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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 42

so this is definately Demetri's baby I am not sure I could have my rapist's child

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2018 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella is the weakest link

Reviewer: amhassler Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 7:41 PM Title: Outtake/Possible Start to New Story

you should turn this in to another story..

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:22 AM Title: Outtake/Possible Start to New Story

Awe! I loved it! Definitely another story...but this time, nobody needs to get raped or kidnapped!

 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:54 PM Title: Outtake/Possible Start to New Story

U always write the best lemons part four hug can't wait

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:44 PM Title: Outtake/Possible Start to New Story

cute outtake 

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 53

another great installment to this series ... are we going to see more of his quartet? ... another sequel?

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 53

This was a sad and happy story...  I missed the last 15 or so chapters..  I could not read them..  it hurt to much..  But one day I will read all the stories again.. 

You wrote a wonderful series..    Hugs Leona

Reviewer: Bellstar67 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 53

Thank you for a wonderful ending:O)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 53

Lode that you took them all back to the island!!  It was wonderful!   Pleas do the Carlizle POV as a part of this story because we already have an update alert sent to us.

 

thanks and have a great day!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 53

great ending

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 53

BB

So happy that I brought a tissue to this last chapter.

How great to close off this story with a wedding for Catherine, Esme, William & Carlisle!!!

And you could really feel the love the four of them have for each other in this closing chapter.

I look forward to the next journey you bring BB!!!!!

Thanks for letting me tag along for all three amazing journies!!!!

Cory

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 52

BB

This chapter needed a tissue warning for this crybaby.

The family would have loved Savannah no matter whom was the biological father. Of course that's just who they all are. But I'm over the moon that Edward is her daddy. Yipee!!!

You, BB, have been spoiling us readers with multiple chapters over the past few days. And it's really hard to read that there is only one more chapter left to peruse. Such great story telling and of course I hate when they end. But maybe I'll be plesantly surprised with an update some day that tells me you're carrying forward with this family and their story!!!

Bring on the last chapter BB. (sob, sob)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 51

BB

Yeah!!! Savannah Grace is here!!!!

That was a tension filled delivery to read BB. I need a nap now. But I do believe Savannah's arrival is just what Bella & Carlisle need to put the past in the past.

Off to read one more chapter.

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 50

BB

The baby's coming!!!! Yeehaw!!!!

Breathe Bella. Dr. Morgan will take good care of you and your precious daughter!!

Off to read the next chapter!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 49

BB

Good on the group for surprising Bella. She has to learn that a surprise is fun once in a while.  A Bella shower was a great idea BB!!!

And you're absolutely right BB. A one shot from Alice's POV would be a hell of an outtake!!!

Off to read the next chapter!!!

Cory

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 52

Aaaawwwww.....loved it so darn much! Yay....she is better and so is Carlisle!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 52

loking forward to more 

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 52

When I started reading your story I was a bit nervous, I am a true Bella Edward, Alice jasper fan and wasn't sure if they all would work together. I was upset when Bella's first baby was Jasper's but the more I read I truly fell in love with the relationships as a whole. I held my breath the last few chapters and I was soo happy Edward is the father and not demetri and finally Bella sounds like a huge dark cloud is finally lifted!!! Looking forward to what's next!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 51

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

aaaaawwwwww!!!!!!  she did it!!!!  yay!!  something tells me she was further along than they thought.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 50

Don't stop the quick updates now.......I'm on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 49

Great updates.....I loved seeing so many so close together. Thanks for working hard on them! The developments are going great...James, Edward being fired, lol, Renee's apology,Esme and Bella reconnecting, the baby girl....loved it all!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 49

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 48

BB

Bella's hip sounds like it's a wonderful shade of blue. EEK!! But at least it's not broken. And I'm glad to read that Bella didn't argue about using the the wheelchair.

So another beautiful girl is on the way hey!!! (2 thumbs up)

I'm also glad that Edward & Bella seem to be in a better place.

And from your end comments. It sounds like all of us are going to find out whom the daddy actually is.

I was thinking that I should check back as to what the bet was. Because I forget. Maybe I wait until the story is done because you might play out that bet yet. (hee, hee)

Ready for more when you are BB!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 48

looking forward to more

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 47

BB

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

For having the next chapter up so dang soon. I didn't know how I was going to last for more than a day or two with out knowing how Bella was. (Cory lets out a big breath)

As for the Edward being fired conversation. Better this time around. Too bad Bella didn't think of just talking it out the frist time instead of just firing Edward. It would have been less stress on everyone. Including me!! (ha,ha)

BB I can honestly say that I'm over the moon that your muse is back for this story!!! I look forward to the rest of their journey!!! Even though it's sad to know that this part of their journey is coming to an end soon.

But maybe we readers will get lucky and you will continue on, yet again, with this family and their stories!!!

