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Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm so confused!!

 

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

Jost a question...how can you ohave a half child? You would either be father to the child or not. Just a little confused is all.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2017 4:38 AM Title: Outtake

Sad to see it go withput a glimpse into King Edward

and Queen Isabella's lives on the throne with children

of their own ajd the other character's comimg and goings,

but it was a lovely story!

 

Jasper/Mordred is a complex character and I am glad

you gave us this final letter.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

ok,

i am convinced Jasper is somehow "Emmet" or Mordred.

when he said he wished he loved his mother when speaking

to Edward...and that she was not ill when he told Rose that

she was...

then there is this weird thing with his eyes....

well, will keep on reading...

love your period piece...intrigue, love, mystery, mystics, fighting, knights,

king, queen, ladies...whats not to like?

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

so... is this "Emmet"?

Was he supposedly killed by the bear? and he is speaking of

Rose the "Blondie"?

Since he was placed with Brandons the first 12(?) years was he then taken back

by his evil mother but made it seem like he was killed by a bear?

ahhhh....intriguing....

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:08 AM Title: Outtake

I have never read a Rose/Jasper story before.  It was great...Thanks - Xanath

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 39

Golden orbs???? Edwarrrrdddddd...immortal???

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Emmmmeeetttttt!!!!!

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

I think jasper is mordred and he's speaking of rose...gotta keep reading

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 11:01 PM Title: Outtake

great job I will check out your others

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 55

an excellent story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 53

has been great

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 51

of course King Athur might come back immortal right?



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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 55

Amazing ending :) Looking forward to more from you in the future :)

Reviewer: Vampress Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy this story. Period pieces are some of my favourites and I love that you stick to one character POV per chapter so we get everyone's POV but don't get whiplash from jumping from different POV's. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update!



Author's Response:

Hi Vampress!  Thanks for the compliments!  I don't mind other POVs, but I do when there are multiple ones per chapter.  Like you said, whiplash. 

So glad you are enjoying the story.  Chapter 55 will be up by the weekend.  Here is your preview:

 

“Riley Swan, you are here today for valiant conduct against an enemy when Camelot was under attack.  The Knights of the Round Table have unanimously decided that your efforts have earned you the title.  Are you willing to accept knighthood and exercise it to the best of your abilities?”

“Yes, your highness,” he said and looked up at me.  His brown eyes threw me for a second as Isabella flitted into my head.  But I had to keep focus; I couldn’t mess up on my first day.

“Very well then.”  I lifted the sword from his right shoulder and raised it above his head, letting it rest briefly on his left shoulder before moving it back to the right.”  “Arise, Sir Riley Swan of Camlann.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 54

Pimping yourself out!  Toot your horn!  Good chapter. I hope I don't have to start worrying about them not accepting Isabella as queen.  Sigh,

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary!  No, Isabella will be accepted.  Edward won't give them a choice.  :)

Thanks as always for reading.  The next chapter will be up by the weekend.  Here is your preview:

 

“Riley Swan, you are here today for valiant conduct against an enemy when Camelot was under attack.  The Knights of the Round Table have unanimously decided that your efforts have earned you the title.  Are you willing to accept knighthood and exercise it to the best of your abilities?”

“Yes, your highness,” he said and looked up at me.  His brown eyes threw me for a second as Isabella flitted into my head.  But I had to keep focus; I couldn’t mess up on my first day.

“Very well then.”  I lifted the sword from his right shoulder and raised it above his head, letting it rest briefly on his left shoulder before moving it back to the right.”  “Arise, Sir Riley Swan of Camlann.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 53

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, MaryMary!  Do you think Rosalie will have a boy or girl?

The next chappie should be up Monday.  Here is your preview:

 

“NO!” he yelled.  I looked at him in surprise.  His golden eyes had darkened to an amber color.  I could tell he was upset.  “I refuse to have you go through what I went through.”

I raised an eyebrow at him.  “Shouldn’t it be my decision?  You just talked about not getting the choice; shouldn’t I?”

He stared at me.  “You’d want to?”

I nodded.  “Edward, you were on the brink of death; that’s why everything was so bad.  Morgan has already promised me that it can be done easily.  ‘You would be the first one not mortally wounded that we would change,’ she told me.  ‘But we can do it.’”

Edward ran a hand through his hair.  “As your King, I can order you to not.”

I narrowed my eyes.  “And as your girlfriend, I can make life in the bedroom for you very difficult.”

Reviewer: Pcdogmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 53

Jasper/Mordred is an immortal now? Is Rosalie pregnant?

Author's Response:

He is immortal in the fact that he is a ghost.  He will always be following her and she will see him throughout the rest of her life.  As for her pregnancy, I wanted the readers to draw their own conclusion.  In my head, she is, but if someone doesn't want to see that, it is completely fine.

The next chappie should be up Monday.  Here is your preview:

 

“NO!” he yelled.  I looked at him in surprise.  His golden eyes had darkened to an amber color.  I could tell he was upset.  “I refuse to have you go through what I went through.”

I raised an eyebrow at him.  “Shouldn’t it be my decision?  You just talked about not getting the choice; shouldn’t I?”

He stared at me.  “You’d want to?”

I nodded.  “Edward, you were on the brink of death; that’s why everything was so bad.  Morgan has already promised me that it can be done easily.  ‘You would be the first one not mortally wounded that we would change,’ she told me.  ‘But we can do it.’”

Edward ran a hand through his hair.  “As your King, I can order you to not.”

I narrowed my eyes.  “And as your girlfriend, I can make life in the bedroom for you very difficult.”

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 53

well now I am confused! LOL Can't wait to see the next one!



