Thank you for directing me back to that chapter. Having been some time ago, I admit to forgetting Aro's directive to Jane.

nice to see what he did that evening.   Double D.   Ya know we have a guy at work whose call sign is Double D....now ya know what I'm going to be thinking of everytime I talk to him now?   ROFL.

Oh boy 9 more orgasms huh.   Talk about over sensitation.

I think he's teaching her a lesson about her selfishness or greed to have orgasms seems more important than holding off on them when he directs her, thereby not putting his wishes before hers. He's got a sweet way of teaching her a lesson if that's what it's about.

It just seems as if Edward is trying to change who Bella is. Yes Master, No Master. A robot. It feels like he is taking away her individuality. And what happens when he is wrong, cause I will tell you no man, Dom or not is always in the right. How would he like to be humiliated by someone in public and then have to go over and thank them for it. I'm sure he would just love that (written sarcastically)! And how would you feel if someone had done the things James did to her. You wouldn't want anyone telling you what to do ever again. I'm trying to wrap my head around the whole being free thing to be who she is but to dictate her behavior with others is wrong. It is as if she has no free will. As you wrote several times Bella thinks, "what kind of choice is that?" I know her choice is to say "red" but then she looses Edward. What kind of choice is that? She isn't a child but just like all of us sometimes our behaviors are childish. I don't go around telling my friends/loved ones they are childish and humiliate then in or out of public. I will still read your story because it is just that, YOURS, and some things get me a little hot and bothered. I just wish I saw Edward as being a little more conflicted about humiliating her. I have more remorse about disciplining an actual child than he seems to have about disciplining a grown woman. Thanks for letting me vent a little.

Carol (Tacoma Wa)

Aww poor Bella she got herself sent to the corner. She handled it well, i almost wanted to cry for her.

I have an idea of what Edwards doing and why he's calling her a cum slut, but i'll wait and see if i'm right :)

Thankyou for two updates close together. Looking forward to the next one, i'm wondering what edward bought and what there doing upstairs.

Jess

I think it is great she finally got a chance to enjoy New Moon. Dougie was awesome & I would enjoy seeing him again! I was a little shocked Alice was there selling her items with her chip on her shoulder. If you wish to be a vendor in such a place, then you should be accepting of what is there. (even if it is family!) It had been a long time since Bella & Edward just got to enjoy themselves, and they needed it! I was glad to see Edward's dominant side. Punishment and all! They have had so much other crap to deal with that has seemed on the back burner.

Wow, I had a great long review, but I lost it when the sight got screwy.

Love Dougie. He makes me think of the guy who plays Kurt Hummel on Glee.

Bella seems to have charmed all sorts of people over the evening. Good for her. Glad she got the flogger.

Emmett needs a beating. He should have called Bella out like that, it wasn't his place to embarrass her that way. Can't blame Bella for sighing later, though it's good Edward followed through on the punishment. It's important for them both that he always is true to his word, be it punishment or reward.

Cheers, Balti K

Oh Louise, I have to tell you once again how much I love your Domward. He was really "dominant" in this chapter...and he is so, so good at it. But you always throw the loving part of him in to soften things. I can't wait to see what happens at the club. It sounds like he is going to use this to help Bella "grow" and become more comfortable in her role. I loved the chapter!! It was a great one!

I continue to be amazed and appreciative by the depth of detail in this story. Bella's shopping experience here was so well written. I like that she had Dougie and Rose for much of her time away from Master Edward. At the same time having moments by herself, first at Alice's table and then finding herself truly alone at Frank's display.

These moments are allowing Bella to grow in confidence. I was impressed by her maintaining poise at the cane display, she did remarkably well when not that long ago she might have fled and been beset by a panic attack.

Knowing her ass is on display for all attendees to view would be daunting. I was surprisingly pleased that Master Edward sent her to the corner to act out her punishment for sighing.  He told her what would happen and followed through as he had promised. I think of any place Bella would need to be disciplined publicly this is the best venue as it would not seem out of place at all.

