[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:39 PM Title: Rumors vs Truth
Yes, this was a great Chapter too! I think my favorite part(s) were when he gave into the different games so that she would forgive her, getting up on the table @ lunch and making the announcement. Bella telling the Principal she was with Edward. Bella telling Lauren off! Priceless! Edward taking the silly picture of her for the cell phone ID. Bella finding the Condom and the picture. Then Edward at the end saying that he would always find a way for them to sleep together at night! So Yea, the whole flippin Chapter...
HEHEHE!!! Can't wait till next week....Yes,Yes,Yes!
Have a good one!
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:26 PM Title: Rumors vs Truth
My favorite part was Edward's shock over Bella telling off Lauren.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:13 PM Title: Rumors vs Truth
Great chapter.
I loved it when Bella basically told off Lauren after gym class. I really hope that continues; Lauren needs put in her place.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hum - - so they are Not officially together yet, okay good information! Yes I definately thought that was pretty funny when Esme caught them. I don't have one favorite place I loved the whole Chapter, if it's just one thing though it would be the school parking lot where they admitted how they felt and the kiss.
Can't wait for Wednesday now!!!
Kathy
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 12:51 AM Title: Life from a new perspective
My favorite part was when he told Lauren off, and at the park when he said he was sorry at the end.
On to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 12:22 AM Title: New Girl
Gelix-
Kathy, giggles at the ending...sneaky Edward, but you must admit that's pretty smart.
So our Bella is coming out of her shell just a little. Wonderful, love the gradual evolution of her less demure persona. I knew she was just guessing about the Drugs that was pretty awesome. I also forgot to add on the last review that I loved it when Edward showed up at her house and pulled out her out bed. It didn't work but that was okay he was trying.
Ready for the next Chapter
xoxo
Kathy
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:51 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
Okay, Now we are going to start moving a little, it's not that I'm being insensitive to the lose of Jacob, just that I'm tired of crying too, that was pretty damn sad..
Enough said, on to the next chapter
Kathy
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:27 PM Title: Life as we knew it
Gelix -
Nope, not wanting to kill you off because you OFF'D Jakey Pooh; but I was surpised by his an Edwards final moments. I'm presuming here that this is going to open up both our Edward the Assward and Shy Quite Bella.
I think the grief and quilt feelings they are both having is nomal and it's good to bring this out and show sometimes things and accidents just happen and no one should be to blame.
On to the next Chapter
Laters BB
Kathy
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:02 PM Title: The Party
I Like this story and hope that you are going to continue it once MTTE is complete.
Thanks for taking the time to write, I for one do appreciate your abilities!!!
Kathy
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 10:37 PM Title: Rocking Car
Gelix-
I liked this so far, I see that this Edward has a Bad Boy James Dean sort of persona and that's fine. I think it will take some time to understand where he is coming from and that will be okay, ALL Edwards don't have to reveal their LUST for Bella from the first sight. I am more than willing to give this a chance. I love MTTE...so I am sure that this will be just as great..
Kathy
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love your story, just started reading it last night. Cant wait for another chapter!!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yayy thier together!
E/k
Date: 30 Dec 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
This story is getting really good. Hope that they make it through Monday though!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
I missed you last week. I think my fav part was Esme's and Renee's excitment they are getting what they wanted. was the quote from Twilight "Don't… Don't fight your feelings anymore little different but the same meaning.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well now, damn mothers getting involved. And now they have rules?! That's a bit ridiculous, if you ask me. But oh well.
I do hope these two will talk soon. Otherwise school is going to be one giant rumor fest that tears them apart.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
My favorite part was them getting busted by Esme.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter, but i am not liking the reminder about tham not being official. i know they have a lot to work through.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
What do you mean they're not officially together? That does not sound good! See ya next time!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
I thought it was hysterical when Bella fell out of bed.
When are they going to make their relationship official? Are they going to discuss this soon? I can see where his former activities w/ all of those girls could be something they have to work through as a couple. Especially, considering the fact that she was usually standing outside the car when said activities were occcurring. That could be one very awkward conversation.