Author's Response:

Perhaps I can help.  I am implying that Rose is pregnant with Mordred/Jasper's child and Morgan has figured it out.  Mordred/Jasper is now a ghost and he knows that the woman he loves is expecting.  He will continue to appear to her.

Hope this helps.  The next one will be up Monday.  Here is your preview:

 

“NO!” he yelled.  I looked at him in surprise.  His golden eyes had darkened to an amber color.  I could tell he was upset.  “I refuse to have you go through what I went through.”

I raised an eyebrow at him.  “Shouldn’t it be my decision?  You just talked about not getting the choice; shouldn’t I?”

He stared at me.  “You’d want to?”

I nodded.  “Edward, you were on the brink of death; that’s why everything was so bad.  Morgan has already promised me that it can be done easily.  ‘You would be the first one not mortally wounded that we would change,’ she told me.  ‘But we can do it.’”

Edward ran a hand through his hair.  “As your King, I can order you to not.”

I narrowed my eyes.  “And as your girlfriend, I can make life in the bedroom for you very difficult.”

Reviewer: LissClair Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 52

this is the last installment from Alice?! (note the sniffles)

Even though this is the last one from Alice's POV  it was beautiful... I'll miss her.

 

can't wait for the next chapter, hearing what Rosalie has to say should be very interesting....

 

ps. All hail King Edward :-P (and Princess Alice)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 52

Well Alice & Jacob Princess & night.

Rosalie and Riley

King Edward & Queen Isabella

I hope i have this right.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary!  Yes, you are correct on that order.  Thanks for reading, the next chapter should be up Wednesday:

 

Edward has also promised to knight Riley.  He said that his actions during the last attack were risky, but saved the lives of other Knights.  For that, he was to be commended.  Everyone was so impressed by Riley’s swordsmanship that a unanimous decision was made to knight him.  Again, I couldn’t help it.  I threw myself at Riley; hugging him and wishing heartfelt congratulations.  He kissed me passionately then and said that night would be a special night.

I shudder to think what he meant of that.

Don’t get me wrong; I do want to give myself to Riley in every way, just not yet.  We have only been seeing each other for a short time.  After Mordred, I am not ready to give neither my heart nor my body to just anyone.  I also don’t want to cloud my judgment now that I know how amazing lovemaking between two people can be.

Well, two people who are in love.  You aren’t in love with Riley.

Reviewer: LissClair Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 51

I almost want to cry. I had an idea something like this would happen, but it was still a great surprise. Edward's reaction (and Alice's) were spot on, I don't think anyone could have done it better. Morgan Le Fay, you ask? How do I put it...humh...amazing, very well portrayed, shocking, fabulous, that sum up for you?

 

Only four chapter left? I hope you know that you just ruined my day ;-)

Can't wait, even if I don't want it to end.



Author's Response:

Thanks, LissClair!  I don't want the story to end either, I feel so connected to the characters.  But it's run its course.  I may post Mordred's letter as an outtake if you are interested in reading it.

Here is your preview:

 

He pressed his lips to mine again forcefully.  I kissed him back with all my might as my hands began to wander.  Since his shirt was already off, my hands trailed down his gorgeous torso and rested at the top of his pants.  I tugged slightly, making him fully aware of my intentions.

He stilled my hand.  “Are you sure about this?” he asked me, looking deep into his eyes.  I saw fear and worry, but also desire, hope and above all, love, swirling in his dark brown orbs.

I nodded.  “I want you Jacob.  Tonight.  It is a night of new beginnings.”

Without a word he got off the bed and removed his pants.  I rose up and began untying the ribbons on my nightdress.  I watched his eyes as the fabric fell slowly from my neck to my shoulders, to the top part of my chest.  When just a little cleavage was showing, I spoke.

“Are you sure about this?”  He looked terrified suddenly.  I found it funny.  I don’t think he expected me to take the lead.
Silly boy.  I am a princess; I know how to take control.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 50

Well Mordred died and so did Jasper. Treason is costly.

 

 



Author's Response:

That it is!  I apologize for the delay in sending my preview.  I hope I will be forgiven after reading it and chapter 51 (up Wednesday):

 

“I was only made aware of the prophecy after my nephew was born.  He was around five at the time and still so innocent.  I saw what he was capable of once he reached adulthood and feared for my own children.  I promised my husband that I would do whatever it took to protect them.  And so began my lie.”

My eyes flew to Edward and I took a deep breath.  “My husband was Carlisle Cullen.”

As I suspected, Edward’s eyes narrowed.  “You lie.  He was married to Esme Cullen, my mother.”

I ran a hand over my face, casting my mask that I knew so well.  My eyes changed to blue and my hair instantly turned from blond to caramel brown.  I heard a sharp intake of breath from everyone.  “Hello, son.”

Reviewer: Belladonna88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 50

Wow...I didn't see that coming. I love this story and look forward to your updates.

 

This is a really great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Belladonna!  I am glad you are enjoying it.  I'm sorry it took so long to update.  The next chappie will be up Wednesday, but perhaps this preview will help:

 

“I was only made aware of the prophecy after my nephew was born.  He was around five at the time and still so innocent.  I saw what he was capable of once he reached adulthood and feared for my own children.  I promised my husband that I would do whatever it took to protect them.  And so began my lie.”

My eyes flew to Edward and I took a deep breath.  “My husband was Carlisle Cullen.”

As I suspected, Edward’s eyes narrowed.  “You lie.  He was married to Esme Cullen, my mother.”

I ran a hand over my face, casting my mask that I knew so well.  My eyes changed to blue and my hair instantly turned from blond to caramel brown.  I heard a sharp intake of breath from everyone.  “Hello, son.”

