Date: 13 Apr 2011 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
well im excited to see what happen next and the wedding!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady
im excited that he got off and now they are on to the next part to their journey!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
ahhhh where's the wedding?!!! Bring on the wedding!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
It was great but I swear to God if you make us wait too long I am gonna have to "punch you in the motherfucking throat.” As you so elequently put it.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady
wonder hot chapter
Date: 13 Apr 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
WOOT WOOT!!!!! Love it! Cannot wait for them to get married!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
ABSOLUTELY-GREAT!!!!! I personally can't wait for more!!! Please don't make us wait long!!! I am not above beggin, just sayin.... I still say and stand by..a pierced and tatted up Edward and a confident Bella is the only way to go!!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
AMAZING job, once again :) So happy the wedding is FINALLY here :) I cannot wait to see about Bella's dress and their rings. Until Edward mentioned the rings, I thought Edward would also tattoo the date or Bella's name on his left ring finger. I cannot wait to see if he will (like Bella wants to) put their wedding date under the "B" tattoo. Hope they can start a family ASAP :)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady
Gah, that was SO AMAZING :) I really loved it so much! Cannot wait to see what/who might come from that little romp ;) Cannot wait to see how everything works out :)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
Love that Bella did the dance for Edward. :0) I also love that they are doing things their way and not letting people push "tradidtion" on them like spending the night apart.:0)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady
So glad the charges were dropped and of course I love any time these two get to be together. :0)
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I loved it, great chapter. Do you have an image of the ring?
Date: 11 Mar 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
amazing story:)
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Amazing story. I love it. Great songs great plot. Awsome character personalities. Edward is just YUMMY. Excellent writing skills and keeps me entertained
Date: 20 Feb 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I knew there had to be a way for Edward to stay out of jail. I hope Collin drops the charges. What can they do about Gianna? She's going to continue to cause problems. Oh and I love that they are engaged :0)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I hope this will get rid of Collin for good. He is such a douche. Glad that Edward is back home and Rose is trying to make things right. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
whew! i cannot wait for more i LOOOOVEE this story! pierced tattward is soo hott!! cant wait for more please update soon!!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
That information was in the nick of time. Love the description of the ring. I don't prefer white diamonds either. I like my blue diamond and it matches the color of my birth stone. It was a choice between a darker blue like a saffire and the blue/green of my birthstone. It is different and cool.
Date: 08 Feb 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Collin better drop the charges. He really doesn't want all of his and his families dirty laundry aired out in court. He knows it was all a plot anyway. Edward needs to get off.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Loving this story I really should be sleeping got a meeting first thing tomorrow-but I think another couple of chapters will be read tonight
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I love Edward...
If you ever decide to make a baby in this fic I found a pic that would work awesomly for a banner... JS. LOL
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lfv4foAxKW1qgedl0o1_500.png
Author's Response: Oh. My. God! Yes! They are actually going to have six lol. You are the only one privy to that though. Emilliano Axel, Elijah Angelo, twins Evan Asher and Ethan Aaron, baby girl Emerson carlie and one in the oven. This should be the series of epilogues if all goes as planned. Smooches, Laila
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I just read the whole story and I think you are doing an amazing job. I think Tanya and Gianna should both get in trouble too. What Tanya did was stealing and that's illegal, taking something from someone's house is wrong. I'm hoping that all three Collin, Gianna and Tanya get the punishment that they deserve. Rose is a real bitch saying that the rubies were cheap, she's just jealous. Early on in this story when they were at the mall Rose said something to Bella about her only being with Edward because of his money. That's wrong, she's with him because she loves him. Rose on the other hand is a selfish bitch. I can't see how Emmett puts up with her. I know he loves her, but sometimes love isn't enough. I think he deserves better. I really like this story and I can't wait to read what's going to happen next. Please update soon.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
WOW, I wasn't expecting the proposal this soon, but im glad!! Also, very suprised about rose's confession of sorts, didn't guess that either!!! I cannot wait for the next update!!!! THANKS FOR SUCH A GREAT STORY!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
:)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Great chapter. Thanks for the update, I was just thinking about the story yesterday. Update again soon please. Cant wait to find out about the trial and Edward handling Gianna.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I love it! So happy to see the update! :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Gsh I have missed this story. DO you actually know the diffeence between a ruby and a red emerald? I had never heard of such a thing. I thought the difference between a ruby and an emerald was the color.
