Date: 11 May 2020 6:44 AM Title: Prologue
It's a shame that Angela never spoke to Edward about her real thoughts and feelings regarding him enlisting, she just took herself out of the decision making. I'm not excusing her infidelity but, she clearly didn't feel in control of her life or family.
Date: 05 May 2020 7:34 PM Title: Chapter One
Bella has really had a rough life. I hope eventually, Edward and Bella can fix each other. And I hate Sue. Charlie is no better. Bella should not do anything else for Charlie. Let his stupid wife do it.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 05 May 2020 10:59 AM Title: Prologue
Oh it's all Angela's fault? F**k that, you leave your wife to her own devices because of some hero complex and then get shocked when she looks elsewhere for attention? This is so one sided, it's ridiculous. As for her family, who the hell does that to their blood? It's one thing to disapprove of what your sister, child does but, to outright betray and dispose of them is disgusting.
Date: 05 May 2020 7:55 AM Title: Chapter One
I greatly dislike Charlie. I don't know if I'd trust him to pay Bella back for all the money she's spending.
Edward sounds like he'll be a nightmare to work for. Will Bella be the nanny for his son?
Looking forward to more.
Date: 05 May 2020 4:28 AM Title: Chapter One
Mercy!!! Please post your updates on Facebook,.. for some reason I am not getting my story updates from Stars.
I usually like Charlie but he sounds like a spineless lizard!!
Cannot wait to see what happens next.