Reviewer: LissClair Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 50

OMG! That's all I have to say. Wait...wait...nope, that sums it up.

can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Haha!  Great answer!  Glad that you were surprised by the chapter.  The next one will be up on Wednesday.

Here is your preview:

 

“I was only made aware of the prophecy after my nephew was born.  He was around five at the time and still so innocent.  I saw what he was capable of once he reached adulthood and feared for my own children.  I promised my husband that I would do whatever it took to protect them.  And so began my lie.”

My eyes flew to Edward and I took a deep breath.  “My husband was Carlisle Cullen.”

As I suspected, Edward’s eyes narrowed.  “You lie.  He was married to Esme Cullen, my mother.”

I ran a hand over my face, casting my mask that I knew so well.  My eyes changed to blue and my hair instantly turned from blond to caramel brown.  I heard a sharp intake of breath from everyone.  “Hello, son.”

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

Oh my goodness! Who is it? Um, not jasper because i think he is fighting the king, no?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

wow now I am even more confused... but hopefully all will be revealed soon! :)

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 48

How does jasper the into this?!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 48

Let me see Jacob and Edward views huh. Well then who will you kill off?  Alice? Jacob? Edward can not be killed. Perhaps Isabella.  Rosalie? hmm Riley?

 

I just don't know.

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 47

she isnt moving on she is settling and yay for emmett that body is perfect for him.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 47

Great chapter! So excited to read more :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, tigger!  Chapter 48 will be up tomorrow or Monday.  Here is your preview:

 

Shaking my head, I retrieved it and sat down on my makeshift bed.  There was chill in the air, being March, and I wrapped the blanket around me.  I lit a candle and reached for my messenger bag.  Inside it, I took out ink and a quill.  I opened the journal, dipped the quill in the ink and began to write.

I wasn’t writing just anything.  Call it a confession of sins.  I was pouring my heart out for the first time ever, letting it all out on paper for the world to see.  I knew that some would see it as a sign of weakness, but I didn’t care.

“If you are reading this, then it is obvious I did not survive the battle at Camlann….”

The quill scratched the parchment lightly as the words took over.  I don’t think I could have stopped if I wanted to.  And I didn’t.  I needed to get it all out on paper.  She deserved that.

 

Reviewer: tameka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 46




Author's Response:

Hi Tameka!  Did you mean to include something in your review?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 45

It will be fine. Life without him was awful. She will love him in any state.



Author's Response:

You are correct, MaryMary.  She takes it well, very well.  Thanks, as always, for reading.  Here is your preview:

 

I closed my eyes to clear my head.  Edward had just unloaded a lot of information on me and I needed to process it.  I wasn’t sure if I completely believed him either.

He tilted his head to the side.  “I can see you don’t believe me.  How about a test to prove I’m not lying?”

“Test?” I said, my brow furrowing.

He nodded and released my hands.  He stood up quickly and removed his sword from his belt.  Then he handed the butt of it to me.

“I want you to stab me,” he said.

Reviewer: Pcdogmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 44

I don't understand why Riley would be upset if Edward looked after Rosalie unless you mean THEY would become romantic. Good chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi!  Sorry it took me so long to respond.  No, apparently I didn't write that right.  Jacob wants Edward to replace him as a brother in case he dies.  He didn't want anything romantic between them, but he wanted to make sure his sister was protected.  Who better than his best friend?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 44

Great chapter!!! Have a good trip... excited to see the next one! :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 44

somehow I did not understand Jacob. Was he trying to split up Isabella and Edward and put Edward with Rose?

 

Jacob pisses me off.  He is never content to leave others to their lives.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 43

:) Great chapter... Poor Riley..... hopefully he is ok...

 excited to see more!



Author's Response:

Hello, Tigger!  Sorry I'm so late in replying.  Riley will survive.  If Mordred wanted him dead, he would have been.

Here is your preview:

 

I laid back on my pillow and shut my eyes.  I didn’t want to think about Camlann.  So many lives were at stake.  The two most important to me, Rosalie and Alice, depend on me to come out of it alive.  I cannot guarantee them that, no matter how much I want to.  That is the bitch about war; you never know who will survive.  All I can do is pray that God will be merciful.

Or Morgan at the very least.

I sighed.  She pulled me aside the other day and told me that she had created a spell for us; a spell that would help protect us.  It would be in potion form and we must drink it at the right time.  If we do it too soon, it will wear off and make us vulnerable.  If we take it too late, it won’t kick in.  There was a specific time and only certain Knights are receiving the potion.  Bors and I were the only ones.

I found it odd that Edward was not.

 

Reviewer: LissClair Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 43

Can't wait to read more. I too am going on vacation and hope to read more when I get back.

 

ps. Have a fun and safe vacay.



Author's Response:

Hi LissClair!  Thanks for the well-wishes.  Hope your vacation was good too.  I am sorry about the delay in responding.  Here is your preview:

 

I laid back on my pillow and shut my eyes.  I didn’t want to think about Camlann.  So many lives were at stake.  The two most important to me, Rosalie and Alice, depend on me to come out of it alive.  I cannot guarantee them that, no matter how much I want to.  That is the bitch about war; you never know who will survive.  All I can do is pray that God will be merciful.

Or Morgan at the very least.

I sighed.  She pulled me aside the other day and told me that she had created a spell for us; a spell that would help protect us.  It would be in potion form and we must drink it at the right time.  If we do it too soon, it will wear off and make us vulnerable.  If we take it too late, it won’t kick in.  There was a specific time and only certain Knights are receiving the potion. 

