Date: 04 Jul 2016 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow, thank you so much for this update, I'm so enjoying this story so far can't wait to find out how Roberto dies and how well Edward takes the news Bella's pregnant. Please update soon x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2016 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter but I so want to read about the reunion
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Finally, So glad that Bella was able to get the first blow to Roberto.
Date: 04 Jul 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!!! I love this chapter! They are all so kick ass! Thank you for the update. Hope you have a wonderful 4th of July! I cannot wait for more.
Date: 04 Jul 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Woo Hoo. Go Bad Ass Bella
Date: 04 Jul 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm really happy with this badass Bella...
Date: 04 Jul 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I love that Bella was the one that severed his dick. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story with us. As always, can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear Roberto. You just learned a very valuable lesson. Never toy with a pregnant woman! ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
OK this is a first our men here at the station groaned and got up and left when Bella cut off Roberto package so this review is all women. We believe that maybe that wasn't Roberto cause that was too easy and we're only at chapter 7. They have to have someone after them to go after them. But also GO BELLA GIRL POWER THAT'S WHAT WE'RE TALKING ABOUT!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖
Date: 04 Jul 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
You are amazing my friend, this chapter was so excellent I am loving this story you are such a good writer l8ve to read everything you write....Deb Walsh
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm sooo excited they're back! I actually reread from the very beginning in line 24hr! Can't wait for more of the Coven Don and Donna!
Date: 04 Jul 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
So happy Bella stabbed the ass
Date: 04 Jul 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Very nicely done! What a great chapter, I am so glad that you didn't drag it out. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Waiting for next chap. Loved this chapIn
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
HA! She stabbed him in the dick! I love it!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay for Bella ! Great shot with the knives! Keep up the great work !
Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Holy Shit!!! Yessssssssss!!! that was frigging awesome!!! I cant wait until the next update!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
YES...YES...YES! 3 fist pumps to go with. I do hope they have 2 way sound so Edward can tell that dickhead a few home truths. Oh wait, he doesn't have 1 anymore. Best yet is gonna be when they tell the guys they're both pregnant. Wonder what Edward is gonna be like while she's pregnant? Carlisle and Esme will be over the moon. Now if Alice can be also, what a shit storm of crazy preggo hormones that would be. Enough to bring grown men to their knees. 3 badass mafia dudes whining like little girls. Wonder if Carlisle is gonna tease them a lot. Probably not realistic but it makes me giggle.
Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thats for the update .
Great chapter :D
Date: 03 Jul 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wickedly awesome (I have my 80's vocabulary out since I saw guns n roses the other night). :-)
Author's Response:
Saw them in 1982. Thanks for the totally awesome review.
Date: 03 Jul 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter keep it up!
Date: 03 Jul 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes! Roberto deserves all the punishment! Hell, Bella's one tough bitch!
Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
oui maintenant plus qu'a attendre qu'elle annonce qu'elle sont enceinte toute les 2
Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
:O :O :O yay cant wait for more
Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hi . I'm from Brazil so forgive my English.
I had read the first part time and I was surprise to see the continuation . Surprise and immensely happy.
I await anxiously the next chapter.
Congratulations
Loving the fic .
kisses
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Cant wait for more
Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
YESSSSSSSSSSS ! Excellent chapter, they are in the place. Bella and Edward, as well as Sean and Elisabeth will all be together soon. And RobertA, !!! LOL !
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Clo!! What ingenious thoughts and ideas you have. I could read your stuff all day and never tire. I cannot wait for Roberto/Rebecca (hee hee ) to die. I am as excited as I was when Aro died. The way you wrote this chapter - I can't tell you enough!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! Xoxo
Date: 03 Jul 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Bella! You go girl!
Date: 02 Jul 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Please continue I love your story
Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Please continue! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is a very good chapter, time is set, soon someone is going down.
Date: 27 Jun 2016 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yep. Did guess they would be preggers together. I can't wait to see the Carlisle and the team in action. Thank you for a wonderful update.
Date: 27 Jun 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
The worst part of this story is waiting for new chapters!!!! I am so happy that Bella and Elizabeth are both pregnant. The boys are going to be over the moon. Can't wait for them to get free and back to them. Poor Edward will be pulling out his hair watching from afar. I am surprised Elizabeth's father is not going with Carslile or Michael. I guess someone has to stay behind to watch the business. Great chapter.
Date: 26 Jun 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Absolutely love this story. Love all mafia type stories. Find I like this type of Edward best. Pls update quicker if you can. I realise how hard it must br to write and live life as well, but it is torture waiting for updates. Love all your stories, well written and interesting. I am not very good at reviewing, I just know what I like. thank you again. Pamela Hanley
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
It is a good chapter, we are going to have at least two babies, it is many pleasures.
Thank you, kisses.
Date: 26 Jun 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
two pregnant women in harms way. Not good except in Fan Fiction. I wont read much after they are reunited with their guys as I do not read BDSM.