I'm so glad you were able to update again. I love this story.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love your story. So glad you updated! I can't wait to see how things go at school for them.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:11 PM Title: Back to reality
omg i love it... cant wait to read more!!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:36 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
LOL i saw the tshirt quote but there's also the Bridget Jones Diary: The Edge of Reason's quote where Colin Firth's character is asleep and tells Bridget 'Don't stare at me' In the beginning of the movie. ;) Great imagery, i love Lauren's little surprise.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:03 PM Title: Back to reality
Boo!! I'm gonna miss you for the holidays. Happy holidays to you and yours. NOW
I totally love this story. I'm glad you didn't make Tanya a Bitch like most authors do, I like her so thanks. and now for James. Can't wait to see where you go with that one. C U soon
E/k
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:29 AM Title: Back to reality
Yay! Loved it, especially when he had to stop her from going home, and how excited he got when she agreed to go to his place.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:22 AM Title: Back to reality
Yes!!! So glad he finally admitted his feelings for Bella. Favorite part was the ending, the last two lines spoken. Can't wait for dec 29!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: Back to reality
I'm glad there together...though I can't believe he kissed Tanya.
I hope you get to update again soon.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:25 AM Title: Back to reality
no my favorite part had to have been the very end with him confessing his feelings. that was sigh worthy *sigh* see? lol Him grabbing her was just too precious with her trying to push him away. I can't wait till this starts heating up. keep up the great work and I'll talk to you again on Married to the Enemy. :D thanks again bye
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:10 AM Title: Black Angel
Oooh, getting better and better!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Catching snails
Quote from Pretty Woman.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:22 AM Title: Life from a new perspective
Haven't heard that song in forever. Now it's in my head. :)
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:50 PM Title: Back to reality
Gah, but it took them long enough!! But at least they finally made it.. I bet you could not wait to get to that last paragraph or two while you were writing.. Looking forward to seeing how you decide for them to proceed from here... I get so into reading the story I always completely forget to look for the quote. Unless this one is from Twilight itself with "then don't".. i have not a clue as usual...till laters... Pam B.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:50 PM Title: Back to reality
YEYYYYYYY. FINALLY!!!!!!! Can't wait for that fun you are talking about.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:47 PM Title: Back to reality
Wow. A nice Tanya. I liked that very much. I remember girls like Lauren and Jessica in high school, but they were far and few between. Although, a teenage girl being kissed by the coolest/hottest boy would never say it didn't feel right. I would have made out a couple of times before I pulled the whole "it's not you, it's me". And I don't care how virtuous you are, sleeping next to a hot guy you have gushy feelings for is why you skip school.
I love your angst and can't wait to the next update. Merry Christmas.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:25 PM Title: Back to reality
2 weeks really??? so not far...
Finally they admit there feelings!!!!!!! Loved it
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:14 PM Title: Back to reality
My fav. chapter to date! The ending was awesome! I am glad that Edward finally admitted his feelings for Bella and I am excited for the next update. Merry Christmas!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:08 PM Title: Back to reality
Great chapter, but unfortenatelly I became addicted and I will miss next wednesday. Great Christmas! :)
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:50 PM Title: Back to reality
I love how you worked in the quote from Twilight. It was a very good chapter. I have a feeling the while Tanya has been a good thing, James will be a problem.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:39 PM Title: Back to reality
I love it you have me picturing Edward litterally dragging Bella off now. I think I have to say the eloquent way Edward confessed himself to Bella is my fave.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:28 PM Title: Back to reality
I just wish its December 29th tomorrow so that I can read the next chapter. Anyways, thanks for making this one, and its of my favorite stories. Wishing you a very Merry Chirstmas and to your family too.
God bless.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:10 PM Title: Back to reality
Nice! Perfect use of a Twilight movie quote. Honestly didn't see it coming and was pleasantly surprised to see it there . Quite fitting.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Back to reality
OMG I feel all mushy inside he said it he really did not a dream ???? James making a move on Bella was a good thing got Edward to stop messing around and make his feelings know Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:58 PM Title: New Girl
Gotta leave. Will read more later.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:42 PM Title: Back to reality
Nice chapter! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
Onward and upwards!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:24 PM Title: Life as we knew it
Quote was New Moon.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Rocking Car
I like the different dynamic between the two, although I am definitely looking forward to E & B becoming "friends."
Date: 10 Dec 2010 6:10 PM Title: That special moment
I love this story! I wish Bella would start to have some confidence though. assward is awesome & i love how he is falling in live with Bella!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:08 PM Title: That special moment
yay....
i am already liking the idea of sequel..of this story....
waiting for next update...
Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: That special moment
Loving this fic! I vote YES for a sequel!
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:36 PM Title: That special moment
update soon!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:26 PM Title: That special moment
I'm always interested! Cause I'm loving this story!
ofcourse I want fast updates, but as you won't be able to, I'll just have to suffer, right? No, I understand... good luck on your new job!
xLiss
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:16 AM Title: That special moment
Two faves: the kiss and Bella gawking at Edward's naked bod!