Bors and I were the only ones.

I found it odd that Edward was not.

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 42

creepy but is not riley:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 41

Great couple of chapters...still trying to get caught up on my reading..LOL ... RL has been crazy lately :) Can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 40

I really love this story! Please update soon! I can't wait for their reunion!



Author's Response:

The update probably won't be until the weekend; too many things going on.  :(  But there will be a reunion...and a kiss.  :)

Here is your preview:

 

When we reached the Great Hall, I saw Alice and Rosalie squeal and run to Edward, nearly knocking him down in the process.  He laughed as he hugged both of them.

“I missed you too,” he said.  Rosalie broke from him and threw her arms around me, giggling excitedly.

“I can’t believe he’s back!” she exclaimed.  I laughed at her excitement and hugged her back.

“I know.  I’m still processing it myself.”

Suddenly I felt her freeze.  I pulled away and noticed that she wasn’t looking at me, but outside in the distance.  I followed her gaze and sucked in a breath.

Reviewer: Belladonna88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 40

I love this story!

I get do excited when I see a new chapter and can't wait for each additional chapter. I am glad that Edward has returned,and am anxious to see how everyone will eact to his reappearance. Trying to figure out what is up with Jasper..can't wait to see how it plays out.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Belladonna!  SO glad you are enjoying it.  Chapter 41 won't post until the weekend; I haven't been able to write and that pushes everything back.  :(

Here is your preview:

 

When we reached the Great Hall, I saw Alice and Rosalie squeal and run to Edward, nearly knocking him down in the process.  He laughed as he hugged both of them.

“I missed you too,” he said.  Rosalie broke from him and threw her arms around me, giggling excitedly.

“I can’t believe he’s back!” she exclaimed.  I laughed at her excitement and hugged her back.

“I know.  I’m still processing it myself.”

Suddenly I felt her freeze.  I pulled away and noticed that she wasn’t looking at me, but outside in the distance.  I followed her gaze and sucked in a breath.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

OH!!! yay Edward is ok!! :) Can't wait to see more!



Author's Response:

Lol.  I've been getting that a lot lately.  Have you noticed that his eyes are different?  You'll find out in the next chappie which should post soon.

Here is your preview:

 

My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 39

YAY!!! EDWARD IS BAAACK! Can't wait for Bella to see him!!! All that faith that he still loves her has paid off!! :) 



Author's Response:

I can guarantee that it will be fine.  She will be a little shocked at first, but who wouldn't be?

Here is your preview:

 

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 39

wow nice:)



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I thought people would like that.  :)

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 39

YAY!!!!! Finally!
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Lol.  Happy?  :D

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thats a divious act to leave on such a clif hanger you know ;)

Can't wait for more.



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Lol.  I know.  The next chappie will be a cliffhanger as well.  You've been warned!  :D

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thankfully he is okay. Edward was hidden for a reason. I guess to find out who was trying to do this.

 



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In a way, yes.  You'll find out a bit in the next chapter as Edward explains what happens.  How do you think Isabella will react?

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 39

woah talk about shocking surprises but i had a feeling the Black Knight was edward How i knew that i don't have a clue Keep writing please

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It was kind-of set up that way.  You knew he had to return at some point and now is the critical time.

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 37

Gasp.

Can't wait to read more



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I watched in horror as the one called Peter raised his sword above his head, twirling it a few times.  Rose opened her eyes and saw the image before her.  Her arms immediately flew in front of her face as to protect herself.

“Peter!” my captor yelled.  The man by the door growled.  The one called Peter just laughed.

“Let this be a lesson to all you women at Camelot,” Peter said.  “You need to learn your place.”  I closed my eyes as his sword began to descend, heading right for Rosalie’s head.

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Date: 28 May 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am still grieving for Edward. He does come back, right? I have no idea what Esme's vision could have been, what is her special experiment in Avalon? Bringing Edward back as an immortal?... :)

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Wait and see.  ;)

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“Yes,” he said.  His golden eyes bore into mine. 

Before I could ask another question, he spoke.  “Where’s Edward?”

That caught me off guard.  I dropped my hand as though it was on fire.  “What?”

“Edward,” he stated.  He looked down at the flower again.  “Where is he?”

The poor boy.  He doesn’t know.

“I’m sorry,” I said, placing my hand over his.  “Edward’s gone.”

He looked up at me.  “Edward’s….Edward’s….” he shook his head.

I gave him a tiny smile.  “Edward’s dead.  He was killed six months ago.”

The boy shook his head again.  My heart ached at his innocence. 

He’s in denial.

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 36

YOU HAVE ON THERE THAT SHE HOPES EDWARD OR ALICE NEVER HAVE TO DEAL WITH THE PAIN OF LOSING SOMEONE THEY LOVE. YOU USED IT IN A PRESENT TENSE AS IF EDWARD IS ALIVE BECAUSE HE IS NEVER THERE WITH HER AS SHE FEELS CARISLE AND OVER JOYED AT WHAT? but the vision she had at last could it be the one where someone hurts her kids? OR EDWARD COMING BACK BEFORE SHE IS READY FOR HIM TO?

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I was wondering if anyone would catch the tense; nice job!  Here is your preview:

 

“Yes,” he said.  His golden eyes bore into mine.  Before I could ask another question, he spoke.  “Where’s Edward?”

That caught me off guard.  I dropped my hand as though it was on fire.  “What?”

“Edward,” he stated.  He looked down at the flower again.  “Where is he?”

The poor boy.  He doesn’t know.

“I’m sorry,” I said, placing my hand over his.  “Edward’s gone.”

He looked up at me.  “Edward’s….Edward’s….” he shook his head.

