Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Wow, I was not expecting that ending at all! I hope that they can make up soon :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Aha! Here are the translations! :) Thanks for that! I really enjoyed this chapter! Bella should speak dirty Italian to Edward ;) hehe
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
I loved this chapter! Thank you for answering my question :) It now makes total sense why many girls are jealous of Bella. I mean, I am 5'0-5'1 and my boobs are big on my small frame (even though they are a B), I cannot imagine being a large C almost a D! Anyway, I really want to know who messed with Bella's dress, I want to hurt them! Grrr! I know! I will sic my 22 pound cat on them! LOL. Cannot wait for the costume party :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Wow, that was incredible, as always. I do have one tiny suggestion, though. When you use a foreign language, can you put the translation of the words at the bottom (like in the Chapter End Notes area)? Thanks :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Wow, that was amazing! I know this will be EXTREMELY awkward to ask and I feel really weird for asking it. But, since it has been mentioned more than once, I feel the need to ask. Just how big are Bella's boobs? I don't have to know but since they have been described as huge, it's kinda obvious we aren't dealing with B cups here. I only ask because I am very visual when it comes to reading stories, when I read them, it's like a movie playing in my head and I want to know. You don't have to answer, I just was curious. ANYWAY, I loved this chapter so much, I am glad Alice told Bella not to worry about Rose. I hope those words don't come back to haunt her later.
Author's Response:
Your question isn't awkward at all...I'm glad you asked! She is actually a very full C or a small D. You have to keep in mind that she is barely 5'2" and weighs like 105lbs, so that size would look pretty big. Also, she has long limbs, and is short waisted. Thats why he always says she has long legs. Even though she is tiny, they are long in proportion to her size.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review...I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Wow, that was amazing! I loved it all so much! I can totally relate to Bella and Edward about the contacts annoying you, I really cannot stand to sleep in mine, so I always take them out before bed. Anyway, really love that Edward sticks up for Bella and wants to take her to the MTV VMA's :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Wow, I loved the lemon (even if it wasn't a FULL on lemon). I was wondering what other piercings these two had ;) Amazing job, once again :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Wow, that was incredible, once again! I love Bella's sassiness (is that even a word?). I also love how she put Rose in her place :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Wow, this story is amazing so far! I cannot wait to continue it!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
I am so loving this story, please update soon.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Wow, I can't believe the nerve of that guy.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Bella jumped on that Bitch!! She deserved it. I don't trust that Tanya. I love Edward's parents, they are Hot!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
That was HOT!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Well, Damn Edward, you didn't give the girl a chance to explain.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Why don't Emmett put his wife in line?! What is afraid of her?
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I like this Bella, BadAss. She put Rose in her place.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Yay! Emmett sent Rosalie away...could it be that is all we hear from her? I am guessing...not. Jasper was extremely selfish. It was good that Edward and him worked it out.
Good writing!!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Damn I love the possessive aggressive Edward you have created in this story...so effing hot....feel free to share him anytime!!! ;-)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
look Edward is whipped so freaking bad. lol also Jasper is a little bit of jerk. :D I love it though. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
i can't wait to see how this interview goes. poor e&b.
jasper totally pissed me off this chapter though. i guess i can see where he was coming from, but still! he was just being so bitchy. love em though!
can't wait for more :) :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
you know I love this storyy-rock on!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I LOVE this story so much!! I love Bella in this story. I am so used to Bella being shy and considering herself as plain and boring. It is good to see a confident and strong Bella.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
I think the band needs to have a meeting and redistrubute the work load. Things have changed in the last 20 years and I think the work load should change as well.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
WOW, they are so hot together. LOL. Good chapter. Cant wait to see what happens.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Glad to see that Edward and the guys made up. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
loved it!! you got the chapter up fast! it was really good, i liked how edward is totally afraid of bella, that was funny. i can't wait until all of this drama comes to a head, i really want to know what happens!! i hope you update soon :))))
Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
:)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Every woman knows how to give the evil eye, and if she is any good at the evil eye the man will be scared.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
I'm still fucking pissed at Jasper, sure he might undertstand now but no once was he actually regretful.. at least IMO... still pissed at Jazz.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Glad he had it out with Jasper, I hope this interview goes well, they need some peace
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
great chapter, keep up the good work. glad edward and the boys worked everything out. can't wait to see how the interviews go and everything else.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Wonderful chapter! Loved the shower. . . HOT!!!!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
I just found this story and I am really loving it so far.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
Great chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
The old lover thing was fu*k awesome. I'm glad E stud his ground. And the M turns out to be a cheating jerk. I love the grands and the conversation gramps had with E. He needed that. Can't wait until the next chapter. Good writing as always.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
LOL, I love Bella and her big "purse" that holds everything. I have the same kind. I cant believe she wasnt meaner to the jerk with a pregnant wife. I thought Edward had a right to be angry, but Daddy C is right she is young and needs time to catch up.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I LOVE Edward's inner musings! They're great! Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Mateo is an ass! Italian speaking Edward makes me quite happy!!!!!! Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I loved the male bonding! The matching tatt's were perfect!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
LOVED the rents and Lizzy! The cat fight was great! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Daddy C is a beast, yeah?