Date: 26 Jun 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good work girls.
Date: 26 Jun 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
hi Clo
Just about the translation on Sean' phrase
it must be: "Así es, cabrón"
PUTA its the "translation" for BITCH
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2016 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Roberto is a little crazy. Can't wait for him to meet his doom.
Edward took that better than I thought. They didn't have to sedate him.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think I figured that out a chapters back ( he he he) Awwww!!!! I'm so happy for both of them. Edward and Sean are gonna be daddy's 😊 READ YOU SOON
Date: 25 Jun 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved the chapter!!!! Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
can't wait to see him get his
Date: 25 Jun 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm proud of Edward for realizin' his limitations and trustin' Carlisle and Sean to bring back the love of his life...oh, yeah, and Sean's, too LOL!
Loved the big, bad mafia don whinin' 'cause his mommy is treatin' him like a baby *gigglesnort!*
And how awesome is Bella for playin' Roberto against Carlos...one bad guy down *fist pump!*
Date: 25 Jun 2016 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Morse code....damn they are some smart women. This Roberto prick needs his balls cut off. Arse.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 25 Jun 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved this chapter and great thinking Bella had going on. I thought Edward was going to hurt himself trying to get to Bella after what he heard and saw.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Roberto and his minions better watch their backs. TWO PREGNANT WOMEN in the same house?!!!! Wow, they REALLY are mentally challenged!
And "thumbs up" for this reader to see some kick-ass Carlisle. I'm thinking he may even make Edward look tame! :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love your story. Update more often please.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it. I hope Bella is the one who kills Roberto.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
I just wanted to say that I love reading the Bound stories. I've read them a few times actually. I look forward to seeing the updates.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!! Keep it coming
Date: 25 Jun 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Man we thought Edward would be like daddy and throw a bigger fit. Lol!!!
OK here is the bet: Will Pandre get time with the girls alone???
13 say no
17 say yes
KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒
Date: 25 Jun 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
This story is getting better with every chapter. Thanks
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I cannot wait until the next chapter!!!! Waiting patiently!😱😱😱😱😱
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
This chapter was awesome!!! I can’t wait until Shawn gets there and Edward and Bella are reunited and he finds out his Bella is pregnant!! Please post again soon!!!
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow.. Can not wait to see what happens when Sean get there. And Roberto has some serious plans for Bella. Looking forward to those blowing up in his face!
Looking forward to more! :D
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Crazy train. Great chapter. Bring on the padre.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh yeah, totally did. Also thinking 18/20 years done the road another major merger.....between the Cullen and O'Leary clans offspring. How cool would that be. Meanwhile, back at the rescue. Do hurry. Please.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
I knew Elizabeth was pregnant after the last chapter when she throw up too. It is so awesome to get this update. Thank you for updating so quickly. Loving this story.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOVED THE UPDATE, CAN NOT WAIT TILL THEY RESCUE THEM..
Date: 25 Jun 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
trop bien merci maintennt il ont juste a sortir de la et rejoindre edward
Date: 25 Jun 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter! I cant wait to read more and I hope the next one will be the rescue party :)
Date: 25 Jun 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
I guess the double pregnancy...I love this store and your writing.
Date: 24 Jun 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved the update. Can't wait until they are home.
Date: 24 Jun 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love this! Thank you can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 24 Jun 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! Pay back is going to be a bitch once the coven get there
Date: 24 Jun 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is so good I will read it again a second time I am loving it...Deb Walsh
Date: 24 Jun 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Roberto is one sick puppy!
Date: 24 Jun 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loving this story
Date: 23 Jun 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
All is in the right place to rescue Bella and Elizabeth. Time to go now. Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 23 Jun 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Will this story be finished? Or is it completed else were?
Date: 22 Jun 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 22 Jun 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa, Nelly! Carlisle just went up a notch or two on my hotness meter LOL! I'm so ready for Roberto to get his ass handed to him...literally!
Date: 22 Jun 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2016 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for the chapter and update! Live this story and missed it
Date: 22 Jun 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter and welcome back ! This coming conversation should be interesting . Not sure Edward is going to be as sanguine as everyone else expects him to be.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm thinking that it's a really good thing that their is confusion about which gal is pregnant right now. If Edward knew that Bella was pregnant on top of being kidnapped and abused, their would be no way that they could control him.
*waving my anti-writer's block wand* - in your general direction! :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it! Phewwww... I can't wait until they rescue the girls! Lovely chapter :)
Date: 21 Jun 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
I reallly cannot wait until they get there and Sean gets a piece of that asshole! Should be a fun ride!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
May the plot God's and characters keep talking to you. Maybe you could ask them to talk faster😁
Date: 21 Jun 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
First i want to say Welcome back!!! I love these stories and was so excited when i saw this update. This chapter was great and I cant wait to read Edward's reaction to how Bella has been treated. I also cant wait to see how Sean does at being the priest. lol
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your story. Wished you could update more often. I'll take what you can give. 🙂