I found Master Edward’s reaction to Bella’s participation in Alice’s exhibition interesting. Knowing his pet did not agree without consulting him appeased his nature and unless I am mistaken he is using this to further push her comfort levels in a safe setting. Isabella’s acquiescence to her Master’s decision was a pleasant show of her own growth.

Having an intense orgasm in public, it would seem did not embarrass her nearly as much as her corner time did but I suppose she WAS rather distracted...

I wonder what is to occur in this upstairs room if it is part of the market day yet no merchandise is on display? Part of me is a little frightened to find out...

Louis  -

As always a spectacular chapter.  I wasn't sure what you meant by marketplace but you did a great job making me visualize.  Alice, well duh, what does she expect and doesn't she get that she isn't in charge there, especially of Edward's interests?!

I do wish that Bella had the chance to tattle on Emmett as it stands now, she is going to get herself in trouble because she wasn't honest when Edward asked her what she wanted.

Also, while there were some that were nice to Bella, I still don't trust 90% of those mentioned in the story tonight.  I was nervous for Bella in this chapter.  She was walking around in a type of wonderland where she was ind of on display and she had to fake her way through it.  I guess so far, I really don't like the club and hate that they have to go and spend time there. 

As always, see you next time.

Vic

yes she is an he his the cum lord

Love the chapter. Bella is really coming into her own. Emmett is so bad.

Well then....she gets full range of 'Os' for the evening. Interesting.....

Im wondering if he will just release her to go about at will??? I dont or rather cant see Edward doing that. He is too possesive of her. But I guess will just have to see.

Loves <3

Happy New Year! Oh this club sounds like there is going to be so much fun, can't wait.

pretty damn sticky

*gulp* Master Edward is definitely ratcheting up their playtime. I must say, given his irritation by her sighing I am not surprised at his instituting 'corner time'. This is a painless, yet potentially humiliating way to train this behavior out of his girl.

What a devious way to reward his pet! Yikes. Serious over stimulation but at least with the granting of release as needed. I do believe her legs will be covered in her fluids by the time they return home. I shall be curious if he shares his thoughts behind her new name for this evening.

I am eager to visit market night. Will Bella be shopping without her Master? Given the discord among club members, that could be rife with bitter undercurrents despite the threat of Uncle Aro or Edward's censure.

ooohhh!!!! Great chapter.  He always cmes up with the hottest things!!  I just have to wonder, whats going to happen at the club??

Louise--- My dear Merry Christmas a little belatedly and All the  best to you and your family in the New Year!!!! Whoa! what a night indeed!!! can't wait.... Dougie is something...hahahaha! 

I took Isabella's writing about the 24/7 submission more on the lines of giving herself to her Master deeper and this would open the door for her to consider Marriage with Edward, because we know they love one another, But, Do we Know, in Edward's mind at least that she would be willing to take that step again!?!?!  So by her entire writing it showed me that her mind was going there, Especially when she said there isn't anything that she wouldn't do if he asked it of her, or smething like that....

Have a great week....see you Thursday!!!!  Kathy

Yes, there were a lot of surprises, great chapter.  What is up with Karen, coincidence?  Bella is euonymus naive., IMO

wow  jess is a real idiot.  Glad Charlie and Edward are in agreement on B.   Hmmm what is up with Karen I wonder. 

Great story. I love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I think Jess helped out Mike and Karen to get Bella out of the way to try and get Edward back. She is so jealous of Bella. It sounds like Karen is extremely unstable right now. I don't know what she wants from Bella, but it probably something she made up in her mind. Edward is going to have a very unhappy Bella. He may have to use some of those restraints in the playroom to keep her in the house. She can act so childish.

L - Yes, Jess is that stupid, so stupid.  Karen is off her rocker andI can't imagine what she would have for Bella.  I absolutely think she is dangerous, but I can't figure out how/why Mike can't see that she is crazy.  And the lockdown is going to piss someone off in a big way.  Keep itup girl, great story!

im looking forward to the next chapter ! 