ANyway, hurry back soon, I am sitting on the endge of my seat.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Take a look at this website. Red emeralds are also known as red beryl. And are very rare and expedite. Go bella! http://www.jewelrybloguncovered.com/top-10-jewelry/top-10-most-expensive-gemstones/
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Loved it!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Do you have a picture of the ring? Or a picture so that we can get the general idea? It sounds gorgeous!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
damn, Rose still is a bitter bitch.....Capo should just growl at her till she pisses in her pants.....i'm crossing my fingers for Edward.....
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
rose is such a bitch! cant wiat to see what happens next
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Wow, that was incredible! I was not expecting him to ask like that, but for them, it was perfect :) I love Edward's new tattoo, I think sometimes that is a really sexy tattoo :D I really cannot wait to see how the trial goes, now with this new information :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
That was wonderful, Thank YOU, Thank YOU so very much for the newest chapter! I knew it was that rotten to the core worthless Gianna! I can't to see what you have in store for her in the form of KARMA! (insert evil smirk)...
Rose well, she was trying to help and you do kind of feel sad, NOT sorry, sad for her... Her is my reasoning, she is the one that is always pointing out to everyone else all of their short comings and imperfections, as well as making those comments about "settling" The only person that is settling is Rose! We ALL have imperfections and shortcomings - Those who live in Glass Houses should NOT cast Stones!!!!
Great Chapter, Love, Love, Love the story and Love our Hot, SEXY as HELL Rocker Edward, oh yeah love a CAVEWARD too!!!
Please have a great weekend and take care, till next update CHEERS...
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Man those women certainly are catty bitches! I really hope that Collin does drop the charges...and that they release all the information anyway just to screw him.
Rosalie certainly doesn't look any better in my eyes either with her comments about the cheapness of Rubies, trying to get her digs in and sitting on that information that could have spared them all. I hope Gianna goes to jail for what she did!
So exicted about the engagement! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I knew those crazy B*tches were up to something. I am so glad Edward ask her to marry him without waitingfor the mess to be over. I loved the ring he got her.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
This is a great story!!! It has everything that holds your attention, lemons, romance, drama,excitement!!! Every fan needs to read this!!! I personally can't wait for more!!! The way you describe in detail the characters, ALL of them, the scene, you "see it", you feel it. It actually feels like you are there and experiencing it all!! GREAT!!! MORE PLEASE!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
rosie going to save the day?
Date: 11 Jan 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
ut oh
Date: 11 Jan 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
bad ass with good intentions
Date: 11 Jan 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
I knew it, ust be that Gianna biatch
Date: 11 Jan 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
such a great story I am really emjoying it
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
such a great story, but I can't keep letting it take me aay fro school, I am being such a naughty girl
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
why did Edward hide the fact he can speak Italian, and Bella has had really shitty taste in men o far
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
wait to their porn get leake which I suspect will happen.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Eward should think before he speaks
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
this is one hot story
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
another good one, hopefully Rosie nd Tanya getover themselves
Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
loved
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
liked it loved it
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
hmmm 35 and 20 quite an age diffeence but men do mature slower
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Okay now that was even hotter the second read through!! Holy Hell!!
Laters BB
Kathy
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
this is my second time through this story I did not review on all the chapters last time I was sooo engrossed in the story, but now I will take time and review. I absoutly love the characters and the way they are portrayed, Especially Edward and Bella, very strong Bella even though she can be vunerable at the same time. Awesome!!
Laters BB
Kathy
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
what the heck...please dont leave me this way....I am on my knees begging for the next chapter.. petty please... this is great!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Okay now I feel like a Ass myself for calling Charlie a Asswipe, since he did Man up and made a mends with both Edward and Bella and appears to be doing all he can do to help.
Now Bella, Bella, Bella don't you go getting yourself into trouble, deep!!! I worry about this girl, but I am hopeful that she will be fine. Let's see!