I would love a sequel, but this story isn't close the end yet, is it?
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:35 AM Title: That special moment
SEQUEL YES!!!! lol my favorite part? the kiss, followed closely by them waking up together with his head on her stomach. too freaking cute. I am a TAD annoyed that Edward is feeling something for her and she still thinks he's an asshole. how sad. :( keep up the great work though. i can't wait to see what happens next. :D thanks bye
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:26 AM Title: That special moment
yes sequel pls!!!!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:02 AM Title: That special moment
I loved the chapter and think that the kiss was my favorite part. I really hope they both talk to each other soon about their real feelings for the other person. For them both to think that the other person hates them is just so....I don't know, but it's something. I hope they realize what they mean to each other soon.
I am also very excited about the idea of a sequal....I will definitely check it out.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:35 AM Title: That special moment
Love the story and would love a sequel as long as Bella and Edward are starting out together! LOL...I love a Happy Ending!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:18 AM Title: That special moment
Ok! I love when Edward calls Bella baby. I absolutley loved the kiss, It is my favorite part also. I wonder when you will let Bella and Edward come forward about their feelings for one another. Will Bella find out about the promise before or after the confess to each other? Will it affect the way she handles Edward feelings for her. Can't wait for more... I must say I'm sadden with the loss of an update but am very happy that your starting a new job. Good Luck and I'll be waiting..
E/k
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:56 AM Title: That special moment
awesome chappy no worries if you are MIA until after Yule season is over we understand it is busy for all during this time.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:22 AM Title: That special moment
This was my favorite chapter to date! That kiss was so precious, but hot at the same time! For a minute, I thought that Bella was going to let Edward have her virginity too (I only say that because she wanted more).
Congrats on the new job! I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:04 PM Title: That special moment
i would love a sequel!! love the story!!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:43 PM Title: That special moment
I think a sequel would be awesome!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:49 PM Title: That special moment
I am happy for you about the job but missing an update boo hoo for me LOL. I loved the kiss and the way they woke up together to bad it turned in to a bummer for her. When will she see that she means more to him than any other girl???
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:11 PM Title: That special moment
Him pleading for the kiss was just precious! It gave me butterflies! I SO wish my first kiss was like that. Congrats on the new job! Even though I really look forward to your Wednesday postings I understand the R/L needs to come first. See ya next week!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:53 PM Title: That special moment
Nice chapter. Seeing Edward be sweet to Bella. Such a nice change from his usual self. But if Bella wants him, she is going to have to be a bit bolder.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:27 PM Title: That special moment
great chapter. hope the two new characters dont cause too much heart ache for them. would love to see a sequel if you cant wrap this one in a nice bow.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:28 AM Title: Sunburned
I'm loving this! Hope to read more soon! :)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:19 PM Title: Sunburned
I love this story!!! Is so freaking funny. Thank you for the update!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:46 AM Title: Sunburned
Such a cute and playful chapter. Glad to see they can stand to be around each other, and that they obviously have some feelings for each other. Love that Edward was calling Bella baby throughout the whole chapter! Can't wait for the update next week! Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:22 AM Title: Sunburned
loved it! my fav part is the end and Edwards smart ass comments.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:30 AM Title: Sunburned
awwwe Edward too great care of her with the sunburn...yeah i spent every FL vacation from the age of 4 to 18 with sunburn then when i turned 18 i learned about a magical thing called going to the beach covered from head to toe... yup i am the girl you see at the beach in sarong and beach cover up with big floppy hat and sunglasses laying under the beach towel with sneakers on reading a book that the guys look at and walk away saying "what's the point of her coming to the beach?"
