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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

You described these pictures perfectly in the story!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ooo, another appointment with Doctor C, yum!  It seems that Esme and Carlisle are finding their feet and thank God they are going for sessions and being taught properly.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lol, I'd forgotten about Mr Bristles, ouch!!  It seems that the whole family are extremely jealous and possessive.  I'm glad that Carlisle realised a lot of his reaction to what happened with Esme and Riley was due to the fear of losing her, of not being enough for her.  I think this weekend has more than proved otherwise.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Lol, Jasper's such a pushover, but then I think he felt so guilty over what Ricky did that he caved sooner than he would normally.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Tingle button, bwahahahaha!!  

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I think Alice and the whipping bench will always be close friends, lol.  She had a point though, I don't know of any girlfriend that would be happy with her boyfriend working with their abusive ex.  It showed great courage on Jasper's side and he was right also, Alice has to trust his decisions and that he's making the right ones.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

Emmett and Rosalie are perfect for each other and even though they're not into the whole lifestyle they have things in common, I'm not sure how ready they are to admit that though, lol. 

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

Oh God, I love Carlisle and Esme.  They've been together for so long and they still act like the horny teenagers they were when they got together.  I love that they play and have Doctor C and Mrs Cullen time, bwahahahaha!!  It's even better that Edward caught them.  They all have more in common than they realise, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Lol, Alice is a feisty one, she knows what she wants and goes all out to get it, but sometimes that feistiness is her undoing and this time it led her to her punishment.  Ah well, nobody's perfect.

Jane x

Reviewer: maryef Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

i think jasper is an ass.  i have a hard time thinking kind thoughts about a man that will inflict such harsh punishment on the love of his life and feel no remorse about it and she was drunk, dosent that count for anything. just saying.

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad you brought them into an agreement and not have him just bully her into this without any vote.  I like a strong sexy Esme!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

Way cool!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

What's with the Cullen men? Why are they all so aggressive? (yeah, it's fiction) 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

Wow, Master Jasper is freakin' intense!

Reviewer: thinkingboutyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

I love the way you write.. too fucking good.

more alice and jasper please?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

I can't believe it took Dr. C so long to figure out that he was a Dom at heart. He is very demanding, but very caring.



Author's Response:

I think that some people push a part of themselves into the background - and remember he and Esme have a really good sex life as it is, so there was a catalist (Riley) and he just snapped and realised that esme needed to find out who was boss - she is quite a dominant person herself and I think that sometimes Carlisle let her take the lead and that's kind of ended now...

thank you so much for your refview

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

SO SO SO GOOD!!!!!! I love me some Dr. C and Esme. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!! I knew when Esme walked off with Alice that she was going to get into trouble. I can't believe that he made her wait for two days for her punishment Wow!!!! Love the pictures.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the feedback honey!  he is a meanie sometimes!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

thank you!  *swoon* Dr C!!!!



Author's Response:

I know! he gets me all hot and bothered too!!!

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

I would love to see one (or more) of their classes!!! Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

coming up soon okay? xoxo

Reviewer: ccaajjaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it.



Author's Response:

thanks sweetie

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

Holy hell!  Master Carlisle can Dominate me anytime!!!  That was fucking incredible!  He truely is a dormant Dom.  The punishment was wicked intense.  He could teach Edward some things.  Oh crap, I am fucking panting.  Need to tie down (I mean track down) the hubby.

Excellent job lady!  I hope you will give us a little insite into the classes.  That would be fun!

XOXO

Nickey



Author's Response:

Run, Nickey's husband - RUN!!! Run and don't look back!!  Thanks for the review Darling! Yeah our Carlisle is a dark boy.... love it!  It's always the quiet ones....hmmm - classes up next...after this bitch of a chapter gets out!!! It's driving me crazy - they just won't do what they are supposed to be doing!!!!  I'm trying to get to a wedding and they are fighting!!!



Author's Response:

Run, Nickey's husband - RUN!!! Run and don't look back!!  Thanks for the review Darling! Yeah our Carlisle is a dark boy.... love it!  It's always the quiet ones....hmmm - classes up next...after this bitch of a chapter gets out!!! It's driving me crazy - they just won't do what they are supposed to be doing!!!!  I'm trying to get to a wedding and they are fighting!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Yes yes yes ... more outtakes of Carlisle and Esme ... your choice of topics.

