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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:17 PM Title: S: High School Reunion

well im glad she told them off! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: greeneyedgirl813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:27 PM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

I want them to walk in and everybody gets really quiet and stares... Great Story! It keeps getting better and better!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 11:03 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

That was great I am happy she is going to have another baby and Em will be the perfect age when the baby is born.  I wonder how she will take the news???  The reunion should be very interesting cant wait.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 6:39 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

Awww... Another little Bella and Edward!!!! Ican't wait to see what happens at the reunion...

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:12 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

only 3 chapters left..well that's quit sad..i love this story...

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:52 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

Thank you for this chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:42 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

hmmm reunion huh.  that ought to be interesting.

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:31 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

what an emotional story with just the right amount of lemon to keep it fun! thank you for sharing with us, your adoring public

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 1:42 AM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

I am so glad they are pregnant again.  I can't wait to see how things go at the reunion.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 9:32 PM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 9:27 PM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

Gelix-  Yea!  This chapter was great!!!  I'm with you can''t wait for next Saturday the 16th "The Reunion" chapter, I have been patiently awaiting for it.  Gonna love seeing James and Jessica and all those mean folks, finally letting them see and know that Edward wound up with Bella Swan the girl he tormented all through his HS years because he was so infatuated with her it scared him, and instead of doing something he treated her horribly.  Yes, this is going to be a awesome chapter.  But you know the one thing you have to take from this story though is NOT the bad that Edward and the other's did, it was about Bella's ability to LOVE HIM inspite of those painful memories.  Our Bella is some girl that's for sure.

 

Have  great week and also really loving "WLHC" that is really a great read too. 

Till next update

Kathyxoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 9:13 PM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

aw em is so adorable!!!! i loved it and how edward and bella stick through everything thick and thin!!! and they're pregnant can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 8:30 PM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

YEA!! Another baby! I have to say though I can't wait for the reunion especially to see how Edward treats Bella among all the people who helped him make fun of her. I know it will be different bc he's in love with her but I still can't wait to see. :D I love how Patient Edward is with grouchy Bella. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:50 PM Title: S: A Shocking Surprise

*squee*!! a baby!!! and a reunion!! woot! 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:41 AM Title: S: First day in school

*squee* it's baby makin time! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:54 AM Title: S: First day in school

Edward is so excited want to make baby lol.  Em sounds so cute.  I remember first days and no matter how many I go through I think each one is the toughest day I ever had and I am usual heart broken because my baby had the best day ever. LOL

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:16 AM Title: S: First day in school

I love Emily she is adorable as well as lily and Rachel!!! I loved the pill flushing and hat they're having another baby!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:50 AM Title: S: First day in school

I am not looking forward to sending my son to school for the first time. I can't believe that Bella is finally giving in on having another baby.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 3:13 AM Title: S: First day in school

I'll be here! that chapter was cute not to mention hot as hell. I love how everytime Bella tells her something she says Daddy? bc she wants his say too. lol and I know all about that pacifer thing. My little sister had hers until she was 4. She would not get rid of it to save her life. I can't wait for another chapter thanks again bye

Reviewer: kelliwelli Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:56 AM Title: Husband and Wife

i wanna be married to Edward!  Good job...

Reviewer: zaan1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 6:34 PM Title: Time goes by

Im being bad at reviewing every chapter, but im getting sooo into this story i just want to get to the next chapter, Just know that i plan to finish this story, when I get into good ones like this i tend to finish them in one or two nights, I will review the last chapter so you will know i was true to my word,  You are a great writer, keep it up.

Cheers

Suzane

Reviewer: zaan1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 3:49 PM Title: Road trip

awesome chapter, I cant wait to get going onthe rest, i can foresee some fun stuff coming up. ok thanx.

Reviewer: zaan1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 3:08 PM Title: Purple Nurple

hey.

Cool story, keep it up.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:46 AM Title: S: First day in school

awwww first day of school is always hard.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 10:33 PM Title: S: First day in school

aww im happy shes finally ready! keep the chapters comming! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 10:11 PM Title: S: First day in school

Geliix -

This was awesome, it so cute when Edward was being the overprotective parent and not wanting his little girl to grow up and go to Pre School; that was cute.  Little girls do have a way of wrapping Daddy's around their little fingers don't they!?