Bring on more when you can BB!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: doughty1999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 46

I really like this story and the ones that preceded it. I just don't see why you never seem to give Bella a break:) I definitely would not want to be in her shoes. It's a little to much to see her always hurt or wounded in one way or another. Although I can't wait for the next chap. Hopefully something really good is coming her way.

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 46

Omg can she ever get a break I just want Bella to be happy

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 46

well TY for two chapters, OMG!  she fell down the stairs!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 46

BB

I understand why Bella fired Edward. But, IMO, she did it the wrong way.

And I was sure that everything was going to be fine. Until you & your muse made Bella fall down the stairs. Dear lord don't let her be hurt too much.

That was a tense chapter to read BB. Didn't breathe too much through it. (nope)

Thanks for the extra chapter this Sunday!!!! I have to admit though BB. I'm nervous when the next chapter will be up. I'm not good with cliff hangers when it involves someone possibly being hurt.

Cory

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 46

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 45

BB

WOW!!! You got me twice in this chapter BB.

First James is gay. But it's great that he's happy. Being not happy didin't get him anywhere good.

And Bella fired someone. I'm not sure if she fired Edward or Carlisle. I'm thinking Edward though.

My head hurts after that chapter BB. But daaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn that was a great chapter!!!!

I have one request. Please tell me you have the next chapter mapped out. I don't know if I have it in me to wait too long for the next chapter BB. Oye vey!!!

Cory



Author's Response: Not only is the next chapter mapped out, but I've got half of it written. Hopefully, I'll get the rest of it done soon and have it up :)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 44

I think it will be a girl. But the parentage is still a little scetchy. 

I am so glad that Bella seems to have made it past this major hurdle. I loved the quickie with her and jasper. Such a true to life moment. ;)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 44

BB

What a great treat on this cold Wednesday morning where I live. I wasn't expecting a new chapter for a while yet. And I'm a day behind on checking my E-mail notices. (hee, hee)

And what a fantabulous chapter it was. Bella and Carlisle seem to really want to have their lives back. How great is that!!!!!!

As for the sex of the child. I'm happy either way Because I agree with Jasper. Just as long as the child is healthy the sex doesn't matter.

Ready for more when you are BB!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 43

Oh out foursome is back and better than ever!!!! That is one of the hottest scenes with them EVER!!!

I am also glad to see both Bella and Carlisle back at the office. Life is finally starting to make sense for them all again! Yeah!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 44

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 43

Great chapter! Good luck with the contest.

 

i am so happy that Bella is really trying to get her life back!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 43

looking forward to the nextchapter 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 43

BB

Sounds like the real world is busy for you. But in a good way!!! (two thumbs up)

As for updates to this amazing story. As long as you promise to finish. I'm totally fine with waiting. I need to read you and your muses version of the story.

Glad to read that Bella & Carlisle seem to be improving.

It was great to hear from you and thanks for the oh so hot chapter.

Cory

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 43

Damn, BB... Just, holy shit!  First Carlisle, then the fuck hawt shower, then the most amazing love making in bed... FUCK!!

*pants and wipes brow*

 

Ok, Carlisle still has a bit of an issue with rejection I think,.,.,. or something close to it.  I didnt even think Alice was trying to separate them till Carlisle said something.  I think the adjoining offices are a great idea!

I cannot wait to see this baby... but I know they will love it no matter what.

Great chapter, BB!  I am off to recreate the show scene!  *snickers*

*hugs*

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 42

Great love it so far can't wait to see wat happens next

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 41

Holy sexing and emotional roller coaster Batman!!!!! Excellent ending to a wild day!

Reviewer: themslovebug90 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 42

I love these stories...can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 42

BB

Firstly. Congrats on the book signing!! I hope to hear all about it with the next chapter posting.

Kudos to Bella for going back to work. She needs to get her life back into a "normnal" routine. I'm sure she will feel much better because of it!!!!

Loved the office return initiantion!!! (drool, drool)

See you whenever BB!!!

Cory

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 42

awesome, kudos, congrats! so happy & proud of and for you!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 42

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it, BB!!!!  Thank you for giving this to us, even though your plate is full right now.


Congrats on Pub day for Angel's Heart!!!  *hugglesquishies*

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 41

B.B.

I've got tears in my eyes after this one. I believe a real breakthrough has been made by both Bella & Carlisle.

I hope the next few weeks go smoothly for you!!! Even though you sound like you'll be busy. I hope the muse lets you write down some ideas for this amazing story!!!

And I, for one, am glad that they all talked a lot!!!! :)

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 41

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

B.B.