I gave him a tiny smile.  “Edward’s dead.  He was killed six months ago.”

The boy shook his head again.  My heart ached at his innocence. 

He’s in denial.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 36

Esme is immortal. HMM Bella has a special friend to visit??

 

 



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More like a special friend visits her. Thanks for reading! Here is the preview:

 

“Yes,” he said.  His golden eyes bore into mine.  Before I could ask another question, he spoke.  “Where’s Edward?”

That caught me off guard.  I dropped my hand as though it was on fire.  “What?”

“Edward,” he stated.  He looked down at the flower again.  “Where is he?”

The poor boy.  He doesn’t know.

“I’m sorry,” I said, placing my hand over his.  “Edward’s gone.”

He looked up at me.  “Edward’s….Edward’s….” he shook his head.

I gave him a tiny smile.  “Edward’s dead.  He was killed six months ago.”

The boy shook his head again.  My heart ached at his innocence. 

He’s in denial.

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 35

Great chapter... can't wait to see Esme's chapter and get some more answers! :)



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Hi!  Thanks so much for reading.  One of the answers is in the preview.  Enjoy!

 

I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 35

WoW! Rose and Jazz had an extremely steamy hot night! What happened after though? I cannot wait for Esme! :)

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Didn't they though?  I almost needed a cigarette after writing it...and I don't smoke!  Thanks for r & r!  Here is your preview:

 

I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 35

Super sweet they finally made love! :) glad next chapter is coming up with some answers! Thank you

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One answer is in the preview below.  Enjoy!

 

I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: Pcdogmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 35

Great story. Keep it coming!

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I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 35

hmm. Well we shall see.



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Hi MaryMary!  Jasper is a bad guy, but he's still human.  If only those human emotions didn't get in the way, right?  Thanks for r & r!  Your preview is below:

 

I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

i do not think jasper would do anything to purposly hurt rose. vic is a nitch and james is blind.each chapter the questions just grow *arg*



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Lol.  I promise Chapter 36 has a few answers.  In fact, I have provided one below.  Enjoy!

 

I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 33

yay alice! you go girl. take as much ass you can get when you can get it!

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Date: 19 May 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 32

good for you bella! just like eddie would not want jake to blame himself he would want forgivness for jake.

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Date: 19 May 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 31

jasper is showing his dominant side by pinning her up against the wall.....

can't believe rose stopped all of that to go for a walk with alice and bella!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

is the boy morgan? what new adventures will our group find for themselves next chapter?

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Date: 19 May 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 29

when does eddie come back? and how? what is gonna happen to jasper to drive rose into riley's arms?

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Date: 17 May 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 34

Okay, so I am hoping for the mysteries to start coming out of the fog and make themselves known. I have my theories, but, I am probably absolutely wrong. :) I very much like the story. It does seem to get confusing going from POV to POV and trying to keep all the different aspects of the story straight. However, I am starting to get the hang of it and look forward to see what is to come!

Edward is going to be back. Right? ... :)

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Hi nikon!  Thanks for reading.  I was worried about the different POVs, but it just wouldn't have worked from one perspective.  I am glad that you are enjoying the story.  Chapter 35 should be up today or tomorrow.  Here is your preview:

 

“If he ever touches me again, it will be his last move.”

I froze.  I wasn’t exactly sure what happened, but I knew when Jasper talked like this, he meant business.  He was not a violent man, not by a long shot, but sometimes he had violent tendencies.  Like those men who tried to rape me; what happened to them was not ordinary.  I suddenly feared for James’ life.

I moved towards him again, slowly.  I placed a hand on his shoulder.  That did it.  I watched him return to me.  His eyes softened to blue and he sighed, placing his hand over mine.  He held me like that for a few minutes.  Then he spoke.

“You stop the rage.”

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 34

great chapter! Can't wait to see the next one :)



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Hi tigger!  I am glad you are still reading.  Traffic seems to have slowed down; I'm guessing it's because of Edward.  I hope it picks back up again.

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“If he ever touches me again, it will be his last move.”

I froze.  I wasn’t exactly sure what happened, but I knew when Jasper talked like this, he meant business.  He was not a violent man, not by a long shot, but sometimes he had violent tendencies.  Like those men who tried to rape me; what happened to them was not ordinary.  I suddenly feared for James’ life.

I moved towards him again, slowly.  I placed a hand on his shoulder.  That did it.  I watched him return to me.  His eyes softened to blue and he sighed, placing his hand over mine.  He held me like that for a few minutes.  Then he spoke.

“You stop the rage.”

 

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 34

We should know that she almost raped jazz if she got the chance. But i still want to know about the little boy?! And on alice visions! What about edward's mom's story and her vision how is she taking her son's so called death? Or murder?

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Hi smiling!  Thanks for reviewing.  You'll find out more about Esme in chapter 36; she's actually taken it pretty well.  Your preview is below:

 

I stepped away from the door and approached him slowly.  He didn’t seem to see me; he was looking straight ahead at something that wasn’t there.  The savage fury that was in his eyes a moment ago was gone, but they were still black.  

“If he ever touches me again, it will be his last move.”

I froze.  I wasn’t exactly sure what happened, but I knew when Jasper talked like this, he meant business.  He was not a violent man, not by a long shot, but sometimes he had violent tendencies.  Like those men who tried to rape me; what happened to them was not ordinary.  I suddenly feared for James’ life.

I moved towards him again, slowly.  I placed a hand on his shoulder.  That did it.  I watched him return to me.  His eyes softened to blue and he sighed, placing his hand over mine.  He held me like that for a few minutes.  Then he spoke.

