off guard by his declaration of love. She feels exactly the same way. Sometimes when you're faced with everything you've ever wanted; it can be overwhelming but I am not afraid... I know the next chapter is going to be fuckawesome as well.
Right? I mean you'd couldn't break out hearts... could you?! Gah! There goes my confidence... hehehe!!!
I can't wait to read more. I hope they do continue the D/s portion of their relationship though and that doesn't get lost in the whole 'in love' beginnings of a new relationship.
Muah! I just love the hell outta ya! You and Mojo (I miss that poor little guy) are the B.O.M.B.
XxOo ~ Tracy
10 fucking ++++++++++++++ !!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, you are seriously making me blush! Lol! Glad you loved it Honey! I´m reading this awesome new fic called Writer´s Block, you should really check it out when you get the chance! Lol! Love the story and I will get my but in gear and review. I hate that my phone won´t let me. Thanks for always leaving me some good lovin´!
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
:~D
Sexy times!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
OMG it was totally worth the wait. Loved it! And tell that dumb ass to stop bitching about the pics I love em damm need new panties........hehe please hurry I need my next fix..........lol Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate your kindness and patience! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Krazi xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
wow i defenteily love the pictures in your chapters.
well seems things have moved along and we are getting steamy and wet. omg so hawt. they are together and so loving it. i am glad bella got her groove on. they are good for each other. loveit so much thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out! Krazi xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Awesome!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! FYI... I fixed the missing pics and added a few more!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
"Leave me some love!"....Love, love, love!!!! Can't wait for more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the Love!!! Right back atcha!!!! FYI... I fixed the missing pics and added a few more!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
That was well worth the wait. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate your kindness and patience! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:52 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
HOLYCRAP!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Wow wow wow!!! I so love this story and you are a brillant author and the absolute queen of smut..I will forever bow down to you. This is, by far, my new fav and CANNOT wait until you update!!! Seriously someone didn't like the pictures? Wtf is wrong with that person? I am all for opinions but really? What a dumb ass!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I must say that this one has become my favorite as well! Thanks for the review! Fixed the missing pics! Check it out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
he seems to be scared?????? after that evening together he still doubts her? cant wait to see where this go from here
xoxo
~m
Author's Response:
I just think he has a fear of overwhelming her that's all. I find it rather sweet that he's displaying his vulnerable sexy side! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Fixed the missing pics! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
What a chapter. The virgin sub seems to have sorted out her moved in double quick time. Edward was very romantic. I love the cliffie. Cannot wait to find out what she says.
Until next time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Totally awesome!! Really glad you updated!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
wow great chapter. Alice should have "manned up" and told Esme that them leaving was her fault.
Yumminess.
Author's Response:
Haha... Alice man up and take the blame... funny, but it may make for a outtake! Ever wonder just went on after all the craziness of Christmas Dinner? Lol! Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Oh boy! I hope she doesnt run scared.
Author's Response:
After 5 explosive O´s, I hightly doubt it! lol! But nevertheless, we´ll just have to wait and see! Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
whoa damn, thats was epically hot as shyt ty
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
WOW , very nice. I love the pictures thru the chapters, don't listen to the other people. my husband really liked one on this page alot. Guess? anyway, love the chapter and the i love you was the icing on th ecake
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out! And tell the hubby, I put a new one just for him! lol!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Evil place to leave things off! Bella has certainly worked out some details in her mind. I can't wait to see how they work out the details of both sides of their relationship. I admit his bedroom being off limits for now was interesting. Some anticipation for the first time there to be sure!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I am glad that you are settling in nicely at your new job and trying to get back into the flow. I know how hard it is to start working after you have not done it in a while. It take alot of adjustment.
HOT, HOT, HOT! I need a new pair of panties just from reading that chapter.
I do not understand why Bella did not say anything back? I am sure she was shell shocked, but come on. Leaving us hanging like that is so mean. ;)
I thought that Edward was going to tell Bella that he had been in love with her for years. I read the chapter twice, and he only said that he loved her, not how long he had loved her. I thought she would say something more to him as well, but all we heard was "it was always you". I do not even think that he picked up on that tidbit.
Are they ever going to admit to one another that each of them coveted the other for years?
I am glad that they are moving into a relationship mode, but they really need to do some more talking and keep their hands to themselves while they talk.