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
YAY for updates! This was a lovely chapter! Keep up the great work!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
See now I feel bad for Rosalie---yeah not really!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Damn that was harsh! Damn drama king!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Loved the Freak on the Leash!!!!!! Great chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
So...is that a real bracelet? I'm gonna have to google it! Great chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Great chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
God...I wish Bella would bitch slap Rosalie!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
It just gets better and better!! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
i totally get where Edward is coming from with the anger and jealously....i think it's warrented, but there are always 2 sides so you just gotta deal and move on.....;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
I LOATHE Rosalie!!!! UGH!
Author's Response:
Just wait until you read chapter 5, lol!
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
:)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Loved the chapter...but the last line threw me!!!! I guess that was the plan!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Damn...that was HOT!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
that was hot! But bella is a little confusing with the possessive not posessive stuff. lol keep up the great work. I'm glad they're leaving Rome and Matteo (who by the way is fucked up with the whole I don't like Edward being with Bella but i'm married thing. lol) keep up the great work work. thanks again bye
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
:) Great start!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I want Bella to make me a hat too. *pouts*
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I have a huge purse also, and my boyfriend always makes fun of it, but he never says anything when whatever he needs I just so happen to have in that "overnight bag" as he likes to call it. I am so glad that Bella's grandparents liked Edward.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I think Edward is right. They needed this break from the stress and return to where they can be their selves. Bella is refreshed and Edward learned more about her.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
i really love this story i constantly look forwar to the updates and they never dissappoint. I love rockward and sexy fesity bella. your writing is really good and the dialogue and iner thought process of teh characters is realistic. you're greeat at keepong teh story interesting too
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I loved the chapter...and how they are both growing as acouple even with the bumps in the road.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
Loved it. I love your story and your characters, they are very refreshing. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
that was really cute! i loved the ending, they are so adorable :) i like how you gave them a realistic situation, and they worked through it. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you update soon :))))
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
LOL! The knitting a hat thing is the best....I could just see Edward sitting there looking like a fish...opening and closing his mouth, trying to come up with a response!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
Loves it!! I cracked up at Bella's purse contents.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
It was so good to see that even though they were angry they talked and worked things out. Looking forward to seeing how things go when they meet back up with the band. :0)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
No I think his balls are in Bella's purse too ;-)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
wow! holy fast update batman!!!!!!! that was a really good chapter by the way
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Hope the guys in the band are feeling pretty rotten for not backing Bella and Edward. What can Bella's publicist really do? It's just a game of he said she said. It might be best to just ignore it. ha ha Now I'm wondering when the video's of Edward and Bella are going to be leaked. I like to see them standing strong together through this rough stuff. :0)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
AMAZING! I LOVE this story! I can't believe Jasper and Emmet would think, let alonse say aloud such horrible things! I expected it from Tanya and Rose- I <3 the drama! Keep up the great work! YAY for jealous italian-yelling Edward! :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Great chapter. Can't believe how his band mates reacted to the news. I love me a jealous E.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Wow! What a chapter!!! I think I love Edward even more now for all he has done for his band mates and he even speaks Italian (drool)
Can’t wait for next chapter!!! Think it is awesome you did not slam your Beta … I see so many authors do that … You are a class act bitch … ;-)
Wendy
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
WOW, I love a jealous edward. Bella knows she does too.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
WOW, a mess.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Oh wow! Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Bella was a little gullible in the past. She should tear this Mateo a new one. I am glad that Edward is honorable. She should have treate him better when she was making introductions to Mateo. Edward's feelings should have been her first concern. He is her soulmate. She needs to remember that and Edward has a right to be a little jealous when she starts acting like someone elses feelings are more important.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
man, poor Bella can't catch a break.....I have no problems with the way Edward acted, Mateo was being an ass
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Cant wait to read more, love this story.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
This chapter was great!!! I love the updates! Keep them coming! If you want I wouldn't mind seeing Edward kick Mateo's ass.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
so I didn't review chapter 13 because honestly I was really disappointed, come to find out though I only got to the end of the song loaded so I thought that was it imagine my surprise when I open it today and there is so much more so his is for 13 and 14.
