Date: 26 Apr 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
I hate Rose, she's a biotch and I know she did something to Bella's dress for the MTV awards. I hope Bella handles her ass soon
Author's Response:
I know right? Thanks as always for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
DAM!!! I am kicking myself right now, I could not wait until I got home to read this…. NO! I got so excited when I saw your update I had to read it at work……. Now I feel like I need a cold shower….. As usual I will be waiting for your next chapter….. Hurry Up PLEASE …..:-)
Author's Response:
Yay! Thank you so much for your continued support! I get really excited to read your reviews! I hope to have it up by this weekend...i'm working on it :)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
They are so good together. I'm loving this story. I still say poor Emmett. He has to put up with Rose's behavior. :0) I think Edward and Bella should do those pictures to hang in their bedroom. :0)
Author's Response:
I hope she agrees, they would be hot, yeah? Thanks as always for your reviews!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
sorry one more thing, I LOVE Edward and Bella's pda so DON'T STOP! lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
LOVE IT!! that counter scene was hott not to mention the whole bedroom scene at the beginning. :) I can't wait for more. I do have to ask if you can, can you put the translations to the italian Bella says at the end of the chapters so we know what the heck she's saying? lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Yay! I will add translations at the end from now on...I'm glad you liked it. next one should be up soon
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
I like the caveward and the Bella trash mouth.
Author's Response:
She's a naughty little thing, yeah? lol Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Rosalie has the dresses for the awards show? If so, I have a feeling that she will do something to Bella's dress. I so love a tatted Bella and Edward. The piercings are also very nice indeed. Update, Update, Update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, it always makes me motivated to keep going...i love a badass edward myself :)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Go Bella! I love that she doesn't put up with Rosalie's crap!
Author's Response:
:) I love a strong bella...thank you for the review
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
wonder what his reaction will be?
Author's Response:
He freaks out lol...our strong badass edward freaks out! as always thanks for taking the time to review
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
This is a brilliant story! :)
Author's Response:
Gah, thank you so much...the support really means alot to me, the next one should be up soon :)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
E's pov is always my favorite! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
wonder what his reaction will be?
Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I love it! :)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
The baby sitter line was perfect! I don't
get where the last three lines a coming
from! :)
Author's Response:
I fixed it, it was misplaced from earlier in the chapter lol thanks for mentioning it :)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Rosalie is a piece of work. I feel sorry for Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Awesome chapter. Rose is a bitch. still love their touchy-feely ways, keep it up.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I was about to be upset thinking you didn't share with us their night together. Then learn later that nothing happened. I'm worried Rose might try to sabotage Bella's dress. Can't wait to see if Edward gives in to Bella's night of suduction. Great chapter.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
does this line include killing you in your sleep for leaving us hanging like that? lol just kidding but that was pure evil! EVIL! I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
haha! thanks for the review...i just wanted it to be EPOV lol :)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I don't get Rosalie, but I'm sure that you will make her motives clear to us in the future. She is such a bitch. Emmett should kick her her out...yeah, that would be fun to read. Kat
Author's Response:
Rosalie is a bitch, isn't she...thanks for taking the time to review, it really means alot to me :)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
:)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Great chapter!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I love snarky Bella... I did that once letting a girl feel my boobs cause she didn't believe they were real. LOL
Author's Response:
yay! thanks for reviewing! you must have some nice boobs ;) see you next time
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
WHOOP WHOOP!!! Go Bella! Bella 100 Rosalie 0. Poor kidd is losing. How much longer are we going to have to deal with her UGH!!! She sucks. But great chapter. :)
Author's Response:
thanks, gotta love a bella kicking ass lol
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I really liked this chapter. It's nice to see a Bella who likes to shop. Even though I'm not a big shopper myself it's just nice to see that Bella isn't being forced into it. Rose is quite the Betch! I'm so glad Bella puts her in her place though it's kind of funny some of the things Bella says back to her. I feel so bad for Emmett. I really like your Alice so far too. She really does seem more like a best friend. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Bella has planned for Edward. :0)
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Rosalie is seriously sick in the head...i feel so bad for Emmett
Author's Response:
me too...thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Eck!!! love any kind of rockward but love your story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
wow. keep writing love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, as always for the review! New chapter up no later than Thursday...
