*hums* 'i'm in love with a man nearly twice my age'

well this one looks like it is gonna be an interesting ride!

what do I think? HOLY FUCK to quote Edward. lol that was hott. wow I was right there with Bella when he bought out that camcorder. holy hell. wow, they sure are kinky you freaky girl. lol you make me proud. (wipes away a tear) thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

So Good!!!

:)

I'm so happy they made up but I'm thinking the camera is a bad idea. Nothing ever good comes from people especially famous people filming themselves having sex. That tape is going to find itself in the wrong hands. Now Emmett I think is giving Ms. Thang a piece of her own medicine. Serves her right because she has done it to hm for so long. I'm happy that Bella still doesn't trust her because I don't trust her ass either. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hey is his sister married to Collin? That would be some shit

That was intense...poor Edward in the beginning feeling so rejected. I am glad that got it worked out. They have such emotional intensity! I loved it!

Colin was a jerk!! I loved Edward's reaction to Bella's telling him of Colin. I would love to see Edward and Colin and Edward in a dark alley.

Oh holy shit this story is hot. Funny thing is I can totally see the characters in these roles. You make them come alive and seem very real. Please keep up the awesome work and update soon.

  Maeguerite

I'm so happy they made up.  Loved the chapter.

I'm so glad they made up and that Edward didn't do anything stupid with the blonde at the bar that night. It was kind of refreshing to see Rose actually talk to Bella  little without being mean.

That video camera is gonna bite them in the ass later..I can feel it!

and all is right with the world.......

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! :)

Is Bella pregnant?? I think it'd be a good twist if she was. Loving the drama, keep it up!

Temper, temper, never does anyone any good. I hope Edward comes to his senses soon. 

Pierced and tattooed Sexward....All I can say is...thank you. It doesn't get better than that. And ballsy Bella? Bonus.

Ooohhhh nooo! Please don't let him sleep with the blonde. I can't believe he blew up on her like that; he didn't even give her a chance to explain what she meant. God i hope he doesn't fuck her. Great chapter, I loved Possessive Edward at the beginning with Demitri.

:)

oh edward don't fuck it up

well hes a dumb ass !! cant wait till the next chapter 

:-( he screwed up

Kind of scared! I hope Edward does not hook up with the blonde!!!!!

How bad we've fucked this up, I don't think so there was no we in that. It was all him, she loves him but she doesn't want to ask him to give up what he has going on for her. She probably thinks it's selfish of her to ask and also she said we'll see. She wanted to talk about it at a later time so that she can have more time to ponder the situation and come up with a solution having fully thought everything out. As always can't wait to see what happens next

Love this story!

Awww, how sweet.

Of course he wants her, he is a man.

I am glad that they didnt have intercourse yet.

Good so far.

Renee is such a horrible mother. It takes her 3 months to call. I don't blame Bella for putting her off. She really doesn't need to know about Bella's life. I think the costume was funny.

I have never heard of so many piercings.

Whew, what a start to a chapter! Again, I have to say I love the major PDA they have going on, please don't stop that haha. Edward's costume sounds hottt, especially with the leash, and I love his agressiveness towards the creepy interviewer. Oh and the whole daddy fetish thing they both have is hot too ;) Glad he could get over his problems with taking her from behind. Great chapter overall, I loved it. This is my favourite story at the moment, update soon :) x

I love the srory. Then add in the

freakishly hot lemons,  just makes

it perfect! :)

Great costumes :) I love how Bella is making new friends. Gianna is a hater poor kidd, when will these girls ever learn Edward doesnt want them. UGH! Great chapter. I'm super excited for more :)

i predict some dress destruction or something from rose or tanya

Another great chapter.

I love how you really get inside Edward's head and show us how he feels. I can really imagine the scenes you describe, and I love the different experiences they have together.

