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Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

:O :O :O :O 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 11:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I can't wait to see Esme in action against that family. Nahuel is going to be a powerful ally for them going forward. He may even have to help on the case against Billy.

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 11:27 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Great chapter! I love this family.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 11:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Mama Bear Esme!!!!!!!!! Dont mess with her cubs!!!!!!! Esme meet with Garrett and asked questions..... does Carlisle and Esme practice BDSM?????

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

WOW!! ;)

Reviewer: Marnie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2021 10:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Ich liebe die Geschichte, wie einige andere von die. Ich kann die Frtsetzung kaum erwarten. Danke schön!!!

Reviewer: YankeegirlNJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 8:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Surprising that Edward didn't have her condo under surveillance since he knew 

he" moved into the building. 

I wonder how the family will take the info, as well as the police.

Can't wait for more

 

Reviewer: YankeegirlNJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 8:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Surprising that Edward didn't have her condo under surveillance since he knew 

he" moved into the building. 

I wonder how the family will take the info, as well as the police.

Can't wait for more

 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 1:26 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I wish there were some way Edward could legally just take "him" out. I don't think anyone other than "his" dislusional parents would miss him. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 12:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Ugh.  Poor Bella.  This guy really needs to just die.

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 5:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I still think HE is jaspers step brother

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

It would have been hard for me to go back down stairs to talk to anyone after seeing Edward like that.

Just a quickie.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Yeah but aren't condos supposed to have security???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš‘πŸš’πŸ”₯

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Billy must have given up Isabella's personal information to "him".
Will Sam discover anything new at the crime scene?
For a minute I was almost mad at Rose.
Esme took the wedding announcement better than expected.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Awful situation 

thank you 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 2:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

:) 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 1:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Far as I'm concerned, whatever agreement Bella made is null and void by virtue of "his" actions! May he rot in hell soon...whoever he is!

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 12:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Awesome chapter love the moments with Esme and Carlisle.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:35 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Absolutely terrific story, I just wish the chapters were a little longer. That's not a complaint, it's just after waiting all week for the next update, it goes by too quick.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

It is a shame Edeard hadn't already moved her things out of the condo.

Reviewer: northmanherondale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Oooh! It's all getting closer. πŸ’•

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 8:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

They better find "him" quick because he's getting closer and more brave.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Crap!! I know she can't break her nda but there must be ways around it. Maybe circulate his picture so he can't get close to her or have facial recognition?.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 6:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Also, I forgot to mention that Esme took the news alot better than I thought she would about missing the wedding.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 6:27 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Let me guess,  twiddle see and tweedle dumb told "he" that Bella and Edward were engaged.  And he flipped his shit. Or "he" is pissed that Billy is in jail.  Can't wait for more as usual.  

Reviewer: northmanherondale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 4:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Oooh! It's all getting closer. πŸ’•

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

That went from bless fully happy to scary to sweet and hot

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 2:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Thank you for the update..well done.  Maybe we will find out soon who this asshole is. until you post again

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I was hoping that Rosalie didn't act like a spoiled bitch when she found out.  Great job in writing the reactions. Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 12:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Thanks 

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 12:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Ohhh!!! I can't wait to know who He is! Great chapter 

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 12:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Ohhh!!! I can't wait to know who He is! Great chapter 

Reviewer: EmmaSydneyCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 8:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Loved it. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

well you eliminated 2 of my guesses with james and jacob ...i still got caius and riley ...please dont make it peter we like peter but the fact it's jaspers step brother is throwing me too.

Reviewer: northmanherondale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2021 10:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

😍

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 1:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Can't we ship Tia and Leah to Antartica or some other desolate far away place?,, Mars perhaps?.. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 10:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Oh my

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

A bit of chastisement will follow up that announcement once the reality of their actions sets in.
Now twiddle-de and twiddle-dumb are working with Bella's hateful ex. How dreadfully fitting.

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Spectacular

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Rose and Emmett are both wonderful people who would never feel that Edward and Bella did this to upstage their own wedding! Even so, their news was quite the bombshell LOL!

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

I hope that the silence ends and everyone will be happy and congratulating them. When the news of Edward's and Bella's marriage reaches those two two evil witches, Tia and Leah, they will know they can't break these two apart. It's horrifying to think they are working with "him" to destroy Bella. But Edward will do his best to destroy "him" so he can never hurt Bella again. I don't know what you have planned for this story but I hope Bella doesn't have to deal with "him" other than to see "him" apprehended. And of course, I would love to see Tia and Leah put in their places permanently.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 6:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

I so can't wait to hear everyone's reactions.  I still am really worried about the trouble maker twins & of course "him", but all three are going to lose their minds when they hear the news of the newlyweds. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

I so can't wait to hear everyone's reactions.  I still am really worried about the trouble maker twins & of course "him", but all three are going to lose their minds when they hear the news of the newlyweds. 