“You stop the rage.”

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 33

okay is that little boy edward??? is that possible?? i dont know what to think of that boy but i want to know more about him. alice vision of mordred is still yet to happen



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That is a good question; it would explain the mischevious smile. 

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I leaned against the wall of the building I was standing beside of and thought back to the Christmas party.  I hadn’t planned on kissing her, but the moment was right.  And God, did it feel so good!  It was like coming home.  Her lips were soft and plump and fit mine perfectly.  And the cute noises she made turned me to putty.  She could have asked me to do anything in that moment and I would have said yes. 

I chuckled to myself.  It was hard to believe that a woman like Alice could be interested in me.  Me, the one who killed his best friend in a jealous rage.  I will never forgive myself for that, but I am learning to make amends with it.  Alice taught me that.  She said that we will pay for our sins when we die and although we should be aware of them now, we can’t change what happens.  All we can do is accept it and move on.

She is so wise.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 33

well now I am confused again I thought for sure that Jasper was Mordred but he can't be with all of them while Mordred was talking to the King at the same time :( bummer.... Stupid Guinevere... poor Alice has to deal with her again... Can't wait to see the next one!



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Kind-of throws a monkey wrench into things, huh?

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I leaned against the wall of the building I was standing beside of and thought back to the Christmas party.  I hadn’t planned on kissing her, but the moment was right.  And God, did it feel so good!  It was like coming home.  Her lips were soft and plump and fit mine perfectly.  And the cute noises she made turned me to putty.  She could have asked me to do anything in that moment and I would have said yes. 

I chuckled to myself.  It was hard to believe that a woman like Alice could be interested in me.  Me, the one who killed his best friend in a jealous rage.  I will never forgive myself for that, but I am learning to make amends with it.  Alice taught me that.  She said that we will pay for our sins when we die and although we should be aware of them now, we can’t change what happens.  All we can do is accept it and move on.

She is so wise.

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Date: 06 May 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 33

awesome chapter ! & a def. yay for alice. cant wait for the next chapter !



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Any idea why James' arm gets broken?

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I leaned against the wall of the building I was standing beside of and thought back to the Christmas party.  I hadn’t planned on kissing her, but the moment was right.  And God, did it feel so good!  It was like coming home.  Her lips were soft and plump and fit mine perfectly.  And the cute noises she made turned me to putty.  She could have asked me to do anything in that moment and I would have said yes. 

I chuckled to myself.  It was hard to believe that a woman like Alice could be interested in me.  Me, the one who killed his best friend in a jealous rage.  I will never forgive myself for that, but I am learning to make amends with it.  Alice taught me that.  She said that we will pay for our sins when we die and although we should be aware of them now, we can’t change what happens.  All we can do is accept it and move on.

She is so wise.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 33

Well okay, I will buy Mordred has a motive for his actions. I doubt he is being honest.  I am still heartbroken for Isabella.  Edward we still miss you.

 

I still think that perhaps he is helping the king sort out what is going on in Camelot.

 



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That's not a bad assumption.  He could be lying in wait until the moment is right.

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I leaned against the wall of the building I was standing beside of and thought back to the Christmas party.  I hadn’t planned on kissing her, but the moment was right.  And God, did it feel so good!  It was like coming home.  Her lips were soft and plump and fit mine perfectly.  And the cute noises she made turned me to putty.  She could have asked me to do anything in that moment and I would have said yes. 

I chuckled to myself.  It was hard to believe that a woman like Alice could be interested in me.  Me, the one who killed his best friend in a jealous rage.  I will never forgive myself for that, but I am learning to make amends with it.  Alice taught me that.  She said that we will pay for our sins when we die and although we should be aware of them now, we can’t change what happens.  All we can do is accept it and move on.

She is so wise.

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 32

A battle! Yeah, i can see that where some pieces come together

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Hi smiling!  I'm sorry I didn't see this before as I just posted chapter 33.  I hope you will review so I can send a preview of 34.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 32

hmm, surprise later?  Hint in chapter 31?

 

Well perhaps Edward is not dead. Perhaps that was staged to draw out the mole? Perhaps



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Perhaps.  You'll have to wait and see.  As always, more questions than answers right now.  But you will get on in the next chapter.  You'll see it in the preview below:

 

He shook his head and pulled my torso a little closer.  My breasts pushed against his chest.  “Indeed I am not.  You are beautiful, your highness.  I’m sorry that I never paid attention to you before.  I could kick myself for that.”  His eyes were sincere.  I saw admiration, lust and something else I couldn’t identify in there.

I shrugged.  “You had other things on your mind.”  His grip on my waist tightened.

“Not anymore.”

We danced in silence for awhile, staring into each other’s eyes.  It felt right, so right, for the two of us to be here like this.  I didn’t want to hope for anything as I have been hurt so many times in the past, but I couldn’t help it.

Lady Rosalie ran up to us after awhile.  “Mordred has arrived!”

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 32

awesome chapter cnt wait for the next update!



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He shook his head and pulled my torso a little closer.  My breasts pushed against his chest.  “Indeed I am not.  You are beautiful, your highness.  I’m sorry that I never paid attention to you before.  I could kick myself for that.”  His eyes were sincere.  I saw admiration, lust and something else I couldn’t identify in there.

I shrugged.  “You had other things on your mind.”  His grip on my waist tightened.

“Not anymore.”

We danced in silence for awhile, staring into each other’s eyes.  It felt right, so right, for the two of us to be here like this.  I didn’t want to hope for anything as I have been hurt so many times in the past, but I couldn’t help it.

Lady Rosalie ran up to us after awhile.  “Mordred has arrived!”

