Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Edwards children he said the youngest was 8 month, how old is the oldest? Bella is a good person and very good mother. Edward saw what he wanted and got it. Even though it was in a underhanded way! I can't wait for more please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he just after what he wants and has no care to what anyone else wants but will this work out in the end
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Omg that crazy but awesome
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he certainly knows what he wants and doesn't care how he gets it. Just a thought, don't you actually have to get married infront of witnesses etc to be married?
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Imaginative start to a story. I love it. I wonder how Alice and Rose will act around their own children. They both have hearts of stone.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Wow what a start. I am loving it.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow. Poor Bella. Makes me wonder what was in the letter Charlie read. Ok but wait. How are they going to explain to the brothers about the kids now? Are they going to treat Bella like crap now? Ack So many Questions!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow just like that and she is Mrs. Cullen
Date: 17 Nov 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved this chapter!! I need more!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
More please
Date: 17 Nov 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Wonderful start!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
OMG ,Love this first chapter can not wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
wow. I hope you continue on with this story. I am curious to where you go with this story. Dang
Date: 16 Nov 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
great story i can't wait for more
Date: 14 Nov 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
This is fab. I love it being so different. Rarely get to see a "bad" Alice. Will it continue? I hope so.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
What happens next please next chapter
Date: 14 Nov 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
This should be interesting...
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Can you all say that Rosalie and Alice were shock. Alice and Rosalie are heartless bitches to leave there children the way they did,while they were enjoying the good life. Bella had to raised them with her husband edward. Guest payback a bitch.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
OHHHH!!! Great start!
Date: 14 Nov 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Woooo can't wait to read more!!
Date: 14 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
can not wait for more
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Wow what a great start
Date: 13 Nov 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Love it more please
Date: 13 Nov 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
I am anxious to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Oh wow. Such a great into chapter. I'm excited for the next update.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Holy cow. what a start
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Holy snap would you start with a big bang wow I love it and I need more
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Liking it so far!!! Can't wait for more!! How often will you update?
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
I love this! Please continue!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
haine de lire la suite
Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Wow! What a way to make a first chapter so intense! i can't wait for chapter two. :)
Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
This is going to be awesome