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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

Glad Edward went to apologize.  Poor Jakey. I hope Bella gets the bear and can give it back to him.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward understood her shitty day at least and went above and beyond to take care of Bella.  Everyone else needs to butt out and let them figure out things for themselves.  That poor little boy is probably dead now, because of slow Heidi and slow DHS workers.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

poor kids..... i hate abusers

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh Edward...it's ok. She's not Tanya 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

He is softening with every chapter but will he ever heal his heart enough to open it up to Bella 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am so ready for the next update. 

READ YOU SOON 🌺 🌺 🌺

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

Two updates! Loved loved it!! Omg!!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

AWE!!!!!!!! I so want another chapter and all of it you know ugh. I love it!!!!

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

She called Edward!! 😀 Can't wait for next update!! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

Why didn't Edward press charges against Tanya or have her arrested? He could have ruined her life beyond the bitter shell of the existence she was living.
Did he see all the belongings that adorned his house or did Tanya steal those things as well?
Let's hope that Isabella Swan will be receptive to his rambling, groveling, and repentant apology.

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow. Tanya and Demerits are all kinds of f'd up. I wish bad things for them! Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

What a Bitch

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Interesting

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh Wow

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Edward...this is heartbreaking

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh wow that nasty bitch messed him up bad but his boys are right he needs to get help and make it up to Bella 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Holy cow tanya is soooo much worse than i expected.  Then his dad finding her was so humiliating!  Hopefully edward takes care of bella with a couple extra lemons to show her how thankful he is. Also I LOVE the banner you added!  It's amazing!!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, what an skanky bitch!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

good

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love the male bonding going on here.. I would think after a double shift Bella will have lack of judgment and will stop at Edwards to make sure he's still alive. But will give him Crap about being such an Ass.. And the only reason she's there is because she a responsible Doctor..😏

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow!  Tanya is worse than I thought.  If she's an addict and pregnant I'm sure there will issues with her baby if she really is pregnant. Poor Edward. No wonder he's so messed up.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

I loooovvvvveeeeee this story! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, Tanya was really a bitch. Poor Edward.  No wonder he has problems.  But as long as he is feeling like he does about women, Tanya is winning. She is still controlling his life. He needs to take that power back himself. 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

oh damn, that is a tough story, poor edward

his friends are right, he needs help

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow poor Edward. He really needs to get some help to get over this. 4 years is a long time to be carrying the around.

 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

I thought for sure Edward would confide in Bella about Tanya. Damn, she was a POS. Edward better get his ass over to the hospital with some coffee to apologize. Demetri needs his ass kicked six way to Sunday, and he nor Tanya deserve the child she's carrying. At least Edward got Tanya's name off of everything of his. 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: LENNOXBONES Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

How are Demetri, Felix, and Tanya not in prison right now? They were stealing and selling drugs from a hospital. I wish Edward had called the cops and had them all arrested or at least investigated. His dad's PI may have gotten evidence of their crimes too.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

oh man that was harsh, the way Tanya treated Edward.. he really needs help to get over this.  

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

Dude! Awesome chapter! Excellent movement of the story. Totally loving this fic. I had a crappy day and seeing the new chapter pop up made my day. More please!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 11

OMG poor Edward, amazing update

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

I can already tell that Demetri is behond a prick!  My heart breaks for Edward without knowing what the story is about Tanya.  I'm sure whatever she did was beyond cruel.  And I can't wait for her to get her ass handed to her by Bella, Rose, and Alice!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

I need more of this fic. I can't get enough. I think Edward will tell Bella more soon.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

I have no doubts that is the most Edward has told anyone about his past relationship.

Sherry

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2017 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love this story !   He is  REALLY  messed  up !  Sounds  like  it's  going  to  take  a  lot  to get  him  to  open  up  about  it ! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love this story immensely 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

I think Tanya was pregnant & had an abortion and/or tod Edward she didn't want kids. Cheated on him, maybe with Demitri & is now having his baby.

I know it has to be more though....I hope he opens up to Bella.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

I wonder when she wakes him in 2 hours will he be groggy enough to pull her into bed with & snuggle.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

I bet they end up in a bed in an on call room and fall asleep cuddling! They both need it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

That's what i'm talking about!! Take charge bella!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bella needs to go to his office & have her wicked way with him again.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh boy we found out where Tanya left too but why and what else did she do 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

I want to cry for him

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

oh wow, he is deeply troubled, hold a grudge much masen?

keep it coming 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

I thought Edward might tell her some stuff.  But even drunk, he is tight lipped.  

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

I have read about 3 or 4 of your stories but I really like the ones you are working on right now. Out of the Darkness is amazing. You don't know what is going to happen. Married to the Mob - I'll leave a review but this one I love this one. I love the no--nonsense Bella and her wit and banter. I love how she shows her weaknesses and she's isn't afraid.  I know that Edward has been hurt. That was a given the first page. I think Tanya took everything Edward had in the house, his money and moved on with Demitri and something else but I can't put my finger on it. 