I think she is preggers already.  I love that you are doing these little Add-Ons to the story, and your right can't wait to see the Forks HS Reunion, that should be interesting to say the least.

Can't wait to read more stories by you and will keep watching for them.

LatersBB

Kathy

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:49 PM Title: S: First day in school

I have really enjoyed this story. Thank you for the journey

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:05 PM Title: S: First day in school

I love how their little family is doing so well.  I hope they get to add to it soon.  Great job...thanks so much!!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:55 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

I love it!  I wonder what Alice and Jasper were doing.  I hope they were getting a baby! 

Edward and Bella have come so far.  I am glad they are so happy and things are going so well for them.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: HerAmberEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:15 PM Title: Breakdown

His bathroom is bigger then the Blue Banana!

 

"Asshole, theres a word."  JUST ONE OF MY FAVORITE MOVIES EVER!  Pretty Woman.  :)  It was on TBS last month, watched it back to back lol.

 

Fantastic story so far.  "Im lovin' it."  And I'm feelin' the big mac with a side of fries and a coke right now... my fat ass thanks you SO much.

Reviewer: Edwards lover Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:04 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

awesome.......................

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 11:53 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

Loved it and cant wait for more.  Edward is the most caring man ever please dont let him change.  Have a wonderful holiday and I cant wait to hear from you next year.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:57 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

Great chapter!  Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 5:08 AM Title: Epilogue nr 1

Well it is good that Bella got her wish and Emily got Edward's green eyes! Oh and Alice and Jasper are getting a baby too it is wonderful to see that they are getting what they wanted too.

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:43 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

Aww babe!

This is a sadness MTTE is over!....can't wait for the sequel!!!

I loved this chapter!

Since this is the last chapter until next year i want to wish you a merry xmas and a happy new year!

Much love girly,

xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I hope you'll get a great holiday! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:33 AM Title: Epilogue nr 1

NO BRING ON THE SEQUEL!!! lol I meant you can bet I'm going to be there. no saying bye to those love birds. lol thanks again and the whole thing with Edward and Emily's eye color is too freaking cute. :D thanks see ya next year :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:06 AM Title: Epilogue nr 1

Is it January yet?

Author's Response:

Nope, sorry, but SOON! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:15 AM Title: Epilogue nr 1

Hmmm, you have in wondering what you could put in the next couple of chapter, it just seems so complete, that these two have made it through the hard times and come out on top.

I cant wait to read.

Love this chapter like all the rest.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

It is complete, but I just wanted a few more things in there. The reunion being one of them. I think that's a big important thing..

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

It was so cute and I can't wait for more Emily is so adorable as well as lily! I'm hapy that Alice and Jasper are getting their baby!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:12 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

awww  daddy e is so cute



Author's Response:

Yeah, he is :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:12 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

I am so excited your doing a sequel!!! Jumping up and down clapping!!!!!  Merry Christmas and HAPPY New Year!    Loved the Epilouge!!! thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I'm excited, too! :D

I hope you have a great Holiday too!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:31 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

I know the sequel will be harder but can you tell me how many chapters they will be apart please loved it very much and thanks for sharing this with us....



Author's Response:

I'm not sure if I understood correctly, but it'll be five chapters and they'll start updating on January 2nd 2011 and then each Sunday as usual :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:40 PM Title: Epilogue nr 1

leave it to edward to want her to pop out more kids already! cant wait to start reading the sequel ! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, but he's not the one who'll be pushing the baby out ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Alone Time

I am glad that they got to go out and get a little time for themselves. Alice is an amazing person and it had to be hard for her to have kept that from all of her friends but now she is going to have all of her friends to support her and Jasper as they try to get a baby of their own.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Alone Time

Great chapter!!!

I'm so glad that Alice finally talked to Rose and Bella.

