Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
this is an awesome story; hope they find out who each other are soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
There seems to be some discrepancy with the security guys being approved by the police. Was Emmett not in that group? Did he access the new codes while she was out with Tori and Tanya?
Emmett has almost broke her spirit.
Jasper is right. She needs to sell the property.
Edward may get his way once Bella figures out he is not married to Jane.
Can Charlie find out what Emmet's been up to and where he goes?
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think I'll take a break from this one. The cliff hangers are killing me. It's super annoying how most chapters end with one. If this was complete and I could read it all at once then I would probably like it better. Maybe I'll wait until it's done. Then I might like it better and find all the almost moments more enjoyable. The almost catching Emmett, the almost telling Edward. Just too many. That's why I hate soap operas, it gets boring and redundant.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
i hate emmett....at least Bella tried to tell Edward again she's not married.....I HOPE it'll be clear Edward is not married....and MAYBE Jasper will be there so Bella will figure out part of the hole thing?
cant wait :)
Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Omg I can't believe the things emmett is doing what a creep but I'm hoping Edward and Bella have a chance to clear the air soon x
Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loving the story so far! I can't wait for Emmett to get what is coming to him. Hopefully Bella and Edward solve the mystery of their Vegas weekend before the babies are born.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm gettig so fuckig sick of Emmett. Aside from the praks, he is stealig from Bella, breakig and entering and committing fraud. ugh....
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella doesn't need all this stress. I hope Emmett gets all he deserves
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
If Emmett is doing all this, how is he getting in to her place? Might it be someone else? Like James? or one of the cops or security guys? I hope whoever is pranking her like this doesn't do something that will endanger the babies.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
With the change in codes for the alarm system will Jasper finally realize it is an inside job?
I can feel the vigilante in me stirring and wanting justice soon!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
I say again Emmett must die!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
So they know now Emmett is getting in the house. But Angela does not know Emmett and he could have been stupid enough to be one of the three security guys. Selling her stuff what a asshole. Turning her blue that is a new one never heard of that before but it is kind of funny. Hope jane is ok.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Boy Emmett is a tricky dick but he will fuck himself soon and I cant wait he needs someone to turn him blue. Poor Bella she is going to lose her shit.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
seems like they should have set up a camera or something to catch em
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story, such a great read, like anything from y'all! The one thing that is truly getting to me, especially since she is painted as such an intelligent woman, not to mention Jasper being a detective....that nobody has suggested hidden cameras?? Can't wait for the next chapter, and I pray with everything in me that the babies aren't hurt by Emmett's evilness? Take care until next time! Thanks for an amazing read!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think Jasper & the police dept. needs a picture of Emmett. Maybe investigate the security company as well.
also think more updates more frequently (yeah no pressure - wink wink)
love it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Im starting to get extremely frustrated... All part of your master plan I'm sure but I can honestly say that if Emmett doesn't get what is coming to him in SPADES i am going to be extremely bitter. I don't know how he can get ALL THAT HE DESERVES though.... I need good news peeps, help a girl out here! <3 Yas!!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Updating two days a week is not doing it for me. Can you please update more? Maybe everyday? 😜
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward thinks james is the husband. I was hoping jasper dropped by so edward could see him. There are still so many things left open ended. I can't figure out how no one has connected the dots with emmett.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Trust me i don't think anyone even had that crazy thought process as the guest reviewer! Just let me say this is one of my most favorite stories that you all have ever written!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope you recover alright and dont' have anymore compications.
Edward is thinking James is Bella's husband. I really wish she was able to spit it out that she was divorced and that 'Jack' is the babies daddy. I'm also wanting Emmett to get caught red-handed by someone aside of Bella.
What suggestion Bella gave Edward did he choose to get back at Jasper?
Sherry
Date: 09 Apr 2016 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs to tell Edward NOW! This is realy dragging this out.Also I was reading some reviews and alot of people missed Emmet's chapter about everything he has done and is doing! LOVE YA
Date: 09 Apr 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hope you are doing better. My theory is Edward thinks James is Bella's husband. I have a feeling Embry was really Emmett and he didn't think Bella was at home. I have a feeling her been on bed rest for a few days it's going to mess up Emmett's plans.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 09 Apr 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
Take your time Hun. Your recovery is more important. Emmett is a douche messing with her like that. I am glad Edward was there for her. Another bad timing on James part. I love that Bella text him and told how to get back at jasper. She is more on his side then she thinks. I love how the babies respond to daddy.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ok I've been patient but enough is enough! A security system like she has would make note of a door or window being opened regardless of whether it's been disabled or not. It's part of being a "smart house". A computerized report would also note when the system was disabled. This would show her non authorized entry when she wasn't there. Plus, it's time for a "nanny cam" that's seperate from the system that would show when Emmett is in the house. This is just getting too dangerous.
