Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
cave man is good from time to time. have a good time with your hubby.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh god i love this Edward.......yum, as far as Seth goes.. again i can understand both of their points........they have been friends to long to walk away but he did lie to Bella and could have killed them all or someone else.. Way to go Bella giving some loving down below to your man.... So is Bella still even upset at her mother for smacking her? I was a bit confused by that she was so upset last chapter over that and now she is accepting food from her and
acts ok ....... anyways can't wait for the next chapter .....and more jealous possessive Edward......i am wondering if old fuck buddy Tanya is lurking some where in the back round............. something was up with that ...
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love it :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Have fun with the hubby and remember.....aspirin, water and occasional food are necessary!!! LMAO
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
great story, enjoyed the chapter
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward has his hands full!!! I love that he tried to be controling, but Bella reminds him he is not always in control. At least not to the extent he wants to be. I was a little afraid that Renee was going to be the one that brought the lunch and would catch them. That would have been a whole other mess though.
My favorite part was Bella saying...“If you two assholes don’t stop it, I’m going home tonight.” That got their attention!!!
Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was cracking up over Bella conspiring to get Rosalie over so she could get what she wants.
Angel
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Naughty girlies! hehe
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. One of these days she is going to push Mr. Edward to far I have a feeling.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved it caveward is the best
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Don't worry about the update1 Enjoy your hubby!! ;)
I loved this one and if next chapter is what I imagine it will be worth any wait!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks.....
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
YAY! That was a great update! Cannot wait to see what happens next and what Bella gets Edward for Christmas ;)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Update soon..and when will we get to see jealousward on action?? ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just wanted to say that this is a great story and updating once a week or longer is JUST FINE, I would like to see you finish this story in your own time without any pressure, just go for it.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thats better!!
When can I have a lemon???
;)
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think what Renee did was not an accident... At least not in the common use of the word. Yes she did hit her by accident but not because she didn't want to... I don't know if I can fully explain it in English but thats how I see it. Renee wanted control she lost it so she snapped.
It's very nice to see Seth and Bella friends once again!!
xx
marianne
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well I am glad that they talked and they stopped being mad and thought about the situation and are taking things how they are and not how they could have happened. I wonder how well things are going to go with Seth now that there is an investigation going on with great possible charges.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love your epovs......especially when it's something in her absence. Best chapter, so far. Epic when he saw her pic on the mantle in his bff's apartment
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved how she stood up to him by messing with him with the seth stuff. YOUR dark edward always freaks me out. That would be such a bummer if you planned to never see someone again and then they decide to move to town UNLESS it's edward freakin' cullen.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit. Do you feel bad for her cuz her 'one night stand's' at the door? Or are you jealous as hell cuz her 'one night stand's' at the door AND it's Edward freakin' Cullen.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
oooooooh, interesting. Aw, yes you ARE a god Edward. Loving this so far.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I'm so sorry. I never reviewed this story.
Love the banner, interesting start. Hmmm, where's this story going?
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Once a week is great!!! Especially compared to a those who only update once a month or longer...gag. I also have two young children and work full time with a husband who works 60 plus hour weeks so 'I feel ya' " Keep up the great work! I'm impressed that you can update once a week.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loving the story and this Edward, however, soon no doubt she will be applying to Uni etc given she is a straight A student how will he cope?
She is young and impressionable but far from a sub which makes this story great - in fact she is actually the one with "The Power"
Can not wait to read more well done.xx
Deb's (UK)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Crap! I'm glad they came to their senses and I'm glad that B continues to stand up for herself. Boys can be stupid no matter how old they get.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
I thought for sure seth was going to get his ass kicked. Does Bella relise she has Edward wraped around her finger??? So everything is back to normal and she is going back home? How long can Edward keep himself in check?? Does Charlie have any idea what is going on?
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter, really love both Edward and Emmett in this story.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Boo. She gave in too easily. He's being a baby.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was great! I am so glad that Bella talked with both Edward and her parents. I wonder what will happen to Seth? Amazing job! Cannot wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it so much. Love possessive Edward.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad she shut down his tude quickly
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
While I love a hot domward for a story I've actually dated guys like that. Its only hot for a little bit. Then it gets old.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
While I love a hot domward for a story I've actually dated guys like that. Its only hot for a little bit. Then it gets old.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
So does she get to stay with Em and Edward or does she have to go back home? LOL Great chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Of course. And I'm guessing he saw the tagged pic from Em's page.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
I guess i can understand the ban against seth.for now, I have a feeling the Edward's gonna be worse than he let on...
~Tiffany
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks......
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lovved it! Can't wait for the next
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
It seems they have all settled down now and were able to talk a little and understand the other side a little. Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
loved it iam glad her parents let her talk to them
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
ahhhhh, I love this story. Keep up the great work!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks for the update, still loving this story.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
That conversation didn't go well with her parents and now she doesn't want to be with them. I hope that Emmett can talk to them and make them understand that she needs time to work through everything.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
the fort was great. i love how seth did not cave intp the boys and give up her location.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad that everyone is ok but I have to agree wth Edward and Emmett that things need to change and Bella needs to have a little less freedom right now. It wasn't her faul and I can see both sides of this but they should all be happy that noone got seriously hurt.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well that went better than I thought that would. I think that he would have been worse off if Jasper hadn't been there.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yeah I guess I saw that one coming. I wonder if Edward is going to blow his secret relationship with Bella.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well I am glad that he stopped to think about how Bella felt about that because that says something about him.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
The dirty school girl really got to Edward didn't it?
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am thinking that they aren't going to have to plan alot in the operation get Emmett.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh... is he going to tell Emmett that he likes Bella?
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Personally, I like this Edward. ;) I think it is completely understandable that you put real like first - people can be so whiny! Keep up the great work.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG i can't believe she slapped her and over something so stupid it's not like she told her to fuck off and die , I wonder how she is going to not go back home? is she 18 cuz if she is 18 ok i can see that but if she is still 17 then sh eis gonna have a fight on her hands; I would love to see her live with Edward for awhile the way he talks about her and to her is so sexy but i still haven't forgiven him for that whole Tanya thing .;. I am so glad her and Seth made up i like him i don't like that he lied to her but i like him. Can't wait to read more.......Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow poor bella loved it
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
i dont believe she slapped bella! what kind of mother slaps her kid for trusting a friend thats she's had forever.... and for surviving.... i hope Bella moves in with Edward..... that would be awesome....
Date: 04 Apr 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
i like your story, and just wanted to let you know i have 3 kids too, and completely understand about the time you have to write and never knowing what life will throw at you.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
i loved it cant wait till the next
Date: 04 Apr 2010 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Um... I like Edward being possive and all but I think that he may need to tone it down a little! I am wondering how long it is going to be before someone notices that Edward and Bella are together because this is Forks after all.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Um that was really hot!! I love possessive Edward!! And I can't believe that Bella just green lighted Rose like that.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well so much for never seeing him again! That is kinna funny!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Never thought that Bella would be the first out of that group to do that. Just goes to show how much I know.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
The poor unsupecting men that are going to meet those girls that night!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter! I am liking this story!! Very good!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter glad seth found her but i was hoping Edward would of followed a kicked his ass a little just because.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story, I'm a newbie to it, but I was immediatlly caught up in it! I absolutlly can't wait for Edward and Emmett to get Bella : )
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Im glad seth went to her...they needed to talk that out...
~Tiffany