Why do answers always create more questions? Karen is definitely not all there, but who is operating the puppet strings?! I do think Jess is that stupid, but that is not a good defense for a crime. I hope when they talk to the detective Bella gets inspired to tell him what she needs to.

Author's Response:

Becasue the questions are always deeper then what you see on the surface...

Yes, yes, outtake!

Things are going to a head... I can't wait to see how they nail all of them!  I hope they can keep Bella safe (especially from herself).  I don't like to speculate on your questions, you are way more creative then my puny imagination!

Excellent chapter!

I liked Edward’s approach to shopping. His conditions; either unhurried now, or interfering with their D/s time later. I thought telling her to pick three while he did the same was very clever given her strong bend towards frugality.

Ah, Jess. I think Jess is a manipulative conniving woman who had her own tenancies turned against her. Mike is seeking to please Karen and Karen has her own agenda known only to her.

Bella is going to absolutely HATE ‘lockdown’. She has worked hard to become independent and if she perceives Edward’s demands as unreasonable I fear she will defy him.  I only hope her defiance does not ultimately endanger her.

I cannot imagine what Karen wants from Bella. She is unbalanced and likely remembers whatever propaganda she was fed by James. Given James’ abuse of the women under his control, he could have brain washed Karen into believing anything.

Karen possibly believes that in having James’ child she should have been his wife, not Bella. That Bella enraged James so likely fueled his wrath towards Karen. Given the abuse she suffered at James’ hands and the ensuing mental illness, I do believe Karen is incredibly dangerous. Were she properly medicated and in therapy, then perhaps she might be a safe member of society but as she is now she is little more than a charge of dynamite with a long lit fuse.

I think Karen blames Bella for not putting the ex away and left her subject to his abuse (something about a cage) I do think she is dangerous because he drove her quite mad, luckily Bella was strong anough to survive him without too much residual trauma to her mental stability although she has some  and Edward is helping her.

Jess is stupid she obviously loved being Edward's sub (who can blame her) not she is just looking for love in all the wrong ways...it is sad

I hope everthing is alright.

 Updating has trickled down to almost non exsistent. This used to be one of my favorites but it is hard for me to keep track of whats happening. It seems like they were on vacation for several months. I don't say this to be mean but concerned. I truly hope everything is okay and the diamond is shining brightly again. :-) I miss this story and love the characters.

I think the playroom is a must..  to release some build up tension.  I 'm still unhappy with Bella, Her trusted is not quite all their..    But Edward knows that.  that is why more lessons..  lol

Charlie is to smart of a man..  A father only once their children happy..  I know that my dad was hurt when he finally found out everything that happen to me from my childhood to my ex husband.. .   even after 8 yrs he is still trying to make it up to me.  and it was not hes fault.......  I  hid it from him.  scared he would be mad at me..   So I would love to her charlie thoughts..    Charlie is alot like bella, just a lot stronger. 

And I just want to lock Bella up in a rubber room tell they make sure is total safe from Karen..   that girl has no surival intincts..   lol. 

This was a awesome chapter..  see next time.

<3 Leona :)

OMG....

I think you have stunned me with the last three chapters, after I got your email from 75, I think it was... I stayed open reading the next chapter, what I should have done was just kept reading and you explained it all in the next chapter... stupid me!

Then I got to this chapter and as I was reading I thought Bella would start to regress with ever thing Mr Wiess was telling her, and I thought here we go again, Bella builds up her confidence and it is going to come tumbling down, but you did a good job with both Edward and Charlie comforting her and i have to say I especially love the fact that she agree to both of their demands to stay away from Heather.  I really do hope she does, otherwise I have a feeling she will not be sitting on her ass for a month.  I think for disobeying that Edward would tan her hide.