I'm trying to be patient in regard to B & E not recognizing each other but cmon....voices, scents, other things can trigger recognition.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
ok I think Embry is actually Emmett. And I'm really starting to wonder about Jasper's and Bella's intelligence. I know it's Soto miss something right in front of you but t these two take the cake. I can't wait to see how you make these two see t h e light. Love the story. Til next time.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter as always
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh, he totally thinks James is her husband haha... These crazy kids. Neither of em are saying anything or connecting the dots lol!!! Can't wait for next update... Hoping Emmett gets caught soon and pieces start to fall together for Jack and Jill haha
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
i think Embry is Emmett......still i REALLY just want her to tell him she's not married...
i just want them to know who each other is!!! :S must be wait till she has the babys and they look like Edward for them to notice??
and i really hate Emmett...he could really have hurt the babys.
till next chap!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yup here I am at TWCS but I'll review over at FFN as well ( he he he) What can I say about this chapter..."So close and yet so far"... again!! 😜 C'mon Sweeties I enjoy foreplay as much as the rest of you but this is beyond foreplay. Something has got to give soon. Seriously you're driving me! NUTS!!!!! (lol) 😅Does Edward have to wear his glasses at night? They seem to be crazy glued on and is Bella ever gonna admit she's divorced? Geeez! 😛 READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
I know that drama is needed to make a story but I just don't get why they can't be honest with each other.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ha I'm guessing he thinks she's married to James. I bet Embry was Emmett. I hope they find out about Emmett soon before something bad happens to her or the babies. I really hope they figure out about their marriage soon too
Date: 08 Apr 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am sooo dying here can you please tell us what chapter they find out who they are to each other PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP LOL!!!! I am loving this story but I want them to be together.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor James Edward thinks he is the bad guy lol Emmett is getting dangerous he needs stopped
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hope things are going better with those complications now.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
I didn't see anything overtly wrong with this chapter. It looks fine as it is....you are really giving us the SLOW burn here! I'm eagerly anticipating both of them finding out the truth about each other! Is it Emmett who is sabotaging her house? Who else could it be? Good question about Embry. Just who is he?? Did you tell us and I forgot? I hope not...
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think it's funny that Bella is now involved with the pranks between Jasper and Edward.
That connection should be sinking into Bella's brain soon.
Emmett's sabotage is becoming more sinister.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think it is time for her to come clean. It's getting too dangerous for her now. Emmett needs to get caught and soon. I only hope that he finds out before the babies are born, because i'm afraid if he finds out when they are born and look like him, he may be pissed that she out right lied to him each and ever time he asked about her "husband" and let him to believe that she has a husband.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward hates James because he thinks he's Bella's husband. Don't know who Embry is to Bella but I hope it's a good thing.
Geez, I wish these 2 would just communicate. Hope it won't take delivery of Jack & Anthony for Edward to realize they are his sons when they look just like him!
Cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm dying for Bella and Edward to start connecting the dots. I wanna scream into the story that she's not married to Emmett anymore. I'm liking that Edward is taking more of a personal interest into being Bella's doctor and will be there for her. Damn Emmett for letting the mouse and rat loose in the house. I can't wait for his evil ass to get caught.
Sherry
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG.... I cannot believe someone actually thought all those things you addressed. Obviously someone from another planet. Lovin the story my only regret is I want faster updates. But I am a selfish hitch. :) Besides I could never do this. I commend you guys on writing such great stories.
Hope your arm feels better soon.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm loving this story! Well I always love the stories you all write :)
I can't wait for karma to hit.
And yes, I'm loving Tori...but I have to say James is my fav right now.
Thank you for sharing!