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 31

Should we give up hope for edward?

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Not at all!  There's always hope.  Remember Rosalie's words at the beginning of the chapter.  Morgan Le Fay could not tell her where Edward's grave was.  Why do you think that is?

 

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Proving Jasper is not who he says he is has become his new obsession.

“I’ve seen her wearing it.  It’s beautiful.  The crystal is huge.  Must have cost Jasper a pretty penny.”

He is not happy, that much is true.

I shrugged.  “You gave up on her, what do you care?”

He looked at me.  “I don’t want that beautiful woman to be hurt by him.  I don’t trust him.”  He lowered his voice. 

“I’ve heard mumblings that he works for Mordred.”

I dropped the necklace as my head snapped to him.  “Where did you hear that?”

He shrugged.  “Around.  I can’t prove it, but some of the servants are convinced that when he says he’s going to London, he’s reporting back to his boss.  I think we might have found our mole.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 31

I may have this Edward murder solved. If he has no grave then I think perhaps that death was staged to look real and is not. This was to flush out the people against the king.

I maybe still upset for poor Lady Isabella, but at least some where he might still BE. I keep thinking she is pregnant. You know consumated love, no condoms in those days. SO ..

 

thanks for the quick update.



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Lol.  I guarantee Bella is not pregnant in this.  That does not fit in this story.  Someone else, maybe....

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Proving Jasper is not who he says he is has become his new obsession.

“I’ve seen her wearing it.  It’s beautiful.  The crystal is huge.  Must have cost Jasper a pretty penny.”

He is not happy, that much is true.

I shrugged.  “You gave up on her, what do you care?”

He looked at me.  “I don’t want that beautiful woman to be hurt by him.  I don’t trust him.”  He lowered his voice. 

“I’ve heard mumblings that he works for Mordred.”

I dropped the necklace as my head snapped to him.  “Where did you hear that?”

He shrugged.  “Around.  I can’t prove it, but some of the servants are convinced that when he says he’s going to London, he’s reporting back to his boss.  I think we might have found our mole.”

Reviewer: kmk Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 31

love it can't wait 4 the next chap.

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Thanks!  It should be up Wednesday or Thursday, depending on how quickly I get chapter 36 written.

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Proving Jasper is not who he says he is has become his new obsession.

“I’ve seen her wearing it.  It’s beautiful.  The crystal is huge.  Must have cost Jasper a pretty penny.”

He is not happy, that much is true.

I shrugged.  “You gave up on her, what do you care?”

He looked at me.  “I don’t want that beautiful woman to be hurt by him.  I don’t trust him.”  He lowered his voice. 

“I’ve heard mumblings that he works for Mordred.”

I dropped the necklace as my head snapped to him.  “Where did you hear that?”

He shrugged.  “Around.  I can’t prove it, but some of the servants are convinced that when he says he’s going to London, he’s reporting back to his boss.  I think we might have found our mole.”

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 31

great chapter! I wonder if Alice interrupted knowing what they were doing hmm :) LOL Can't wait to see more!



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No, she didn't.  That was a good thought, though!  Here is your preview:

 

Proving Jasper is not who he says he is has become his new obsession.

“I’ve seen her wearing it.  It’s beautiful.  The crystal is huge.  Must have cost Jasper a pretty penny.”

He is not happy, that much is true.

I shrugged.  “You gave up on her, what do you care?”

He looked at me.  “I don’t want that beautiful woman to be hurt by him.  I don’t trust him.”  He lowered his voice. 

“I’ve heard mumblings that he works for Mordred.”

I dropped the necklace as my head snapped to him.  “Where did you hear that?”

He shrugged.  “Around.  I can’t prove it, but some of the servants are convinced that when he says he’s going to London, he’s reporting back to his boss.  I think we might have found our mole.”

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

great chapter... i am thinking the boy is either edward or even maybe emmett... i dunno... Cant' wait to see the next one!



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Interesting thoughts on who the boy is...you'll find out in the 40s.  Here is your preview:

 

“I told you, you will not disappoint me.  I don’t care that you are inexperienced.  In fact, I find it a great honor that you would consider giving your virginity to me, to a man who doesn’t deserve it.”

“Don’t talk like that.”

His hand cupped the left side of my face.  “I’m serious, Rose.  I have done some horrible things but I like to think you are my reward.”  He was quiet for a moment.  “I don’t want to talk about that tonight.  I just want to know if you will do me the honor of making love to you?”

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 30

:0( some of us still miss Edward. Isabella does too. I pray she is not pregnant.



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Bella is not pregnant in this story.  Don't worry, she's fine.  Here is your preview:

 

I looked down at the floor, suddenly embarrassed.  “What if I disappoint you?”

He sighed and extended his hand, placing it under my chin and lifting it so I was looking at him.  “I told you, you will not disappoint me.  I don’t care that you are inexperienced.  In fact, I find it a great honor that you would consider giving your virginity to me, to a man who doesn’t deserve it.”

“Don’t talk like that.”

His hand cupped the left side of my face.  “I’m serious, Rose.  I have done some horrible things but I like to think you are my reward.”  He was quiet for a moment.  “I don’t want to talk about that tonight.  I just want to know if you will do me the honor of making love to you.”

Reviewer: kmk Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 30

I can't shake the feeling that edward and the boy that came to see jacob are connected somehow. That seems strange doesn't it.

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No, actually you are right.  They are connected...somehow.  Here is your preview: 

 

I looked down at the floor, suddenly embarrassed.  “What if I disappoint you?”