You've got quite the journey coming up to give us readers. So remember to take your vitamins please!!! :)

I hope Carlisle takes Bella's advice and believes in his loves/lovers as well!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Hehe, I am taking them! Thank you, sweetie, for all your support

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 40

looking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 40

Oh wow BB, so THATS what Carlisle was doin' there, awesome  :)

Loved this whole chapter!  Especially the reconnecting at the end.  Can we hear from Esme sometime soon?  I am curious to see whats goin' on in her head.

 

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I have a few outtakes planned for this book, just like I did for the other two and will be adding them as soon as I stop needing to sleep, lol

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 39

B.B.

You got me. I didn't for one second think you would go there and you did. WOAH!!!!

OMG what is Bella going to do now?????

Thud!! (That's me falling to the floor from shock!!)

So ready for more when you are BB!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

what can I say, I like to keep everyone guessing, lol!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 39

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: cassyrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 39

OMG what will happen now



Author's Response:

Hmm, I don't know. Guess I should write it and find out, lol

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 38

BB

Tough chapter to get through. But I'm firmly believing that this is the start of Bella being more strong like she always has been and always will be!!!!

Thanks for remembering us readers. It's always great to get a chapter no matter how long inbetween!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 38

I would never hate you darlin', wherever you may leave us at  ;)

 

Great chapter!  Carlisle thrown in there was a head turner for me!!  And now, a new baby!!

*shrieks*

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 37

Congrats on publishing and I am so glad that you have not abandoned my favorite foursome!!! I am so glad to see things taking on a sense of 'normalcy' again, but holy shit! Bella is prego again?!? Now forgive me, but I need a refresher on the time frame here. How long has it been since Felix? PLEASE tell me that there is no way he can be the father. You might as well dump a bottle of pills down Bella's throat and put a loaded gun in her hand.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 37

BB

Truthfully. When I opened my e-mail this morning, the best I was hoping for was an update as to how you were doing with the books.

Imagine my surprise. It was a full fledged chapter for me to read!!!!! YAHOO!!!!

Glad to read you've got the books done. I look forward to the day you say they are both dompletely done and then I'll do some searching in order to read them.

Now onto Endless Awakenings. I'm over the moon to read that Bella seems to be doing so much better. Still a ways to go. Which is fully understandable. But it's great to read that she's moving forward!!!! Now how long until the answer if Bella is pregnant or not??????

Ready for more when you are BB!!!!! And thanks again for the great surprise in my inbox this morning!!!!

Cory

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 37

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 35

Aww i'm glad she saved Carlisle. It seems they all have alot of talking to now do. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 35

B.B.

WOAH!!!! Please tell me this was the breakthrough chapter for Bella & Carlisle!!!!

What the two of them went through was terrible, yes. But if they never agree to forget the past, they can never move forward.

Great chatper BB!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 35

loved the chapter 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh God, please don't let him please. Don't let him kill himself. I was already crying now the water is flowing.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 34

I HATE cliffies!!! ... Great chapter though! ... can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 34

Ooh i hope she's able to stop Carlisle, i think she's the only one who can.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 34

BB

You can't let Carlisle kill himself. He's waaaaaaaaay too strong of a man to do that!!!! I feel a break through for both of them coming!!!!

Such a great day at the beach!!!

Thanks for a great chapter!!!! I'm ready for the next one when you are!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh...

 

My...

 

God.

 

Holy shit, BB!!!  That was an awesome chapter!  Getting her to open up and get over the aversion to that name Alice calls her.  That was powerful, darlin!

 

And then BAM!  Drama with Carlisle...  I hope they get there in time!

 

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 34

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

Glad to see you back. You were missed! Loved the update! Hope the next one comes soon!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 32

yes...she did good. it nice to see her trying to move forward.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 32

I know me too, I am so mad and not at her or Carlisle but the situation. I wish things like this wouldn't EVER happen. I wish we could all just be happy and safe.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 32

Very emotional.  And so very sad. :(

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 32

Woah is me - Bella

 

...and this is where i part, i tried but 

I guess this story is just uncomprehensible

to me, like i said before i stuck around 

because the plot was good at first and i

Was facinated with the characters.. at first.

but it just went down hill without any chance

Of making it good again, im more disappointed

That i wasted my time...

On to the next..



Author's Response:

Honestly, I don't know what you expected. You've known with the way the last ten chapters have been that the road would be rough and I've made it clear that I am not going to take the easy way out. Bella's made a few steps, and that's really all I can give you right now.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

B.B.

WOW!!!! Such a telling chaper there girl!!!!

But I'm going to believe that this is exactly what Carlise & Bella both need to get their amazing lives back!!!!

Great chapter BB!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 32

looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow...  

That was so much... I dont know what to call it.

Great chapter, BB. *wipes tears out of eyes*

Progress will come, I just know it  :)  Hang in there Bella~!

