Date: 18 Oct 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
sadly I think someone is going find out about the dress and change it without her knowing. I don't blame B for acting this way E is a dick, Esme is an enabler with doing what E wants/expects. I'd say screw them all. I'd get the makeup artist you know they would hire to do some evil special effects makeup. What does E really expect? He's been a complete arse, he did kidnap her since she didn't go willingly, he's kept her prisoner, ignores her unless its convenient. So far I'm on B's side 1000Percent
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Someone protect my pericous child, Bella, from all the people in her life.
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm more worried about the fact that this isn't the first time she's seen someone killedd!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
She's so badaaaaaaaaass
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm actually surprise she's being civil to Esme and Rosalie.
Wow her parents aren't even coming to the wedding how horrible is that?
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think her father got involved in something and just asked Edward for protection since he knows his dad.
But that doesn't excuse how they executed their "plan".
I hope they all suffer before she forgives them.
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is such a great start I can't wait to read what'll happen next
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Why doesn't he just tell her?
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, there has to be a good reason that Bella's family would just send her away like that. I wish he woudl at least tell her something. He was being an ass when he told her that he parents didn't want to come to her wedding,
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Men really are f'ing idiots. She'll come around? really? If he would bother to open his mouth to do more that insult her or berate her, maybe he'd get further. Again. Men are idiots
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
you are killing me here. E is really being a heartless prick. Lets kidnap a girl from her parents house.... or bought her. Takes her away from everything she knows. Drops her with his mother. and then murders someone in front of her. The only thing he hasn't done is rape her at this point? Is he waiting till she's 18? Way to make her feel safe, Men are morons.
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow I'm hoping there is a REALLY good reason that E is a dick and her parents are complete sleezeballs.
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow E is even more of an arsehole. Is Esme really that heartless as well
Date: 16 Oct 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow E is being a heartless dick.
Date: 16 Oct 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love this Edward and Bella
Date: 16 Oct 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is fantastic!! I am so excited for more!!! :)
Date: 16 Oct 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMFNG!! OMG!! MORE!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Holy Shit! I love it!! WOW!!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG!! This keeps getting better!! I can't wait to read more of this!! :)
Date: 16 Oct 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG! I can't wait to read more!! :)
Date: 15 Oct 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think I am really going to enjoy this story!! :)
Date: 15 Oct 2015 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
This spoiled brat Bella is getting to be a bit much.
Date: 15 Oct 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
is Bella ever going to get any information on what's going on. How can anyone blame her for her reactions to the situation. Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 Oct 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Not surprised about the locks. If they would just talk to each other in think things would get better. Edward really needs to give Bella some clue as to what is going on.
Date: 15 Oct 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
i read a lot of people cheering on this bella on the review...
but i think she is being a complete brat.
she is very immature throwing these tantrums.
there is obviously a reason behind this arraingement no matter
how much unwanted. she was also aware of arrainged marriages so
if she would be more mature and thoughtful and be patient then perhaps
she will get her answers instead of being so juvenile. she doesnt want to
be treated like a child so she needs to stop behaving like one. she is being too
impulsive, just like a child instead of contemplative and thoughtful like a
mature adult as she would like herself to be treated.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I kinda like bratty Bella. I just hope she grows up just enough...soon!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 15 Oct 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 15 Oct 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is trying to keep her safe who wants to hurt her?
Date: 15 Oct 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was awesome! Bella is acting like a child throwing a temper tantrum. However, Edward needs to try to understand a little bit of what she's going through and maybe communicate what's going on. Even with all of this, someone needs to communicate with her. Maybe Esme can come talk to Bella and explain some things to her. Can't wait for next chapter! I'm loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
i wood make a him see i realy did hate him and was not going down
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my gosh, this is so very addictive! I should be sleeping, I just love this story
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
"Perhaps Kate would take me in and hide me for a few weeks until Edward had given up looking for me" lol She's so naïve:)
Geez. Well, damn! Guess the guard won't be calling the authorities.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hope she behaves.
Date: 14 Oct 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward means what he says
Date: 14 Oct 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
its not Bellas fault the guy is dead Edward is an ass its his fault if he would tell her whats going on explain a few things she wouldn't have run he is really pissing me off good story tho
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is much more cut throat than I expected! This going to be such a great story!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
i wood do it again they can't make you say i do or even yes if all you say is no
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh! That poor security guard. He was cooperating with Edward's man and he still killed him. That is just wrong wrong. What is the deal with what is going on with Edward, Bella and her parents?
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE EDWARD IS PISSED AT BELLA
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Busted! Poor security guard. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's her fault that the guard is dead-hope she stops running. I do hope that Edward gives her some answers now.