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
I really like this so far. Can't wait to read more. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! New chapter up no later than Thursday :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Bella could always kindly ask Edward to get one of his shirts and then proceed to offer Tanya her top, while dressing herself in Edwards shirt! Afterall- if she really needs a top, beggars cant be choosers!
Author's Response:
haha! That was a really good idea :) Thanks for the review
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I really like them together but Edward's last thought has me a little worried... reading on.... :0)
Author's Response:
lol...he doesn't know what to do with all these new feelings! Poor Edward, she has him all turned around! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
I really like it! Can't wait to see what they try to pull over on Edward and Bella at the restaurant. I love how E turned them down about the shirt. Very good! So I'm wondering if Bella is a virgin since they didn't have sex yet? Does Edward suspect that or is he clueless? Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
My Bella is not a virgin but she doesn't really have much experience either. She is naturally sensual and Edward doesn't like to think about Bella with anyone else...at all...but he assumes she is NOT a virgin by the way she moves and how confident she is in her body. Thanks for your review!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I don't know why but I really liked Edward putting the marks on her neck. Ok I do know why... it was hot. Made me wish it was my neck. :0) I also really like that Bella seems to stand up for herself. I like what she said to Rose about needing botox. lol I hope Bella stays confident in herself like that. Looking forward to reading more. I'm off to read the next chapter. :0)
Author's Response:
ha ha! I like that Edward likes to mark her too...it kinda goes with his possessive bad ass persona. :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Like it very much. Thanks for a great chapter. And your Rose and Tanya are really bitches extraordinaire.
Author's Response:
lol! They are...and persistent too. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Next chapter up no later than Thursday :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I really liked this first chapter. The whole conversation about her babysitter liking his band made me chuckle. :0) Can't wait to see where things go from here. :0)
Author's Response:
ha ha! She so innocently offended him :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Loved it. Can't stand Rosalie or Tanya.
Author's Response:
They are persistent bitches aren't they, lol! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
can someone please hit rosalie with a car. jeezzz she's getting on my nerves. UGH!!! He doesn't like you move on. Get over it. okayy rant over. Awesome chapter can't wait to see what drama comes up next :)
Author's Response:
lol! She just can't accept that he doesn't want her....they are persistent aren't they lol :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
i totally love it when Edward isnt so guillable.. same goes to bella to ofc.. Great chap!! They are so strong together, and hot! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you, thank you! New chapter up no later than Thursday :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
I love, love, love your story !!! I have been stalking your story all weekend checking to see if you had updated. I come home from Walley world and get so excited because you have and it was so worth the wait!!! I put my kid down for a nap and (It was not her nap time yet ;-) greedly read every word twice, now I need a ciggy and another chapter please!!!!! Thank you, Thank you... Keep writing don't stop!!! ....... Can't wait to see what the Bitches have in store for B+E ... I love that Edward is so into Bella and takes no shit about her from anyone...... Keep up the great work ....Wendy
Author's Response:
Yay! It makes me so happy that you like my story. The next one will be up no later than Thursday...we finally get to hear from Bella :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
God Rosalie is such a bitch and then she drags Tanya into the mix making her too a bitch. lol I love it. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
As always thanks for the review! They sure are persistent aren't they! ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Great story, I'm so hooked. I hope Bella can cope being in the limelight now and hope Edward can cope being away from her when she goes back home
Author's Response:
I know! That is definately going to be hard on them...what will he do? :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Absolutely Love it!! Please update soon, totally recomending it to others!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you not only for taking the time to review, but also for the recommendation! It really means alot to me
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
MORE PLEASE!!! That was HOT!!!!
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I love it, so far!!!! You have done a great job..... PLEASE keep writing....