I can't wait to see what you have for us next time. I do not want this review to come off as bitchy because I love this story, but I was just disappointed that they did not tell one another how long they have wanted each other for many years. Again, love the story and can't wait to see what comes next.
By the way, I love the pictures. They are better than what my mind can come up with. Who would have a problem with the pictures...wierd
Author's Response:
“Isabella, I invited you here for a reason, and it wasn´t as a way to get rid of you; quite the opposite actually.” I let out a long breath that I didn´t know I was holding. “I´ve thought of nothing but you, since the day I watched you and Alice lying by the pool all those years ago.” Remembering Isabella´s translucent skin glowing in the Illinois sunshine had my cock straining against my pants. He did mention it in passing, but they'll definitely be talking more in the next chapter! Thanks for the review, and I fixed the missing pics and added more! Krazi xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Poor Edward-left hanging by Bella...at least we all know she loves him too...I just hope she's honest with him. Awesome chapter!!!Ü
BTW-I love, love, love the pictures in the story. Glad you're keeping them there. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
What a beautiful job you did for B&E... making it so special! I love both of their inner ramblings, so insecure, so normal. Thanks for the update, as always update as soon as RL allows.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
First I dont know who is complaining about the pictures, but tuff shit. I love the pictures. lol. But two of them didn't come through :( As for the chapter, it was wonderful. I love how much thought he put into giving her, her first time and making her feel special. I am so glad that he told her that he is in love with her. Although you had to go and give us a cliffy on that. I cant imagine her reacting bad since she has been in love with him too. At least I hope to God you Do Not make her react badly to that. I think we have waited long enough to get this show on the road and see some playroom action. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Loved, loved, loved it. Have to cool off. Fan, fan, fan. Whoever doesn't like your pictures is nuts. Want more!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I loved it!!!!!!! I love pictures!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope she tells him ILU back. Can't wait for them to start telling each other how long they've wanted the other. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Loved it cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Glad your liking your new JOB, (I take you are anyway!) Things will settle down and will become old hat before long, then we will have our wonderful Author back with us again, We (your loyal fans) can be patient...your worth it...
What a well done Chapter! Wow, the emotions that we see coming from our Oh, So Sexy as Hell Dom Edward is overwhelming. He is the Sexiest Man Alive that's for sure. You certainly made their first time together something very very special and romantic indeed. Bless her heart she was so fearful she would disappoint him. I loved it when he told her the only thing that would disappoint him was if somone else were in the bed with him.. Awwwhhh now that was killer, sorry but it was...
I know we are going to need to visit with the messed up psycho ex-submissive of Edwards before long, and I just feel the dread coming. They are so blissfully happy right now...
Okay have good days at work and hopefully without stress and anexity! Till the next chapter, (OH BTW, I personally love, love, love all the pictures in the story and that is the Main reason I use TWC over FF most of the time.) You are the Rock'n'est!!!!
Laters to you! Krazi and Mojo take care! ~Kathy xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks I love it! It's tough getting back into the groove, but I love my job! Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoy the pics. I fixed the ones not showing and added a few more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
it's hard to find a good bdsm story - and this is the kind i like. i love when edward falls in love with the submissive bella. it makes sex so much hotter!!! awesome fic!!! now that i'm all caught up - can't wait for the next update!!!
i just happened across this one a few days ago!! glad i did!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
the moments we've all been waiting for!!! for them to finally realize what we've all known!! yikes this is getting soooooooo good!!! i can't wait to see how this all plays out. so hot and sexy!!!
oh - btw - where the hell are finding all the sexy ass pictures you keep posting in the stories?
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
:) :) love it
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
holy mother fucker in the heavens of lust!!! that was totally hot!!! smoking hot!! loved it!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
10!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
High Five
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
:)
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
i really love this fic and hope that you continue it
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:05 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
great!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
I flounced on this a while back and couldn't remember why. I saw all the reviews and tried again just to be reminded. I hate the Bella's a virgin plot line. I'm trying to ignore it because obvioulsy the rest of the story is good or so many people wouldn't tell you so, right? I feel better at least saying somthing ;-)
Date: 17 Mar 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
Awesome!!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Chapter is long but funny and sad at the same time.. your a awesome writer.. can't wait for the next chaptyer. Night :)
Date: 17 Mar 2011 6:12 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Wow. Aweosme!!