First of all fuck peter and gianna, i hope daddy c puts it to them. I am ecstatic that they had the talk about money and Bella got to speak her mind about contributing. Also I honk its so sweat hat they are including Esme in this important move forward.
Chapter 14 was so exciting...wtf is Japsers deal, I wouldn't have minded Edward punching him. Thank God Esme is such a momma bear and handled the situation. I love that Victoria isn't he villain an is going to kick Collins ass. While were at it lets kick mateos ass an then enjoy the rest of the trip with nonni an Bonnie.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
I am really loke this story! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
:)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
I am really surprised by Jaspers reaction... sure Emmet he's so fucking brainwashed by Rosalie, but I expected more from Jasper... shame on him.
On another note, yes it is really noce to have a big strong guy that can toss you around a bit. *le sigh*
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
whew! What a chapter! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
i am so glad edward stuk up to the guys for bella and what an ass mateo is can't wait to read more love this story
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
yes i really like this story alot...please update soon!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
I love it....I can't wait to see Bella call Edward out; but I have to say I absolutely effing love Edward's jealous, possessive, protective demeanor and don't want him to ever change!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Love your story but you should update more.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
WOW THAT WAS HOT! Who knew Edward spoke Italian? lol keep up the great work. I love it. I especially loved her Nonni and the confrontation between Mateo and Edward. HOT HOT HOT! lol keep up the great work. can't wait for more. thanks again bye p.s. is Jake going to be in here? I can't remember if you said that or not. :D
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
oh please edward had every reason to be jealous, she was acting guilty and she didn't even warn him that an ex whatever was going to be there
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
OMG....someone needs to seriously fuck that Colling bitch up!!!
I absolutely love this story and have completely fell head over heals for your Edward & Bella; but I am amazed at how much drama these two have to keep going thru.....they just can't seem to catch a break.....However with that being said, the drama totally keeps me hooked and aching for more!!!!
Can't wait to see how Edward is going to handle Collin's bullshit!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your continued support. It means alot to me! I cant wait for the Edward Collin confrontation...its bound to happen eventually!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Esme & daddy "C" are effing brilliant in this and I am definitely routing for "grandbabies"......lots & lots of grandbabies.... =)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Yes....I see you are already posting the translations; I just needed to get a little further along in my reading!!
Why do I get the sinking suspicion that someone is going to fuck with the Harry Winston jewelry and make Bella out to be a theif or some shit....I just get this horrible feeling each time you mention the Harry Winston Jewelry!!
Something is going to go down I just know it.....I so want to kick Rosalie & Gianna's asses bigtime!!!!!!!!!! LOL
Author's Response: I'm really glad you are enjoying the story so far! Your support really means alot to me. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
What does "Topolino" mean??? In the story Bella says, "I would love to wear your handcuff, topolino" could you please translate and going forward in your chapters if you don't mind; if you use any other words in other languages could you please translate them in the bottom author note, it would be greatly appreciated!!!
I love this story and especially love your versions of Edward & Bella and can't wait to see where this journey takes us!!
I also really really love that for the most part so far this has all been pretty much Edward's pov and I hope you continue on that way....it is ok to read Bella's pov sometimes but I have always preferred Edward's pov much more....probably has to do with the whole twilight series being in her pov and then us readers aka: twilight fans getting screwed royally on midnight sun which probably would of been published in Edward's pov by now....I could really kill the ass that ruined it for all of us!!! =)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
so ready for this to go on. hurry please
Author's Response: I'm really trying I swear! My poor beta is having Internet problems but hopefully I will be able to post 14 soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I've got a bad feeling with Gianna in the house and a sex tape. Yeah that's not a good combo.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
I knew her old flame would come out of the woodwork to get some attention. It looks like more trouble for Bella. I just loved how protective Carlisle is of them.
Author's Response:
Gotta love daddy C. Collin is a douche right?
Thanks as always for your feedback, it really means alot to me. My beta is having internet problems, but I may just post the next chapter unbeta'd cuz I'm getting anxious.
Lots of love
Laila
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Ok. I have to let you know this is the best Carlise and Esme I have read in Fan ficiton. I really laughed through this chapter and enjoyed it completely. Thanks for your creativitiy and sharing it with all of us. I can't wait to see where this story goes in the coming chapters.......