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it, your kind words make it easier to keep going
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I really enjoyed your first chapter, I can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thank you for takin the time to review! The support means alot to me ;)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I love it, think I need a cold shower now. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
lol! Thank you so much for the review...I was so nervous because I have never written anything like this before :)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I thought it was awesome. It was nice. It was a constant pull of actions and interactions between them. I liked it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Love it. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support! It really means alot to me!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
;)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to send me a review, the support means alot to me! :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Uh-ohh, please say he doesn't do something stupid like leg it. Thumbs up for the almost-lemons. They're so good for each other, and he's practically obsessed with her ass (which makes me laugh, but it's kinda cute), something tells me he's gonna be mildly possessive, like his glare at Jared last chapter. Love it. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
I think it is all new and overwhelming for him...and of course he is a bad ass so you can count on him being possessive! Poor Bella is always gonna have her neck chewed up lol
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
LOVE IT! Love their closeness, love her acceptance already, love his ways of persuasion, love everything! Really, really good, well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to write a review! It's nice to see Edward knocked off his feet lol!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Whatever he's doing, keep doing it. its hot as hell! lol I love it. I can't picture all those piercings though. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! lol he is a little rough around the edges isn't he ;)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
love it... does edwards age bother bella at all a 14 year age difference? she's twenty involved with a 35 year old rock star...love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review...we will get to hear from Bella in the next chapter! :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
OMG thanks erm its Bethanywebb111@hotmail.com
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
really enjoyed the story so far! great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your support!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
love this story is there any way u cud email mii when ur updating this website only notifys mii on 1 story lol
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wouldn't mind at all, just pm me your email, if not it is ok I will pm you. I will for sure have next chapter up by Friday. :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Love it!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It is my first fic so I am a bit nervous about it. Your encouragement made me smile :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I love it. :) I can't wait for more...Please please please update soon...
Author's Response:
Thanks, it is my first fic so I am still a bit nervous about it. I will hopefully have the next chapter up by Friday. :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I love how Bella put Rose in her place that was just too funny. Tanya is going to cause problems.
Author's Response:
Oh, there will be lots of Bella/Rose interaction! I mean, even in canon she was a jealous bitch. lol. Thank you for taking the time to read and review :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I like it! Nothing like a older man!
Author's Response:
I totally agree, you can make older Edward much hotter than teenage Edward! Thanks for supporting my story!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Great job. Your story is just the kind of story that I was looking for. Please update soon. Kat
Author's Response:
I am so glad to hear it! I just wanted a Bella that wasn't so timid and shy all the time, ya know!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Great start. I can't wait to read where you are going to take this story. Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read my story! I'm glad you like it
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I so love this story. I love your Edward, and how he acts. Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am excited to hear that...who wouldn't love a cocky Edward right? lol
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Love your story. Love all Bella and Edward stories. I am so Team Edward. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you, it is my first one so I am a bit nervous about it. I am Team Edward also! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
that was awesome you are a great writer keep it up i can not wait till the next chapter vze13yama@verizon.net
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. This is my first fic so I am a bit nervous about it!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Sweet... so all I need to know is who do you see as Edward and Bella, aaand where are their visible piercings? LOL
Author's Response:
Um, Rob for Edward, maybe Miranda Kerr as Bella? Harper Bazar Kristen would work too. As for piercings, the visible ones on Edward are both lobes gauge 6, industrial on left, right eyebrow (curved barbell) and spiderbite (some call it viperbite or venom bite and tongue. For Bella she has two on lobe not guaged, three helix (captive bead) on right, tragus on left, nose (small stud) on right and tongue ) ;) stay tuned for the hidden ones lol
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
awsome i love me some cradle robbing edward . lmao hits so close to home haha my old man is 13 years older than me ...... cant wait fo an update
Author's Response:
Me too! :) Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
DAMN! Seriously recks of sex already. LOL
I don't want to be presumptious or anything, but do you want a banner? Cause reading this I have so many ideas...
Author's Response:
That would be great, thank you so much for offering and also for taking the time to read and review!
Laila
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
This is really good. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I am planning to update on Wednesdays. Stay tuned!