The date/night away b/t Edward and Bella was perfect.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:41 AM Title: Alone Time

They needed to reconect that was great and you do a wonderful job with lemon's.  Now we understand Alice thanks.  Me and my husband were not able to have kids either so we got into foster care figuring that we would try to help as many kids as we could after adopting 4 boys and in the prosess of adopting our little girl  the kids we wanted to help have helped us also.  We have had a total of 20 kids placed with us and adopt 5 it is cool because some of the kids still keep in contact and call me mom still it breaks my heart each time one is either sent home or move to another family I hope each time it is for the best

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:48 AM Title: Alone Time

I think they did pretty good being away from their daughter for the first time.  I also think their time in the hotel was awesome.  I figured Alice and Jasper were have trouble conceiving.  I understand how how that is.  I love this story.  Great job as always...thanks so much!

Reviewer: SecretWisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:39 AM Title: Alone Time

awww!!!  I don't want this story to be over!

Reviewer: lmfirst Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:39 AM Title: Alone Time

I know this is just a story, but you should know for future reference that adoptees and their families don't use language like "save one" as adoption is about building a family, not rescue- some get very offended by it ("babies aren't pets, we don't "save" them), but not all. Also to refer to a biological child as "one of my own" is also hurtful, as an adoptive parent will tell you that their child IS their "own" even if they have bio kids.

I've enjoyed your story, I just wanted to tell you this as it was a bit jarring to me to read, even though it is common enough to hear, sadly. This way you'll know if you include adoption in a future story :-)

Congrats on the job and getting to the end of your fic!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:14 AM Title: Alone Time

Wonderful chapter as always, loved the lemon.

Fiorella

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Alone Time

Wonderful chapter!  I'm glad Edward and Bella got some alone time - yeah!!!!

Thank you for the update and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 9:31 PM Title: Alone Time

Hi Angelica;

Loved the chapter, it was sweet how both Rose and Bella tried to be reassuring to Alice, bless her heart 2 years she had been trying.  Glad we finally found out what was going on with our littl Pixie! 

When Edward arrived home to Emily still crying and Bella at her wits end, really brought back memories for this mother of a 27 yr old.... Yes, someday's they do that, and you do feel like your a HORRIFIC parent.  Edward handled it very nicely!! Good job in writing that! 

I really had to chuckle at the weekend away for them, reminds me of Rose and Emmett's weekend.  However, when Edward had his mother send him a text pic well that was just PRICELESS!!!!! 

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope that you stay inspired with your writing and bring us more lively and loving stories of our EDWARD AND BELLA.

Hope your new job is going well, do not evny you the hour however, but one would certainly hope that means you get home early too! 

Until the Epilogue have a great week ahead and Happy Holiday's to you and yours!!!!

Reviewer: swirling88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Alone Time

As great as every other chapter! so sad it's going to end =(

thanks for the story!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 8:35 PM Title: Alone Time

Boo to getting up at 4 oclock. lol but YEA on this chapter. :D I loved it. Hot HOT welcome back to marriage sex and both Edward and Bella being missing parents. what's not to love? keep up the great work and I can't wait till the sequel. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 8:09 PM Title: Alone Time

Inlove that they finally got some alone time and that Alice talked! I feel so bad for her! Cantnwait for more!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:22 PM Title: Alone Time

very sweet. The Chinese comment was spot on.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:10 PM Title: Alone Time

well leave it to edward to be disapointed in wearing condoms! but im with her super sperm will make her preggo again!! cant wait till thenext chatper 

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:06 PM Title: Alone Time

Loved it very much and glad they had a good first time after the birth mine was not so fun thanks for sharing and update when you can....

Reviewer: dangergranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:52 PM Title: Vegas

cant wait.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:52 PM Title: Therapy

I hope your job is going well.  I remember school as being about the same.  I am glad that she told him the truth about him being to overprotective

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:08 AM Title: Therapy

Loved it thanks for sharing and update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:31 PM Title: Therapy

Glad ALice finally called

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:33 AM Title: Therapy

I am sure that you are going to be fine at work. It sucks that you were out for a year but great that you are now back. I think that Edward  was being somewhat of a jerk about the whole car thing. I am glad that he gave in to Bella and went out and bought another one because Bella needs to feel that she can go out without having to worry about taking Edward's car.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:04 PM Title: Therapy

Great chapter. I liked how Bella called him out during their little argument. I know it's just part of his personality, but Edward just needs to calm down and stop being so overbearing about what he thinks isn't safe. It's not good for any of them and will only cause him grief w/ Bella.