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 31

So because she got raped, she decides to rape Edward...bullshit

I didn't ask for everything to be pretty and tied up in a little bow tie just for me, i didnt ask for anything really, i just told you how ridiculous the story plot got, i expected better which is why i chose to read another chapter, and this...was not it.

BTW you really should warn new readers of your inscest flavored story since you obviously think it's sexy for this one whole family to be fucking each other. Everybodys moms and dads are fucking, step sisters and brothers fucking it dosent matter who got married first, nobody should be able to say "our moms and dads are fucking, our brothers and sisters are fucking, hey, lets go fuck!" its discusting really..god i hope this isnt based on a true story...god help you if it is.



Author's Response:

First of all, there is no incestous relations going on in these as they were all well into adult hood when the relationships are formed, and they were consenting adults. I don't appreciate the slight that they are acting like that. Also, waiting until you get 30 chapters into the THIRD story to decide it's an issue, is a little silly to me, but you have every right to your opinion.

Now, Bella didn't rape Edward. She needed to feel in control of something, anything, and their sexual relationship had always been a huge part of their story. I won't change that now. I don't think the plot got ridculous at all. I think it's going just as it should have seeing as it's my story to write as I feel is right. I certainly don't need you telling me that I'm writing it wrong.

I've been were Bella is. I know the terrors she feels every moment of the day. Some people turn it all inward, others of us turn it outward, attacking those we care the most about. It's dangerous and destructive, but it's the only way we know how to get the smallest amount of control back.

I'll understand if you choose not to continue to read this story, but I'll write it the way I feel it to be.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 31

B.B.

Glad to have you back!!! Take all the time you need. I find it's always worth the wait!!!!

I think Bella is on the verge of asking for that help that all of them are telling her she needs!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 31

wow...   I feel ya darlin'

 

This HAD to be hard to write as hard as it was to read...

Love it, BB.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 31

Good chapter.

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

im glad that shes ok a little 

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

Am enjoying the story - even if I have been crying for several chapters now lol.

Hope you update soon! Can't wait for it!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 22

I can't believe that they got raped!!!!!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

why can't the creepers leave poor Bella alone for once???

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 30

Ok, so you are definately keeping the Puffs Plus company in the black.  And if you wonder if you did this chapter justice, the answer is a resounding YES.  I really hope Carlisle and Bella can start to move past the pain and trust their spouses.

 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

OMG those rude, mean and hateful people. Don't judge people cause you never know what can happen to you.

My heart breaks for Bella and Carlisle and I totally didn't even realize that that's what their lovers thought; they slept together.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 30

looking foward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

B.B.

I sure hope this is the beginning of both of them getting the help they truly need!!!!!

Great story telling!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 30

will you please help them?!?!?!?!?!?!?!



Author's Response:

I am, I promise. Believe it or not, the first step was taken, now we just have to stumble down the path.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

I know how hard this is for you to write, BB.

I am a very gracious reader though.  I appreciate all of the time and effort you put into us readers.. Thank you.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 30

Ok, so I have to get this off my chest...I hated this chapter and the couple before it. I know its not my story and i cant change the plot, im just saying as a reader your about to lose, the plot just seems ...ridiculous. I get what they went through but there behavior is completely unrealistic, also, it seems that in every chapter since the beginning, youve been intentionally hurting bella, like you actually want her to suffer. First it was it was jacob then everyone calling her a whore, lets not forget everyone calling her a "gimp" whatever that is. then the attack and killing, car crash, the pictures, the shooting, kidnapping, rape now its all "i wanted to hug my kids but didnt, i wanted to tell them this but just kept quiet, i wanted to say i didnt cheat but just stared, i deserve what i got, im such a whore blah..." its like you actually want her and her alone to go through all this drama, for what..so she will be "stronger in the end"? its all just honestly annoying, unnecesary and..yeah, not convincing me to keep reading this story at all.

im honestly not tryna be a hater, just telling you what its like from a readers POV



Author's Response:

I can respect your opinion, but let me tell you this, if you've never been in her shoes, then you don't what the hell you are talking about. Maybe, I've put her through too much, maybe not, but I will not sugar coat what she's been through, I won't tie everything up in a little box and make it pretty.

Reviewer: rhochradel Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 29

This is a very emotional story; however, I enjoy reading it. Hopefully Bella and Carlisle will be able to work through their pain and let their family love them. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

Ok, you broke me.  I cried.  I need to find something happy to read to recover after three chapters of heart break back to back.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 29

B.B.

That was a tough one to get through. WOAH!!!!

But the two of them are in a place that I really believe will help them now.

More soon please!!!!!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 28

It was a fantastic yet heart breaking chapter.  Their pain is so real.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 27

Well, I don't how you are dealing on the inside, but your writing is amazing.  I felt on the edge of tears this entire chapter. :(

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

*hugs you hard*

Im here, BB.

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