I would really like for Victoria to find out where the money is really going and what James did to her sister, if in fact he did rape her, and then I would like to see him go to jail.  I would also like to see him be charged for what he did to Bella, it is about time she put that part of her life behind her once and for all, and stops allowing him to get away with this.  She can berate herself as much as she wants but at the end of the day, James has to stand up and be accountable and he is not.

Thank you for a wonderful story and to tell you the truth I would forego playtime just to know what is going to happen.  But then again, who am I kidding, bring on the play room!

Thanks Louise, have a good weekend.

Fiorella

Hi Louise,

I have been missing in action, well I have been taking a break from reading this story, not because I did not love it, I do.  I wanted more to read then one chapter at a time.  Now I have a flow going for a few chapters.

As always, I have a few questions and statements.

I understand that Edward is there to fulfill her needs, as you said "I will indulge your wants at my discretion, however, your needs will always be exceedingly met. "  Wants are things we desire, and I am sure that most of Edward desire's are met, in and out of the playroom, so if Bella wants some of her wants and or desires met, why cant she.  She has asked or is it that fact that she does not ask and just takes that gets to Edward?

Okay this is where I think I get confused with BDSM relationships, they intermingle into the relationship of boyfriend / girlfriend.  In times when they are b/g she still have to follow his rules, then what is the point of having b/g time because when you really look at it they are still in that mind frame of thinking if I do this how is it going to affect someone else perceptions.  You are his girlfriend you don’t have to answer to him fully, you have made a commitment of seeing if you can mesh your worlds together, the get you know you stage of the relationship, you are not married yet!  You are still able to be individuals and figure out what you both want from the relationship.

I understand the ‘be respectful and follow the rules’ part, that is logical in all relationships, but when it is b/g time, no aspect of BDSM should come into it.  Why should I be punished for wanting to go and see a movie, in my own time (when she is not around Edward) and get to bed at 9:00 p.m. as long as I get the recommended 8 hours, and when I think about, really how many people get 8 hours of sleep a night?  Only the submissive and children in this world, because I know most of my family and friends don’t 

Okay so I getting off the beaten track and I am probably going around in circle for you… One day it will all click in my head.  The only other line that sort of got my goat up and would like to clarify, “Total…com..complete…surrender.”  To me when I read this like complete surrender, is hand over your identity to someone else, become a ‘Stepford Wife’, Do as I say.  I am really hoping that is not what you are meaning here, because I would open one a can of angry and it would not be nice, for I am not going to assume that is what you mean and just go from there.  I am hoping you mean that she will allow Edward to know what is good for her, but at the same time taking into consideration what is best for her.  As you said up above!  But that she does not loose the real her, Edward helps her to grow with in, a partner that challenges her but allows her to make the mistake at the same time.  Give and take from both sides of their relationships, BDSM and B/G time.

Okay I am just rambling and starting to get worked up and that is not what this email is about.  I just need clarification.

Thanks for taking the time to read my ramblings.

Fiorella

That came out of left field. I totally wasn't expecting Heather to have anything to do with this at all. Okay maybe I was suspicious at first but just figured she was kind of quirky that way.

What WAS Charlie thinking? I know I'd like to "hear" his unspoken side of that conversation.

Looking forward to see how Bella does back in the playroom. Hopefully she'll remember the epiphany she had while they were away and she'll carry what she discovered over into the playroom.

I hope Bella puts James away for this crime. She wasn't brave enough for herself. Maybe she will be brave enough for all the other girls out there that might be his next victim. She now knows that there was already another one. There might be  others. James is a preditor.

What a lovely web you weave... I am biting my nails to see what happens with James' fuckery... :))

Wow great chapter and it's soooo good to be back to the regular storyline.  I can't wait for a trip to the playroom -hopefully next chapter? 

loved the chapter looking forward to seeing the outcome of it all ! 

I cant remember what Nâhtötse means. lol.  I dont think Edward was too hard on her at all.  I think it needed to be done and he handled it right.  Well I dont practice this life style but..... it makes perfect sense to me.

