[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I really want esme's paintings to become famous but if that happens carlisle would find them. Is johnny still alive after 5 years of torture?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
I think i'm in shock! WOW!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 3:58 PM Title: Making a Run for It
I love this already!!
Date: 21 May 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Love is best if it is started in friendship and they are so cute.
Date: 21 May 2017 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Will Carlisle be in San Fransisco??? Hmmmmm!!!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!!π‘π’π’–
Date: 21 May 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Esme is going to become an artist!!!!
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!! KEEP WRITING!!π’π’–π’π‘
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Love it,can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
:)
Date: 20 May 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
I hope they don't get recognized. Edward is seeing Bella in a new light.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
I sense trouble ahead in San Francisco.
Date: 20 May 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Loved it, thanks!
Date: 20 May 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Thanx!
Date: 20 May 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Thanks!
Date: 20 May 2017 7:59 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Good start!
Date: 20 May 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Good chapter
Date: 20 May 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Crazy love!
Date: 20 May 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Sweet child, close friends, a new career! I sense drama ahead.
Date: 18 May 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I love the friendship they have forged. I can't wait to see how their lives continue to blossom away from the evil that is Carlisle!
Date: 16 May 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
umm Maria? Is that a middle name? Glad she has some friends though
Date: 16 May 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
wow. I normally never say this, but Carlisle really needs to die.
Date: 16 May 2017 8:33 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Can't blame her for wanting out.
Date: 16 May 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I'm confused. Wasn't Esme Elizabeth instead of Maria?
Date: 15 May 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I like the story so far. Just one thing...in the first chapter Esme said her new name was Elizabeth, but in this chapter they are calling her Maria.
Date: 15 May 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Esme is going to become an artist!!!!
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!! KEEP WRITING!!π’π’–π’π‘
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
:)
Date: 14 May 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Lots of love!
Date: 14 May 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Life is good she is at peace but for how long.?
Date: 14 May 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 14 May 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I am glad that Esme and Edward have enjoyed their years without Carlisle. Thanks for the update. I was just thinking about this story the other day and was wondering when it would be updated. Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
Date: 14 May 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Edward and Bella are too cute.
Date: 14 May 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Can't wait to read the next update . And see where this story goes
Date: 13 May 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I hope he never finds them, and if he does is when Edward is a grown man. Thanks for the update :)
Date: 13 May 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Sweet Edward taking care of Bella.
Date: 26 Apr 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Can't wait till the next update
Date: 19 Apr 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Carlisle is so sick in this story. I hope Esme is successful because I don't want Edward like his father.
Date: 16 Apr 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Wowsa, that is one mean Carlisle who won't be betrayed! I can't imagined what he will do to Esme if he ever catches up to her. *shivers*
I'm beyond intrigued and want more. But I could use another visit to Forks for a bit of a respite now....then back to the action. *Giggles*
Love you, my brilliant girl! Drooling for more. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2017 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Carlisle is pure evil.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2017 11:51 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Loving this story so much.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Wow he is ruthless. Run Esme run and stay hiden OMG
Date: 11 Apr 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 06 Apr 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
WOAW I just hope Carlisle will NEVER EVER find Esme nor Edward again.
Date: 04 Apr 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Well, there is no doubt on why Esme left... Carlisle is way pass crazy!!!
Did Johnny help Esme? I don't think so, I can't see Esme putting someone in danger. My guess is she is smarter than anyone gave her credit for and simply paid attention to her surroundings. I might have to re-read the previous chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
WOW
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2017 12:17 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Sounds promising!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Wow so good
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
great story so far , my name is Lida, i was suprised to see it ysed in your story. it was a nice suprise . but anyways carlise is an ass. can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 02 Apr 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Damn.,.. Carlisle means business
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
:)
Date: 01 Apr 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
I hope esme and edward aren't found until edwards an adult with his own mind and power
Date: 01 Apr 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
This Carlisle is one mean asshole. Wow!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Wow. He is bad and evil.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
I don't understand how anyone could survive that torture.
I hope that it's a cold day in Hell before he finds them.
Carlisle's end should be as imaginative as what he did to Johnny.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
There is no mistaking that this man that we know as being gentle and kind is a true and bonafied monster. Poor, poor Johnny. I hope he dies before Edward is found. I understand totally why he is saying and I don't blame him one little bit. I only pray that Esme and Edward get far, far away.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Holy crap! Maybe some kind of warning for chapters where Carlisle is gonna do something like this will be a good idea going forward. He is a ruthless bastard.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
WOW! Wouldn't want Carlisle pissed off at me!