Date: 13 Oct 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
i think he needs to start communicating with her, why is she not allowed to see her family
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
He is saving you from something really bad and you are running in the wrong direction. Crap!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG! THIS IS SO GOOD,THANK YOU!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well she is a teenager allowed to be the way she is. Now they don't want her or sold her no matter same difference. She has been crushed, I get this.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
he tells her so little.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Who wouldn't be a brat in the same situation? Taken from her life and told nothing. How does one begin to process this. Hope for some explaination soon. Thanks for the update.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Does Edward have much experience with women? He doesn't seem to know how to deal with Bella. Maybe it's her age. He can't have feelings for her if he just met her. Is he trying to save her from something worse than him? Can't wait for more.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
The suspense is killing me. Great chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling that Edward is really a good guy, and is only doing this to help Isabella. However, I think he doesn't know much about teenage girls. lol You've got to give Isabella credit for having the guts to try and get away. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, I know they said that this was all being done to protect Isabella, but I wish she knew more about what was going on. That poor girl! If I were her, I would be snarky and sarcastic too. You have me so excitied about your story!! It gets more interesting with each chapter.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
So many questions!! I'm loving all the mytery in your story. Your Bella made me laugh when she was thinking about not (or maybe) using her gun on Edward. Thanks for a great chapter.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great first chapter. I can't wait to read more. But poor Isabella! I'm sure I wouldn't be too happy to be forced into this situation either. You have me hooked on this one!!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMGosh! Was Edward talking the truthabout her parents? Why is all of this happening to her. Someone needs to TALK to Bella and explain things to her.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
she is one strong willed girl
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it can not wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like this story but when are things going to start making sense. Is there going to be an Edward POV.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Shit just give her the truth. Edward is not a happy camper lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
So very good I find myself craving more and more of our bratty Bella! I think her parents are dead or something else major has happened to them
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
You had to leave us with our tongues on the floor huh? Meanie! (he he he) READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 11 Oct 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is pretty resourceful for a 17 year old
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
She's bratty but I would be too if I had been kept in the dark and now with a bunch of strangers.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT UPDATE . :)
Date: 07 Oct 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Whatis going on ?? I wonder something when Edward said she did not need her parents and sister 'site phone numbers. Why is her family staying away or not being allowed to be around her? I NEED answers! !!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol
Date: 07 Oct 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor poor Bella
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Her parents are protecting her the only way they know how
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it, love it, love it! This is so well written, it brings out a mixture of emotions whilst reading it. Looking forward to the update. This is a story that when the update notification comes through, everything else is put on pause until it is read.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
"I had put on yoga pants and a baggy t-shirt as a big fuck you to my mother" lol lol girl's got spunk::))
I'm guessing Bella's been put into hiding for some reason.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Personally I thing Bella acted pretty nice considering what's happening:) I can only imagine how I would act if my dad tried that crap on me::))
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am confused as well, why her parents are not going to be there. Loving it. Thank You!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Talk about a curveball! Getting married without your Mom there is more than hard - I know, I had to do it. My guess here though is they are trying to keep Bella safe from something or someone. I love this fiction it really grabs the reader's interest! Thank you!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
i don't think she going to like them
Date: 07 Oct 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
yikes. wondering what is going on the everyone in her life is being cut out
Date: 07 Oct 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmm thanks for the chapters
Date: 07 Oct 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well I am glad you are writing what you want to write.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this new story.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Finally. Bella's brain is engaging in a positive train of thought. She said she wasn't dumb. I guess the immediate upheaval of her life caused rash and unexpected actions in her fight oir flight moment.
She is Edward trying to protect her from by destroying her phone and credit cards? No means left to track her via electronic linkks. The removal of the gun seemed to be for his safety.
Edward was so wrapped up in the need to remove her from her home that he forgot his manners. At least she knows his first name now.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah Bella, to think that you have been so wronged by your parents actions will cost you in the future. The silent treatment only hurts the one committing the act. Not the ones recieving receiving.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hhhmmm.....how bout we find out?!?!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love it! Can't wait for more. Will there be a EPOV?
Date: 04 Oct 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow... That was shocking, to be told you're getting married and moving away without any notice. Watching your parents hurt with their decision, it has to make it so scary. I wonder what else will Bella try and if she'll dare ask Mr. Cullen his reasons.
Date: 04 Oct 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
cant blame her for freaking out her life has changed in a blink of an eye
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
She must need protection? Her father couldn't keep her safe?
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always love mobward!
Date: 04 Oct 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
They are doing this to save her she is in danger???
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good! Wow, this Bella really is a tad bit stubborn isn't she! Our boy has a challenge ahead so it seems. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to read more of it
Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
can't wait for the next update. thanks for the bonus chap
Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to find out more. Why has Bella not asked more questions?
Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Weekly updates suck. ;o) but love mobward stories. Looking forward to more. Thanks!