Very informative chapter. We need a Charlie outtakes please. And what does Heather (Karen) want with Bella? I am hoping her help to put James behind bars.

Powerful chapter...lots of info...think I need to read it again to see what I may have missed.  Getting good...again and again, and again!

....wow. One intense chapter. So much information finally divulged. Knowledge is power and now they are armed with a great deal of it.

Wonder what James' mother would think if she knew about her grandchild AND that her son was paying what is likely 'shush' money to the mother?

I cannot say I have an inkling as to Victoria's reactions should she learn who fathered her little sister's child. I can only hope she was blind to the truth else she is as much at fault after the fact. James is a pig, yet that may be an insult to the animal!

Aro is going to be incensed. He is being betrayed on many levels by Mike. I could only hope he has nefarious connections...

Hmmm. I suspect Bella may struggle with her father's request. Yet knowing what more damage James has done, perhaps she will follow through after all.

I did actually catch Edward calling Bella nâhtötse. I wondered at the time if Charlie heard it, as he must know its meaning. However, I believe Charlie knew before that, maybe even before he arrived at their home. I would wonder if they didn't leave clues when they visited him.

Yes, I would love to see an outtake from Charlie's pov. The man must have so very much to say!

Of course I'm interesting in a Charlie OT!  I also what to know whats in all the emails and texts, a summary would do.

Karen/Heather was not old enough to make that choice, so I don't care if she consented or not.  Victoria... perhaps she will kill him for it. 

I hope the heck Bella does decide to tell Hawk and get that DNA sample, but what about Jake?  Will he get into trouble for his role?  I'm sure Bella will need some time to wrap her head around her inaction.

Great chapter!  I must admit I am anxious for their regular... it's fells like it's been a long time.

Yes please tell Charlie's story!!!!

Holy Heck Louise this was a killer chapter.. I left my extremely wordy review on FF under Khans so Inwon't repeat all that again.. But just wanted to say how much I love your creative mind and even though my inner whiny child wishes for the story to tell me all the secrets right now... Thank you for being in control and giving us all the details and time for Bella to find herself first and grow because of all the things that Edward helps her with... so by the time we progress to this point and she finds out all these details she is finally able to come to terms, and dealing with all those evil folks who transpire to do evil toward her..  Look at how she is able to finally deal with her Dad, that in itself is huge... so good...  what a wonderful Master of this story you truly are..  you put it all out here just for our benefit...  :-)  Big grins...  Have a great week!!!  Kathy 

I dont even know what to say. This is all just seriously FUCKED UP!

Charlie...just WOW is right. i believe that he knew it all before he got there, but her collar is what sealed the deal. yes, he has reached his limit and I HOPE & PRAY the Bella has reached hers. But I have a feeling it wont happen just yet. I think James is gonna do something more that will finally push her over the edge. I hate for it to happen that way, but I have a feeling its the only way for it to happen.

I dont even know what to day about Mike. Im in the same boat as Bella. WTF does this have to do with her? What does Karen want from her? I JUST DONT KNOW. 

Id love to see an OT for Charlie. He must be going crazy that he cant do anything and having to accept Bella liestyle.

I cant wait for the next chapter. Loves always <3

Thanks for the update, I love reading this story;D)

Thank you , thank you - it's been too long for the vacation.  It's about time they get back into the normal routine.  Sorry to say but I am sick, sick to death of the Cullen family (all but Edward that is) and cannot wait for this story to get back on track with all the kinky goodness that it started out as..............

J/A - I would like past Before they married..  How they fooled around him watching her in a tut tut.  hahaha.  that would be cool to see..  I honestly think Jasper is a little dom and Ali is a little submissive.  Even if they don't agree..  What do you think?

This was a awesome chapter..  I know Ed told Em about Bella.  But it made him understand that it was great that they bond together.. 

Awesome chapter. 

<3 Leona :)

Great chapter - man, I feel like they have been gone from home forever!  Enjoyed all their adventures but I am ready to see what happens when they return back to the real world.