Date: 07 Apr 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
I feel bad for you,there are alot of horrible people out there. I honestley didn't think Robstens even existed anymore! I'M SO SORRY! I just have one question,will we ever get a EPOV? I'D love to hear his thoughts about Bella, and why he baby's her so much. LOVE YA
Date: 07 Apr 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love your response to the guest reviewer lol. I am loving how they are getting to know each other and he is taking care of her. Tori is the best and James it s a crack up.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
wondering when they are going to figure it out
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well I never thought of Rob and Kristen as being Edward and Bella in anything other than the movies. I'm sorry you don't believe that Rob and Kristen are together, I do believe they are. I believe they have at least one child, I know others who think they have 2. I have formed my own opinion on this, all I had to do is look at everything that has went on in the last few years. Read their interviews, and know that neither one of them has had a personally transplant in the last 2 years, and if any of your readers think that, then I don't what to tell them. Other than to stop reading the tabloids and everything they post, they are using them for one thing and that is click bait, which means tons of money. As for your story I agree you can right the characters anyway you want. I'm sad that Emmett is the bad guy but sometimes you have to switch it up. If you didn't it would be the same story and no one would want to read it.
I wish Bella would slip up about her one night stand with "Jack", and Edward would put 2 and 2 together, and soon. Don't worry about the mistake in Emmett's name. I have seen a lot worst in other stories. Like words out of place, and miss spelled.
Hope you are recovering from you surgery. I have carpal tunnel too, but I have been doing water areobics and it seems to be helping with all my joint pain. So I'm going to put it off as long as I can.
Can't wait for Friday, to get here for the next update.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm enjoying this very much, but I'm ready to kill Emmett. I can't wait for more!
Date: 07 Apr 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am not sure why, but I really HATE when men are kept away from their growing babies and miss out on things. I know Edward is seeing more than anyone else in that position, but he is still not sharing in the moments. He is not taking claim and telling his children that he is Daddy and they are loved, he is taking a back seat. At some point, one of them needs to say something. This is just a bit too drawn out. I do not mind that is is manyt chapters later and there is no recognition, But when the weeks are passing with those chapters, I cannot wrap my head around it. The pace would be fine if the time was a bit slower. My heart is breaking for Edward and I just want to hit Bella over the head.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Emmett is obviously having a grand time coming in and out of her house, but they should realize one thing--there are no native WHITE rats in this country , so the rat in the kitchen had to come from a pet store and be placed there deliberately (former zookeeper here ).
Date: 07 Apr 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella should install a camara... Emmett is one creepy A**Hole.. And is most likely that Rose is wearing some of Bella's jewelry..
Date: 06 Apr 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella needs to tell him she's divorcing Emmett...
i'm just dying to know WHEN they will realice they're married.....do you know when? i mean, how many chaps till then???
the suspence is killing me!!!
till necxt chap!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really don't know how much more I can take of this I love this story but Bella is getting on my fucking nerves I want to scream. It is so childish for her to keep letting Edward think she is fucking married, like who gives a fuck if you got pregnant by a one night stand. You're an adult and it's freaking 2016, get over it!!!!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
My grandson had a friend in first grade called tuc. When I asked his mom if it was short for tucker she told me that when pregnant they cahhed him "the un born child" then shortened it to tuc. The nickname /endearment stuch and that is what he was called instead of his real name.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think it is Emmett that is coming in, eating her food, stealing her jewelry, and maybe even put the mouse and rat in her house. You have made him really evil in this story and that is a first! Not sure I like it, but have to agree that it's really creative! I'm dying for Bella to figure out that Edward is Jack and that they got married in Vegas!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really like this story, but wonder how long before Bella realizes who Edward is and vise verse? Talk about drawing out the tension...lol. 👍
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this story. I think Emmett (obviously) is behind the mouse/rat incident. I hope Bella and whomever else figures out he is the one illegally entering her home soon, before any more mishap. Maybe Bella should call her alarm company and inquire.....
Bella should tell Edward the truth about Sweet & Pea and how they came to be and there's no hubby in the pic!
Can't wait for the update!
quick question - what were Edward & family doing in Vegas
. I was a bit confused in one of EPOV. His ex, did she just break up with him? Where was the wedding that she ruined? So Edwards sister got married and his ex cheats on him at the reception so he flies to Vegas and meets "Jill" or was the wedding in Vegas and he meets her that night....I'm confused on the timeline
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hopefully she will report the missing jewelry to Jasper and mention the strange happenings. The good cop that he is will start to put it all together.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad Edward finally got some balls and told her to leave her husband if she's being mistreated. :)
Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
So far I have loved this story!!!! I can´t wait for more
Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMGosh! I can't believe people are being so petty and making those complants. This story is something you have choose to write an you are generous enough to share with us. Which we are thankful. This is YOUR story. If they don't like it they don't have to read it. They can go write their own.