I actually hate Twilight and think Stephenie Meyer's writing is awful, and I have only been reading Twilight fanfiction for the past couple years. It is authors like you who astound and amaze me... I guess something good did come out of the Twilight series after all! :)

Also, thanks for taking the time to personally respond to my last review! And please update again soon! :D

Love his caveman thoughts about the bracelet, love that they want to have little redheaded babies and I love basically everything else about this story. :) I checked everyday for this update haha, I was so happy when I saw it. Wanna read some kinky lemons ;)

I wish I could be more creative in my review, but I guess there is no better way of saying this: I effin LOVE your story.

:)

I wanna be a rock star!

:)

YEAHH! they are cute together. They make me soo happy. I hope whatcha call it gets fired. Shes soo unprofessional. Damn haters. If Bella goes away Edward is not going to like you! UGH! Some girls are soo slow. 

Great chapter a little angst, some lemons and some fun.  Keep up the great work can't wait to read more!

Wonder who tampered with the dress??? There are so many women who are jealous of her it could have been anyone. Love the gifts they gave each other at the end. :0)

omg..love the chapter. hate gianna..lol!!

soo is Emmett stupid or sloww??? Because those excuses were WEAK...Anywhoo Lovely chapter Bella+Edward=HOTTTTTT. and i love it :) you rock my socks. and i wanted to let you know. 

Hello from a fellow mother of two, stay at home, foul mouthed, tattooed momma. ;) I saw your story rec'd on the High Anxiety thread on Twilighted and had to run over to read your older Edward. I'm loving this so far!

"Tell me Rosalie, is Emmett aware that he is your *consolation prize*?"

I read this and started humming Depeche Mode's Sea of Sin...Dave Gahan in his long haired heroin phase...pure sex, right there. I loved your In Your Room mention, and then you've got Sea of Sin going on repeat, but I'll never complain because there can never be too much DM. *swoons* I usually balance my love for DM out with my obsession of all the floor stomping Industrial I usually listen to, but DM really was one of my first loves, back in grade school. And they did get better with age. ;)

And lastly, all I have to say is why the fuck are they entrusting that cunt with Bella's dress?! Has Alice completely lost any good judgment she might have had?! I guess I'll find out in future chapters but I am at a loss as to why they would let that bitch NEAR that dress, let along give it to her to send!

Love this story so far, and I look forward to more!

GT

Author's Response:

yay! there are more of us in the world lol! I'm really glad you like the story...cannon Bella is just to weak for me and who doesn't love a badass Edward? Thanks for taking the time to review, the next chapter should be up this weekend, i fucking hope so anyway. talk to you soon :)

Loving the story so far.   I must admit I was hoping Bella was a raging slut in highschool, and that was why she was vacationing in another country...trying to escape her past...sorta like Edwards double in female form!

I LOVE IT. please update soon!!

again, i say poor Emmett....he freaking knows....ugh, she's gonna push him to a point where he's just gonna tell her to take a hike

Author's Response:

I know, Rosalie is such a bitch...selfish, self-centered and rude lol. Thanks for the review!

It is just wonderful, I had been running out of good stories to read over on FF.net, so I found this and it is one of the sexiest stories out there.  Edward is just about perfect ( for me ) Tats, attitude, piercings, smartass, and that is just all too damn sexy! Your Bella, God she is perfect, I cannot stand meek Bella's, I love it when she is sassy and sweet, that she stands up for herself and does not let anyone walk all over her!!!  Alice, is better then most I have read, I am so not a fan of her pushing and demanding, that always rubs me the wrong way, but she is not as close to some others I have read, I have read some that I have had to stop reading and be done cuz it was just so much!  Thank you for taking your time to write this!  It is a very good story and I am looking forward to where you take Edward and Bella.  I just hope Rose gets what is coming to her!

I love it!!! This chapter was so hawt!!! I would love to have heard what Rose thought of their little porno in front of everyone. LOL I hope there is more PDA in future chapters. Especially with Rose or Tanya around. LOL Great chapter.