 

Awesome outtakes this be. Love Carlisle's commanding presence and Esme's realization towards the end that maybe he's not as sure of himself as he makes out to be.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review sweetie - more to come

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Damn, Carlisle took to those classes and the Dom position like a fish to water....Garrett would be proud!

Author's Response:

I'm sure he will be!  The classes will be up next,...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

he is too hawt for his own good.



Author's Response:

you got that right!  :)

Reviewer: dsccc Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

That was hot and of course I want to peek into their classes!



Author's Response:

thanks honey, and the next ones about a third done, but I have to and I mean HAVE TO work on the next chapter of PLU or else I am in deep trouble!

Reviewer: sarahd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved the outtake!  Esme & Carlisle are wonderfully done in your story and I'll take as many peeks into their life as you'll write!



Author's Response:

thank you so much - I love writing them!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow Carlisle and Esme have taken to this shit like ducks to water. LOL.  Yes please, I would love to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

hey there sweetie, I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

too funny...not surprised Carlisle had it in him!!



Author's Response:

so glad you liked it

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

LOVE the outtake.  Jasper is a hot, harsh Dom.  I would love to hear the rest of what happened after they left the play room at Garrett and Kates party that first time. PULEEESE! :)



Author's Response:

Hmmm now that's a new request - let me see what I can do, okay?  What would you like to see happen????

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

this was really hot Michele!  woowhoo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think this is my favorite outtake. I love your DOM Carlisle. WOW!!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!! You might need to start another story with Carlisle and Esme as the main subject, but finish this first. GREAT GREAT Chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am soooo glad that Jaspser and Alice have made up. I am sorry for taking so long to review. I am behind on all my reviews.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it but let's ace it celosia is always sexy

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOL. What is it with these Cullen men?  Is BDSM in their blood?  Was it dripped feed to them with their mother's milk? 

Carlisle,you are one bad assed dude.  

Personally, I think the whole thing with Riley was blown way out of proportion. 

Bella quit her job over it and Esme, became a sub because of it.  WTF? LOL

 

I hope you have a great Christmas and will have a happy and healthy New Year.

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

well damn Carlisle, i never knew he had it in him ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

I guess the sons got their Dom style from Poppa C. I don't blame Carlisle for being upset with Esme. She was out of line flirting with Bella's boss. Carlisle just made the punishment benifit both of them.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Nice to know kink still exists for us "matured" folks!
Great outtake! Loved how Carlisle reminded Edward of his role & place.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for your review

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

ooooooo ... OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... you need to explore Carlisle and Esme some more ... me likey!



Author's Response:

so it looks like someone has been dipping into the eggnogg early???  thank you for the review - and I'm sure we will see peeks of our favorite mom and dom again.

Happy holidays

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

Holy hell!  Carlisle can flip me over his lap and spank my ass anytime.  Holy shit girl, you have a dirty, dirty mind and I fucking love it!!!  Only you could make Carlisle that freakin sexy.  I swear that was just too good for words.

Have a fabulous Christmas and I look forward to starting 2011 with PLU!!!

Nickey



Author's Response:

you have such a way with words, my little pervert!  love you Nickey - enjoy your Christmas xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter but  was a little scared for her as bella seemed to be at the beginning.



Author's Response:

thank you - when I wrote this I had to explore all of the emotions and the truth is that he was THAT angry and hurt, but he was able to control himself and had enough logic inside to know that he had to distance himself for a while.

Reviewer: ccaajjaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ooooh Carlisle you're sooo bad!  What a fun glimpse into C & E's life.

 

Merry Christmas.



Author's Response:

thank you so much - happy holidays

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it awesome

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am so glad they made up.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

yum ... definitely YUM!

is it Saturday yet?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad they finally talked.  It was a long time coming, but it was so necessary.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love it.  So glad they made up.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow  these are great.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Them are very hot.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

WOW.  Those really are perfect because Edward would know they were of Bella but it's a secret because no one else would know for certain that they were her.  Very nicely done!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great photos thanks.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

No wonder Edward had the reaction he did...