So glad that Edward and Aro are both taking care of Bella. OMGosh, Emmett has put mice and rays in her house. How many did he put in there? Maybe with her being home more Emmett will not be able to do much else.
Loving this story. Thank you for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great A/N!
The great thing about free will, is just that. The freedom the have and voice differing ideas or opinions. The sad thing is, when someone tries to impose their personal views on someone else without remorse. That's messed up human nature.
Edward must have an inkling of Bella's situation. Husband no longer in the picture.
Will anyone call the alarm company and check for records of the house being disarmed when Bella was away?
Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really hope that things will get straighted out soon. and I really wish that Bella would tell him that she does not have a husband now. Emmett needs to hurry up and get caught, very soon, pelase!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope they figure out who the daddy is before the birth. I am sure he wants to be even more envolved. ;~)
Date: 06 Apr 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad you respond to the guests here. Some people ask stupid questions. I love this story and look forward to it. Someone had to be the bad guy and you chose it to be Emmett, I got used to him being the bad guy after the second chapter you write him as a douche well. Snuggled together must work well since they slept in. Some one commented about Bella being stupid for not knowing it is Emmett doing this stuff and I commented how would she know Emmett was doing this stuff she has a security system to keep him out. Two boys how cute is that jack and Anthony great names.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sweet Edward! Maybe Bella will get some answers about the mysteries in her home soon. You must have some interesting guest reviewers.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG!!! I wanna jump in the story and smack their heads together. How many more clues/hints do they need to start to piece it together?
Sherry
Date: 04 Apr 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
When will they finally get it?
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love this story but am so ready for someone to catch Emmett and to make HIM suffer!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love that the babies respond to him the most. I'm shocked he hasn't rolled up his sleeves around her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
The wash machine lines have burst.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh the mail!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
hoping they find out about em before he does anything that will really hurt b
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
I want more! The chapters are too short. I'm confused as why Edward wears colored glasses day and night. VERY CONFUSED. Also why does Edward always have a ''pained expression'' all the time. VERY CONFUSED, SORRY.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter and Emmett is an ass. Can't wait for them to find out since they seem to hit it off.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
Another great chapter
Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wish she would have said Ex-husband, it may have clear some things up quicker.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
This story is great I just hope Emmet is dealt with soon. Bella deserves to be happy .
Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Since Edward thinks James is Bella's husband, James needs to be careful around Edward. After everything that happened in this chapter Edward is liable to hit him. Lol. Did Emmett just cancel her rode side assistance or all of her car insurance? That is dangerous. I have a feeling that Emmett did something to her tire too. Emmett is really starting to scare me. DoesJasper's story not sound familiar to Bella? I love that the babies move when they hear Edward's voice. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
How is Bella not figuring this out with Emmett messing with her house? And how is Edward not wondering where Bella husband is yet. It's just going so slow.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh the fun we are going to have when they find out they are married! Love it! Thank you for sharing your story with us!
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 01 Apr 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn Emmett! He's the one who is sabotaging Bella, isn't he? He cancelled her car insurance, but I bet he disconnected he washer hoses too! and made her tire go flat? That too, I bet! This is a slow burn, but that's ok. I like the angst! When will Dr. Edward aka Jack take off his glasses so she can see his eyes?
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
I want Emmett to die a very long and tortured death in prison. ugh.....
Date: 01 Apr 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is one of my favorite stories - can't wait for the pieces to start clicking! First thing is they need to let the other know about the false marriages.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett needs to die for all that! Good luck with the surgery.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow. Bella is having a bitch of a week. Em needs to get hit by a bus or a piano falling on him or something. Arsehole. Hope B&E find each other fully soon.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ugh! Wow, Emmett is a disgusting pig. Blech! But his mom's nuts so...
I'm really worried about Rose's precarious mental state, and now the awful consequences of what he's done to Bella so far. I'm sure he won't stop at trespassing and theft. I think he'll probably work on how to make Bella and her baby "disappear".
Very compelling story. Really enjoying it! Thank you. ~RoseE. x
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I knew it when she answered the door that it was all the douches fault but I am glad Edward was there to rescue her. Can Bella go back on Emmett for canceling her policy. James at the wrong place at the wrong time again. Glad they are spending more time together. Wishing you a quick recovery.