Onto the next chapter
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Let me just say I'm really pissed at the way Charlie Asswipe acted; and Loved when Capo pissed on Gianna, that was too priceless. Now Collin has to be stopped this is getting crazy!! I want to come through this computer screen and beat the crap ola out of him!!! Hey, I'm really not a violent person at all but this guy could and would do anything. Just a sick Bastard that's what I say!
On to the next Chapter...
Laters
Kathy xoxo
Date: 04 Jan 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Great Chapter, so glad they were able to hash things out. I was worried for a few minutes with my boy "J" that's just not like him. I did see where he was sort'a coming from, but at the same time, he was not clearly recalling or giving credit to Edward and everything that he had done all those years.. They worked it out and that's what matters.
Freudian slip hey!! Well I'm sort'a hoping that it's not a slip and that she is preggers, buts that just my hopes.. You have my thoughts on your in control and you say what's what in this plot line... HEHEHEHE!!!
Much love for your writing and story,
Kathy
xoxo
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I really enjoyed this chapter and the discussion that Edward had with Emilliano, that was pretty right on. I also think it was important for us to see some sort of inner struggle with Bella and Mateo because he was a close friend of hers since she was 6 yrs old, and they shared alot of special things, so she thought, together. This is exactly why we like and love Bella, she is loyal and cares for those around her, IF they show her kindness and consideration where she is able to develope a bond with them. She was also able to see that what she feels for Edward could never compare to any feelings that she could ever have witth someone else. Great story, looking forward to seeing what happens with the band, I hope for Heaven's Sake they all pull their Heads out and I mean Jasper (althought it pains me to say) and Emmett, I think Rose was already starting to come around. We shall see perhaps you have more drama in mind for this Band.
On to the next Chapter Oh I am really hoping that you are going to let Bella and Edward have kids soon too, well in accordance with what you see as an appropriate timeline of course. Your, the author after all... :-) :-) :-)
Kathy
Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
This is one hell'va story and I am hooked! You Rock!!! Boy, can't wait to read more!
Kathy
xoxo
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
That would suck to deal with getting out of jail then immediately hitting the road on tour...poor Bella is at home alone and doesn't know what will happen next.
Wonder what happened at the end, it must be bad if so many missed calls from everyone, and then Bella's voicemail about Rose...obviously I can't wait to read what happens next.
PS - can I mention that I love your writing - even when they are apart you still find a way to work a lemon in there!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
I wonder what Rose wants, it could be anything. Good chapter.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
:)
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
Dun dun dunn! I can't wait for the next chapter! This is honestly the best AH fic ever!
Update soon :)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
She better bring good news and not bad. She is hard to trust with all the drama she caused on tour. Bella better call some one to the house.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
Thanks for the update!
Happy Christmas and
Merry New Year! :)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
Oh shit....what is that all about??? I am so dieing to know what Rosalie is doing there!!! Please don't make us wait too long to find out!! Pretty please!! LOL
I loved this chapter and especially loved the fact that you went right thru the 3 weeks nice and quickly and didn't drag their time apart...which would have killed me!!
I love that he got her a very unique and personal ring and cant wait for him to put it on her finger!! I also went searching for a pic on your blog and discovered that there wasn't one and that you haven't updated it lately...
I really want to see a pic of the ring, if you have one; let me know if you do and where & when I can see it...
This story is one of my most favorites Edward stories...I fucking love him hard!! I have been with you since the beginning and will be right along with you right to the very end, which I might say, I DO NOT WANT IT TO END EVER!!!!!! LOL
xoxoxo Hope you have a happy safe new year!!!
See ya next chappie!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
OH NO!!!! Really looking forward to your next update!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
oh no, Rosalie is there to cause her trouble or harm???? Why didn't she call Jake to come to the house???
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
Yes new chapter!! Love it hate that they are seperated and that it is probably not Rose coming through the gate but can't wait to see what happens!!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
Oh wow. I'm gonna need another update. NOW! LOL! :-)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
Wow, that was incredible! I really hope Bella is ok, please? Can I hurt anyone who is responsible for hurting her if she isn't? I really cannot wait to see what happens next, you have me SUPER worried!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
I knew they'd find a way to make their time apart interesting. :0) Wonder whats up with Bella now?