Reviewer: YankeegirlNJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

I loved this chapter! Too bad everyone is so shocked.

 

now... if I could just figure out how to get notified when a new chapter is up on this site I'll be golden! ;)

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Love this story can't wait for everyone to erupt all at once, whether it is good, bad or in between can't wait to read it! 

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 10:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Omg 😱 I can't wait to see their reactions. Please update soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 10:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

OMG love it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 7:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Yay!!! I hope someone is monitoring Tia & Leah! The monster has to be stopped!

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 6:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Love it! Looking forward to reading their reactions.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 5:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

I hope the family accepts the marriage without any grief.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 4:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

They need to follow up with how they didn't want to hide it from them but will keep it under wraps until Rose & Emmett are married. 

 

How delusional ARE Leah & Tia?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Damn Damn Damn.   I was in the shower the other night and this darn story was spinning around in my head and I had decided that Royce was him.   Errgh.

Tia and Leah really need to be taken down HARD!!!

Reviewer: Nonita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Can't wait to read the next chapter, amazing as always! Thanks! 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 4:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

HOLYSH*T!! This is awesome!! I can't wait to read every ones reaction to the news! lol ;)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 3:30 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Somehow I don't see Rose as taking this news gracefully.  We'll see.

Reviewer: alicej Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 3:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Such a great story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 2:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Oh my!!!! You left us hanging!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 2:24 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

HAPPY HALLOWEEN πŸŽƒ 

They should have invited Tia and Leah too, just so they could get the bad talk and so Rose could see how her friends are jealous of Bella. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯πŸš’πŸš‘πŸŽƒ

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 2:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 1:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

The family is happy E and B are married.  Leah and Tia are plotting some sort of awful revenge.

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Damn it! I need more now!!!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Loved it

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 12:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Love it Love it

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 12:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Thanks 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Great story can't wait to see what is going to happen next.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 3:11 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Beautifully crafted revenge *high five!* Just goes to show how important it is not to underestimate ANYONE, especially not Edward THE MAN Cullen LOL!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 7:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Loved the chapter ❀ πŸ’• ♥ 💖   can't wait 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 4:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Love Jacob getting his licks in on his disgusting father.  

Reviewer: jen5795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 1:44 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

OMG, this is so hard to decide who "him" is, there is still a long list of names that it could possibly be. I've got it down to 6 but need more info. Besides that I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2021 10:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2021 10:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Thank you

Reviewer: CullenCherries Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Ok so it's not James, Jacob, or Mike.... Tyler?

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 8:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Love it can't wait for the next chapter 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 7:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Well, that eliminated one guess of who "him" was.  Billy is really delusional thinking that Edward Cullen is stupid. Someone will notice Bella's rings.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

He had it coming, he only got what he deserved! Can't wait to see what else Edward has in store for Billy.

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 3:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Loving it! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 2:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Thanks muchly as always for the update, girlie. I'm looking forward to the next. 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 6:51 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Hmm still think him is someone related to Jasper maybe his step brother. Yay they got billy loved it 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 5:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Love this chapter.   Mad some whiny so and so reported your blog!!  Grow up children, or quit reading!

 

Billy got arrested! Woohoo!

Still trying to figure out who Bella's abuser is.

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Laurant, Riley, Garrett, there are several male characters still to choose from concerning Bella's former Dom.
Bella will never return to that apartment complex thanks to Edward's love. Just one more way that Edward Cullen has thwarted her attacker.

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Jajaja yes down he goes

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Love the big shoutout about West Virginia. So you mention Michael and Jasper so that takes them out. So who could it be??? 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸ”₯πŸš’πŸš‘πŸŽƒπŸ‘»πŸ˜ˆ

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

This is fantastic!! I am dying to read more! ;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 1:22 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I loved it this was awesome now the high tea party

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 1:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Nice. I must say I'm surprised Edward still did business with Billy after Billy disowned Jacob 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 12:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 12:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

:) 

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 11:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Thanks 

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 11:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Thanks 

Reviewer: GuardianSakura Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 11:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

well there goes all my guesses cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I loved πŸ’• seeing Billy get humiliated! I can't wait to see what else Edward has planned next. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 11:35 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Couldn't have happened to a better guy.  Knock him the fuck out.  Then take everything he holds dear.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 11:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh my gosh!!!!!! I loved what happened to Billy.  Edward's rings were not discovered.  Will Bella be so lucky?

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 10:58 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Still trying to figure it out I think it maybe  arm ?

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 10:30 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Billy got what he deserved.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 9:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Damn that was good!! I'm worried for Bella. I think they need to inform the family about Bella's past. The more eyes that are on her for protection, the better. Especially since the perp has managed to get a tracker on the bimbos!

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 9:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Yes, Who is it?????

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