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:26 AM Title: Sunburned
Ok...favorite part? Edward calling her baby and her not calling him out on it. Oh...and her cuddling with him while sleeping. Can't wait till next Wednesday! See you then.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:21 AM Title: Sunburned
aww! Edward is so sweet ESPECIALLY with him calling her baby all the time and she doesn't even say a word. I love it. I didn't get the quote again but in my defense I wasn't even looking what with Edward being sweet and then making fun of her. lol keep up the great work. thanks again so much! bye for now
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:29 PM Title: Sunburned
Great chapter! You can see that they're getting closer as they spend more time together! I have had a terrible sunburn as well so I know what Bella felt like. I can't wait until next week's update. :)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:05 PM Title: Happy fucking birthday
I loved this chapter!!! My favorite part was when Edward showed out on Lauren's spiteful ass!!! This is a great story and I am excited to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:34 PM Title: Sunburned
I LOVED IT!! I can't wait to see those two finally get over themselves and realize they like each other. Geez I can feel the sexual tension! LOL. Great job!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:11 PM Title: Sunburned
I love the caring Edward and how he would apoligize for her being in pain.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:55 PM Title: Sunburned
Awesome! cant wait for more
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:51 PM Title: Sunburned
Loved it....can't wait to see how the rest of the vacation goes. post soon plesae
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:45 PM Title: Sunburned
couldn't find the quote again this time but send a teaser anyways please. Loved this chapter. Every bit of it from the Esme's comment to Edward being so sweet and caring of bella's sunburn to Bella's comment at the last about her ass. can't wait till next time.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:44 PM Title: Sunburned
Cute. Glad Edward was nice and took care of her. I'm surprised at their parents though. Geez, you'd think they'd be at least a little concerned about babies! Babies having babies is nothing to laugh about! But I guess that's what they're actually hoping for in the long run, right?
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:44 PM Title: Sunburned
I loved the chapter and can sympathize very easily with Bella over her sunburn. I burn very easily and have even blistered once from a burn. There is nothing worse then an all over, extremely severe case of sunburn.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:21 PM Title: Life from a new perspective
Did you just quote SUPERNATURAL (with an original,homage-ish whiff of WA)??? Now, you did it. You've got me. Can't wait until your next chapter.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:00 PM Title: Sunburned
I think someone should hit on Bella when she is with Edward somewhere :)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:38 PM Title: The Party
Tee-Hee ... you said Jensen Ackles. I am reading you from here on out just because of that. Well, maybe, that's the cherry (get it). Also because the story line caught my attention and I like your style.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:29 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Love Edward watching her sleep. He's sweet and adorable. And telling off Lauren so he can be free to pursue Bella. Nicely done.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:12 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
I wanna owe Edward a kiss.. Totally lovin this one.
E/k
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 6:28 PM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Awww Edward can be caring sometimes.......I liked the thunderstorm and the graveyard part..............
Date: 25 Nov 2010 3:00 PM Title: Happy fucking birthday
aww! Edward is turning in his own way romantic. I love what he did in front of Lauren and even more the ending. You owe me a fucking kiss. lol my thoughts to you exactly. you owe us a kiss woman! :D i got a little weepy when he was in the graveyard so thanks for the pickme up. :D thanks again keep up the great work.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:37 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Aww. Nice chap!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:04 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
I'm loving it! *whistles Mc-donalds tune*
I loved the part with Lauren! I can't wait until next week :)
xLiss
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Nov 2010 8:08 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
OMG! Please update soon! My favorite part was when Bella realized that Edward said, "Hey, baby" to her and not Lauren. So awesome. I went back and read that part again. :)
Can't wait to read the next update. Please don't make us wait long!
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:43 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Omg I loved this chapter so many good parts and they didn't even say anything mean to each other. I loved when Lauren showed up and then when Edward later told Bella she had sex hair. Can't wait for the next update it's getting super good now that they are seeing their feelings for each other.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:08 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Assward being nice? has the world tilted on its axis?.. The Hawaii trip may prove to be interesting since last posting, you wrote that they would be staying in a room together if I remember correctly... Loved the statement Edward made about "get off my dick".. (since we've seen someone with that on the back of his shirt)...Laughed at the movies he made Bella watch.. I told the hubs "I know what they are watching!!" of course the big clue was the dude having sex with a pie... the good thing about Bella happening upon Edward in the graveyard, was she finally realized someone else hurt as much as she...but i think my fav part was the spooning and humming when she was scared from the storm.. that was some sweet shit there... thanks for posting... Turkey time!!! Pam b.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:54 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
I love them together!!!!!1 post again soon please
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too! :D
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:01 AM Title: Happy fucking birthday
favorite part what her grabbing "the remote"
awesome job :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:15 PM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Love what he did in front of Lauran and is still calling her baby. Kiss hell yes
Author's Response:
Yeah, a kiss wouldn't be so bad ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:49 PM Title: Happy fucking birthday
I loved how they cuddled together during the thunderstorm And absolutely loved how he got rid of Lauren. I can only imagine what she tells everyone else.
I'm really looking forward to their trip to Hawaii. It should be really interesting.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was so sweet. I would kill to wake up like that :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:22 PM Title: Happy fucking birthday
Favorite part--by far---was the Lauren part! Priceless! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:43 PM Title: Driving Lessons
I love this story and you should do more of Edwards POV please