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
I was so happy to see the update. Another great chapter. Update again soon so we can see what Rosalie is up to.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
well i hope for his sake shes alright ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
:0)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
I love that Edward stood his ground around Charlie. This is a really good chapter. I wish Collin would just leave them alone. :0)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
"It finally seems like everything in my life is perfect, like nothing can bring me down."
Awww man, why did he have to say that??? It's like the kiss of death.
Awesome story so far by the way. I started reading a couple hours ago and only have 10 more chapters to catch up to where you are currently. Can't wait to read the rest :)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
*clears throat well that was interesting lol what a welcome home from jail treat that was..I wonder what Bella will come up with to get Collin to drop the charges against Edward. Hopefully not something that'll tear E&B apart.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
I love this story, I really figured Edward would propose before he left even though he didn't have the ring yet. Oh well, I hope he is able to do it soon, I just love the way he has been able to defend her and finally getting Charlie to accept him.
There has to be some dirt on Collin so that Bella doesn't do anything to get herself in trouble or in acompromising postition. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
I recently found and started reading this awesome story. Your Edward and Bella are totally hot together. I really enjoyed this last chapter and who would have thought that Edward beating the crap out of someone could be both sexy and would get Charlie on his side
PS - Collin is such a douche and I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Looks like Bella is going to do whatever it takes but that could also get her into a world of trouble.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
awwww i don`t Edward to go away i ALMOST feel their sorrow!!!, your really good at that, explaining the characters feelings.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
I loved this chapter but am getting this awful feeling in my gutt about Bella's last statement...."I vow to myself to use the three weeks I have to come up with a plan to get Collin to drop the charges against Edward. There has to be a way, and I'll be damned if I don't find it.".....Why oh why do I get the sinking suspicion that she is going to do something like go to any lengths (when she really shouldn't) to protect Edward and get Collin to drop the charges and only have it backfire in her face????? Or is my mind just getting carried away....I guess I will just have to wait n see!!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Wow, that was incredible! I really loved it so much! You had me so worried! I really am happy he is ok :) I hope they can figure out a way to get Collin to drop the charges (within reason)! I also cannot wait to read about their possible sexy times while skype-ing ;) Dirty me ;) Man, Edward without the piercings must have been different (were they ALL gone, if you know what I mean), do you have a list of all the piercings/tattoos?
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
love it
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
im glad that her dad iis finally startging to like him cant wait to see waht her plan is for collin to drop the charges
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
ughh collin is such an ass. i can't wait for bella to do something that will make him drop the charges against edward!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Pleas let her fine the juiciest, dirtiest, secret she can find on that dirtbag Colin! It'll keep her distracted enough so time will go fast and Edward will be back ASAP
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
They need to find a way to just get rid of Collin. He is causing to much trouble. He is like an STD. He is a disease that keeps reoccuring. I am so glad that Charlie stepped up to help Edward.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
:)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
aww that chapter had me getting a lot weepy mixed with lemons! I love you! lol keep up the great work. this is getting soo good. I can't wait to find out the dirt on Collin even though he's PROBABLY gay. lol thanks again bye
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Loves it bb!!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Great chapter. I cant wait for next update, please update again soon.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
He needs to wear his glasses more often. LOL
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
oh holy fuck on toast, she's gonna go and do "a bella" and try to fix it and totally fuck it up and make the situation 110 times worse
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Thank you for the update, I loved the chapter. I wonder what it's going to take for Collin to drop the charges? Glad to see that Charlie came to help Edward out. Keep him out of jail, please.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Wow action packed chapter. I hope Bella finds a way to get Collin to drop the charges without sacrificing herself or her relationship. Can't wait to read more hope you update soon!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
I knew Edward was going to do something to Collin! But I doubt Edward will get in trouble because Collin had basically been blackmailing/threatning Bella with that sex tape!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
I think it was worth it. Bastard deserved to get his ass kicked!
Another great chapter. Holy shit, I laughed so hard when I read about Capo pissing on Gianna's leg!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
can't you let them catch a break?
as always it's a great update!! :)