I'm excited to find out what has been bothering Alice so much. 

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:35 AM Title: Therapy

Loved the chapter!

Good luck for your job tomorrow!

 

Lot's of love,

xoxoxooxox

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: Therapy

Congrats on getting a job! I'm so proud of you! feel better? not so nervous? good lol poor Bella. James was the dick in that flashback not poor Edward btw is James going to make a reappearance in later chapter? just wondering. I'm so happy for the sequel. EEK!! lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:31 AM Title: Therapy

I love how these two have grown over this story, I know they still have a long way to go.  I am glad that Bella is not angry with him anymore about the past.

It is good to see that they can leave it there, not a lot of people can.

I hope your first day at work went smoothly and you have settled in.

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Fiorella

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:04 AM Title: Therapy

I can't wait to hear what Alice has to say and the flashback was cool and relatable! Emily is so cute, good luck tomorrow! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:53 AM Title: Therapy

I am so glad Alice is ready to talk.  I hope she and Jasper have not had bad news or something. 

I can understand Edward being overprotective, we have all come to understand that about him, but Bella can't be expected to stay home all the time if he is at work.  He can't make her depend on him that much. 

Great job...thanks so much!  I hope tomorrow goes well for you!

 

Reviewer: toyscowboys Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:11 PM Title: Therapy

great chapter love it as usual. as for the job, well I know how you feel, I havent worked in over a year and I get very nervous just going to an interview. you will be just fine, lol just remember to breathe

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:10 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

Bella is a good Mom.  She can take care of her baby by herself and she proved it to herself.  Everyone else knew she could do it.  I am sure it is scary, but it is scary for everyone at first.  She has come so far.  I love seeing how much she has grown.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 10:54 PM Title: Therapy

Good chapter. Its sad that their tale is nearly over.

Hope all goes well with your work tomorrow!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 9:12 PM Title: On our own

I love it as always.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:52 PM Title: Therapy

Great Chapter, you never fail to capture the interest of your readers that's for sure.  Very happy to know there is a Sequel coming next year.  I hope you get to finally address James in the same manner or similar manner as Jessica was addressed.  Anyway just want you to know that I love the story and can't wait for more of the story, very excited to hear from our Lovely Alice! 

Enjoy the new job and most of all enjoy being in the workforce once more, I'm sure it will be an adjustment, however, we all know you will be great... No nerves, no nerves...  your boss and co-workers are just people, and hey! who knows they may be one of your Fans of your wonderful writing talents!!!  :-) 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:40 PM Title: Therapy

well im happy that he saw the theripest too ! cant wait to see whathalice has to say now1

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:41 AM Title: Halfway to fifty

It is the saddest thing ever having to leave your child for the first time. I did that with my son to go to a baby shower that my mom was having for me only to have a phone call half way through it telling me that he had to go back to the hospital because his bellirubin levels were too high. It was the worst day ever!!

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:15 PM Title: Time goes by

i am so in love with this story...great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the chapters as well!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

hmmm so when is alice gonna spill.     Great chapter



Author's Response:

In chapter 44! ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:24 AM Title: Halfway to fifty

I dont ever want this story to end it is one of my fav's but so is your other one.  Bella has came along way and Edward is every women's dream.  As alway cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Neither do I. It's going to be a sad day when I mark it as complete...

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Edwards lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:13 AM Title: Halfway to fifty

I liked it alot........