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow!  I loved how Jasper took control of Alice after her temper tantrum.  And when he held her and cried I totally fell in love with him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

So many interesting things happening LOL wink wink

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I love that Jasper knows how to bring Alice back down.  Forbidding her to speak is like telling most people not to breathe.  I love their chemistry.  You write them so well; so balanced.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

Holy hotness! Never would have thought Emmett had it in him!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

I am so thankful my doc is a woman because this could have done some serious damage to my ability to go see her ever again.

Dr. C. is a dirty, dirty boy and Esme is a lucky, lucky woman!!!  Gold nipple clamps?  That is some high class kink going on there. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

That was an incredible chapter!  I loved learning the back story on Alice and Jasper.  And the punishment was seriously hot!  I mean it was borderline cruel, but hot as hell!!!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved it very much an some of it was pretty funny thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it like I love the rest of the story I hope there's more outtakes to come

Author's Response:

thank you so much and I'm sure that this lot will come around again sometime

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

I actually think they are by far the hottest couple!!!



Author's Response:

hmmm, there is something about them isn't there!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

This had me smiling the whole time. I kept remembering a comment my father-in-law made one time about my mother-in-law. He said "It may be like dead meat but it still puts a smile on her face."  My sisters-in-law have learned never to talk sex when he could come in the room.  We don't want to know!



Author's Response:

yeah, we all think like that and then one day our kids are saying something like "THAT IS DISGUSTING!!! Can't you two BEHAVE yourselves?????" as they apologise for our hand holding or some other form of PDA

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved the inside perspective to the other relationships! 



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

"boundary issues" ... big smile at that one

awesome outtakes ... you could have a whole new story with any of these couples as the center



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - these characters are rather colorful aren't they?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

LOVED THIS OUTTAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you - it was such fun to write

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

I can't believe Alice freaked out like that. I guess it is a good thing that Jasper can control her. She must have been a bratty child. This is one loving family and it is nice to see that.



Author's Response:

thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

i loved getting a view into their aftermath. always wondered what happep behind closed doors

Author's Response:

well, wonder no more :) thanks for the review sweetie!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

I think alice needed a physical release.  I'd rather her break a room than go off on a person.



Author's Response:

yeah, I think so too. thanks for the review

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

loving the Jasper & Alice outtakes ... you simply must write their story in full ... it would be awesome



Author's Response:

I'll think about it 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

oh oh oh ... oh my

not sure if I should laugh or cry

great outtake



Author's Response:

thank you, I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Oh I really like hearing about Alice and Jasper and how they came to be... great outtake ... would make a great story in its own right!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

Loved it & that was hot

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

Loved it & that was hot & funni @ the end

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I LOVED LOVED LOVED this!!!!!!!! You did a wonderful job with this chapter. I am soooooo very glad that you showed us Alice's punishment. This was awesome!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

WOW!!!!! That was F**king HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!

At first I thought Emmett was a bit rough with Rose in the garage but then as the story went on, I realized that that was just the was Rose and Emmett were. Great job, again.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

Great job!!!! Nice to know where the Cullen boys get if from.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Thank you for giving us Alice and Jasper's background. I love Alice. She is determined to get what she wants. Great Job!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

I love it. The kids get it from some one right.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

bloody hell that carol really did a number on poor jasper i totaly get where alice is coming from,  but jasper went to town with alice's punishments i dont think i fully understand this bdsm stuff sometimes cause as jasper husband alice has a right to be upset but she gets punished for it, would jasper prefer her not to care and say nothing, i loke to see them make up after, thanks tracy

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

loved that chapter!, yup Alice really needed to be reminded.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

wow those two are very verbal and very rough and hot, very nice chapter, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

great chapter, dr c and mrs cullen how very sexy they are and the games they play, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

great chapter alice must really love jasper even before they were together she devoted herself to him, even through all that punishment she remains devoted to him, thanks tracy

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it!  It pushes the edges and brings us deep inside Jasper and Alice's commitment to each other.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I love the outtakes since they add so much sub story and yet because they are outtakes, they don't detract from the flow of the original story.  Good job!

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