How do you do this writing thing? Your stories are completely different and you just keep pumping them out. Wow - just wow!! You amaze me totally and completely, thank you.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 10

READ YOU SOON🌺

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

He is getting close to telling Bella about the bitch.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

Can't wait to find out how Tanya broke more than Edward's heart. Glad Bella is taking care of Edward. 

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Somehow Tanya humiliated Edward and in the process told him she didn't want children with him. Making the idea of his huge house a total joke.
He needs to sell the place. Move into something that has no memories of his ex.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

He's thawing, somewhat. I'm hating on both Tanya and Demitri right now. Edward should seriously think about letting this go, and/or telling someone about what's bugging him. Bella might be a good choice, but she's no therapist. He must be a hurt little boy under all that bravado and anger...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

This had to be one of the hottest chapters i have read in a while. I can't to wait how long this "buddy" thing last... Snicker!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

We've discovered that Tanya cheated and exposed Edward to sexually transmitted diseases. Could there also have been a pregnancy involved? Fatherhood was something he wanted so badly. That would have been a crushing blow to him.
Bella's pragmatic approach to this arrangement may help Edward in the beginning but it will hinder his thoughts in the future.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ooooo, nurse Heidi is going to be mad at Dr. Swan for getting what she's been wanting.
Will Edward eventually spill his guts to his boys about the hot sex with Dr. Swan?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm a bit surprised that Bella gave up the details to her girlfriends. But she needed to vent as well.
Rosalie and Alice bowing before her was hilarious.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

Isabella is breaking down so many barricades that Edward resurrected after his last disastrous relationship.
Will she pursue Edward or will he become distant once again?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

What is it from Isabella's history that precipitated such a severe panick attack during the tremors?
Interesting approached to treat a panick attack, Dr. Masen.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, Edward finally released some of the anguish he has been holding within himself.
Did Edward catch the reference to Bella and connect it to Dr. Isabella Swan?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Internal monologue set free with a little wine, that's funny. Best be careful Isabella. Hahahaha
Edward's world is being tossed upside down by a feisty little brunette.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love the meet and greet between two very strong female personalities. Good solid start to the three females becoming close friends. Did I miss Alice's position at the hospital? Is she also a doc?
Edward has some huge issues that are creeping into his ability to remain professional.

Author's Response:

Alice is a nurse on the pediatric floor. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start to the traditional views between this father and daughter. I like the fact that Dr. Charles Swan is loathing his ex-wife and Isabella is encouraging him to find his own happiness.
Edward seems to have some deep scars.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh my they made a deal but how long will that work for them hmmmm

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh wow. This is great.

Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

I cant wait for the update!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

That was a big step for him OMG.  They are going to have so much fun together.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

oh i bet this will end well, oh when will these two learn

keep it coming

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

"FUCK BUDDIES"  seems kinda hollow but I hope eventually he'll open up his heart.

READ YOU SOON 🌺 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

They have to get together....?

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward needs some therapy I believe.  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

They have agreed. Let's see how long it last as JUST truck buddies.  Lol. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

I tried the friends with benefits thing too, but couldn't help getting emotionally attached. I got hurt. Most women I know are like me, and most men can do just fine with a friends with benefits arrangement. I like the story and wonder how it will end. I'd love to keep reading and see. Thanks.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

I feel horrible for Edward and not knowing what happened is killing me.   Tanya dis something really big for him to be so embarrassed that he hasn't told anyone.   

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, edward must have really been burned badly.

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

Omg!! Loved it but don't think fuck buddies is going to work 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh my. Keep it coming! Love this!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE IT!! Amazing sexy chapter. Cant wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love Love Love your story can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lol. I love your snarky Bella.  I have finally caught up and now I have to wait on your update. Hopefully it won't be long. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Lol. Love that Bella is getting around so good with Rose a d the girls can tease each other like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Lol. Love that Bella is getting around so good with Rose a d the girls can tease each other like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Lol. Love that Bella is getting around so good with Rose a d the girls can tease each other like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, they had sex in the locker room at the hospital.  He was really nice to hold  Bella during her freaking out over the earthquake. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella is freaking out. Bless her heart. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

What in the world happened between Edward and Tanya?

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm having way too much fun reading this story, lol. I can hardly wait for Edawrd and Bella resume their conversation. Though, I'm wondering what Heidi is up to, if anything

Sherry

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Dude! I LOVE this fic! I literally squeal when I see an update. More please. Soon please. ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

I like your snarky Bella.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Having her as a fuck buddy might do him some good. Can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well, that did not go well for their 1st meeting. Sparks are flying!!!!! Can't what to see them explode together. 

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great story!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

So..... just fuck buddies huh???? 

 

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