Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 43
Thank you for a wonderful story. I had originally in the begining thought Edward would turn things around and there would be a happy ending for him and Bella. I love the happy ending the way you wrote it between Matt and Bella as he was the only person in her life besides her Dad to have never mistreated her and loved her unselfishly. Great job.
Date: 03 Dec 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 43
I throughly enjoyed this story. You're an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
I must admit that after reading certain parts of this story, I wasn't sure I wanted to finish it. It certainly had nothing to do with you writing talent. No, nothing like that. I found that I was, once again, thrown back into the face of my own sad and painful memories. I've talked to counselors. A psychiatrist even, but they were of little or no help. I've prayed for many years for peace and I believe that has helped a lot. But what I need, what my family needs, is closure.
To that end I must say, Thank You, with all my heart. Thank you for writing about Bella's journey through her pain, fear, heartache, healing and forgiveness. Although I've thought about doing this through the years, it was the journals that allowed Bella to get it all out. To purge it from her head. All the sorid, painful and ugly details that she endured. Now it's time for me to do the same. I want to truly move on and it's time for me to take that step.
Thank you for writing a story about a woman who has come full circle and found a way to peace.
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 43
This story was different, but very well written, and I enjoyed it! There were lots of issues that you covered here, and for that I'm grateful, as we all need to know that these things take place, but for some, it doesn't matter at all because they can be healed, and forgiven. Thanks for your sharing!!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 43
I loved your story. It's the first story where Edward and Bella did not end up together that I have read and I really enjoyed it. I just like happy endings. Thanks for writing it. Your really very good and I will add you to my favorites list. Have a great day:)
Date: 23 Jun 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 43
I almost thought I missed part of your story when this chapter started out the way it did. YOU HAVE WRITTEN SUCH AN ENLIGHTENING STORY. It didn't just have love, sex and intrigue, but IT HAD SUCH A DEBTH TO IT. THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND VERY INSPIRING. THANK YOU.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 43
I loved this story it was so well written and thought out. The ending was brilliant i loved Edwards letter to Bella/Hannah at the end i feel he redeemed himself slightly by recognising how badly he treated and hurt Bella.
I thought Matts character was perfect for Bella he was completely opposite to Edward just what Bella needed someone kind and gentle but had great strength about them to make her safe .
Cant wait for your next stories
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
I have been reading this since the start and I think this is my first review. I just want to tell you that I was a bit upset that it wasn't a Bella and Edward story but can I just say that it was a good story even if it was a little dark in some places. I'm glad that Bella got her happy ending in the end she deserved it after everything that happened to her. The only thing that will really bug me is what happened to Jessica Stanley? But you answered that question for me even if it will leave me scartching my head. I will be reading the alternative story as well.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 43
Thanks for this..it was always a welcome sight to see your update in my inbox. While it was a different story, I never wanted it writeen any differently. But I'm pretty easy going, not like some who try to single handedly bring down a writer for not reading their mind, ha! Looking forward to any outtakes that come my way!!
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 43
I know this had to be hard to write. At times it was hard to read. I cried, often. The biggest villian in this was Carlisle Cullen. Edward was a troubled child. As parents we have to be watchful. Love sometimes has to say no. Edward needed that love when he was younger. Watchful parents that changed up his friends. removed him from situations where he was too young to handle. Too permissive, too much money, etc.
Too much too soon. Too bad!
Helping Bella was not bad, controlling was terrible.
I do not see an alternative ending for this. It is just not ment to be.
You did a great job, enjoyed your work. Until I see you again,
Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Mega chapter, girl! We have had this story for a while now. It has been hard I am sure to write. Some people don't understand why Bella & Edward can not always be together. This Edward is not together in his mind.
It is time for Bella to heal and Finally be with the man that has been by her side through out this time.
Date: 23 May 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 41
What a journey Bella has made. She is correct she must forgive Edward so she can move forward with Matt. Edward is sick. His sickness was neglected by his parents and actually made worse. I think he has some good in there some where. A little boy that wanted his parents to love him, spank him. Set rules and care if he broke them or not. You can not think of Edward the way he is without thinking about Carlisle and how he mismanaged his life.
No werewolves for me. Thanks anyway.. Look forward to your updates.
Date: 22 May 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 41
that bella sure is a chatterbox! lol i thought this chapter was great. sorry i didn't review the last chapter but don't pay attention to the haters. i know it's easier than it sounds but try not to. that's why were all here is to read fan fiction. freaks don't get it!!!
Date: 22 May 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 41
loved the chap... Bella's last thoughts were spot on... u have to forgive someone to let go... a friend once told me that letting someone that has done wrong by me occupy my thoughts and actions would allow them to continue to keep the power they gained over me. I could be the deal breaker and forgive and let it go. This story is awesome... thank you for sharing...
Date: 21 May 2011 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
people r jerks... i for one, feel that your take on this entire story has been a breath of fresh air.
i guess i was wrong when i thought that reading meant LETTING the author LEAD u!!! not the other way around...
don't mind those asshats. i have been waiting very patiently for the rest of your tale to unfold. Thank you for sharing. i have been loving it!!! can't for the next chapter... :)
Date: 13 May 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 40
I don't care if Edward and Bella get together at the end during this story because the characters are different in each story. For this story, I'm glad they didn't! Edward has some serious problems, and if Bella would be able to forgive him she would also have some serious problems. LOL, I love your writing and I think you're amazing at it. I stuck with you till the beginning and I will stick with you till the end! Please, don't let stupid people ruin such an amazing story! xo
Date: 13 May 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 40
I like the story. I understand where you're coming from. It's so discouraging to have your work criticized. I was a little skeptical at first when I realized that Edward and Bella were probably not going to make it, but you've made me love Matt. I find myself silently hoping that Edward doesn't get out and come bakc to harm her and that she and Matt will just go on and hook up for real and all will be well in Bella's world.