He sighed and extended his hand, placing it under my chin and lifting it so I was looking at him.  “I told you, you will not disappoint me.  I don’t care that you are inexperienced.  In fact, I find it a great honor that you would consider giving your virginity to me, to a man who doesn’t deserve it.”

“Don’t talk like that.”

His hand cupped the left side of my face.  “I’m serious, Rose.  I have done some horrible things but I like to think you are my reward.”  He was quiet for a moment.  “I don’t want to talk about that tonight.  I just want to know if you will do me the honor of making love to you.”

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 29

great chapter! I always love hearing from Alice.  Can't wait to see the next one... and I still think that Jasper is Mordred, maybe he will "fake" Jasper's death, so that no one suspects! LOL I dunno! So excited to see more!



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Interesting theory; you'll have to wait and see. 

 

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“Yeah, I’m fine.”

“Then why aren’t you at Camelot?”

I jerked my head towards him.  There was something oddly familiar about him.  I felt like I knew the kid somehow.  But it was impossible.  I had never seen him before the day of the workshop.  He was quite fascinated with my skills as a Knight and I had fun showing off for him.

I didn’t speak for awhile, just looked at him.  He smiled softly and his gold eyes sparkled.  “Is this because of Sir Edward?”

I nodded slowly.  The boy continued.  “He’s not coming back?”

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 29

What will happen to jasper?! I know he is evil even if it's a little bit but you can totally tell

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So his behavior with Rosalie doesn't change it?  Good, I'm glad you noticed.  :)

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“Yeah, I’m fine.”

“Then why aren’t you at Camelot?”

I jerked my head towards him.  There was something oddly familiar about him.  I felt like I knew the kid somehow.  But it was impossible.  I had never seen him before the day of the workshop.  He was quite fascinated with my skills as a Knight and I had fun showing off for him.

I didn’t speak for awhile, just looked at him.  He smiled softly and his gold eyes sparkled.  “Is this because of Sir Edward?”

I nodded slowly.  The boy continued.  “He’s not coming back?”

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

in a time of magic somebody can make a magic and bring edward back?:)



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Interesting thought; wait and see.  ;)

 

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“Yeah, I’m fine.”

“Then why aren’t you at Camelot?”

I jerked my head towards him.  There was something oddly familiar about him.  I felt like I knew the kid somehow.  But it was impossible.  I had never seen him before the day of the workshop.  He was quite fascinated with my skills as a Knight and I had fun showing off for him.

I didn’t speak for awhile, just looked at him.  He smiled softly and his gold eyes sparkled.  “Is this because of Sir Edward?”

I nodded slowly.  The boy continued.  “He’s not coming back?”

Reviewer: kmk Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 29

I wish that the truth would be revealed already or that edward would come back somehow

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Yeah, I know.  But that ruins the fun. 

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“Yeah, I’m fine.”

“Then why aren’t you at Camelot?”

I jerked my head towards him.  There was something oddly familiar about him.  I felt like I knew the kid somehow.  But it was impossible.  I had never seen him before the day of the workshop.  He was quite fascinated with my skills as a Knight and I had fun showing off for him.

I didn’t speak for awhile, just looked at him.  He smiled softly and his gold eyes sparkled.  “Is this because of Sir Edward?”

I nodded slowly.  The boy continued.  “He’s not coming back?”

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

i still think jasper is mordred. and his love for rose is slowly changing him. i wonder where jasper is really going and what he is up to?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 27

but eddie can't really be dead. so where is he? and why the elaborate plan to make him look dead?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 26

it was over! what the hell did jake do? and who switched the swords?

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 25

what the fuck? that maust have been a hell of a vision. and if alice and esme had the same one does that mean they can not change it?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

rose has to be marring riley. but why if she is willing to overlook everything about his past and still loves him why would she marry another?

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

well that was not the 2 i was expecting to fall into bed first! why is bella still questioning him? has she not seen and felt how true his feelings for her are?

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

so jasper is worried that rose will run to riley after she finds out who he is....  just one more reason jasper has to be mordred.



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Hi Sunshine-Sue!  Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing.  Interesting that you think Jasper is Mordred.  Remember that they have been in the same room together...however, you may be on to something.....

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I knew it wasn’t his fault.  Someone had replaced the sword.  My vision was not strong enough to show me who it was, but I saw Jacob set it down and head off for a run.  Then a hand reached down and snatched the sword quickly, replacing it with an identical one.  One that did not retract.  One that was capable of killing someone.

Whoever did it knew that Jacob would take the blame and leave if he wasn’t found guilty of treason.  Whoever did it did it to get two of the best Knights away from the castle.  And that smells like Mordred.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 21

good job eddie!

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

so jasper and rose are getting ready to do the nasty, interesting.

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

ok jake do you even listen to yourself?!?!??! you just told riley to back off because rose wanted jasper not him but you are too stupid to do the same?!?!?!?!??!?! dumb fuck!

and alice seriously? you tell him eddie wins? how is that gonna make anything better?

goodness people pull your heads outta your asses and take a look around!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

what the hell? the attack is going on around her and she stops to bathe and get dressed? jasper is gonna kill these two fuckers. but will it be before or after they hurt rose?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

did alice really see a positive outcome? or is he just saying that to make her feel better?

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

jasper is mordred and he is obviously getting his lies mixed up. i hope jake and eddie can put this aside and go back to being friends.

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

oh no is jasper mordred?!?! and blondie is rose. is jasper's plan to get inside info on camelot and use it to his advantage? does he have the ability to change his looks like momma e? or was it a follower who came to court posing as mordred?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

so there we have it alice is definately eddie's long lost and unknown sister. but what about her vision of jasper is he who he says he is? is he a bad guy? i hope not....

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