XXOO
Carol
Date: 01 Apr 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
He is a monster!
Date: 01 Apr 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Brutal. I'm glad she escaped.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 7:13 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Carlisle is a heartless bastard. Esme is safe for now.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2017 11:40 PM Title: Making a Run for It
i can"t wait to read more,great job thanks
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:44 PM Title: Making a Run for It
I hope They aren't found for a very long time. Doe Renee skip out on her family? I don't get that impression.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:02 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Amazing start!
Looking forward to reading more!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2017 4:40 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Well heart here you are at it again. Like you I can't get enough of mobward. Thank you for another mafia story.
Date: 16 Mar 2017 8:34 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Great start looking forward to next update to see Carlisle's reaction x
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2017 7:47 AM Title: Making a Run for It
I see your off to a great start as always. I love me a good mafia story but I hope it's not as dark as it sounds so far....I'm sure it will all work out in the end. I now have a reason to look forward to the weekends. READ YOU SOON. : )
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2017 4:42 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Well, she did what a Mother had to do...sacrifice everything to make sure her child had a better life. I'm totally hooked already and can't wait to see how TonyWard and Bella grow up together. Will they be childhood sweethearts or grow into their love later on? Guess we wait and see. I'm expecting it'll be a bumpy ride ahead though. Carlisle probably won't give them up that easily.
Great start to this new one, my Sweetie. Please write on. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2017 3:25 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Love it. I'm a fan of all your story. Love your mafia stories.
Date: 14 Mar 2017 1:37 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Whole lots of love!
Date: 14 Mar 2017 1:08 AM Title: Making a Run for It
You know I love your stories, and I am once again hooked. I just hate bad guy Carlisle! I prefer bad guy James or Jacob, but I will deal. Can't wait to read more!!
Date: 13 Mar 2017 4:27 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Very interesting beginning.
Date: 13 Mar 2017 1:56 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Can't wait for more!!!!! Esme is so brave to leave Carlisle.
Date: 13 Mar 2017 1:40 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Great start! Can't wait for another Chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2017 7:25 AM Title: Making a Run for It
great start, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 13 Mar 2017 6:50 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Love, love, love, love this!!
Cannot wait for more :D
Date: 13 Mar 2017 6:48 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Off to a good start! Looking forward to more. :D
Date: 13 Mar 2017 4:01 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 13 Mar 2017 2:38 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Wow!! a bad Carlisle for a change!! This is going to be Great!! I can't wait!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2017 12:34 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Sweet cause we work every weekend and the next couple of weeks I will start reading to my class.
OK she should have set her old car on fire!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!ππ‘π’π’–
Date: 13 Mar 2017 12:03 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Loved it. I enjoy reading mafia based stories. Especially yours.
Date: 12 Mar 2017 11:25 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 Mar 2017 11:19 PM Title: Making a Run for It
This is great! I am excited for more of this story! I can't wait to read where you will take this!! ;)
Date: 12 Mar 2017 9:21 PM Title: Making a Run for It
I always love your stories. I'm sensing this one is going to be epic. I hope she trust the Swans in time to tell them who she really is. They may help...
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 8:32 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Seems like it's going to be a good read. U have set the tone for this story and I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 12 Mar 2017 8:19 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Excited to read completed!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 8:17 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Love it!
Date: 12 Mar 2017 8:00 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Great start!!
Love it so far can't wait for the next update!!
Aww they're both babies :)
Cant wait for them to grow up & fall in love with eachother :)
Date: 12 Mar 2017 7:54 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Great first chapter Clo.. LOVED it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 7:22 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Loving It!!! But I love everything you've written so FarβΊοΈ
Date: 12 Mar 2017 7:19 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Really love the plot and how brave Esme has been making her escape.
Date: 12 Mar 2017 6:12 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Very excited about this story!
Date: 12 Mar 2017 6:06 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Awesome!
Date: 12 Mar 2017 5:48 PM Title: Making a Run for It
I can imagine Carlisle wrath when he discovers his wife and son are missing. Excellent start, I like it very much. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 5:47 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Looking forward to more
Date: 12 Mar 2017 4:57 PM Title: Making a Run for It
A great start can't wait to see what happens next see you next time take care....
Date: 12 Mar 2017 4:45 PM Title: Making a Run for It
Good start