I was nervous when she said that he could be found to have a mental illness and that would make him have a shorter sentence. Whew, I hope that doesn't happen!
Keep up the good work, you're very talented. Don't let one or a few people discourage you.
Date: 12 May 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
here's the thing... whan i was 15, i was looking into the legal issues regarding emancipation, since my home situation was... we'll say "crappy." i don't know why b stays with the insane cullens at this point. it seems to me that foster care might actually be better.
Date: 12 May 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
Okay well I am going to tell you that Edward needs to stay in a locked facility. He had Bella and would have killed her.
She needs to stay with Matt.
After this long year please don't kill Matt & Bella off. They have been through hell. Edward may have a chemical inbalance in his brain. HE is definitely a physchopath.
I am glad you are still updating.
Date: 12 May 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
I just read your notes at the end. I am surprised that people have been bugging you to keep her with Edward. I love her being with Matt and can't wait until the fear of the sex thing is gone. And I am saying this even though I am an Edward fanatic, but not this Edward. I have no idea how you are going to end this story, you have kept me on the edge of my seat. Love it.
Date: 12 May 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story needs to have warnings.
And non-canon pairings. (which isn't really a warning, but it's a time saver for those of us who want to see and Edward/Bella story)
I'm not saying I don't like it, I just think you advertised it wrong.
Don't make it sound like and Edward and Bella love story, if it isn't.
Date: 05 May 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 39
Great story lots of excitement and drama and mysteries Edward was about as bad as they come and Bella at times did not do things rationally but she really fought his intimidation and domination .Micheal was a very nice character and a good friend to Bella if she had listen to him she may have been better off. Kudos on Matt he's hott just perfect for Bella and the opposite of Edward .can hardly wait for a new chapter.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 39
i hope its not gonna end up a b/e story... e went way too far... matt is treating her better anyways :) i have read all the chapters in two nights... i just couldnt stop clicking 'next'... :) looking forward to the next update
Date: 19 Mar 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
I want you to know how much I've enjoyed your story up to this point. You're one hell of a writer.
However, I sneaked a peek at chapter 39 to get an idea if Edward had grown-up at all. Then became very disappointed that it wasn't gonna be an E/B HEA.
So as much as I admire your writing, this is where I get off. I am strictly an E/B reader. I can't stand the thought of them being with anyone else but each other.
I wish you much luck & success with this story and hope you get tons of good reviews. Because this has an awesome beginning. I just don't like where it's heading.
By the way, I loved, loved, loved your story Lord of Authority. It was amazing. I like said, I'm a B/E fan. I won't even read stories that have either one of them cheating on the other. But Lord of Authority really kicked ass. A rotten, mean & sadistic Edward that turns into Gold. Perfect.
hugz and good wishes.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 39
Matt is soooo sweet! Cant wait for next chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 39
I like your story the way it is. I thought at first it was weird that they were not gonna be together --- then I was worried you would try to make that happen anyway. At this point in the story I SO do NOT want to see them together.
Your Story --- Your Plot --- Write what you like --- People will read it or not --- always be you and never apologize for it!!!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Well I am sorry about those that have to have an E&B. This story would be wrong. Edward is sick.. big time. He may never be right. Plus he killed Jess.
I am with you on this all the way through. You are doing a great job. Tell the story. Let them grumble.
Edward can get a fu.k buddy in prison.. His name is BIG BOY. they will fall in love >LMAO
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
To cut a long story short: You are in my fav. author list and I will read whatever story you come up with unless its a very cheezy B/E love story. I love "Monster". I really enjoyed "February!!!" And I also like "Amazing Grace.... " If you are happy to end this one and write an alternative one..
You are an amazing writer and I spend quite a few evenings in bed reading your stories. Thanks for sharing
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 38
I think he was truly remorseful. He was used to thinking he was supposed to have what ever he wanted. He was a CULLEN afterall. Well daddy messed up the baby. Now the real world just hit home. Had it of done that when he beat up that kid he might not have progressed.
I understand she feels bad for him knowing how they messed him up. He is still mentally ILL, jail did not magically heal that. Jessica is dead because of him and Luke. Two very bad boys.
Sink his boat a girl is dead.
Please update soon we are all on the cliff edge.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 37
I think you should paraphrase the trial. Give us some testimony and then summarise some of it. Not too wordy.
I am sorry Edward is a minor but murder is murder. He showed the propensity for deviant behaviour. Carlisle just covered it up. Esme is sad but still to kill rape and mame is sick.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
Okay it doesn't matter who she falls in love with, Matt or Michael. She is still young and so damaged.
Whatever Edward did Carlisle needs to be charged as well. He made it all possible. That girl that died was at some point both of their fault. Her mother will have the guilt of letter her have FUN over safety. Money does not mean a person is trust worthy.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Edward is messed up. I think that a horrible accident or situation will bring back her memory. Then she will remember how Luke acted. Yes they had plans to share her. Screw Edward he is so bad.. dark is an understatment.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 38
Love the chapter. I would like to think that Edward pleaded guilty because he was truly sorry for what he did but he is a great actor so I really dont know, I hope Bella can start putting this behind her and move on with Matt and the rest of her life and just be happy