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:14 AM Title: Halfway to fifty

why on earth would you read a story and ask repeatedly how many chapters you had left? who cares. read and enjoy. this story is amazing especially with Edward's vulgar potty mouth mixed with daddyness. too cute. keep up the great work. thanks again bye p.s. the best line: you pumped your tits? lol too funny thanks bye



Author's Response:

I don't know, you have to ask the ones who asked ^^

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:57 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

I loved Emily! They make such a cute family can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Yeah, she's a real cutie-pie! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:07 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

Great chapter!  Poor Alice - she needs a baby too :)

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:47 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

Great chapter, I love how things are coming along for them. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:40 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

Well I hope in those 8 chapters they are together and working on things instead of apart and longing to be together loved it all very much and update when you can thanks.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

well i hope anything dosent happen with them! keep the chatpers commign



Author's Response:

We'll see what's in store for them!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:28 PM Title: Halfway to fifty

Loved the chapter!! As always!  Very hooked on this lovely story. Yeah the cliffy ending of the chapter was a little (how should I say, umm) frustrating!!  **chuckle, chuckle**  I'm still trying to figure out what is wrong with Alice, wondering if she has found out that is not able to have children or something.  Perhaps she miscarried and didn't share with the girls because of the timing or something.  I just will wait and see what you have in mind and in store for us. 

I was wondering how Edward was going to react to the Therapy Session, because after all HE DOES have a major part in what has caused her insecurities.  This should be good. 

Thanks for the chapters you have given us as well as the forthcoming ones.  I know once this is totally complete this will certainly be one of those stories you go back and re-read over and over.  Thanks again  Happy Holiday's!!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! :D

Alice will tell us her story very soon, so you don't have to wonder for much longer...

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:37 PM Title: Secrets

loving the story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Secrets

I Love your story and want more  on to he next chapter

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:51 PM Title: I love you

I have to say this was a fantastic chapter, I had been waiting for Bella to tell him.  Anyway, when Edward asked about Aunt Flow at the table I seriously thought I was going to spit my drink all over the computer... that was classic and hysterical...  Love Love Love it!!!  Please stay encouraged and motivated   

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 11:41 PM Title: The Past

That was awesome!!  I loved it when he thought she was going to Jump and he tells her not to leave him because he loves her.  OMGosh I couldn't get over her telling him she wanted a kiss, and the sweet sorrowful story of Emily and the ALS.  Very hard chapter to write I am sure.  Then for Edward to go off on Jessica well, that was priceless  his "call girl"  hahahaha!!!  Fabulous Chapter  Thanks

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:45 PM Title: Goodbye

okay just read the AN and yes, yes, yes!!  I hope its the chapter I have been waiting for too.  But let me just say before we move on to that chapter that the inner action with Bella Edward and Jessica was so cute!!! Loved it.  I am sure it was very empowering for Bella!  Great story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 9:42 PM Title: Time goes by

Okay Okay  so I got engrossed in the reading and forgot to post after each chapter.  Im really loving the story.  Ready for some more warming up with Bella and Edward, but I am not worried I know it's going to come, am I right?  Sure I'm right!!  Love your work and can't wait to read the rest.  

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:42 PM Title: On our own

Great chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:55 PM Title: Road trip

Yes, Yes, Yes!!! Loving this story!!!!  One year here we go!!! Bless the 20 questions.  Yeah, NO I didn't think they had sex, but very curious as to what was going on when she was crying that time Edward saw her.  Hummmmmm

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:23 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen

LOL  I love Edward!!!!  "I now realized I had a 24 hour drive back to Seattle alone with Bella. A huge smile spread across my face."  You just have to love a mind that thinks this way, your a wonderful writer and I hope that you stay motivated with this story and other's in the future.  Great story line!!!

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:28 PM Title: Purple Nurple

OMG!!  I forgot to post on the last Chapter so I will cover both Chapters here.  Our lovely Bella is true to form "she just doesn't see herself very clearly" does she?  I think thats what we all love about Bella she doesn't know she is a beauty.  Now for EPOV  well Eddie Eddie Eddie dude you were hanging all over some chick and drooling over Bella.. Interesting.  Can't wait for the next Chapter.  Sorry really enjoy your writing style and love the synopsis of this story, seems pretty interesting and thanks for giving us all the chance to read it. Keep up the wondering writing. Happy Thanksgiving

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:05 PM Title: Vegas

Oh I knew you were from another country! Not by your English, I could just feel it! I was going to say if you celebrate it but I didn't wan't to seem weird! Yeahh it is Thanksgiving on Thursday, pilgrims and native american indians and what not :)

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:28 PM Title: On our own

Marvalous as usual!!  You ROCK!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so freaking much! :D

xx
Gelix

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